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I do not own YuGiOh or any other anime or product used in this story. All I own are my characters I insert, which is NOT self-insertion mind you, and my story ideas. Also, this is not a disclaimer but PLEASE review me. I need to know whether I'm doing okay. Now, on to the story.
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I suppose that now things weren't so bad here. With all of my belongings in my new room, I curled up on my bed. Desperately grasping at the silken sheets beneath me, I sighed and wished for some sort of redemption from my own free will. I was lost and I wasn't sure whether I would ever be found. But sleep slowly called to me, deep within my mind and my body and I was about to answer its call.
"Kat! It's time for your first dinner with us! Come and eat!" Yugi yelled perkily through my already closed and locked door. I cursed myself mentally. 'What shall I do now? I can't eat what they eat. But I am starving. it's been two days since I've fed!' My dispute between my bodily instincts and my mind was disrupted by another yell from my- well, I suppose now I could call him my "older brother". No, wait. Somehow I think that that title belongs to someone else. "Come on!"
"I'm coming. Be there in just a second." I spoke this very quietly. He heard though. Slowly, I crept off of my bed and to the door, only opening it to smell something hideous. It was one of those horrid human concoctions that they call "food". I call Yugi's wrists food. wait, what was I saying? I couldn't feed off of him. He was family for Ra's sake! I had to keep my mind off of feeding; otherwise, I would have to end up making some sort of "meal" for myself.
The past two days I had spent moving in my things, almost immediately after I said "yes" to moving in, had been serene in a sense. Since my demonic half and I were one and I was taking full dominant control, she went into a sort of "hibernation", meaning that she would only wake when I was truly either hungry or angered as before. I walked to the table quickly and sat down in the same manor, meticulously looking about the room to verify that I was in the right place for eating a meal. After all, I was still new to this.
"You must be pretty hungry, aren't you? I haven't seen you eat all weekend." Yugi stated with a hint of curiosity and concern in his breath. He looked at me with his large violet eyes and gave me a look that resembled that of a new born puppy. So trusting to the world, such innocence. I couldn't believe we shared the same blood. Scratch that. We didn't. He would NEVER in a million milleniums be anything like me. I was too far down the path from him.
I now looked to his eyes to find that they were filling with the same feelings that resided in his words to me. Not yet answering his question he was probably curious to know what was taking me so long. "Sorry. I got lost in thought. I'm okay though." I once again smiled to him but it was all empty promises and lies that flooded into my conscience and out into my facial expression. I turned away to notice "Gramps" as Yugi called him coming over with plates of the foul smelling shit that they planned to ingest.
He said while handing me a plate, "Enjoy, Kat. Your first official meal as part of our family." Yugi bobbed his head once and started to ravage his plate. No one could have ever guessed a boy that size could be that hungry. I shifted my food slightly around to give the impression of eating. To tell truth, I didn't know how to eat at all. I knew how to feed, not eat. Gramps took notice to this and I took notice to him when the smile on his face faded. "What's the matter with your food, Kat?"
Shit. Fuck. Hell. Piss. Damn. Bitch. Bastard. I went on and on in my mind but cursed at no one but myself. Looking down onto my plate I only had one excuse prepared. Ironically, I thought to myself 'Note to self: come up with lies to tell family to hide demonic origin.' "I'm not all that hungry." This made Yugi actually look up from his plate and curiously at me. I once again made the grim mistake of looking into Yugi's eyes but then shifted my attention to my grandfather who had his hands folded so that it fashioned that of a praying man. His eyes met my gaze and he read them as if they were an open book into my soul. "You're not like other people, are you Katarina?"
At this point, Yugi had dropped his fork and looked around the room in worry at what I was about to say. I'm not sure but I think that the shock was showing in my face. "I mean, how have your. powers or something or other. been progressing throughout the years?" He strained to say the word "powers", meaning he didn't know everything! Yes! 'Bless your heart you ignorant old coot!' I yelled joyfully in my mind. "Kat, what is he talking about?" Yugi inquired.
I sighed deeply and prepared my conscience for a blow I'm not sure that it could handle, for I would be telling the biggest lie I've ever told anyone in my life. "Well, ever since I was a child, I was always different from others. Something set me apart from them. Never sure, I stayed by myself most of the time. I could hear every nasty comment that was said about me and did nothing about it until I could actually understand what they were referring to.
"One day while watching the other children play in the orphanage, I heard again a comment of pure ignorance and stupidity. I believe it was by a twelve-year-old who had asked me a question earlier about when lunch was that day and when I didn't respond, he walked off angry. 'Look at that little freak girl. I bet she'd be real easy to punch. She never talks to anyone, she never eats, she never goes to class, she never does anything but sit and watch the other kids play! Plus, I hear that things happen when people get around her. I think she deserves to be alone. Probably would be a little bitch if she ever did talk.' I wasn't sure what but something inside me felt warm and it hurt for a second. I looked around quickly for something, anything that could relieve my strain. I saw a racquetball from when the children had taken a field trip to the courts. I thought to myself how much better I would feel if that ball just went and hit that boy in the head. No, not in the head. On the neck so that it hurt more.
"As if by a will of its own, the ball did just that. It rose to mid air and then flew at a speed almost to swift to see, hitting the boy's neck. He fell to the ground. I could feel a sense of relief build within me. From then on I knew why I was so different." I looked to Gramps and Yugi who were both staring at me in disbelief. "And that is what I can do. If you don't believe me." With that note, I manipulated my demonic ability to make nothing more than a small fork rise above the table. They both looked up at it. Satisfied that they had believed the story (which was true except for the fact that I had a fuck load of more powers and abilities than that), I slowly made it descend back onto the table. "Any questions?"
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In case you haven't gotten the idea yet, if you have gotten this far, please review. I will be accepting some story ideas. Plus, 6 chapters.0 reviews. this makes an author depressed. I leave you with this chapter and my closing word.REVIEW!
I do not own YuGiOh or any other anime or product used in this story. All I own are my characters I insert, which is NOT self-insertion mind you, and my story ideas. Also, this is not a disclaimer but PLEASE review me. I need to know whether I'm doing okay. Now, on to the story.
...........................................
I suppose that now things weren't so bad here. With all of my belongings in my new room, I curled up on my bed. Desperately grasping at the silken sheets beneath me, I sighed and wished for some sort of redemption from my own free will. I was lost and I wasn't sure whether I would ever be found. But sleep slowly called to me, deep within my mind and my body and I was about to answer its call.
"Kat! It's time for your first dinner with us! Come and eat!" Yugi yelled perkily through my already closed and locked door. I cursed myself mentally. 'What shall I do now? I can't eat what they eat. But I am starving. it's been two days since I've fed!' My dispute between my bodily instincts and my mind was disrupted by another yell from my- well, I suppose now I could call him my "older brother". No, wait. Somehow I think that that title belongs to someone else. "Come on!"
"I'm coming. Be there in just a second." I spoke this very quietly. He heard though. Slowly, I crept off of my bed and to the door, only opening it to smell something hideous. It was one of those horrid human concoctions that they call "food". I call Yugi's wrists food. wait, what was I saying? I couldn't feed off of him. He was family for Ra's sake! I had to keep my mind off of feeding; otherwise, I would have to end up making some sort of "meal" for myself.
The past two days I had spent moving in my things, almost immediately after I said "yes" to moving in, had been serene in a sense. Since my demonic half and I were one and I was taking full dominant control, she went into a sort of "hibernation", meaning that she would only wake when I was truly either hungry or angered as before. I walked to the table quickly and sat down in the same manor, meticulously looking about the room to verify that I was in the right place for eating a meal. After all, I was still new to this.
"You must be pretty hungry, aren't you? I haven't seen you eat all weekend." Yugi stated with a hint of curiosity and concern in his breath. He looked at me with his large violet eyes and gave me a look that resembled that of a new born puppy. So trusting to the world, such innocence. I couldn't believe we shared the same blood. Scratch that. We didn't. He would NEVER in a million milleniums be anything like me. I was too far down the path from him.
I now looked to his eyes to find that they were filling with the same feelings that resided in his words to me. Not yet answering his question he was probably curious to know what was taking me so long. "Sorry. I got lost in thought. I'm okay though." I once again smiled to him but it was all empty promises and lies that flooded into my conscience and out into my facial expression. I turned away to notice "Gramps" as Yugi called him coming over with plates of the foul smelling shit that they planned to ingest.
He said while handing me a plate, "Enjoy, Kat. Your first official meal as part of our family." Yugi bobbed his head once and started to ravage his plate. No one could have ever guessed a boy that size could be that hungry. I shifted my food slightly around to give the impression of eating. To tell truth, I didn't know how to eat at all. I knew how to feed, not eat. Gramps took notice to this and I took notice to him when the smile on his face faded. "What's the matter with your food, Kat?"
Shit. Fuck. Hell. Piss. Damn. Bitch. Bastard. I went on and on in my mind but cursed at no one but myself. Looking down onto my plate I only had one excuse prepared. Ironically, I thought to myself 'Note to self: come up with lies to tell family to hide demonic origin.' "I'm not all that hungry." This made Yugi actually look up from his plate and curiously at me. I once again made the grim mistake of looking into Yugi's eyes but then shifted my attention to my grandfather who had his hands folded so that it fashioned that of a praying man. His eyes met my gaze and he read them as if they were an open book into my soul. "You're not like other people, are you Katarina?"
At this point, Yugi had dropped his fork and looked around the room in worry at what I was about to say. I'm not sure but I think that the shock was showing in my face. "I mean, how have your. powers or something or other. been progressing throughout the years?" He strained to say the word "powers", meaning he didn't know everything! Yes! 'Bless your heart you ignorant old coot!' I yelled joyfully in my mind. "Kat, what is he talking about?" Yugi inquired.
I sighed deeply and prepared my conscience for a blow I'm not sure that it could handle, for I would be telling the biggest lie I've ever told anyone in my life. "Well, ever since I was a child, I was always different from others. Something set me apart from them. Never sure, I stayed by myself most of the time. I could hear every nasty comment that was said about me and did nothing about it until I could actually understand what they were referring to.
"One day while watching the other children play in the orphanage, I heard again a comment of pure ignorance and stupidity. I believe it was by a twelve-year-old who had asked me a question earlier about when lunch was that day and when I didn't respond, he walked off angry. 'Look at that little freak girl. I bet she'd be real easy to punch. She never talks to anyone, she never eats, she never goes to class, she never does anything but sit and watch the other kids play! Plus, I hear that things happen when people get around her. I think she deserves to be alone. Probably would be a little bitch if she ever did talk.' I wasn't sure what but something inside me felt warm and it hurt for a second. I looked around quickly for something, anything that could relieve my strain. I saw a racquetball from when the children had taken a field trip to the courts. I thought to myself how much better I would feel if that ball just went and hit that boy in the head. No, not in the head. On the neck so that it hurt more.
"As if by a will of its own, the ball did just that. It rose to mid air and then flew at a speed almost to swift to see, hitting the boy's neck. He fell to the ground. I could feel a sense of relief build within me. From then on I knew why I was so different." I looked to Gramps and Yugi who were both staring at me in disbelief. "And that is what I can do. If you don't believe me." With that note, I manipulated my demonic ability to make nothing more than a small fork rise above the table. They both looked up at it. Satisfied that they had believed the story (which was true except for the fact that I had a fuck load of more powers and abilities than that), I slowly made it descend back onto the table. "Any questions?"
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In case you haven't gotten the idea yet, if you have gotten this far, please review. I will be accepting some story ideas. Plus, 6 chapters.0 reviews. this makes an author depressed. I leave you with this chapter and my closing word.REVIEW!