I feel so Loved, 21 reviwes, i can't believe it, the chapter 1 to 4 will be
reposted just wait and see, this is the first chapter with My beta-reader
(is that right?) Kagura, i hope its better, and thanx to Kagome Higurashi,
ChristyKay, lindy*girl for offering to help me.
Disclaimer: he is mine, he is mine, he is mine, (i see some lawyers out of my house) i was talking about my teddy bear you idiots, of course inuyasha is not mine.
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"Okaa-san!!!!"
"Don't go in there, child. The fire is too big."
"But Okaa-san is in there!"
"Just stay here, I'll go get your brother."
" NO!! Okaa-san is more important... OKAA-SAN!"
Inuyasha woke up.
The bet
Chapter 5: You make me remember
By: Nova
Spelling and grammar by: Kagura
2905003
The sky was clouded... not even a single star was shining, above a tree you could see a young man resting with his head down, letting his silver hair go with the cold wind of the night. ----
RIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIING
".... mumble ...... Stupid alarm." Kagome was still sleepy. Let's just say she is just lazy.
RIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIING.....CRASH!!!!!! The alarm clock was dead.
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"I'm going now!" "Take care honey! Ja."
The shrine was a very quiet place, but the stairs to get there were toooooooo long. That was the only thing Kagome didn't like.
Two weeks had passed. She and Inuyasha were now friends. Well, friends who fight every two seconds, but at least they only do it for fun. Kouga and Hojo were still trying to go out with Kagome, but every time they tried it Inuyasha would show up and the other guys would go away.
"Ohayo Inuyasha!" She found Inuyasha on her way to school.
"........" No response.
"Inuyasha?" She was worried.
"WHAT DO YOU WANT?!"
Kagome was surprised by his outburst so she couldn't fake being mad. "I was just saying 'Good morning' to you." Kagome was hurt. Sometimes Inuyasha was rude, but this time his voice was cold.
"Well don't" he immediately turned around and walked faster. The hurt he saw in Kagome's eyes made him feel guilty, but he couldn't let her get anywhere near him; she was making him remember. "What did I do?" Kagome whispered.
The rest of the day went slow. Inuyasha continued avoiding Kagome. Even when Kouga was with her he did nothing. Something was wrong.
"Inuyasha! What's your problem?!" Miroku also saw the odd behavior of his friend.
"Nothing...."
"Remember the bet. If you keep avoiding Kagome how are you gonna ask her out and kiss her?!" Maybe he seemed a little cold but he was just trying to make Inuyasha say something.
"I don't care about that stupid bet anymore, and I am not going to kiss her," his voice was calm, and may I add, a little sad.
"What is it, Inuyasha? Something is bothering you." Now he was worried.
"It's nothing."
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It was raining when they go out of the school. Luckily, Kagome had brought her umbrella, and someone ahead of her was soaking wet.
"Inuyasha!" she reached him and put the umbrella above both of them; it was a little hard since Inuyasha was taller.
"STOP IT!" He pushed the umbrella away, making Kagome drop it. Now both were soaking wet.
"Stop what?!" Again, hurt was in her eyes.
"Being so nice!! I hate it. If I yell at you, you should go away!!!"
"But you are my friend! I can't stand not knowing why you are mad at me." Even she was yelling at him, tears started making their way to her eyes.
'No, don't cry... Damn it, she's crying.' "Look, it's just that..." 'No I can't tell her... I never told this to anyone, why her?, she might laugh at me.' Inuyasha was silent.
"Whatever you are trying to tell me, just say it. I won't laugh."
'How can she read my mind, maybe she is a miko.' (Just a joke. She is not a miko.) "Let's go somewhere else."
The rain had stopped. Now they were sitting on a bench in the park. The sun was showing up again after so many days of rain.
"It's just that... we started being friends, like you say we are, and we are not." He was coming back to himself. "I remember."
"You remember what?" Let's admit it, she was curious.
"The night my mother died." His golden eyes weren't sparkling like they always did. They were off. He looked sad.
"Gomen na-" She was cut off.
"Don't apologize. It's not your fault. You are the only person who has been nice to me, so I remembered my mother, and that's something I don't like, so I avoid you." Inuyasha was starting to feel a little nervous.
"Inuyasha..." Hearing his name he turned around to look at Kagome. They stared at each other for awhile.
At last, Inuyasha reacted and turned away, when he tried to look from the corner of his eye, Kagome was gone... Suddenly he felt someone hugging him from behind. (Remember, like in the 52 episode.)
'This scent is so relaxing.' Without thinking, he spoke, "You smell nice, Kagome."
Kagome blushed but kept still.
"Just let me tell you something." She let go of him and sat again on the bench. "Don't try to make me go away cause I won't."
Inuyasha nodded to himself. He was happy that his 'smart' plan didn't work. "I'll walk you home."
"Hai." Kagome felt that she and Inuyasha were a step closer. 'What is happening to me with him?'
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Review responses:
The Turmoil Twins: do you really think i should stop that, is just that i loved saying things with irony, of course this is AU so when i said thinks like that is jUst fun, i made one of those in this chap. Gomen. If sometime i have a writers block(don't let it happen kami) i e-mail you, maybe you could give me some ideas (even im full of them)
Kookies: ya know, i have a friend that everyone calls her like tour nickname, o well i just thought jidai sounds good that's why i put it that why, but thanx for the information.
Disclaimer: he is mine, he is mine, he is mine, (i see some lawyers out of my house) i was talking about my teddy bear you idiots, of course inuyasha is not mine.
----------
"Okaa-san!!!!"
"Don't go in there, child. The fire is too big."
"But Okaa-san is in there!"
"Just stay here, I'll go get your brother."
" NO!! Okaa-san is more important... OKAA-SAN!"
Inuyasha woke up.
The bet
Chapter 5: You make me remember
By: Nova
Spelling and grammar by: Kagura
2905003
The sky was clouded... not even a single star was shining, above a tree you could see a young man resting with his head down, letting his silver hair go with the cold wind of the night. ----
RIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIING
".... mumble ...... Stupid alarm." Kagome was still sleepy. Let's just say she is just lazy.
RIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIING.....CRASH!!!!!! The alarm clock was dead.
------
"I'm going now!" "Take care honey! Ja."
The shrine was a very quiet place, but the stairs to get there were toooooooo long. That was the only thing Kagome didn't like.
Two weeks had passed. She and Inuyasha were now friends. Well, friends who fight every two seconds, but at least they only do it for fun. Kouga and Hojo were still trying to go out with Kagome, but every time they tried it Inuyasha would show up and the other guys would go away.
"Ohayo Inuyasha!" She found Inuyasha on her way to school.
"........" No response.
"Inuyasha?" She was worried.
"WHAT DO YOU WANT?!"
Kagome was surprised by his outburst so she couldn't fake being mad. "I was just saying 'Good morning' to you." Kagome was hurt. Sometimes Inuyasha was rude, but this time his voice was cold.
"Well don't" he immediately turned around and walked faster. The hurt he saw in Kagome's eyes made him feel guilty, but he couldn't let her get anywhere near him; she was making him remember. "What did I do?" Kagome whispered.
The rest of the day went slow. Inuyasha continued avoiding Kagome. Even when Kouga was with her he did nothing. Something was wrong.
"Inuyasha! What's your problem?!" Miroku also saw the odd behavior of his friend.
"Nothing...."
"Remember the bet. If you keep avoiding Kagome how are you gonna ask her out and kiss her?!" Maybe he seemed a little cold but he was just trying to make Inuyasha say something.
"I don't care about that stupid bet anymore, and I am not going to kiss her," his voice was calm, and may I add, a little sad.
"What is it, Inuyasha? Something is bothering you." Now he was worried.
"It's nothing."
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It was raining when they go out of the school. Luckily, Kagome had brought her umbrella, and someone ahead of her was soaking wet.
"Inuyasha!" she reached him and put the umbrella above both of them; it was a little hard since Inuyasha was taller.
"STOP IT!" He pushed the umbrella away, making Kagome drop it. Now both were soaking wet.
"Stop what?!" Again, hurt was in her eyes.
"Being so nice!! I hate it. If I yell at you, you should go away!!!"
"But you are my friend! I can't stand not knowing why you are mad at me." Even she was yelling at him, tears started making their way to her eyes.
'No, don't cry... Damn it, she's crying.' "Look, it's just that..." 'No I can't tell her... I never told this to anyone, why her?, she might laugh at me.' Inuyasha was silent.
"Whatever you are trying to tell me, just say it. I won't laugh."
'How can she read my mind, maybe she is a miko.' (Just a joke. She is not a miko.) "Let's go somewhere else."
The rain had stopped. Now they were sitting on a bench in the park. The sun was showing up again after so many days of rain.
"It's just that... we started being friends, like you say we are, and we are not." He was coming back to himself. "I remember."
"You remember what?" Let's admit it, she was curious.
"The night my mother died." His golden eyes weren't sparkling like they always did. They were off. He looked sad.
"Gomen na-" She was cut off.
"Don't apologize. It's not your fault. You are the only person who has been nice to me, so I remembered my mother, and that's something I don't like, so I avoid you." Inuyasha was starting to feel a little nervous.
"Inuyasha..." Hearing his name he turned around to look at Kagome. They stared at each other for awhile.
At last, Inuyasha reacted and turned away, when he tried to look from the corner of his eye, Kagome was gone... Suddenly he felt someone hugging him from behind. (Remember, like in the 52 episode.)
'This scent is so relaxing.' Without thinking, he spoke, "You smell nice, Kagome."
Kagome blushed but kept still.
"Just let me tell you something." She let go of him and sat again on the bench. "Don't try to make me go away cause I won't."
Inuyasha nodded to himself. He was happy that his 'smart' plan didn't work. "I'll walk you home."
"Hai." Kagome felt that she and Inuyasha were a step closer. 'What is happening to me with him?'
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Review responses:
The Turmoil Twins: do you really think i should stop that, is just that i loved saying things with irony, of course this is AU so when i said thinks like that is jUst fun, i made one of those in this chap. Gomen. If sometime i have a writers block(don't let it happen kami) i e-mail you, maybe you could give me some ideas (even im full of them)
Kookies: ya know, i have a friend that everyone calls her like tour nickname, o well i just thought jidai sounds good that's why i put it that why, but thanx for the information.