Awakening Powers, Chapter 11, The Good The Bad And The *shudders* Lala
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Authors Note:
Hi all! I'm sososososososososooooooooooooooo sorry that I left you guys on that cliff hanger then didn't update for *gulps* 2 months…but I've been working at a girl scout camp and I haven't really had time to write *shakes a fist and the stupid little munchkins* anywho GOOD NEWS! This is the last chapter! Though there will be an epilogue that will conclude everything!…as soon as I finish this chapter I'll come up with a number of reviews that I need to post the last part…ALSO! I will have author responses to all the reviews that I get for this chapter!!! THEY SHOULD BE GOOD 2!!! SO MAKE SURE TO REVIEW! LET ME GO OUT WITH A BANG!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Also I couldn't resist I make fun of a certain reviewer Lala through out this chapter *looks around whistling* BUWAHAHAHAHA …now ON WITH THE CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!
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IMPORTANT!!!! READ AUTHORS NOTE AT END OF CHAPTER!!!!
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(…) -Authors (ME!!!) Ramblings
… -Thoughts (Mostly Lala's *cackles*)
*…* -Action
***…*** -Place Or Point Of View
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***Naraku's Castle***
Kagome slowly started to wake up; she raised her arms to try to yawn, only to discover that she was tied down to the bed.
The realization the she was tied down brought on a rush of memories as to what had happened, the last thing she remembered was being taken by Naraku-.
As if sensing that she was awake and thinking of him Naraku walked into the room. "Ah Kagome my dear I'm glade to see that your finally awake."
Kagome glared, "Where have you taken me you bastard."
Naraku chuckled, "now why would I tell you that? But I'll make you a deal if you become my dark queen I might release that disclosed information." Kagome spat at him, "I would rather die." "Well now that is a shame," Naraku said while pretending to pout, "but on the bright side I can just force you into it, now that I think of it that will be much more fun anyway's!"
With a wicked gleam in his eyes Naraku turned towards the doorway, "LALA COME HERE!"
Kagome fearfully turned her gaze towards the door, after looking for a few moments she suddenly saw a shadowed form approaching, watching it the creature stepped all the way threw the doorway and into the light. Upon seeing it Kagome screamed.
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Mean while back with the rest of the group Jesse paced back and forth under a tree trying to conspire a plan as to how to find and get Kagome back.
Ginny and Kouga sat watching him with concern. "I think he's going to make a ditch if he doesn't stop soon" whispered Ginny into Kouga's ear.
Kouga absently nodded obviously a lot more interested in Ginnys nearness. Kouga was about to put the moves on her when Jesse came to a sudden stop.
Ginny turned her head back towards Jesse. Damn! thought Kouga. "What's wrong Jesse?" asked a concerned Ginny. Jesse turned to look at her.
"The dot on my forehead" he whispered, "It's throbbing, Kagome's in danger, I have to find her, NOW!" he shouted as he ran off into the woods.
Ginny and Kouga jumped up as they watched him go. "I'll go tell the others" Ginny shouted as she ran off.
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***Naraku's Castle Again***
Standing in front of her was the most utterly hideous thing she had ever seen. Naraku smiled "Kagome, I would like you to meet my obedient servant Lala"
(BUWAHAHAHAHAHA NOBODY MESSES WIT HINOKE AND GETS AWAY WITH IT!!!!! *watch's all the readers sweatdrop*)
Naraku gestured Lala forward, Waddling forward with her awkward dysfunctional stride Lala approached Naraku and handed him a bottle.
"DON'T GET SO CLOSE TO ME NEXT TIME!" shouted Naraku, "THE SIGHT OF YOU ALONE IS BAD ENOUGH!!!"
What a show my dear Naraku puts up in front of this afoul human thought Lala, I know the he secretly hates her and loves me back with a burning passion! Chuckling to herself Lala shuffled back into a corner.
Taking one last look at Lala, Naraku shuddered, turning back to Kagome he smiled. "In this bottle Kagome my sweet is a potion the once you take will do two wonderful things!" Naraku said with a sadistic smile on his face.
"For you see once you take this potion you will live as long I live, which means that I will have you by my side forever, and it also means that you cannot kill me without killing yourself!" Naraku laughed a dark evil laugh as he uncorked the bottle.
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WHAT THE HELL! Lala mentally screamed, HE WOULD REPLACE ME WITH THE UGLY BITCH!!!! (*cough one sided love*) Lala's eye started to twitch.
Maybe I should have a light tryst with that handsome retainer Sesshoumaru's, that would remind Naraku how much he loves me! Lala started to cackle.
Naraku shuddered as he heard an utterly disgusting noise coming from the corner. Turning around he saw Lala which only cause him to shudder again, "Why the hell do I even have you around here anymore?" Naraku asked to both himself and Lala at the same time.
"Well isn't it obvious silly?" said Lala batting her eyelash's "because you love me of course!" "OH SWEET GOD!" shouted Naraku "I DIDN'T EVEN KNOW YOU WERE A GIRL!!!!"
Naraku narrowed his eyes, "are you a girl?" Naraku for the third time that day shuddered. "Well this certainly wont do,"
Getting a sadistic gleam in his eye Naraku slowly approached Lala. Lala gulped "My lo-o-o-ve" she stuttered, (if it is a she *cackles*) "What are you do-o-o-ing!!!"
"This" Naraku hissed, raising his arm. Lala started as she watched miasma start to collect on his hand.
"NO! NARAKU YOU C-A-A-A-NT!!! WHAT ABOUT ARE CONSUMING P-A-A-A-SSION!!!!"
Naraku smirked, "the only thing consuming is YOU!" As he shouted the last word he shot his arm out towards Lala, causing the miasma to fly off his hand and consume Lala in darkness.
Kagome only heard a terrifyingly warped scream before everything went silent and the miasma faded leaving only a pile of dust on the floor.
Naraku turned back to face Kagome with a satisfied smirk on his face, his smirk turned into a fully warped smile as he saw the a few tears were falling from Kagome's eyes.
"Why Kagome" he sneered, "there's no reason to cry!" "You don't understand," sniffed Kagome,
"I'M CRYING CAUSE I'M SO HAPPY THAT YOU KILLED THAT THING!!!!!!" Naraku fell over anime style.
(Well that's the end of Lala…I couldn't help it *tears form in Hinoke's eyes* SHE WAS SO MEAN TO MEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!! *bursts into tears*)
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***Following Jesse Through The Woods*** (What you think I'm original enough to come up with a name for those woods? Speh)
This is all my fault!!! Jesse mentally slapped him self, I should have been able to do something! But no, instead Kagome just got taken by Naraku, Heaven know what he's doing to her!!! (GOD MINDS OUT OF THE GUTTERS PEOPLE!) I just hope I'm not to late…
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***With The Rest Of The Crew…And Sesshoumaru,
(A.K.A. Hinoke's love slave ^.^, Sess: YOU SAID YOU WOULDN'T TELL THEM!!! Hinoke: *Darts her eyes back and forth* LOOK OVER THERE! Sess: *Turns around* Hinoke: *Pounces on Sesshoumaru* Sess: -_-')***
(The others are not important enough for me to state their names!!! *sees all the hateful glares* hehehe JJUST KIDDING!)
*Huff, huff, wheeze, pant, pant* "I'm *wheeze* so *huff* tired *pant*" whispered Draco in a low agonized voice.
Sango rolled her eyes, "Oh suck it up! We can still see the camp site from here!" Sango snapped and him, "Not to mention, your not even walking, YOUR RIDING ON SESSHOUMARUS BACK!!!"
Miroku approached the already agitated Sango, "Sango what have I done?" Miroku asked in a fake sounding hurt voice,
"I thought you loved me but then you go and start to abuse another man!"
Sango's eye started to twitch, "JERK!" she shouted as she hit him over the head with her giant boomerang.
Miroku lay on the ground twitching for a few moments before popping back up like a magical daisy. Sango just shook her head, "god I hate men."
That's not what you said last night!!!" called out Miroku in a sing song voice.
"HENTAI!" Sango shouted before hitting him over the head again. Everyone just shook their heads as they walked past the now unconscious Miroku. (
Sorry but every good fic have to have SOME Miroku beating, I decided this story was over due for some. ^.^) (Also please read this, I KNOW a lot of people don't leave reviews (heck I didn't until I started writing some and realized how important it is to people) but I'm asking you from the depths of my heart PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!! REVIEW!!! It was the reviews from the last chapter that got me typing this next chapter as soon as I got home from camp, so remember THEY REALLY ARE IMPORTANT!!! ^.^ If I reach 600 reviews I post no matter what! Even if I have to stay up all night typing the chapter!!!)
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(After the fight with bob is the Important message, though this part is important 2)
I FEEL SO BAAAAAAAAAAAAD!!!!!!!!! I know this was going to be the last chapter (well before the epilogue) but I got all these little ideas and y I could make one HUGE chapter I havent update in SO FREAKIN LONG! That I've decided to go ahead and post this much, I promise that the wait for the next (and last) chapter wont be anywhere NEAR as long *bob pops up*
Bob: yeah but your not doing that for them, the only reason you'll move your slow butt on updating is because summer is over. Your friends have to go back to public school so there's nothing much to do. AND you're a loser who doesn't have a job SO YOU HAVE NO TIME COMMITMENTS!
Hinoke: *Eye starts to twitch* *Gets and evil grin on her face* ooooo booooooobbbbbbb!!!!! I HAVE A SURPRISE FOR YOU!!!!!
Bob- *Looks at Hinoke suspicously*
Hinoke- Just to show that there no hard feelings!!! *hands Bob a big box*
Bob- *Gets the look on his face of a little kid at Christmas* *Opens the Box*
Out springs Koneko (Reaha's muse that has a crush on Bob!!!)
Bob- OH CRAP!
Koneko- *Launches herself at Bob at kiss's Bob*
Bob- NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO *collapses on the floor*
Hinoke- Riiiiiiiiiiiight
Anywho, THE IMPORTANT MESSAGE!!!!!!!
Ok My IMPORTANT MESSAGE,
I hope that so far you guys have been enjoying my story, what I want to know is what things you guys have that you want me to resolve? I'm a very forgettful person, so is their any certain people that you WANT to end up with someone in the end? Do you want to bring someone back to life? WHATEVER! (with the bringing to life I was thinking that some of you may know how a "certain" person dies in the 5th Harry Potter book if theres interest I could bring that "certain person" back to life here!!!) so anything you want resolved that I havent done yet TELL ME! Also IF THERES INTEREST I am willing to make alternate endings with Kagome ending with different people (like Inuyasha or Harry!) JUST TELL ME WHAT YOU WANT AND I WILL TRY MY HARDEST TO GET IT IN HERE!!!!!! Also I'M NOW RESONDING TO ALL REVIEWERS!!!!!!!!!! SO ASK ME QUESTIONS AS WELL AND I WILL ANSWER THEM!!!!
ANOTHER IMPORTANT MESSAGE!!!!
Last chapter I stated the winners for my reviews contest, well some of my winners didn't respond soooo I HAVE SOME RUNNER UPS WHO CAN NOW (if they respond before the next chapter) BECOME PART OF THE STORY, if your not sure what I'm talking about go to the notes in the last chapter!!!…ONE MORE THING!!! If you would like to know as soon as I post the next chapter then tell me and leave your email and a little side note that you want to be on the list in a review!!! THANKS!
Anyways the new winners (don't worry Lady Of The Squirrels or Nuna I have your characters and I've already added them into my plot outline!!!) are………….
- Kagome-leostargirl
- Mellerz
- Kawaiikitsune
If you are one of these reviewers…CONGRADS!!!!!! *throws some confetti up into the air*
AND NOW!!!!!!!!! (drum roll please) THEEEEEEEEEEEE KIKYO HATERS CLUB!!!!!!! ^.^
Hinoke- President
Lady Of The Squrriels- Number Two (Puts up a doctor evil finger)
Cleanfreak89- Personality judge
Kawakiikitsune- Arms Captain
Crystal-Chan- Kikyo Ass Kicker!!! (everyone should also read her story the black kitsune it's pretty durn funny)
Inu's girl kagome- Pure hater of Kikyo
Calliecat – Official Kikyo destroyer
SyaoSakura – Scheduler for Kikyo killing spree's
Nuna- Chief of bringing Kikyo back to life (I agree with Calliecat whats the point of only killing her once? THERE ISNT ONE!!!)
Animationfan320- Incharge of convincing Inuyasha that Kikyo is a bitch
Dark Whispers- Mad genius incharge of coming up with ways to bring Kikyo back to life
Isa- Martial arts instructor (to teach everyone HOW to kill Kikyo)
Guru Myoga- Official grave laugher (in other words dances around Kikyo's grave laughing at her misfortune)
Istari of Starbright AstronomyTower- Second Kikyo Ass Kicker (the way I see it if we make enough Kikyo's EVERYONE GETS A PIECE OF HER!!! BUWAHAHAHAHAHA)
Angel Girl- Spell Caster (*cackles* *darts eyes back and forth* *points at Bob* Bob: -_-')
Crystalyn- Pot Smasher!!! (….hemm I wonder what ever this job is for *evil smile*)
Subaruu0584- Leader Of All victory Dances (Hey I think we should have at LEAST one celebration EVERY time we kill Kikyo, CAUSE IT JUST MAKES EVERYONE SO DARN HAPPY!!! ^.^!!!)
Bleeding Wings- Kikyo Torturer!!!
Kagome-leostargirl- Head Torturer Of Medieval Unit (ya know old englad torture style ^.^ painful nee!)
Reaha- Genetic Scientist (At the moment is deviling in more painful ways of cloning *cackles* *coughs* *smiles*)
Firegodess13- Demon Sword Wielding Sorceress (O.O got me scared for my life, Bob: *Rolls his eyes* your teddy bear makes your scared for you life -_-')
Sesshoumaru13- Head In World Wide Media Of Making Known How Crappy Kikyo REALLY Is
THAT'S ALL FOR THIS CHAPTERS CLUB!!!! *tear* I'm so proud of all my members I LOVE YOU GUYS!!!…anywho if you want to join THEN DO SO!!! JUST LEAVE A REVIEW!!!! If theres a position that you have already come up with tell me and I'll stick it up there, If you have no idea THEN JUST SAY YOU WANT TO JOIN! I love coming up with positions!!! ^.^
Bob- That's because you don't have a life
Hinoke- *Glares* don't make me pull out another box
Bob- *Goes even whiter then Kikyo…(is that possible?)*
Hinoke- Haha YOU SUCK!
Todays 2 Fics!!! This has been really hard cause I've read A LOT of really good ones just recently but these 2 really strike me as different and kewl!!!!!
-Unexpected Allies: How to Train a Taiyoukai-
This starts out like most fics, with Sesshoumaru coming to the Inu group to ask for Kagome's help in getting back a powerful signet ring of his, a ring which proves him as the ruler of the western lands. Kagome being the kind person that she is agrees and that's when things start to change around, from a perverted animals, to evil Miko's this story is full of romance and laughs a most read for Kag/Sess fans!
-Shinjite-
What if when Kagome came through the well she didn't meet Inuyasha because he's the soon to be ruler of all western lands. But what if instead she meet a young Kaeda which in turn leads her to meet and team up with Sesshoumaru and….AT GOOD NARAKU!!!! It sound weird but believe me it's REALLY good GO READ IT!!!! NOW!!!
That's all for today folks!!!! So until next time….REVIEW!!!!
-Hinoke-