::*:: RinaSparrow - Thanks so much for reviewing! And I'll try NOT to make you and others to wait for the next chapter(s). Im so glad you reviewed! I thought no one would ^^; Well hopefully for will next time.
::*:: Here's the next chapter! I hope you all enjoy it
HEART WITHOUT A HOME by shannon [tess]
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CHAPTER TWO - MEETING OR WEEPING?
A few days had passed ever since Allie and Elizabeth talked that one day, three days to be exact.
Allie ran out of the her house, keeping trying to keep herself away from the yelling and hitting from her father, her ever-so-loving father who found his way to alcohol. It ruined him. Her mother had died just a few weeks before, Allie was glad she was in a happier and better place, but not the fact that she was gone... forever.
Allie slammed the door shut, letting teardrops fall, like they were telling a story (sorry, i just had to put it in there.LOL). Allie trampled to the ground as she walked away, tripping this way and that on the rocks that sleep, letting everything around them do what they want. Allie walked over to a pole on the dock and just leaned on it, looking into the night sky... thinking.
"I'm not very happy here, now, am I?" She said looking towards the ocean. "No," she shook her head, getting angry. "No! No, not when you took my very own mother away from me!" She screamed, making herself slide down the pole, bringing her legs up to her chin, and cry in her hands.
Yes, it was true, and unfortunate. This ocean, THIS ocean that you've heard all the joyful and wonderful things about took her mother away. You see, her mother was out on a boat that her husband, Allie's father, recently bought her, and it was a windy day. She was out there alone, no one knows why. The wind was so strong, so tough, that it made the boat cap-size, bringing her with her. Hearing that dreadful news wasn't the best thing you would want when you come home from work, now, is it? It just made Allie and her father's life more aggravating.
Quietly, but softly, Allie said, "It made my father go mad."
Allie looked at the dock, seeing the moonlight, and candles lighting it, she saw a shadow, moving closer to her, which made Allie jump.
She turned her face and she saw a man, tall man, with curly, ash blonde hair, wearing a raggedly old white shirt that was dirty. He reached out his hand to Allie and said, "I'm sorry, I didn't meet to startle you."
Allie looked at his hand, grabbed it, and looked up at while standing up. "Oh, it's okay, really." She wiped some tears that were still on her face with her wrist.
The man looked at her. "The name's Will, Will Turner."
Allie practically choked on her breathe. "What?" She never thought that Elizabeth would go for THIS kind of man... he's...he's...perfect! Wait! That didn't make sense... Oh, well, he's a hot man, what can I say? OH! Sorry, sorry, there's story going on here...hehe..sorry. Back to the story: "Sorry, um... I'm Allie-"
"Will! What are you-" It was Elizabeth. She stopped talking as she was Allie. "Allie! Why are you out here? Wouldn't you be at your house?"
Allie froze. "Oh, um, long story."
Elizabeth walked over and stood by Will. "Well, looks like you've met him already, huh? And maybe you could tell me, well, us inside?" She pointed over at a Blacksmith shop that Allie assumed Will worked at.
Allie thought for a moment and gave a small smile. "Sure."
Will and Elizabeth smiled. And soon, they were off into the Blacksmith shop.
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::*:: Likey? Likey? Likey? Likey? Sorry..I just want to point out that what's the point in reading, liking it, and not reviewing to tell the author? Just ask yourself that. lol. But if you don't like it just..don't review.LOL.R&R! And ta-ta! -Shannon [tess]
::*:: Here's the next chapter! I hope you all enjoy it
HEART WITHOUT A HOME by shannon [tess]
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CHAPTER TWO - MEETING OR WEEPING?
A few days had passed ever since Allie and Elizabeth talked that one day, three days to be exact.
Allie ran out of the her house, keeping trying to keep herself away from the yelling and hitting from her father, her ever-so-loving father who found his way to alcohol. It ruined him. Her mother had died just a few weeks before, Allie was glad she was in a happier and better place, but not the fact that she was gone... forever.
Allie slammed the door shut, letting teardrops fall, like they were telling a story (sorry, i just had to put it in there.LOL). Allie trampled to the ground as she walked away, tripping this way and that on the rocks that sleep, letting everything around them do what they want. Allie walked over to a pole on the dock and just leaned on it, looking into the night sky... thinking.
"I'm not very happy here, now, am I?" She said looking towards the ocean. "No," she shook her head, getting angry. "No! No, not when you took my very own mother away from me!" She screamed, making herself slide down the pole, bringing her legs up to her chin, and cry in her hands.
Yes, it was true, and unfortunate. This ocean, THIS ocean that you've heard all the joyful and wonderful things about took her mother away. You see, her mother was out on a boat that her husband, Allie's father, recently bought her, and it was a windy day. She was out there alone, no one knows why. The wind was so strong, so tough, that it made the boat cap-size, bringing her with her. Hearing that dreadful news wasn't the best thing you would want when you come home from work, now, is it? It just made Allie and her father's life more aggravating.
Quietly, but softly, Allie said, "It made my father go mad."
Allie looked at the dock, seeing the moonlight, and candles lighting it, she saw a shadow, moving closer to her, which made Allie jump.
She turned her face and she saw a man, tall man, with curly, ash blonde hair, wearing a raggedly old white shirt that was dirty. He reached out his hand to Allie and said, "I'm sorry, I didn't meet to startle you."
Allie looked at his hand, grabbed it, and looked up at while standing up. "Oh, it's okay, really." She wiped some tears that were still on her face with her wrist.
The man looked at her. "The name's Will, Will Turner."
Allie practically choked on her breathe. "What?" She never thought that Elizabeth would go for THIS kind of man... he's...he's...perfect! Wait! That didn't make sense... Oh, well, he's a hot man, what can I say? OH! Sorry, sorry, there's story going on here...hehe..sorry. Back to the story: "Sorry, um... I'm Allie-"
"Will! What are you-" It was Elizabeth. She stopped talking as she was Allie. "Allie! Why are you out here? Wouldn't you be at your house?"
Allie froze. "Oh, um, long story."
Elizabeth walked over and stood by Will. "Well, looks like you've met him already, huh? And maybe you could tell me, well, us inside?" She pointed over at a Blacksmith shop that Allie assumed Will worked at.
Allie thought for a moment and gave a small smile. "Sure."
Will and Elizabeth smiled. And soon, they were off into the Blacksmith shop.
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::*:: Likey? Likey? Likey? Likey? Sorry..I just want to point out that what's the point in reading, liking it, and not reviewing to tell the author? Just ask yourself that. lol. But if you don't like it just..don't review.LOL.R&R! And ta-ta! -Shannon [tess]