Disclaimer: I definitely do not own Weiss Kreuz.
A/N: Okay. I have a big excuse for taking so long to update. My birthday just passed, so I'm a year older now.
Thanks to the reviewers: marsupial, Misura, FireKat, Aries Draco and Rebound. (if I missed out anyone, please leave a review/flame. Thanks)
//.// Thoughts
Undercover Love
Ken gasped as he saw the redhead's face, blood on his right cheek. He looked extremely pale and tired. It was as if he had just been beaten and his cheek sliced by a knife. Ken ran a slender finger on the redhead's bleeding cheek.
"Who did this to you?" Ken asked, forgetting that he was angry with him.
The redhead realised that Ken saw the blood, and quickly tried to cover his cheek [1].
//Shit! He saw it!//
//Who could have done this to him?// Ken asked himself, falling in love with him at once [2].
//Someone on the dark side. Be careful, Kenken. Don't get too near to him. He might be dangerous.// said the voice.
"Do you want to wash your face?" Ken asked, voice full of concern.
"Is that any of your business?" the redhead asked coldly. "It's not as if you care."
"Well, as a matter of fact, it is my business and I do care," Ken replied hotly.
"And may I ask, what business is it of yours, and why do you care?"
"What the hell's your problem? I'm just trying to be nice! Do you treat people like that? Even when they're trying to be nice to you?"
"Yes," was all Ken got from the redhead."Now, if you don't mind, I'm rather late for my meeting, and you're making me even later. So, if I get sacked, I shall be blaming it on you, huh?"
"Oh shit!" Ken forgot he was late. He started running, leaving the redhead smirking.
µÿµ
~Two days later~
Ken saw the redhead he had seen two days before again. He groaned.
//Why must it always be me?//
//You don't have to go near him love. It's your choice.// the voice said.
//Forget it. I'll still have to face him sometime anyway. Why not do it now, rather then wait till next time?// Ken chose to ignore the voice.
//Be careful love, he might hurt you. Don't get influenced, love.// the voice came back in Ken's mind.
Ken walked over to the redhead. Somehow, his instincts told him that the redhead was feeling depressed.
//What's wrong with him?//
//Nothing. His sister is in a coma. She only has 50% chance of living. He's sad and he needs someone by his side. But don't go, sweet. Don't go. He'll be fine. Don't go.//
Ken again ignored the voice and sat down beside the redhead.
"Hey. Do you want to talk? I might be irritating, but maybe I could help," Ken offered.
"Nothing you do will help. Go away. There's nothing you can do," the redhead replied.
"I could be of some help, you know. You don't ask people to go away when they're trying to help," Ken said, annoyed at the redhead's attitude.
"I said, go away. Don't you understand English [3]? There's nothing you can do except make people feel worse," the redhead replied coolly.
"I can too do something!" Ken shouted.
"Oh yeah? Name me one."
"Play soccer. I'm best at it."
The redhead snickered. "Is there anything else you can do? Other than play soccer and make people feel worse?"
"I do not make people feel worse!"
//This guy's good at arguing. But I must beat him. I won't give up so easily.//
//Give up, Ken. You'll never win.// said the voice.
The argue went on for another fifteen minutes before both the redhead and Ken got angry.
"There is something I can do you know!" Ken shouted.
"Like what? Bring my sister back to life?!" the redhead shouted back.
"It's true, then?." Ken said, surprised, and not shouting.
"Yes, and now are you happy? Why aren't you rejoicing? Aren't you happy to see my sister half dead?" the redhead asked, tears streaming down his face from his amethyst eyes [4].
"I-I'm sorry. I didn't know."
"Now you do. Could you go away now? You're still very annoying."
"Whatever you say, I'm staying. So, what's your sister's name?" Ken asked, just to carry on this conversation.
"Why do you care, anyway?"
"I'm just curious."
"Curiosity kills the cat. Don't you know?"
"Of course I know that. But can't a person be curious?"
The redhead merely glared at Ken.
"Okay, okay. But there's no harm in telling me your name right, at least?"
"Fujimiya."
~TBC~ (if I get enough reviews)
A/N: Another chappie up! Hope you liked it. Flame me if you didn't, k? Help me improve. Reviewers, here are your answered reviews:
To marsupial: Hi! Thank you for reviewing. Well, practically, it SXKXA, so. well, you understand, right? Maybe if you would e-mail me or something, I could explain better? It might not finish, actually. don't scold me! But it's as if after I write one chapter, I get writer's block. One month over, I finish another chapter, I get writer's block. don't kill me. Get Aya to do the job for all I care.
To Misura: Thank you for reviewing! I didn't expect you to review. of all people. I feel so low. Anyways, glad you like the idea of Schuldich as a voice in Kenken's mind! The other chaps aren't written yet, cause I have writer's block right now, so I might not be able to finish. *sob*
To FireKat: Thank you for reviewing!!! I didn't think I was going to get any reviews. the second time I came back to check on the number of reviews, I was like this: O_O. okay, never mind. But, thanks again for reviewing, anyway.
To AD: I thought you'd flame me, seriously. Anyways, thanks for reviewing.
I'm sorry if you don't like RanKen, but I still do. But I hope that you'll still carry on reading this fic, ne?
To Rebound: Yes, that I'm aware. However, thank you for reviewing. Well, ffnet screwed up, so everything was screwed and stuff. But I fixed it and it's all fine now, I hope. The other chapters shouldn't take too long, as long as ffnet doesn't screw up.
A/N: Do you readers and reviewers want Schwarz to appear at all? Tell me if you do, okay? If you have anything in mind, leave a review. Sorry if the conversation was a bit ridiculous. Okay, maybe not a bit, but tell me if you think it was, okay? Arigato!
[1] His reaction is slow, I know. But he was slightly dreamy at that time. I mean, after you're beaten, wouldn't you be slightly dreamy?
[2] Can you call this "Love at first sight"? I'm not too sure about that. ^^;;
[3] I changed the language. I hope you don't mind! But I'm not good at Japanese. If I have provoked you in any way, please leave a review/flame and tell me!
[4] I'm not sure if Aya cries, but this *IS* OOC, right?
A/N: The main point might come later than what I have planned in the beginning. But if you want the main point to come earlier, the story will of course end earlier, so be careful when you make your decision! Another thing: Schuldich has help from Brad to tell the future, but Brad doesn't "appear".
Okay readers and reviewers/flamers! I've got to go now. Or my mum would be yelling at me! I'll come back to check soon to see if I need to update or stop right here at this second chapter and never write anymore fics in my entire life again.
A/N: Okay. I have a big excuse for taking so long to update. My birthday just passed, so I'm a year older now.
Thanks to the reviewers: marsupial, Misura, FireKat, Aries Draco and Rebound. (if I missed out anyone, please leave a review/flame. Thanks)
//.// Thoughts
Undercover Love
Ken gasped as he saw the redhead's face, blood on his right cheek. He looked extremely pale and tired. It was as if he had just been beaten and his cheek sliced by a knife. Ken ran a slender finger on the redhead's bleeding cheek.
"Who did this to you?" Ken asked, forgetting that he was angry with him.
The redhead realised that Ken saw the blood, and quickly tried to cover his cheek [1].
//Shit! He saw it!//
//Who could have done this to him?// Ken asked himself, falling in love with him at once [2].
//Someone on the dark side. Be careful, Kenken. Don't get too near to him. He might be dangerous.// said the voice.
"Do you want to wash your face?" Ken asked, voice full of concern.
"Is that any of your business?" the redhead asked coldly. "It's not as if you care."
"Well, as a matter of fact, it is my business and I do care," Ken replied hotly.
"And may I ask, what business is it of yours, and why do you care?"
"What the hell's your problem? I'm just trying to be nice! Do you treat people like that? Even when they're trying to be nice to you?"
"Yes," was all Ken got from the redhead."Now, if you don't mind, I'm rather late for my meeting, and you're making me even later. So, if I get sacked, I shall be blaming it on you, huh?"
"Oh shit!" Ken forgot he was late. He started running, leaving the redhead smirking.
µÿµ
~Two days later~
Ken saw the redhead he had seen two days before again. He groaned.
//Why must it always be me?//
//You don't have to go near him love. It's your choice.// the voice said.
//Forget it. I'll still have to face him sometime anyway. Why not do it now, rather then wait till next time?// Ken chose to ignore the voice.
//Be careful love, he might hurt you. Don't get influenced, love.// the voice came back in Ken's mind.
Ken walked over to the redhead. Somehow, his instincts told him that the redhead was feeling depressed.
//What's wrong with him?//
//Nothing. His sister is in a coma. She only has 50% chance of living. He's sad and he needs someone by his side. But don't go, sweet. Don't go. He'll be fine. Don't go.//
Ken again ignored the voice and sat down beside the redhead.
"Hey. Do you want to talk? I might be irritating, but maybe I could help," Ken offered.
"Nothing you do will help. Go away. There's nothing you can do," the redhead replied.
"I could be of some help, you know. You don't ask people to go away when they're trying to help," Ken said, annoyed at the redhead's attitude.
"I said, go away. Don't you understand English [3]? There's nothing you can do except make people feel worse," the redhead replied coolly.
"I can too do something!" Ken shouted.
"Oh yeah? Name me one."
"Play soccer. I'm best at it."
The redhead snickered. "Is there anything else you can do? Other than play soccer and make people feel worse?"
"I do not make people feel worse!"
//This guy's good at arguing. But I must beat him. I won't give up so easily.//
//Give up, Ken. You'll never win.// said the voice.
The argue went on for another fifteen minutes before both the redhead and Ken got angry.
"There is something I can do you know!" Ken shouted.
"Like what? Bring my sister back to life?!" the redhead shouted back.
"It's true, then?." Ken said, surprised, and not shouting.
"Yes, and now are you happy? Why aren't you rejoicing? Aren't you happy to see my sister half dead?" the redhead asked, tears streaming down his face from his amethyst eyes [4].
"I-I'm sorry. I didn't know."
"Now you do. Could you go away now? You're still very annoying."
"Whatever you say, I'm staying. So, what's your sister's name?" Ken asked, just to carry on this conversation.
"Why do you care, anyway?"
"I'm just curious."
"Curiosity kills the cat. Don't you know?"
"Of course I know that. But can't a person be curious?"
The redhead merely glared at Ken.
"Okay, okay. But there's no harm in telling me your name right, at least?"
"Fujimiya."
~TBC~ (if I get enough reviews)
A/N: Another chappie up! Hope you liked it. Flame me if you didn't, k? Help me improve. Reviewers, here are your answered reviews:
To marsupial: Hi! Thank you for reviewing. Well, practically, it SXKXA, so. well, you understand, right? Maybe if you would e-mail me or something, I could explain better? It might not finish, actually. don't scold me! But it's as if after I write one chapter, I get writer's block. One month over, I finish another chapter, I get writer's block. don't kill me. Get Aya to do the job for all I care.
To Misura: Thank you for reviewing! I didn't expect you to review. of all people. I feel so low. Anyways, glad you like the idea of Schuldich as a voice in Kenken's mind! The other chaps aren't written yet, cause I have writer's block right now, so I might not be able to finish. *sob*
To FireKat: Thank you for reviewing!!! I didn't think I was going to get any reviews. the second time I came back to check on the number of reviews, I was like this: O_O. okay, never mind. But, thanks again for reviewing, anyway.
To AD: I thought you'd flame me, seriously. Anyways, thanks for reviewing.
I'm sorry if you don't like RanKen, but I still do. But I hope that you'll still carry on reading this fic, ne?
To Rebound: Yes, that I'm aware. However, thank you for reviewing. Well, ffnet screwed up, so everything was screwed and stuff. But I fixed it and it's all fine now, I hope. The other chapters shouldn't take too long, as long as ffnet doesn't screw up.
A/N: Do you readers and reviewers want Schwarz to appear at all? Tell me if you do, okay? If you have anything in mind, leave a review. Sorry if the conversation was a bit ridiculous. Okay, maybe not a bit, but tell me if you think it was, okay? Arigato!
[1] His reaction is slow, I know. But he was slightly dreamy at that time. I mean, after you're beaten, wouldn't you be slightly dreamy?
[2] Can you call this "Love at first sight"? I'm not too sure about that. ^^;;
[3] I changed the language. I hope you don't mind! But I'm not good at Japanese. If I have provoked you in any way, please leave a review/flame and tell me!
[4] I'm not sure if Aya cries, but this *IS* OOC, right?
A/N: The main point might come later than what I have planned in the beginning. But if you want the main point to come earlier, the story will of course end earlier, so be careful when you make your decision! Another thing: Schuldich has help from Brad to tell the future, but Brad doesn't "appear".
Okay readers and reviewers/flamers! I've got to go now. Or my mum would be yelling at me! I'll come back to check soon to see if I need to update or stop right here at this second chapter and never write anymore fics in my entire life again.