Yo, sorry for not updating, my parents have taken away my computer, and I'm
actually not supposed to be on right now so writing this chapter was hard.
I will not have my computer for another week after this, but I will still
try and update as much as possible. And please review.It's the only pay a
fan fic writer gets, and I would like to know if any improvements need to
be made. So just tell me what they are because I know they are there.
Radiion-hobbitwarrior- thanks for reviewing and I have changed the 'vocab' word in chapter two.
ElvenStar5 and Ryuu-Youkai - sorry about this not being soon.I will try harder don't kill me.did you know that when I typed the word 'don't' it idiomatically puts the little ' in, its cool don't don't don't don't..hehe that's fun..keep reading and reviewing.don't don't don't
Groaning the rider rolled over on her side, and was surprised to find that her leg was fine. 'I could have sworn I heard the bone crack, oh well guess the 'emergency squad people' healed it' she laid back down and closed her eyes as a second thought occurred. 'Wait, nobody can heal a bone that fast.but I might not have broken it.but I heard a crack'. It was then that her more then slightly shaken mind reregistered that fact that she was a) not on a hospital bed, and b)was laying on the wet ground yet she didn't do anything to add her situation, she was to tramitiesed to care, it was as if it didn't register. It was as if her mind had clouded over.'All systems are currently down'. While still on the damp ground, she forced herself to look over at her horse that was eating some grass near her head. 'Wait grass? What grass?' running over the previous day 'horse show, jump, people clapping.' that was about where her memory cut off. Her mind snapped back to attention 'what am I going to do? I don't know how to live in the wilderness. Wait! Horse.ride.speed up journey.' She didn't even think about where was going to go, because she was starting to see a way out, she could ride her horse to the nearest town. Where the nearest town was she didn't know or care, but she was eccentric that she had figured a way out, and that's all that mattered, right? That still left why she was here, but at the moment she could careless she just wanted to get home to her friends, trainer, dogs and her family. Glancing back at her horse she scanned over his legs looking for injuries (For those who don't ride horse are fragile creatures and continuously hurt there legs, or back, or STIFLES), while silently praying that he would be ok, because if he was hurt she was screwed. When she didn't see any obvious wounds she got up and walked over to the tall black horse and gently felt down his legs. She didn't want to find any injuries, but she didn't want to over look something and hurt him. As her hands neared his hooves she felt an intense heat. 'Oh, just what I need.' She was at a loss she was stranded in the middle of nowhere. Scanning the surrounding area she spotted a pond that was but a little more then twelve feet away, but that wasn't what caught her attention. She was looking at the edge of the pound. Its banks were made of clay, gray clay. Clay that look like pyoltious, a medicine used on horses when their tendons swell, walking over to the pond she sunk her fingers deep into the clay 'cold.good' grabbing a hand full of the clay she walked over to where her horse was eating grass. She had never been afraid of her horse running away, she was always leaving by the side of pond while she swam(while on trail rides) and the such, which was why she didn't see the need to tie up her horse to a tree, they had a bond. Kneeling down by the big horse she placed the clay on the ground near his feet and looked at her hands 'it certainly sticks to you r hand like pyotios dose.' She then proceeded to remove his polo raps, getting them 'clay-I-full' in the process. Once the raps were removed she, once again, took the clay in her hands and then proceed smearing it on her horses leg, between his ankle and knee. Once both legs were pyoltiosed she sat back, and stared at the polo raps. She didn't want to put them on his legs while to 'clay' was on there, but if she didn't then it would have no effect. 'If it will have any effect at all, I am using clay.' She decided to place the raps back on his legs. Standing up she loosened her horses girth, while remembering the saying 'take care of your horse before your self.' Remembering what her trainer used to say she gave up and broke down, she usually didn't cry, but everything seemed so hopeless, she didn't even know how she got here, the thought had picked a wonderful time to make itself know, let alone how to get home. SO she just cried, and cried and cried until she was sure that she couldn't cry anymore, but instead of feeling better because of crying she felt worse, embarrassed she normally didn't cry in fact she had a reputation of being strong. Now, with a pessimistic view point, she set off towards the trees which were just on the edge of her vision, which she had noticed had been more acute lately. Because of her horses injuries she was unable to ride him so she to lead him by his reins. Now if she know more about the woods or had paid more attention she would have noticed the person, who had been sitting on the other side of the pond.
Dun, dun, dun.who was the person.One guess! Heheheh Yo READ AND REVIEW.I have another chapter but I'm not posting it until I have had at least one review for this chapter.I don't set my standards high, I just want to know if you people are reading this, because if you are and are not review well that just sucks for me so REVIEW.
Dose anybody want to be my bata reader? I think I need one.yup
Radiion-hobbitwarrior- thanks for reviewing and I have changed the 'vocab' word in chapter two.
ElvenStar5 and Ryuu-Youkai - sorry about this not being soon.I will try harder don't kill me.did you know that when I typed the word 'don't' it idiomatically puts the little ' in, its cool don't don't don't don't..hehe that's fun..keep reading and reviewing.don't don't don't
Groaning the rider rolled over on her side, and was surprised to find that her leg was fine. 'I could have sworn I heard the bone crack, oh well guess the 'emergency squad people' healed it' she laid back down and closed her eyes as a second thought occurred. 'Wait, nobody can heal a bone that fast.but I might not have broken it.but I heard a crack'. It was then that her more then slightly shaken mind reregistered that fact that she was a) not on a hospital bed, and b)was laying on the wet ground yet she didn't do anything to add her situation, she was to tramitiesed to care, it was as if it didn't register. It was as if her mind had clouded over.'All systems are currently down'. While still on the damp ground, she forced herself to look over at her horse that was eating some grass near her head. 'Wait grass? What grass?' running over the previous day 'horse show, jump, people clapping.' that was about where her memory cut off. Her mind snapped back to attention 'what am I going to do? I don't know how to live in the wilderness. Wait! Horse.ride.speed up journey.' She didn't even think about where was going to go, because she was starting to see a way out, she could ride her horse to the nearest town. Where the nearest town was she didn't know or care, but she was eccentric that she had figured a way out, and that's all that mattered, right? That still left why she was here, but at the moment she could careless she just wanted to get home to her friends, trainer, dogs and her family. Glancing back at her horse she scanned over his legs looking for injuries (For those who don't ride horse are fragile creatures and continuously hurt there legs, or back, or STIFLES), while silently praying that he would be ok, because if he was hurt she was screwed. When she didn't see any obvious wounds she got up and walked over to the tall black horse and gently felt down his legs. She didn't want to find any injuries, but she didn't want to over look something and hurt him. As her hands neared his hooves she felt an intense heat. 'Oh, just what I need.' She was at a loss she was stranded in the middle of nowhere. Scanning the surrounding area she spotted a pond that was but a little more then twelve feet away, but that wasn't what caught her attention. She was looking at the edge of the pound. Its banks were made of clay, gray clay. Clay that look like pyoltious, a medicine used on horses when their tendons swell, walking over to the pond she sunk her fingers deep into the clay 'cold.good' grabbing a hand full of the clay she walked over to where her horse was eating grass. She had never been afraid of her horse running away, she was always leaving by the side of pond while she swam(while on trail rides) and the such, which was why she didn't see the need to tie up her horse to a tree, they had a bond. Kneeling down by the big horse she placed the clay on the ground near his feet and looked at her hands 'it certainly sticks to you r hand like pyotios dose.' She then proceeded to remove his polo raps, getting them 'clay-I-full' in the process. Once the raps were removed she, once again, took the clay in her hands and then proceed smearing it on her horses leg, between his ankle and knee. Once both legs were pyoltiosed she sat back, and stared at the polo raps. She didn't want to put them on his legs while to 'clay' was on there, but if she didn't then it would have no effect. 'If it will have any effect at all, I am using clay.' She decided to place the raps back on his legs. Standing up she loosened her horses girth, while remembering the saying 'take care of your horse before your self.' Remembering what her trainer used to say she gave up and broke down, she usually didn't cry, but everything seemed so hopeless, she didn't even know how she got here, the thought had picked a wonderful time to make itself know, let alone how to get home. SO she just cried, and cried and cried until she was sure that she couldn't cry anymore, but instead of feeling better because of crying she felt worse, embarrassed she normally didn't cry in fact she had a reputation of being strong. Now, with a pessimistic view point, she set off towards the trees which were just on the edge of her vision, which she had noticed had been more acute lately. Because of her horses injuries she was unable to ride him so she to lead him by his reins. Now if she know more about the woods or had paid more attention she would have noticed the person, who had been sitting on the other side of the pond.
Dun, dun, dun.who was the person.One guess! Heheheh Yo READ AND REVIEW.I have another chapter but I'm not posting it until I have had at least one review for this chapter.I don't set my standards high, I just want to know if you people are reading this, because if you are and are not review well that just sucks for me so REVIEW.
Dose anybody want to be my bata reader? I think I need one.yup