Hello all you people who are reading this. I am sorry about the incredibly
fast pace in the last story but I always do this on my first chapter so I
won't be doing this again. And thank you ACGS I will let you look over my
stories. And I thank all the people who reviewed because reviewing really
helps me a lot, so think of it like this the more you review the longer and
better the story so keep on reviewing. May the gods bless this story so
that you may like it and Review? Ohh yeah and I am making a new character,
because I never liked the fact that Shinji had Asuka but Rei never had
anyone so keep your eyes open for my new character. This is going to be a
bit ooc so don't kill me but tell me if you like it.
Last time we were here Shinji was swallowed up, and the only way anyone
could think of was to use all 992 N2 mines to destroy the angel, well
Shinji broke out of the angel to be greeted by an emotional Asuka who
kissed just for making it out alive and now we enter our story
Here is my writing format
Name (way there voice is sounding): "what they are saying."
*action* Another possibility Book 1 Scene 2 After the Kiss Act 1 After the Kiss
Asuka (whispering in his ear): "And that is for making it out alive." And with that Asuka walked away leaving a very shocked Shinji and Misato in her wake.
During the drive home Shinji fell asleep, and while the pilot slept Misato and Asuka had a litte talk over the days events.
Misato (questioning): "okay Asuka what was the deal with that kiss"
Asuka (matter of factly): "it was his welcome home present from me."
Misato (teasingly): "does this mean that you actually like Shinji."
Asuka (Nervous): "Misato what I am about to say to you I want to keep between you and me, okay"
Misato (nervous): "okay."
Asuka (nervous): "I have liked Shinji since the synchronized training we had with the seventh angel."
Misato (confused): "but if you liked him then why were you always so mean to him."
Asuka (head down): "because I was afraid that if I let him into my heart he would hurt me like so many other people have. Ever since mama died I have put up a barrier around my heart so that no one could get in and hurt me again."
Misato(understanding): "I see,' the car stops. 'Well we better wake him"
Shinji: "don't worry I am already awake."
Asuka (very Nervous) "Shinji how long were you awake?"
Shinji (nervously rubbing his head): "since you said something about a barrier around your heart or something."
Asuka (slightly relieved): ohh that's good. Did you hear anything else?"
Shinji
Shinji (slyly): "that and something about you liking me." The next event surprised Shinji because all the color drained form Asuka's face. And she started to shake
Asuka(shell shocked): "yyyou heard me say that"
Shinji (scared): "No Asuka I was just kidding around, but you really said that didn't you?"
Asuka (head down, whispering): "Yea, I did"
Shinji (confused): "but if you liked me than why did you keep on calling me all those names and stuff, I mean you could've just been a bit nicer' Shinji was getting angrier bye the minute purely out of confusion' I mean what did I ever do to deserve all of that. Do you have some sick condition that makes you mean to the people you like' Shinji is yelling, and flailing his arms now.' I mean I was always so nice to you, I mean if you had told me what made you me what made you so mad at me I would've done what ever I could've tried to fix myself. I don't know if I can return your feelings Asuka just not right now, maybe later but surely not now, I just need some time to myself so I can think." Shinji gets out of the car and walks to his room.
Shinji Shinji punches his wall in frustration Shinji's thoughts are interrupted by the sound of a light knocking.
Asuka(sad and whispering) "Shinji can I come in"
Shinji (annoyed but soft) " sure Asuka what do you want."
Asuka (soft) "I just came here to say that I am sorry that I was always so mean to you and that I would understand if you don't like me in return so I'll just go and leave now okay"
Shinji (annoyed): *sigh* "no wait, Asuka don't leave come here I want to talk with you" he pats his bead next him. Asuka sits down beside him.
Shinji (softly) "Asuka I am sorry I exploded earlier but I was just so confused and I just let out all of the anger that I had bottled up inside, and if it is any consolation, I kinda have had a small crush on you to. And it is technically later that our talk if you know what I am trying to say to you."
Asuka, smiling now (Happier than earlier): "so there is hope that our relationship can blossom" she puts her head on Shinji's shoulder, looking up into his eyes trying to be as cute as possible {which isn't that hard :)}
Shinji (happy) *smiling, looking back into Asuka's eyes, while stroking her hair* "yes Asuka, yes there is."
Asuka (tired) *yawn* "Shinji please lets just stay here I am so' *yawns again* 'I just want to fall asleep like this." *she and Shinji lie down on Shinji's bed. Asuka has her head resting in Shinji's chest, while Shinji, keeps on stroking Asuka's hair.* "good night Shinji-kun." And the two children fall asleep in away that both of them thought that would never have been possible. Act 2 The Morning at Katsuragi's
The next day while getting ready Misato (zoned out due to massive hangover): ohh yea before I forget I was told that the new pilot for Eva unit 4 was coming in today. You two should see him today."
Asuka (cockily): "We don't need a new pilot we have me and the Invincible- Shinji, and yes I will still call Shinji the invincible Shinji because I mean it literally he is the invincible Shinji."
Shinji (happily): "whatever you say Asuka' *looks at watch* 'ohh crap Asuka hurry up or we will be late for school"
Act 3 On the way to school
Asuka: "Shinji can we please keep our relationship a secret for now I really don't want everyone knowing okay.
Shinji (slightly disappointed) "okay what ever you say liebie, see I can speak German to."
Asuka (happily annoyed): "you are so weird come on let's hurry up."
Shinji (excited): "Yea I wan t to see this new student as son as possible"
Act 4 The New student
After chatting for a while the sensei comes in and Hikari does her rise bow sit routine
Sensei: Hello students I would like you all to give our new student a warm welcome.
The new student stands 5 foot 11. He is wearing a black shirt with red flames. His sunglasses are the color of Rei's eyes they are also just as tinted as the commander's
New Student: "Hello my name is Fransiscus but you can call me Daniel. I am from the US, I am also the pilot for Evangelion unit 4. Thank You" With his last comment the whole class gasped
So what do you guys think is it good or not I need as much input as possible So come on review I need as much help as possible, because I showed this to a friend and he just laughed so prove him wrong and review. I tried to make this one flow more smoothly than my first chapter, so tell me if I did this one right.
Today's word of wisdom
"As beautiful as a rose as deadly as a hidden thorn"
-some old person-
Name (way there voice is sounding): "what they are saying."
*action* Another possibility Book 1 Scene 2 After the Kiss Act 1 After the Kiss
Asuka (whispering in his ear): "And that is for making it out alive." And with that Asuka walked away leaving a very shocked Shinji and Misato in her wake.
During the drive home Shinji fell asleep, and while the pilot slept Misato and Asuka had a litte talk over the days events.
Misato (questioning): "okay Asuka what was the deal with that kiss"
Asuka (matter of factly): "it was his welcome home present from me."
Misato (teasingly): "does this mean that you actually like Shinji."
Asuka (Nervous): "Misato what I am about to say to you I want to keep between you and me, okay"
Misato (nervous): "okay."
Asuka (nervous): "I have liked Shinji since the synchronized training we had with the seventh angel."
Misato (confused): "but if you liked him then why were you always so mean to him."
Asuka (head down): "because I was afraid that if I let him into my heart he would hurt me like so many other people have. Ever since mama died I have put up a barrier around my heart so that no one could get in and hurt me again."
Misato(understanding): "I see,' the car stops. 'Well we better wake him"
Shinji: "don't worry I am already awake."
Asuka (very Nervous) "Shinji how long were you awake?"
Shinji (nervously rubbing his head): "since you said something about a barrier around your heart or something."
Asuka (slightly relieved): ohh that's good. Did you hear anything else?"
Shinji
Shinji (slyly): "that and something about you liking me." The next event surprised Shinji because all the color drained form Asuka's face. And she started to shake
Asuka(shell shocked): "yyyou heard me say that"
Shinji (scared): "No Asuka I was just kidding around, but you really said that didn't you?"
Asuka (head down, whispering): "Yea, I did"
Shinji (confused): "but if you liked me than why did you keep on calling me all those names and stuff, I mean you could've just been a bit nicer' Shinji was getting angrier bye the minute purely out of confusion' I mean what did I ever do to deserve all of that. Do you have some sick condition that makes you mean to the people you like' Shinji is yelling, and flailing his arms now.' I mean I was always so nice to you, I mean if you had told me what made you me what made you so mad at me I would've done what ever I could've tried to fix myself. I don't know if I can return your feelings Asuka just not right now, maybe later but surely not now, I just need some time to myself so I can think." Shinji gets out of the car and walks to his room.
Shinji Shinji punches his wall in frustration Shinji's thoughts are interrupted by the sound of a light knocking.
Asuka(sad and whispering) "Shinji can I come in"
Shinji (annoyed but soft) " sure Asuka what do you want."
Asuka (soft) "I just came here to say that I am sorry that I was always so mean to you and that I would understand if you don't like me in return so I'll just go and leave now okay"
Shinji (annoyed): *sigh* "no wait, Asuka don't leave come here I want to talk with you" he pats his bead next him. Asuka sits down beside him.
Shinji (softly) "Asuka I am sorry I exploded earlier but I was just so confused and I just let out all of the anger that I had bottled up inside, and if it is any consolation, I kinda have had a small crush on you to. And it is technically later that our talk if you know what I am trying to say to you."
Asuka, smiling now (Happier than earlier): "so there is hope that our relationship can blossom" she puts her head on Shinji's shoulder, looking up into his eyes trying to be as cute as possible {which isn't that hard :)}
Shinji (happy) *smiling, looking back into Asuka's eyes, while stroking her hair* "yes Asuka, yes there is."
Asuka (tired) *yawn* "Shinji please lets just stay here I am so' *yawns again* 'I just want to fall asleep like this." *she and Shinji lie down on Shinji's bed. Asuka has her head resting in Shinji's chest, while Shinji, keeps on stroking Asuka's hair.* "good night Shinji-kun." And the two children fall asleep in away that both of them thought that would never have been possible. Act 2 The Morning at Katsuragi's
The next day while getting ready Misato (zoned out due to massive hangover): ohh yea before I forget I was told that the new pilot for Eva unit 4 was coming in today. You two should see him today."
Asuka (cockily): "We don't need a new pilot we have me and the Invincible- Shinji, and yes I will still call Shinji the invincible Shinji because I mean it literally he is the invincible Shinji."
Shinji (happily): "whatever you say Asuka' *looks at watch* 'ohh crap Asuka hurry up or we will be late for school"
Act 3 On the way to school
Asuka: "Shinji can we please keep our relationship a secret for now I really don't want everyone knowing okay.
Shinji (slightly disappointed) "okay what ever you say liebie, see I can speak German to."
Asuka (happily annoyed): "you are so weird come on let's hurry up."
Shinji (excited): "Yea I wan t to see this new student as son as possible"
Act 4 The New student
After chatting for a while the sensei comes in and Hikari does her rise bow sit routine
Sensei: Hello students I would like you all to give our new student a warm welcome.
The new student stands 5 foot 11. He is wearing a black shirt with red flames. His sunglasses are the color of Rei's eyes they are also just as tinted as the commander's
New Student: "Hello my name is Fransiscus but you can call me Daniel. I am from the US, I am also the pilot for Evangelion unit 4. Thank You" With his last comment the whole class gasped
So what do you guys think is it good or not I need as much input as possible So come on review I need as much help as possible, because I showed this to a friend and he just laughed so prove him wrong and review. I tried to make this one flow more smoothly than my first chapter, so tell me if I did this one right.
Today's word of wisdom
"As beautiful as a rose as deadly as a hidden thorn"
-some old person-