All right people, here it is. The first chapter of my first fan fiction.
Well there are a few things you should know first. This is, of course, a
Dynasty Warriors story, but this one goes beyond the Three Kingdoms (Wei,
Wu, and Shu). You probably don't care where I got the idea, so I'll skip
that part. But this is basically a war between the Angelics and the Demons
(Heaven and hell, you know, classic good vs. evil) and how the Three
Kingdoms got roped into it. There are going to be those who side with the
Angelics, those who side with the Demonics, and those who just refuse to
believe that such a thing is going on and continuing war as usual. So ya,
I'm gonna just respond to reviews and PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE review!!! Even a
simple "its good" or "its bad" will do! Also, I jump viewpoints around, so
keep an eye out for who I put at the top of a section. Well, that was
unnecessarily long! Here it is!
Chapter One: The Page
************************The Battle At Hu Lao Gate**************************
***Ma Chao***
"Ha ha!" I yelled triumphantly as I cut down another of Dong Zhuo's troops with my spear. In the heat of battle, this is where I truly belong! I looked over at the gate, still being bashed in by the ram. Whoever designed that gate is truly skilled. No matter to me however. I had few cuts and my troops are doing well with only a few casualties. I stabbed yet another soldier. I saw a sword rise behind me. Oh great, I had a feeling I was being too cocky. The soldier suddenly groaned and fell. I didn't do that! I looked up and saw Zhang He standing there, claws bloodstained.
"You really need to be more aware of your surroundings," he said. "All people have beauty in their fighting styles, yours especially. However, it does have some flaws."
"Thank you He," I said with gratitude. "I hope you will consider joining Liu Bei after Dong Zhuo is defeated."
"I had been considering after finishing service under Yuan Shao I would join Cao Cao, but Liu Bei was the second on my list," he replied. There was a sudden crash, and we looked over at the gate.
It had finally fallen! Our forces began to run in as soon as the enemy troops were dealt with. Maybe fifty went in until sudden screams of pain and fear rang out.
"LU BU!" a soldier screamed running out. "LU BU HAS COME TO DESTROY US!" At that point, a monstrous looking man rode out of the gate, riding a red steed, with a fabled halberd in his hand, cutting down men like a hot knife through butter. It was true, Lu Bu was there to destroy us, and was coming right toward me. I raised my spear, ready to go down fighting. I ran out of patience, and charged.
"AAAAAAA!!!!" I cried while running. He raised the Sky Scorcher...
PING
I brought myself to an abrupt stop. Everything had stopped. All sound, all fighting, all people, even the snow falling from the sky had halted. Except for myself. I turned and saw that Zhang He could move as well.
"Well, this is rather unusual," he said.
"That's obvious," I replied. I looked around. I noticed one other person who had not stopped. There was a man standing there. Except... it couldn't be a... a human... He was maybe six feet tall, but seemed to not even touch the ground, even though you could see the snow cover parts of his... bare feet?! He wasn't even wearing warm clothes! He also seemed to have this aura around him. It was gold, and at the same time, silver. He was clad in leather armor, long pants, and had a long sword sheathed at his waist. His head was hooded... but what were those things coming out of his back?
"Wings..." I murmured to He, who was also looking at him. "That man has wings..." The figure began walking toward us, and we raised our weapons, ready to fight.
"Lower your weapons," the man said. His voice... it seemed to reverberate slightly, and was calming. Calming enough to convince us. "I am a page from the Angelic Army. Sent to tell you two something of some importance"
"The what?" Zhang He said.
"The Angelic Army." the page replied calmly.
"And what is this news?" I inquired.
"Heh, you are really a to the point person aren't you?" the page said. It wasn't a question. "Well, the news just happens to be a war. A war between the Angelics and the Demonics that has been waging for about ten years now. But the battleground is about to change. Change from our world to yours. This may happen from any time between ten days to one year. I was sent so that you can find people getting similar messages and decide what side you will choose. I am needed elsewhere at the moment, but we shall meet again." And with that, he disappeared.
"Did that really just happen?" I asked Zhang He.
"I believe so," He said.
PING
Everything started happening again. The fighting continued, the snow continued. The battle continued. I had a brief skirmish with Lu Bu before he rode on. How am I going to explain this to other people? Only time will tell I suppose.
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Well that's my first chapter. What did ya think??? By the way, I'm gonna post a Mega Man fanfic pretty soon, be sure to check that out!
Chapter One: The Page
************************The Battle At Hu Lao Gate**************************
***Ma Chao***
"Ha ha!" I yelled triumphantly as I cut down another of Dong Zhuo's troops with my spear. In the heat of battle, this is where I truly belong! I looked over at the gate, still being bashed in by the ram. Whoever designed that gate is truly skilled. No matter to me however. I had few cuts and my troops are doing well with only a few casualties. I stabbed yet another soldier. I saw a sword rise behind me. Oh great, I had a feeling I was being too cocky. The soldier suddenly groaned and fell. I didn't do that! I looked up and saw Zhang He standing there, claws bloodstained.
"You really need to be more aware of your surroundings," he said. "All people have beauty in their fighting styles, yours especially. However, it does have some flaws."
"Thank you He," I said with gratitude. "I hope you will consider joining Liu Bei after Dong Zhuo is defeated."
"I had been considering after finishing service under Yuan Shao I would join Cao Cao, but Liu Bei was the second on my list," he replied. There was a sudden crash, and we looked over at the gate.
It had finally fallen! Our forces began to run in as soon as the enemy troops were dealt with. Maybe fifty went in until sudden screams of pain and fear rang out.
"LU BU!" a soldier screamed running out. "LU BU HAS COME TO DESTROY US!" At that point, a monstrous looking man rode out of the gate, riding a red steed, with a fabled halberd in his hand, cutting down men like a hot knife through butter. It was true, Lu Bu was there to destroy us, and was coming right toward me. I raised my spear, ready to go down fighting. I ran out of patience, and charged.
"AAAAAAA!!!!" I cried while running. He raised the Sky Scorcher...
PING
I brought myself to an abrupt stop. Everything had stopped. All sound, all fighting, all people, even the snow falling from the sky had halted. Except for myself. I turned and saw that Zhang He could move as well.
"Well, this is rather unusual," he said.
"That's obvious," I replied. I looked around. I noticed one other person who had not stopped. There was a man standing there. Except... it couldn't be a... a human... He was maybe six feet tall, but seemed to not even touch the ground, even though you could see the snow cover parts of his... bare feet?! He wasn't even wearing warm clothes! He also seemed to have this aura around him. It was gold, and at the same time, silver. He was clad in leather armor, long pants, and had a long sword sheathed at his waist. His head was hooded... but what were those things coming out of his back?
"Wings..." I murmured to He, who was also looking at him. "That man has wings..." The figure began walking toward us, and we raised our weapons, ready to fight.
"Lower your weapons," the man said. His voice... it seemed to reverberate slightly, and was calming. Calming enough to convince us. "I am a page from the Angelic Army. Sent to tell you two something of some importance"
"The what?" Zhang He said.
"The Angelic Army." the page replied calmly.
"And what is this news?" I inquired.
"Heh, you are really a to the point person aren't you?" the page said. It wasn't a question. "Well, the news just happens to be a war. A war between the Angelics and the Demonics that has been waging for about ten years now. But the battleground is about to change. Change from our world to yours. This may happen from any time between ten days to one year. I was sent so that you can find people getting similar messages and decide what side you will choose. I am needed elsewhere at the moment, but we shall meet again." And with that, he disappeared.
"Did that really just happen?" I asked Zhang He.
"I believe so," He said.
PING
Everything started happening again. The fighting continued, the snow continued. The battle continued. I had a brief skirmish with Lu Bu before he rode on. How am I going to explain this to other people? Only time will tell I suppose.
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Well that's my first chapter. What did ya think??? By the way, I'm gonna post a Mega Man fanfic pretty soon, be sure to check that out!