thanks so much to Hiei'sFireyGurl52890 and Cheeto for reviewing my story and not going out on flames. dont worry Hiei'sFireyGurl52890, nothing bad is gonna happen to Hiei. He's to cool to die.
disclaimer: i do not own yyh.
chapter 3:surprise!
"It's to quiet," Hiei said as he and Yusuke comes out of the portal door.
"Hiei! Look out!" Yusuke yelled as he jumped, pushed Hiei away and took the the blast that came out of nowhere himself.
"Where'd that come from?" Hiei asked surprisingly. "Are you alright Yusuke?"
"Yea. I'm fine."
"Who are you? Show yourself!" Hiei demanded. "And you shouldn't be attacking us! We're part of the Urameshi team!"
"Are you?" said a voice.
'It sounds like a female. So it must be a female youkai,' Hiei thought while taking out his katana and getting ready for battle.
"Where are the others? There are only two of you. There are supposed to be four!" said the voice as it came closer.
"We don't need all four of us right now!" Hiei yelled out loud to the direction of the voice.
"And why not? What are you doing here?"
"That's none of your business. Owww," Yusuke moaned.
"Fine. Go and get the others of come with me," said the voice when it finally came to a stop about 6 feet away from Hiei and Yusuke.
"Why should we?" Hiei asked.
"Hiei," Yusuke called quietly. "Go and get the others."
"No."
"Go."
"And what are you gonna do?"
"I'll be alright. I'm gonna go over to Keiko's so she can give me some bandages."
"So which is it?" asked the youkai getting impatient.
"I'll go with you," Hiei answered. "But he has to go somewhere else first."
"Good."
"Hiei no! Go and get the others first!" Yusuke said as he struggled to get up.
"I can take care of myself. I'm just gonna try get a closer look on things inside," Hiei said quietly. But loudly enough so only he and Yusuke can hear.
"Fine. I'm going now," Yusuke said and left.
"Are you finished yet?" the youkai asked impatiently.
"Alright. We can go."
"Excellent."
so that's the end of chapter 3. thanks again to Hiei'sFireyGurl52890 and Cheeto for reviewing my story.
disclaimer: i do not own yyh.
chapter 3:surprise!
"It's to quiet," Hiei said as he and Yusuke comes out of the portal door.
"Hiei! Look out!" Yusuke yelled as he jumped, pushed Hiei away and took the the blast that came out of nowhere himself.
"Where'd that come from?" Hiei asked surprisingly. "Are you alright Yusuke?"
"Yea. I'm fine."
"Who are you? Show yourself!" Hiei demanded. "And you shouldn't be attacking us! We're part of the Urameshi team!"
"Are you?" said a voice.
'It sounds like a female. So it must be a female youkai,' Hiei thought while taking out his katana and getting ready for battle.
"Where are the others? There are only two of you. There are supposed to be four!" said the voice as it came closer.
"We don't need all four of us right now!" Hiei yelled out loud to the direction of the voice.
"And why not? What are you doing here?"
"That's none of your business. Owww," Yusuke moaned.
"Fine. Go and get the others of come with me," said the voice when it finally came to a stop about 6 feet away from Hiei and Yusuke.
"Why should we?" Hiei asked.
"Hiei," Yusuke called quietly. "Go and get the others."
"No."
"Go."
"And what are you gonna do?"
"I'll be alright. I'm gonna go over to Keiko's so she can give me some bandages."
"So which is it?" asked the youkai getting impatient.
"I'll go with you," Hiei answered. "But he has to go somewhere else first."
"Good."
"Hiei no! Go and get the others first!" Yusuke said as he struggled to get up.
"I can take care of myself. I'm just gonna try get a closer look on things inside," Hiei said quietly. But loudly enough so only he and Yusuke can hear.
"Fine. I'm going now," Yusuke said and left.
"Are you finished yet?" the youkai asked impatiently.
"Alright. We can go."
"Excellent."
so that's the end of chapter 3. thanks again to Hiei'sFireyGurl52890 and Cheeto for reviewing my story.
