Adjusting:
"Damn!" Jean shrieked.
"What a sweet car!"
She ran her hand down the white strip on hood of the red convertable.
"Can we go for a ride?"
"Wish we could, but it's having engine problems."
"Hmm...what kinda engine is it?"
"450turbo"
"Nice!"
Scott continued to talk about the set-up of his car and the problem with the engine.
*Wow, he really openings up if he's talking about his car*
Jean listened to the way he described his car problem, as he causually pulled his alburn bangs off his forehead.
"I can fix that" she replied to his disstress.
"Really?"
"Sure, simple problem."
"Thanks, I own you one."
"You can show me around, this place is huge."
"No prob"
They walked through out the mansion and were now circling the grounds.
"This pool is huge!"
"Yea"
"I'm glad I got a new bathing suit, itz really cute me and my friend..." her voice trailed off.
"Hey what's wrong?" Scott took at step closer towards her, his face mounted with concern.
"hmm? nothin." she quickly wiped a tear from her eye.
She abruptly turned away and headed back toward the mansion
"Show me my room." she ordered, Scott followed.
*What was that?* he thought, *Maybe she's not as tough as she acts*
A smile creeped up his face as she shouted at him to hurry up.
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I write for reviews!! I review all the stories I read, and ive prob read urs, so itz only fair 2 review mine!
"Damn!" Jean shrieked.
"What a sweet car!"
She ran her hand down the white strip on hood of the red convertable.
"Can we go for a ride?"
"Wish we could, but it's having engine problems."
"Hmm...what kinda engine is it?"
"450turbo"
"Nice!"
Scott continued to talk about the set-up of his car and the problem with the engine.
*Wow, he really openings up if he's talking about his car*
Jean listened to the way he described his car problem, as he causually pulled his alburn bangs off his forehead.
"I can fix that" she replied to his disstress.
"Really?"
"Sure, simple problem."
"Thanks, I own you one."
"You can show me around, this place is huge."
"No prob"
They walked through out the mansion and were now circling the grounds.
"This pool is huge!"
"Yea"
"I'm glad I got a new bathing suit, itz really cute me and my friend..." her voice trailed off.
"Hey what's wrong?" Scott took at step closer towards her, his face mounted with concern.
"hmm? nothin." she quickly wiped a tear from her eye.
She abruptly turned away and headed back toward the mansion
"Show me my room." she ordered, Scott followed.
*What was that?* he thought, *Maybe she's not as tough as she acts*
A smile creeped up his face as she shouted at him to hurry up.
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I write for reviews!! I review all the stories I read, and ive prob read urs, so itz only fair 2 review mine!