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Every Minute Counts
Chapter 2
10 am Monday
Location: Barbara's house
Jack pulls up and meets Shanks and some of the other uniforms at the
front of the house.
Jack: hey guys what have we got?
Shanks: Det. Snyder, we have a major problem, Det. Hughes is missing.
Jack: What! How!
Shanks: All we know is we found a gun around back of the house that
is probably hers, her coat a few feet away, and the biggest thing is
we found a badge that appeared to be hers just thrown in the bushes in
the back.
Jack sees all of these things and automatically knows they are hers.
Jack: OMG...
Somewhere outside of Oakdale:
Margo regains consciousness slowly.
Margo: Where am I? (she looks and sees that her gun, badge and coat
are gone She then feels very disoriented and nauseous and has a
splitting headache.) Where is my gun? What happened?
She starts to remember what happened and being knocked out from
behind when she suddenly hears a voice.
Voice: (taunting) Margo, I thought you would never wake up.
Margo sees his face and suddenly feels a strong sense of dread.
Margo: (whispering) James...
Location: Oakdale police station
12 noon Monday
The entire police station is in chaos trying to figure out what
happened to Margo.
Shanks: Jack, Tom Hughes is on line 1 and he wants to talk to
Margo. How do you want to handle this?
Jack's face goes pale, this is the conversation he has been dreading.
How was he going to tell Tom that his wife had probably been
kidnapped.
Jack: I'll take it, Shanks
He picks up the phone.
Jack: Tom, it's Jack Snyder.
Tom: Hey Jack, I was actually trying to reach Margo. I can't seem to
reach her on her cell phone. Is she there?
Jack pauses for a moment not knowing what to say.
Tom: Jack, are you still there
Jack: Yeah Tom, I think you should come to the station as soon as
possible, you and I need to talk about this face to face.
Tom: what's wrong?
Jack: just come down here and we will discuss it when you get here.
Tom: ok, I'm on my way.
Tom was beginning to worry now. Why wouldn't Jack tell him over the
phone. Where was Margo? Something was really wrong, he could feel
it. He jumped in his car and hurried to the station.
To be continued...
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Here's the next part:
Every Minute Counts
Chapter 2
10 am Monday
Location: Barbara's house
Jack pulls up and meets Shanks and some of the other uniforms at the
front of the house.
Jack: hey guys what have we got?
Shanks: Det. Snyder, we have a major problem, Det. Hughes is missing.
Jack: What! How!
Shanks: All we know is we found a gun around back of the house that
is probably hers, her coat a few feet away, and the biggest thing is
we found a badge that appeared to be hers just thrown in the bushes in
the back.
Jack sees all of these things and automatically knows they are hers.
Jack: OMG...
Somewhere outside of Oakdale:
Margo regains consciousness slowly.
Margo: Where am I? (she looks and sees that her gun, badge and coat
are gone She then feels very disoriented and nauseous and has a
splitting headache.) Where is my gun? What happened?
She starts to remember what happened and being knocked out from
behind when she suddenly hears a voice.
Voice: (taunting) Margo, I thought you would never wake up.
Margo sees his face and suddenly feels a strong sense of dread.
Margo: (whispering) James...
Location: Oakdale police station
12 noon Monday
The entire police station is in chaos trying to figure out what
happened to Margo.
Shanks: Jack, Tom Hughes is on line 1 and he wants to talk to
Margo. How do you want to handle this?
Jack's face goes pale, this is the conversation he has been dreading.
How was he going to tell Tom that his wife had probably been
kidnapped.
Jack: I'll take it, Shanks
He picks up the phone.
Jack: Tom, it's Jack Snyder.
Tom: Hey Jack, I was actually trying to reach Margo. I can't seem to
reach her on her cell phone. Is she there?
Jack pauses for a moment not knowing what to say.
Tom: Jack, are you still there
Jack: Yeah Tom, I think you should come to the station as soon as
possible, you and I need to talk about this face to face.
Tom: what's wrong?
Jack: just come down here and we will discuss it when you get here.
Tom: ok, I'm on my way.
Tom was beginning to worry now. Why wouldn't Jack tell him over the
phone. Where was Margo? Something was really wrong, he could feel
it. He jumped in his car and hurried to the station.
To be continued...