Lunis: YAY! I'm in the mood for a story! Gak! I hate it when I find stupid
mistakes in the chapter AFTER putting it up! Oh well. Hopefully you still
get the point. Let's see, what will I put in this chapter? I dunno! Let's
just read and find out! Oh, I have a few comments about last chapter that I
forgot to put. ^_^; First of all, I know that fish thing was lame, but they
had to have SOMETHING to do. That was all I could think of, at the moment.
I Spy, LOL! Should I make Sora less umm...blonde? Personally I think it's
funny, but what do you think? Oh, and you know how Riku said he could "feel
the heartless coming?" Well maybe he could sense the heartless because he
used to control them? I think so.
Riku: ...Lunis...
Lunis: What? WHAT?! Okay! Okay! I've been reading spoilers!! I'll never finish the stupid game anyway!! Yeesh!
Riku: Uhuh.
Lunis: Oh ya, what was Riku's keyblade called? I forgot. Review and tell me, plz. Now for chapter seven!
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The three woke up to find the sky gray and full of clouds. A cool stormy wind was blowing.
"Actually, I think this cool wind is kinda nice. And the clouds make good shade." Kairi pointed out.
"Well ya, the only bad thing is that clouds rain." Riku was being halfway sarcastic.
Sora decided to change the subject to keyblades.
"We got our keyblades back." he observed, picking his Kingdom Key up.
"I bet that means there's a whole lot of heartless yet to come," replied Riku.
"Why and how could they have come back?" Sora asked, "What do they want?"
"To take peoples hearts, of course," responded Riku, "How and why now? I don't know..."
Kairi interrupted them, "Look, guys! Dolphins!"
The two boys looked to where she pointed.
Sora looked at them curiously, "They look scared."
"How can you tell if it's scared? Have you ever seen a scared dolphin before?" Riku criticized.
"Well, not really, but they just seem scared."
A dolphin swam quickly up to the raft. The three stared down at it, although Riku stayed a little farther back, remembering the last time he stared a fish in the face. It came up to Riku's keyblade which was laying down on the raft. It began nudging it with its nose while squeaking. Then, it swam to Sora who was sitting at the edge of the raft. It pushed the hand that Sora was holding his keyblade with, squeaking some more. Riku walked over and picked his keyblade up. The dolphin nodded at him and quickly swam under the water. Sora and Riku glanced at each other. Both having the idea of what the dolphin was trying to tell them. They looked out onto the water and saw a bunch of black fins swimming in the water.
"Shark Heartless, maybe? What do you think, Riku?" speculated Sora.
"I think you're right," he agreed.
The fins approached the raft and started circling it. One of the Shark Heartless came closer to the boat to attack, showing its jagged teeth. As soon as it was close enough, Riku smacked it on the head with his keyblade. It swam under the raft, and another shark came to attack.
"You know, they're pretty much harmless if you can keep them from taking the raft apart. They can't reach us from there," Riku noted.
The shark seemed to be listening to what Riku was saying. It got mad and splashed at him with its tail.
Riku laughed at it, "Oh horror! It splashed at me!"
The shark went back with the rest, and they swam a little farther away. They started swimming in a strange pattern, and soon some more black fins, all in a row, cut through the water.
"Oh, you're calling your friends? What good will that do you?" Riku continued to harass the sharks.
The fins raised out of the water revealing a very large and angry sea snake Heartless. Sora and Kairi glared at Riku.
"Heh...oh," he smiled sheepishly, "Umm, nice sea snake?"
The other two sighed and shook their heads. The snake hissed at them; Riku in particular. It lunged at him, but he jumped aside and slammed his keyblade into it, leaving a slash at its lower neck. It hissed loudly. Quickly, it turned its head and spat a poison barb at him. He barely dodged it by falling down. It spit more at him, but he rolled away. He got up and ran to the side of the raft. Sora shot fire blasts at it, but it had no effect.
"Fire won't work, Sora. Watch this!" Riku yelled.
He stuck his keyblade in the water and used a lightning spell. The keyblade zapped the water with electricity, electrocuting both the snake and the sharks. The sharks had had enough and swam away, but the snake got even more enraged. It knocked the boat with its tail, sending the three falling into the water. Its body slid headfirst back under the water.
"Why is it so focused on you, Riku?" Sora was confused.
"Because I'm the one who got it mad, duh." responded Riku.
The snake went under the raft and came up under them.
"Get Kairi back onto the boat. I'll handle this." Riku ordered.
"Are you sure?" Sora wasn't.
"Just go, already!" he shouted.
Sora gave him a doubtful, worried look, and swam over to Kairi. The snake came up under Riku to take a chomp at him. Riku swam upward, out of its reach, and it chomped water. While its mouth was closed, Riku pushed off of its head to the side and slashed at its head. It turned around, furious, and shot poison barbs in close range at Riku. He had no time to dodge, and it hit him in the shoulder. He just grimaced and pulled it out. He hit the snake on the head which stunned it for a few seconds as he went to the surface for a breath of air. He took a breath at the surface and went back down for the snake. It had recovered and went after Riku. It was trying a new approach and started whipping its tail at him. He ducked the first one, but the second time, its tail hit him and worsened one of the cuts on his arm.
'Let's finish this!' he thought, 'I've had enough.'
His shoulder was beginning to ache, now. He dodged more attacks from its tail as he came closer to it. It again began snapping at him, but he pointed his keyblade at it and used an ice spell that froze its mouth shut. As it sat there, trying to open its mouth, Riku got on top of its head and stabbed his keyblade right through his head. It waved around, tearing Riku off its head with its tail. It finally stopped moving and let go of Riku. He realized that his keyblade was still stuck in its head while it was sinking deeper and deeper into the water. He swam down after the snake to get it back. Waves of cold shot through his arm, as he swam deeper, catching up to the dead sea snake. As he got to it, the waves of cold in his arm had turned into jolts of pain. He winced as he pulled his keyblade out of its head. He barely managed to get to the surface. His whole body hurt. He was very tired because he felt short of breath, and the air in his lungs seemed cold. His muscles were beginning to cramp.
"A little help here, Sora," he managed to say.
Sora, who was on the raft with Kairi, dove into the water to help Riku back to the raft.
When Sora got to Riku, he looked unconscious, but then he spoke to Sora as Sora brought him back, "He got me with one of his poison barbs, and now my whole body aches," he spoke quietly; eyes closed.
"Don't worry Riku. Kairi brought some poison cures with her," Sora assured him.
He nodded faintly. They got to the raft, and Sora lay Riku on his back. His skin was pale, and Sora and Kairi could see that his left shoulder was discolored. Sora told Kairi what happened and told her to get a poison cure. She handed it to Sora as he lifted Riku's head up to drink it. Sora poured it in his mouth, and he slowly swallowed it. They left him there to rest, since it would take a while to work, as the clouds began to rumble above their heads. Soon, rain started pouring down, and Sora and Kairi put a blanket around Riku, so that he would not catch a cold. They also got some for themselves and put it above their heads to be sheltered from the rain.
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Lunis: *sigh* My brain got tired at the end of that one. I'm not sure I like this one. It's just another fight with the Heartless. What do you think? And what's with me and smart fish?! Okay, okay, a dolphin isn't a fish. I bet I'm making no sense to you right now. My brain is really tired. "Oh horror! It splashed at me!" LOL! You may be asking, "Why does Riku always get hurt?" It's because he's always the one doing the fighting! Why that? Because I like him the best! And he's the main character in the fic. Let's just say it's "Lunis Drama." Okay...I'm not even making sense to MYSELF right now. Ask any questions you want in your review, and I'll answer 'em after my brain gets some rest, okay?
Riku: R&R
Lunis: Which means READ AND REVIEW...not REST AND RECREATION.
Riku: Uh, ya.
Lunis: And like I said, I'll be gone for a while on vacation, so no more updates for a while. Bye!
Riku: ...Lunis...
Lunis: What? WHAT?! Okay! Okay! I've been reading spoilers!! I'll never finish the stupid game anyway!! Yeesh!
Riku: Uhuh.
Lunis: Oh ya, what was Riku's keyblade called? I forgot. Review and tell me, plz. Now for chapter seven!
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The three woke up to find the sky gray and full of clouds. A cool stormy wind was blowing.
"Actually, I think this cool wind is kinda nice. And the clouds make good shade." Kairi pointed out.
"Well ya, the only bad thing is that clouds rain." Riku was being halfway sarcastic.
Sora decided to change the subject to keyblades.
"We got our keyblades back." he observed, picking his Kingdom Key up.
"I bet that means there's a whole lot of heartless yet to come," replied Riku.
"Why and how could they have come back?" Sora asked, "What do they want?"
"To take peoples hearts, of course," responded Riku, "How and why now? I don't know..."
Kairi interrupted them, "Look, guys! Dolphins!"
The two boys looked to where she pointed.
Sora looked at them curiously, "They look scared."
"How can you tell if it's scared? Have you ever seen a scared dolphin before?" Riku criticized.
"Well, not really, but they just seem scared."
A dolphin swam quickly up to the raft. The three stared down at it, although Riku stayed a little farther back, remembering the last time he stared a fish in the face. It came up to Riku's keyblade which was laying down on the raft. It began nudging it with its nose while squeaking. Then, it swam to Sora who was sitting at the edge of the raft. It pushed the hand that Sora was holding his keyblade with, squeaking some more. Riku walked over and picked his keyblade up. The dolphin nodded at him and quickly swam under the water. Sora and Riku glanced at each other. Both having the idea of what the dolphin was trying to tell them. They looked out onto the water and saw a bunch of black fins swimming in the water.
"Shark Heartless, maybe? What do you think, Riku?" speculated Sora.
"I think you're right," he agreed.
The fins approached the raft and started circling it. One of the Shark Heartless came closer to the boat to attack, showing its jagged teeth. As soon as it was close enough, Riku smacked it on the head with his keyblade. It swam under the raft, and another shark came to attack.
"You know, they're pretty much harmless if you can keep them from taking the raft apart. They can't reach us from there," Riku noted.
The shark seemed to be listening to what Riku was saying. It got mad and splashed at him with its tail.
Riku laughed at it, "Oh horror! It splashed at me!"
The shark went back with the rest, and they swam a little farther away. They started swimming in a strange pattern, and soon some more black fins, all in a row, cut through the water.
"Oh, you're calling your friends? What good will that do you?" Riku continued to harass the sharks.
The fins raised out of the water revealing a very large and angry sea snake Heartless. Sora and Kairi glared at Riku.
"Heh...oh," he smiled sheepishly, "Umm, nice sea snake?"
The other two sighed and shook their heads. The snake hissed at them; Riku in particular. It lunged at him, but he jumped aside and slammed his keyblade into it, leaving a slash at its lower neck. It hissed loudly. Quickly, it turned its head and spat a poison barb at him. He barely dodged it by falling down. It spit more at him, but he rolled away. He got up and ran to the side of the raft. Sora shot fire blasts at it, but it had no effect.
"Fire won't work, Sora. Watch this!" Riku yelled.
He stuck his keyblade in the water and used a lightning spell. The keyblade zapped the water with electricity, electrocuting both the snake and the sharks. The sharks had had enough and swam away, but the snake got even more enraged. It knocked the boat with its tail, sending the three falling into the water. Its body slid headfirst back under the water.
"Why is it so focused on you, Riku?" Sora was confused.
"Because I'm the one who got it mad, duh." responded Riku.
The snake went under the raft and came up under them.
"Get Kairi back onto the boat. I'll handle this." Riku ordered.
"Are you sure?" Sora wasn't.
"Just go, already!" he shouted.
Sora gave him a doubtful, worried look, and swam over to Kairi. The snake came up under Riku to take a chomp at him. Riku swam upward, out of its reach, and it chomped water. While its mouth was closed, Riku pushed off of its head to the side and slashed at its head. It turned around, furious, and shot poison barbs in close range at Riku. He had no time to dodge, and it hit him in the shoulder. He just grimaced and pulled it out. He hit the snake on the head which stunned it for a few seconds as he went to the surface for a breath of air. He took a breath at the surface and went back down for the snake. It had recovered and went after Riku. It was trying a new approach and started whipping its tail at him. He ducked the first one, but the second time, its tail hit him and worsened one of the cuts on his arm.
'Let's finish this!' he thought, 'I've had enough.'
His shoulder was beginning to ache, now. He dodged more attacks from its tail as he came closer to it. It again began snapping at him, but he pointed his keyblade at it and used an ice spell that froze its mouth shut. As it sat there, trying to open its mouth, Riku got on top of its head and stabbed his keyblade right through his head. It waved around, tearing Riku off its head with its tail. It finally stopped moving and let go of Riku. He realized that his keyblade was still stuck in its head while it was sinking deeper and deeper into the water. He swam down after the snake to get it back. Waves of cold shot through his arm, as he swam deeper, catching up to the dead sea snake. As he got to it, the waves of cold in his arm had turned into jolts of pain. He winced as he pulled his keyblade out of its head. He barely managed to get to the surface. His whole body hurt. He was very tired because he felt short of breath, and the air in his lungs seemed cold. His muscles were beginning to cramp.
"A little help here, Sora," he managed to say.
Sora, who was on the raft with Kairi, dove into the water to help Riku back to the raft.
When Sora got to Riku, he looked unconscious, but then he spoke to Sora as Sora brought him back, "He got me with one of his poison barbs, and now my whole body aches," he spoke quietly; eyes closed.
"Don't worry Riku. Kairi brought some poison cures with her," Sora assured him.
He nodded faintly. They got to the raft, and Sora lay Riku on his back. His skin was pale, and Sora and Kairi could see that his left shoulder was discolored. Sora told Kairi what happened and told her to get a poison cure. She handed it to Sora as he lifted Riku's head up to drink it. Sora poured it in his mouth, and he slowly swallowed it. They left him there to rest, since it would take a while to work, as the clouds began to rumble above their heads. Soon, rain started pouring down, and Sora and Kairi put a blanket around Riku, so that he would not catch a cold. They also got some for themselves and put it above their heads to be sheltered from the rain.
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Lunis: *sigh* My brain got tired at the end of that one. I'm not sure I like this one. It's just another fight with the Heartless. What do you think? And what's with me and smart fish?! Okay, okay, a dolphin isn't a fish. I bet I'm making no sense to you right now. My brain is really tired. "Oh horror! It splashed at me!" LOL! You may be asking, "Why does Riku always get hurt?" It's because he's always the one doing the fighting! Why that? Because I like him the best! And he's the main character in the fic. Let's just say it's "Lunis Drama." Okay...I'm not even making sense to MYSELF right now. Ask any questions you want in your review, and I'll answer 'em after my brain gets some rest, okay?
Riku: R&R
Lunis: Which means READ AND REVIEW...not REST AND RECREATION.
Riku: Uh, ya.
Lunis: And like I said, I'll be gone for a while on vacation, so no more updates for a while. Bye!