Lunis: *hugging Riku so much, she's choking him* They like it! They like
it!
Riku: Gak...that's nice...would you let go?
Lunis: Oh, okay. *lets go* I think I have an idea of a plot for my story, but I'm not telling! I got good, very helpful reviews. I'm not sure I understand that paragraph thing, so I'm gonna try something, and if it's wrong, tell me what to do differently. I'm gonna try my best at this, but I don't know what to write for this chapter, so if it's shorter or more boring than the rest, then you'll know why. And this headache isn't making things much better. I couldn't think of a good name for the raft, so if it's stupid...it's Kairi's idea!
Kairi: *walks in* What?
Lunis: Nothing!
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"It will be called...duck!"
"DUCK?!" Riku exclaimed, right before being hit with Wakka's ball.
Sora fell down on the ground laughing, while Kairi said "I told you!" and started giggling.
"Wakka! " yelled Riku, getting angry.
"What? It was just a little joke." he said and walked away.
"Alright! I'll call it...Dream Cloud!" she decided.
"Dream Cloud? It sounds so light and fluffy! It need a tougher name than that." Riku criticized.
"Well you're gonna have to live with it." she retorted. "Okay, we have enough wood, now. Here." she handed them both a list. "Get the things on the list and bring them back to me."
They both walked off in different directions.
Later, Sora came back with his stuff and gave it to Kairi. Then, he went to go find Riku. Sora found Riku in his normal spot on the paopu tree.
"Hey Riku, if we both think of a name together, do you think she'll let us change it?"
"Nah, I think she really likes that name."
"What do you think we'll find out there?" Sora asked.
"I don't know; that's why we're going...to see what's out there." he answered.
"Do you think we'll make it? Will we find any land? How long will -
"I don't know! Why are you asking so many questions?" inquired Riku.
"I don't know. I guess I'm just excited. Kairi said that we might be done sooner that we expected. She said we gathered things really fast." Sora explained.
"I would have won you know; if you hadn't destroyed the piles! Then we wouldn't have had to name it 'Dream Cloud!'" disputed Riku.
"Well I don't think it's that bad. I'm kinda getting used to it. Besides, it could be worse; she could have named it Fluffy." he replied
Riku burst out laughing, and Sora started to chuckle. Then, they went back to meet Kairi.
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Lunis: Well, I feel good about this chapter. A little boring maybe, but it was fun to write! It seemed longer than usual. Maybe it's just the new way of writing the story. Thank you so much for the reviews! Bye!
Riku: Lunis doesn't own anything accept her name.
Lunis: That's getting tiring...
Riku: Gak...that's nice...would you let go?
Lunis: Oh, okay. *lets go* I think I have an idea of a plot for my story, but I'm not telling! I got good, very helpful reviews. I'm not sure I understand that paragraph thing, so I'm gonna try something, and if it's wrong, tell me what to do differently. I'm gonna try my best at this, but I don't know what to write for this chapter, so if it's shorter or more boring than the rest, then you'll know why. And this headache isn't making things much better. I couldn't think of a good name for the raft, so if it's stupid...it's Kairi's idea!
Kairi: *walks in* What?
Lunis: Nothing!
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"It will be called...duck!"
"DUCK?!" Riku exclaimed, right before being hit with Wakka's ball.
Sora fell down on the ground laughing, while Kairi said "I told you!" and started giggling.
"Wakka! " yelled Riku, getting angry.
"What? It was just a little joke." he said and walked away.
"Alright! I'll call it...Dream Cloud!" she decided.
"Dream Cloud? It sounds so light and fluffy! It need a tougher name than that." Riku criticized.
"Well you're gonna have to live with it." she retorted. "Okay, we have enough wood, now. Here." she handed them both a list. "Get the things on the list and bring them back to me."
They both walked off in different directions.
Later, Sora came back with his stuff and gave it to Kairi. Then, he went to go find Riku. Sora found Riku in his normal spot on the paopu tree.
"Hey Riku, if we both think of a name together, do you think she'll let us change it?"
"Nah, I think she really likes that name."
"What do you think we'll find out there?" Sora asked.
"I don't know; that's why we're going...to see what's out there." he answered.
"Do you think we'll make it? Will we find any land? How long will -
"I don't know! Why are you asking so many questions?" inquired Riku.
"I don't know. I guess I'm just excited. Kairi said that we might be done sooner that we expected. She said we gathered things really fast." Sora explained.
"I would have won you know; if you hadn't destroyed the piles! Then we wouldn't have had to name it 'Dream Cloud!'" disputed Riku.
"Well I don't think it's that bad. I'm kinda getting used to it. Besides, it could be worse; she could have named it Fluffy." he replied
Riku burst out laughing, and Sora started to chuckle. Then, they went back to meet Kairi.
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Lunis: Well, I feel good about this chapter. A little boring maybe, but it was fun to write! It seemed longer than usual. Maybe it's just the new way of writing the story. Thank you so much for the reviews! Bye!
Riku: Lunis doesn't own anything accept her name.
Lunis: That's getting tiring...