Disclaimer! Love Hina belongs to Ken Akamatsu
This is one of my first fanfics. Since my first fanfic wasn't very good, I
decided to make a Love Hina one enjoy.
Sorry for removing it for awhile. I messed up a lot, so I need a fresh start. Im REALLY SORRY I'LL PUT EXTRA EFFORT INTO THIS FANFIC!!!!
=============================================================== Chapter 1. -Bad Aura
Ever since Keitaro Urashima came to the Hinata House, lots of chaos came to the Hinata House. The lucky loser is then picked on by Motoko Aoyama: a girl that wields the sword like a master and studies the art of the God's Cry School. If not by Motoko, then by a student named Naru Narusegawa, whom is also aiming for Toudai like him. Not only those two pick on him, also by the mechanical genius Kaolla Su, who sees Keitaro as a plaything. To make things worse, Keitaro becomes the Hinata's landlord. Of course most of the girls object to him running a girls only dormitory, but they accept it.
-In The Mourning-
"Nooo!" cried Keitaro as he scrambled around his room. "I'm late!"
Keitaro rushed around his room to find clothing and prep school things. After 5 minutes of rushing, he streaked down the hall. "Where you go'n ronin?" greeted Su with a smile. "Prep-school of course, I am applying for Toudai" responded Keitaro as he put on his shoes and ran off and took the bus.
-After School-
Practice Exam Results: Keitaro- 3% Shirai-25% Haitani-20%
"It's November and these are my grades!" sobbed Shirai. "At this rate, well never get our number 1 choices," added Haitani. The 3 speckled friends walked home in the rain.
Then several girls walked past them. "Whoa, 100% on the hot babe radar!" cried Haitani excitedly and walked up to the tallest girl with black hair. "Hi my name is." started Haitani but was cut off. With a swing of the girl's umbrella, Keitaro, Shirari, and Haitani was swept of their feet and face first into the ground.
"Keitaro Urashima" said the girl. "Huh? Motoko" said Keitaro as he quickly recovered, and recognized the girl's voice. "How dare you act like a hot shot you pervert," said Motoko coldly. She then pointed her now closed umbrella at Keitaro like a sword. "It was just my friends," said Keitaro franticly. "Shut up!" yelled Motoko, then turned away. "A loser like you will never fulfill your dream, you will never reach Toudai, and everyone will just hate you". Then a cold rush ran over her. "Can't breathe" thought Motoko. "So much hatred in the air..." Motoko fell on her knees and clasped her throat. "I-I-Impossible." she turned around. It seems Keitaro already left.
-Back in Hinata-
"What is her problem," wondered Keitaro as he sat in the lounge. "Why does she hate me so much?"
"Well she hates guys for some reason," responded Naru as she entered the lounge. "You better watch out she can seriously hurt you".
"Well, I'm older, so she should give me more respect," said Keitaro angrily.
"It's best not to piss her off" said Naru warningly "She studied at a famous dojo, she mastered her art at the age of 15, she can split rocks with a flick of her sword, and divide the heavens!"
"That's not very impressive," said Keitaro.
Naru was startled that Keitaro was not intimidated one bit. "What the." thought Naru as he gazed into Keitaro's eyes. "There different.. its so.. empty.." she thought. "Well I better be off studying" said Keitaro. Naru then saw color returned to his eyes. "Must be my imagination" she thought and walked off. "Time for a bath".
Sorry for removing it for awhile. I messed up a lot, so I need a fresh start. Im REALLY SORRY I'LL PUT EXTRA EFFORT INTO THIS FANFIC!!!!
=============================================================== Chapter 1. -Bad Aura
Ever since Keitaro Urashima came to the Hinata House, lots of chaos came to the Hinata House. The lucky loser is then picked on by Motoko Aoyama: a girl that wields the sword like a master and studies the art of the God's Cry School. If not by Motoko, then by a student named Naru Narusegawa, whom is also aiming for Toudai like him. Not only those two pick on him, also by the mechanical genius Kaolla Su, who sees Keitaro as a plaything. To make things worse, Keitaro becomes the Hinata's landlord. Of course most of the girls object to him running a girls only dormitory, but they accept it.
-In The Mourning-
"Nooo!" cried Keitaro as he scrambled around his room. "I'm late!"
Keitaro rushed around his room to find clothing and prep school things. After 5 minutes of rushing, he streaked down the hall. "Where you go'n ronin?" greeted Su with a smile. "Prep-school of course, I am applying for Toudai" responded Keitaro as he put on his shoes and ran off and took the bus.
-After School-
Practice Exam Results: Keitaro- 3% Shirai-25% Haitani-20%
"It's November and these are my grades!" sobbed Shirai. "At this rate, well never get our number 1 choices," added Haitani. The 3 speckled friends walked home in the rain.
Then several girls walked past them. "Whoa, 100% on the hot babe radar!" cried Haitani excitedly and walked up to the tallest girl with black hair. "Hi my name is." started Haitani but was cut off. With a swing of the girl's umbrella, Keitaro, Shirari, and Haitani was swept of their feet and face first into the ground.
"Keitaro Urashima" said the girl. "Huh? Motoko" said Keitaro as he quickly recovered, and recognized the girl's voice. "How dare you act like a hot shot you pervert," said Motoko coldly. She then pointed her now closed umbrella at Keitaro like a sword. "It was just my friends," said Keitaro franticly. "Shut up!" yelled Motoko, then turned away. "A loser like you will never fulfill your dream, you will never reach Toudai, and everyone will just hate you". Then a cold rush ran over her. "Can't breathe" thought Motoko. "So much hatred in the air..." Motoko fell on her knees and clasped her throat. "I-I-Impossible." she turned around. It seems Keitaro already left.
-Back in Hinata-
"What is her problem," wondered Keitaro as he sat in the lounge. "Why does she hate me so much?"
"Well she hates guys for some reason," responded Naru as she entered the lounge. "You better watch out she can seriously hurt you".
"Well, I'm older, so she should give me more respect," said Keitaro angrily.
"It's best not to piss her off" said Naru warningly "She studied at a famous dojo, she mastered her art at the age of 15, she can split rocks with a flick of her sword, and divide the heavens!"
"That's not very impressive," said Keitaro.
Naru was startled that Keitaro was not intimidated one bit. "What the." thought Naru as he gazed into Keitaro's eyes. "There different.. its so.. empty.." she thought. "Well I better be off studying" said Keitaro. Naru then saw color returned to his eyes. "Must be my imagination" she thought and walked off. "Time for a bath".