A/N anything in {} is thought speech. cant get italics to work here.
Chapter 12
The wave that crashed over Qui-Gon caused him to lose his precious grip on his son. The panic sense in him flared. He reached out with the Force and found his boy directly behind him. He reached behind him, and grabbed Obi- Wan's leg. He pulled him around to his front and swam up to the surface. He began to get closer and closer to the shore, until he felt strong arms on his shoulders, which pulled him and his son out of the water. He couldn't see anything beyond his hands which held his unconscious son. One of the guards immediately took Obi-Wan from him. He tried to grab his little boy back, but the guard wouldn't here of it. The guard pushed him into the speeder, and it sped away. He looked behind him but he couldn't see Obi- Wan/Ben. He got a sense in the Force at that moment, that someone's life, Obi-Wan's! They were killing him. He reached out and felt his brother trying to kill Obi-Wan. All of his senses reached out in that moment. The rain started to let up. He open the door of the speeder, grabbed his lightsaber that someone had left on the seat next to him, and jumped out of the moving speeder.
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Adi Gallia stepped into the visiting room of the prison that Mace Windu was being held in. She saw him dressed in the ugly orange suit of a prisoner being led to the glass wall. There was a communicator there, but both of them chose not to. They had the Force, and that's all that mattered.
{Did you figure out how to get me out of here? Mace asked through the Force.
We're working on it. Yoda has a plan. It involves finding our renegade Jedi though, she sent back.
Running out of time. There's only a day left.
I know, Mace, I promise, you'll be out of here long before tomorrow. }
With that, Adi got up and left. She couldn't explain it. She always felt a little something for the dark skinned Jedi Master. But what is, what is, and there is nothing she could do about it. She only hoped they could find Qui-Gon soon.
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Lucky for the missing Jedi Master, when he jumped out of the moving speeder, he landed on his own two feet. He began to sprint back to where he pulled Obi-Wan from the water. Since the rain had now just about stopped he looked ahead and saw some silhouettes. There were eight armed guards, and one was holding someone. And another figure; his brother.
"Leave him alone, Carlton!" Qui-Gon screamed.
Carlton was about to snap his nephews head back, putting an end to the oldest son rule on the planet, he heard his brother's yell. He looked up and saw a still soaking wet Jedi Master coming towards him. He stepped away from the boy. He turned towards his brother.
"Well, well, well, if it isn't my dear older brother, Qui-Gon," Carlton said.
"The game is over, Carlton, its time for you to be put in your place," Qui- Gon said igniting his lightsaber.
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Meanwhile with the guards
The guards moved off to the side. The one holding the young Prince was the son of a doctor, and knew a little of the medical arts. He began to perform CPR on the young boy who had stopped breathing.
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Chapter 12
The wave that crashed over Qui-Gon caused him to lose his precious grip on his son. The panic sense in him flared. He reached out with the Force and found his boy directly behind him. He reached behind him, and grabbed Obi- Wan's leg. He pulled him around to his front and swam up to the surface. He began to get closer and closer to the shore, until he felt strong arms on his shoulders, which pulled him and his son out of the water. He couldn't see anything beyond his hands which held his unconscious son. One of the guards immediately took Obi-Wan from him. He tried to grab his little boy back, but the guard wouldn't here of it. The guard pushed him into the speeder, and it sped away. He looked behind him but he couldn't see Obi- Wan/Ben. He got a sense in the Force at that moment, that someone's life, Obi-Wan's! They were killing him. He reached out and felt his brother trying to kill Obi-Wan. All of his senses reached out in that moment. The rain started to let up. He open the door of the speeder, grabbed his lightsaber that someone had left on the seat next to him, and jumped out of the moving speeder.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Adi Gallia stepped into the visiting room of the prison that Mace Windu was being held in. She saw him dressed in the ugly orange suit of a prisoner being led to the glass wall. There was a communicator there, but both of them chose not to. They had the Force, and that's all that mattered.
{Did you figure out how to get me out of here? Mace asked through the Force.
We're working on it. Yoda has a plan. It involves finding our renegade Jedi though, she sent back.
Running out of time. There's only a day left.
I know, Mace, I promise, you'll be out of here long before tomorrow. }
With that, Adi got up and left. She couldn't explain it. She always felt a little something for the dark skinned Jedi Master. But what is, what is, and there is nothing she could do about it. She only hoped they could find Qui-Gon soon.
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Lucky for the missing Jedi Master, when he jumped out of the moving speeder, he landed on his own two feet. He began to sprint back to where he pulled Obi-Wan from the water. Since the rain had now just about stopped he looked ahead and saw some silhouettes. There were eight armed guards, and one was holding someone. And another figure; his brother.
"Leave him alone, Carlton!" Qui-Gon screamed.
Carlton was about to snap his nephews head back, putting an end to the oldest son rule on the planet, he heard his brother's yell. He looked up and saw a still soaking wet Jedi Master coming towards him. He stepped away from the boy. He turned towards his brother.
"Well, well, well, if it isn't my dear older brother, Qui-Gon," Carlton said.
"The game is over, Carlton, its time for you to be put in your place," Qui- Gon said igniting his lightsaber.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Meanwhile with the guards
The guards moved off to the side. The one holding the young Prince was the son of a doctor, and knew a little of the medical arts. He began to perform CPR on the young boy who had stopped breathing.
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