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I HAVE REVEIWS!!! I HAVE REVEIWS!! FIRST DAY UP, AND I HAVE REVEIWS!!! This is a miracle!
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ShintoSakura- Thank You for reading my stuff, I am going on. Thanks for the spellcheck. Shion Uzuki- Thanks for reading! I will! Now, on to the story! *thinking* "Talking"
She woke up lying on her back, being crushed by bandages and with several people breathing down her neck. Her head jerked up, connecting squarely with one of their noses. In seconds, she was up and ready to fight her way out. no she wasn't, collapsing back onto the floor. "You stupid girl! How do you expect to walk with those injures?" A woman's voice, smooth and calm, but still broken with anger. She could hear the man she had smashed making strange 'ORO' noises. There was another woman beside him, trying to help him up. She listened, her ears twitching, till she found the location of the other man. He was sitting beside the first woman. Three of them had a warriors heart-beat, but the other.
Sano looked at the girl lying on the floor. He had been fairly surprised when she showed up at the door, but only at her age, not her injuries. She was fairly young, 18 or so, and already she had been immersed in pirate life. *Well, she can't be very good* He thought, studying the image on her arm. *I've never seen that ship before, and she's been caught already.*
Just then, the girl's head smacked up, connecting with Kenshin's head. He fell back against the wall. Kaoru was there, trying to help but really just annoying Kenshin, though he would never admit it. The girl tried to stand up, but her legs just couldn't support her. *Blood loss, I suppose. * Megumi started giving her trouble for trying to move, so he zoned out, ignoring the usual sounds of Megumi's voice. He sat their quietly, watching the motionless body. Not quite motionless body. Her ear twitched. Sano had never seen an ear twitch before. Interesting.
She was thrown across the room by a strong hand. It spewed her up again, holding her out, promising pain if she didn't comply to there demands. She was scared, just a little girl. She wished the others were here. no she didn't. she didn't want the others to be subjected to this. She wanted to be where the others were. She wanted Yahiko. To come. save. her.
Blackness.
He he he. REVEIWS!!! First chapter, done! In one hour to! that was longer, but was it still to short? Tell me! I want to know!
In chapters to come: Who is this mysterious girl at the dojo? What about the girl who knows Yahiko? WILL KENSHIN EVER GET HIS NOSE FIXED? Find out next time!
Seeya!
JJ
I HAVE REVEIWS!!! I HAVE REVEIWS!! FIRST DAY UP, AND I HAVE REVEIWS!!! This is a miracle!
Answers
ShintoSakura- Thank You for reading my stuff, I am going on. Thanks for the spellcheck. Shion Uzuki- Thanks for reading! I will! Now, on to the story! *thinking* "Talking"
She woke up lying on her back, being crushed by bandages and with several people breathing down her neck. Her head jerked up, connecting squarely with one of their noses. In seconds, she was up and ready to fight her way out. no she wasn't, collapsing back onto the floor. "You stupid girl! How do you expect to walk with those injures?" A woman's voice, smooth and calm, but still broken with anger. She could hear the man she had smashed making strange 'ORO' noises. There was another woman beside him, trying to help him up. She listened, her ears twitching, till she found the location of the other man. He was sitting beside the first woman. Three of them had a warriors heart-beat, but the other.
Sano looked at the girl lying on the floor. He had been fairly surprised when she showed up at the door, but only at her age, not her injuries. She was fairly young, 18 or so, and already she had been immersed in pirate life. *Well, she can't be very good* He thought, studying the image on her arm. *I've never seen that ship before, and she's been caught already.*
Just then, the girl's head smacked up, connecting with Kenshin's head. He fell back against the wall. Kaoru was there, trying to help but really just annoying Kenshin, though he would never admit it. The girl tried to stand up, but her legs just couldn't support her. *Blood loss, I suppose. * Megumi started giving her trouble for trying to move, so he zoned out, ignoring the usual sounds of Megumi's voice. He sat their quietly, watching the motionless body. Not quite motionless body. Her ear twitched. Sano had never seen an ear twitch before. Interesting.
She was thrown across the room by a strong hand. It spewed her up again, holding her out, promising pain if she didn't comply to there demands. She was scared, just a little girl. She wished the others were here. no she didn't. she didn't want the others to be subjected to this. She wanted to be where the others were. She wanted Yahiko. To come. save. her.
Blackness.
He he he. REVEIWS!!! First chapter, done! In one hour to! that was longer, but was it still to short? Tell me! I want to know!
In chapters to come: Who is this mysterious girl at the dojo? What about the girl who knows Yahiko? WILL KENSHIN EVER GET HIS NOSE FIXED? Find out next time!
Seeya!
JJ