Disclaimer
Insert Standard disclaimer here. I hate these things, so I know that no one really reads them, unless they have a joke. I do not own any Star Wars Characters, I wish, do you realize how rich I would be if I did. But I'm not rich, so I don't own them.
Summery
NJO -after Luke has established it, and they are more able to go back to old Jedi traditions. Our heroes include some initiates (for now) some Padawans and a few masters and knights, not completely sure who yet.
This is my first NJO fic and my second starwars fic, I can't count the one I'll never be able to post, I've put famous people in it, and that's not
allowed. (
BTW Jaime is not me, though she'll be more famous than I ever will be,
she's just a figment of my imagination.
I'm considering changing the title to family ties, or ties that bind, or something more fitting for the way I'm planning for the story to go in the later chapters, tell me what you think about a new title, and maybe with
suggestions.
Chapter 3
**Kyle's Story **
We moved from planet to planet, sometimes we didn't leave the ship, other times we were herded out to allow people to see us. I was really young, at first to young, then, there came a man, he was looking for a young child, to learn how to work. I was probably only about five, but I remember, there weren't very many of us, most young children died soon after being brought to the ship, the reason I had survived, is I was a fighter, the man came into the lounge where we were lined up, he looked familular, and I soon realized why, I felt a presence pushing at the edges of my mind, I nudged it back, I didn't like the thought of people looking in my mind. After talking with the ship owner for a minute, the man passed a stack of credit vouchers to him, them he walked up to me and said, "Come on, we must get back to my ship." I followed the man, once we were on his ship, he strapped me into a comfortable seat, and headed to the front. After a time he came back, with a girl, the girl sat beside me, she had shoulder length hair, but she also had a long braid that snaked over her right shoulder, and touched the seat. She spent the first twenty minutes of the flight playing with the braid, before turning to me. "Do you know of the Jedi?" She asked. "They're the ones who saved the galaxy," I said. "Well, I guess some did help, though most didn't come out of hiding until more recently," She said. "Really," I said. "Yeah, The man who got you away from those slavers is a Jedi," The girl smiled. "I know, he tried to read my mind, I didn't like that," I said. "You told him to go away?" she questioned. "Well, I just pushed back, I don't know how to talk without speaking," I said. "I wouldn't expect you to, Do you know where we're going?" The man asked. "No, you didn't tell me," I said. "Coruscant, it's a whole world made up of one big City," He smiled. "You bought me," I said softly. "Yes, I did, and when we get to Coruscant, you'll be free, there are people there waiting for you, to help you," He said. "I'll really be free?" I said. "Yup, you'll get any training you need to survive on your own, when you get older you will be allowed to choose whatever path you want."
Soon we landed, Master Horn led me and Lizzy off the ship, and into a big building, there were four people waiting for us. "Master Horn, how did the trip go?" One of the two males waiting asked. "The mission went well Master Skywalker, I believe that we have found the boy matching Jysella's vision, he has potential in the force for sure, he was able to push me out of his mind." Master Horn replied. "Good, Lizzy, welcome back," Master Skywalker said. "Come on, I'll take you to your new room," One of the women had walked up to me. I followed the woman, she was silent as she led me down the hallways, we passed by many closed doors, and many people, the children didn't say anything to me, but the adults looked at me almost as if they were wondering who I was. "Here we are, this is the five year old's room, and that is how old Master Horn said you were," The woman finally spoke.
The woman knocked, and the door opened a minute later, there were squeals coming from inside, and laughter. "Master Horn just returned, this is the child that he brought back." "Alright, come on in," I followed the pair of women inside the room, there were four doors off of the main room, there were also six other kids in the main room, running around. I sat on the floor, when told to have a seat, the women sat in chairs. "What's your name?" The second woman asked. "the older kids called me Runt," I said softly. "Well, that won't work here, you may be smaller than my other kids, but it's not very nice, we'll call you Nycolas," She said after a moment. "All right," I said, my real name was Kyle, but she hadn't let me tell her that. Over the next week, I settled into a routine, which included school, at the apartment, after school, I went into the boys room, and sat quietly by myself, quite content with not being thrown around and beat up by the older boys on the ship, I also got used to everyone calling me Nycolas, and I didn't really mind it. As time passed, the other boys got bigger, I didn't, I was always small on the ship, but so was everyone else, it wasn't fair, and the other boys decided, since I was smaller it was alright to pick on me. A week before the last day of the year everyone had celebrated their eighth birthday, mine was made to be the day I was found, since even I didn't know that, we were all moved from the apartment, and packed up, most of the boys went home for the last week, but since I had no parents, I sent to the initiate dorms a week early. The dorm master placed me in a room with a quiet ten year old named Mikkel. "Hi," I said "I'm Mikkel," he smiled. "I'm Kyle, though the masters were told my name is Nycolas," I said. "Why didn't you correct them?" Mikkel asked. "I kind of like having something about me that's different," I said. "How old were you when you came here?" He asked. "Five," I replied, both beds were already made, so I just stowed my bag on the shelf for the bottom bunk.
The next week was filled with boredom, though I did meet a few people, the older initiates were in classes all week, but because no one else from my age group was there, I had no classes. The most intriguing of all the other initiates would have to have been Jessie, Jaime and Cyrus, they were always joking, and laughing, and I caught a couple of pranks. "Mikkel, I noticed that Jaime, Jessie and Cyrus are pretty good friends, but they're constantly playing mean tricks on each other, why is that?" I asked at the end of the week, when all my age mates began returning. "They have a little friendly war going between them, Jaime and Cyrus are expert pranksters, and Jessie likes to set up the two of them, it's all just fun and games," Mikkel said. "Oh, ok," I said.
About three weeks into the new year, I had a run in with Jessie, I was returning to my room after classes, my classmates all headed to the waterfall, he was setting up a prank. "Where are you going?" He asked. "Just back to my room," I said. "Really, I don't think so, not yet, you might tell Jaime that there's a prank waiting for her, you're coming with me," Jessie said, he quickly finished what he was doing to the door, and climbed down. "What did you do?" I asked. "Just rigged her door," Jessie said "Alright, I guess I can go, but I promise I won't tell anyone," I said.
A/N: Sorry so short, but any more, and I have plot problems later, I'm grateful for any reviews I get. Good, bad, or clumsy, sorry, it's dinner theater season in my home town, and that was the last one, if you don't mind me going 'Ye olde' in the next chappy, I might be able to get another one out before next week.
Insert Standard disclaimer here. I hate these things, so I know that no one really reads them, unless they have a joke. I do not own any Star Wars Characters, I wish, do you realize how rich I would be if I did. But I'm not rich, so I don't own them.
Summery
NJO -after Luke has established it, and they are more able to go back to old Jedi traditions. Our heroes include some initiates (for now) some Padawans and a few masters and knights, not completely sure who yet.
This is my first NJO fic and my second starwars fic, I can't count the one I'll never be able to post, I've put famous people in it, and that's not
allowed. (
BTW Jaime is not me, though she'll be more famous than I ever will be,
she's just a figment of my imagination.
I'm considering changing the title to family ties, or ties that bind, or something more fitting for the way I'm planning for the story to go in the later chapters, tell me what you think about a new title, and maybe with
suggestions.
Chapter 3
**Kyle's Story **
We moved from planet to planet, sometimes we didn't leave the ship, other times we were herded out to allow people to see us. I was really young, at first to young, then, there came a man, he was looking for a young child, to learn how to work. I was probably only about five, but I remember, there weren't very many of us, most young children died soon after being brought to the ship, the reason I had survived, is I was a fighter, the man came into the lounge where we were lined up, he looked familular, and I soon realized why, I felt a presence pushing at the edges of my mind, I nudged it back, I didn't like the thought of people looking in my mind. After talking with the ship owner for a minute, the man passed a stack of credit vouchers to him, them he walked up to me and said, "Come on, we must get back to my ship." I followed the man, once we were on his ship, he strapped me into a comfortable seat, and headed to the front. After a time he came back, with a girl, the girl sat beside me, she had shoulder length hair, but she also had a long braid that snaked over her right shoulder, and touched the seat. She spent the first twenty minutes of the flight playing with the braid, before turning to me. "Do you know of the Jedi?" She asked. "They're the ones who saved the galaxy," I said. "Well, I guess some did help, though most didn't come out of hiding until more recently," She said. "Really," I said. "Yeah, The man who got you away from those slavers is a Jedi," The girl smiled. "I know, he tried to read my mind, I didn't like that," I said. "You told him to go away?" she questioned. "Well, I just pushed back, I don't know how to talk without speaking," I said. "I wouldn't expect you to, Do you know where we're going?" The man asked. "No, you didn't tell me," I said. "Coruscant, it's a whole world made up of one big City," He smiled. "You bought me," I said softly. "Yes, I did, and when we get to Coruscant, you'll be free, there are people there waiting for you, to help you," He said. "I'll really be free?" I said. "Yup, you'll get any training you need to survive on your own, when you get older you will be allowed to choose whatever path you want."
Soon we landed, Master Horn led me and Lizzy off the ship, and into a big building, there were four people waiting for us. "Master Horn, how did the trip go?" One of the two males waiting asked. "The mission went well Master Skywalker, I believe that we have found the boy matching Jysella's vision, he has potential in the force for sure, he was able to push me out of his mind." Master Horn replied. "Good, Lizzy, welcome back," Master Skywalker said. "Come on, I'll take you to your new room," One of the women had walked up to me. I followed the woman, she was silent as she led me down the hallways, we passed by many closed doors, and many people, the children didn't say anything to me, but the adults looked at me almost as if they were wondering who I was. "Here we are, this is the five year old's room, and that is how old Master Horn said you were," The woman finally spoke.
The woman knocked, and the door opened a minute later, there were squeals coming from inside, and laughter. "Master Horn just returned, this is the child that he brought back." "Alright, come on in," I followed the pair of women inside the room, there were four doors off of the main room, there were also six other kids in the main room, running around. I sat on the floor, when told to have a seat, the women sat in chairs. "What's your name?" The second woman asked. "the older kids called me Runt," I said softly. "Well, that won't work here, you may be smaller than my other kids, but it's not very nice, we'll call you Nycolas," She said after a moment. "All right," I said, my real name was Kyle, but she hadn't let me tell her that. Over the next week, I settled into a routine, which included school, at the apartment, after school, I went into the boys room, and sat quietly by myself, quite content with not being thrown around and beat up by the older boys on the ship, I also got used to everyone calling me Nycolas, and I didn't really mind it. As time passed, the other boys got bigger, I didn't, I was always small on the ship, but so was everyone else, it wasn't fair, and the other boys decided, since I was smaller it was alright to pick on me. A week before the last day of the year everyone had celebrated their eighth birthday, mine was made to be the day I was found, since even I didn't know that, we were all moved from the apartment, and packed up, most of the boys went home for the last week, but since I had no parents, I sent to the initiate dorms a week early. The dorm master placed me in a room with a quiet ten year old named Mikkel. "Hi," I said "I'm Mikkel," he smiled. "I'm Kyle, though the masters were told my name is Nycolas," I said. "Why didn't you correct them?" Mikkel asked. "I kind of like having something about me that's different," I said. "How old were you when you came here?" He asked. "Five," I replied, both beds were already made, so I just stowed my bag on the shelf for the bottom bunk.
The next week was filled with boredom, though I did meet a few people, the older initiates were in classes all week, but because no one else from my age group was there, I had no classes. The most intriguing of all the other initiates would have to have been Jessie, Jaime and Cyrus, they were always joking, and laughing, and I caught a couple of pranks. "Mikkel, I noticed that Jaime, Jessie and Cyrus are pretty good friends, but they're constantly playing mean tricks on each other, why is that?" I asked at the end of the week, when all my age mates began returning. "They have a little friendly war going between them, Jaime and Cyrus are expert pranksters, and Jessie likes to set up the two of them, it's all just fun and games," Mikkel said. "Oh, ok," I said.
About three weeks into the new year, I had a run in with Jessie, I was returning to my room after classes, my classmates all headed to the waterfall, he was setting up a prank. "Where are you going?" He asked. "Just back to my room," I said. "Really, I don't think so, not yet, you might tell Jaime that there's a prank waiting for her, you're coming with me," Jessie said, he quickly finished what he was doing to the door, and climbed down. "What did you do?" I asked. "Just rigged her door," Jessie said "Alright, I guess I can go, but I promise I won't tell anyone," I said.
A/N: Sorry so short, but any more, and I have plot problems later, I'm grateful for any reviews I get. Good, bad, or clumsy, sorry, it's dinner theater season in my home town, and that was the last one, if you don't mind me going 'Ye olde' in the next chappy, I might be able to get another one out before next week.