Hey, thx for the tip, I'll try and make my story more thoughtful, or…ummmm the characters think more or you get me point, I hope! Heres chapter 4, I don't know how it's gonna turn out, soooo it might not be the best!!
Chapter 4: Partner To The Rescue
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AT THE BANK W/ DARIEN
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Darien's POV
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'Oh man, how the hell am I gonna get outta this one?, my hands are tied to a post and the rope I swear is getting tighter by the moment!' Darien pondered
He looked outside the window straight across from him to see that the sun was shining bright , he figured it was almost noon.
'Who just abandons their town like this? I mean I've been here for at least a day and a half, I thirsty I wanna use the bathroom, I haven't showered, and….hey is that some guy outside?'
Darien tried to lift his head up some more to see out the window and to his luck he saw a blonde haired blue eyed man walking around, it's seemed obvious to Darien that the guy was looking for everyone or was thinking where'd everyone go.
Blonde Haired Blue Eyed Character's POV
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'hmm…where'd everyone go? I've been walking for days since I lost my horse, and now that I finally---' He was cut off by a sound of someone screaming help
"HEEEEELLLLLLLPPPPPPPPP……..I'M IN HERRRRREEEEE!!" Darien screamed from the tip of his lungs
'I thought everyone was gone' contemplated the mysterious man
"WHERE ARRRREEEEEE YOOUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!" the man shouted
"IN THEEE BANNNKKKKKKKK……YOU IDIOTTTT!" Darien roared.
The mysterious man walked towards the bank, he stepped inside and when he did his face expression changed from happy to angry.
Normal POV
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'DARIEN….what's he doing here? Oh I am so pissed off at him!' the man deliberated.
'ANDREW….what's he doing here? Oh he is so pissed off at me!' Darien worried
"Andrew…hey man how ya do'n? Nice to see you, hey can you untie me!" Darien begged.
"Darien, we were partners, right? You and me, and when you heard word of Serena and her little gang, you decide to leave without me and…AND…my favorite horse *sniffle* is gone because of you!" Andrew uttered
"Andrew, I'm really sorry about that, it's just that you needed some rest and I know you would find me, umm, no h-hard feelings?"
Andrew took out his hand gun, and pointed it towards Darien's head
'What is he doing?, he can't shoot me!" Darien thought
"ANDREW, YOU CAN'T SHOOT M--" Darien was cut off by the sound of the gun firing.
'I can't stay mad at him forever, I'm just not like that, there's no point!' Andrew explained to himself
"Get up Darien, your alive and, your free! But let me tell you this now buddy, you owe me big time!" Stated Andrew
Darien stood up, looked at his best-friend and partner, and noticed that he had on different clothed since the last time he saw him.
'Hey he's got different clothes, where'd he get the money to get some new clothes!' Darien pondered
Andrew say Darien looking him up and down.
'I see he's noticed my new clothes' Andrew smiled to himself
"Hey man are you checking me out?" Said Andrew
"huh? …. WHAT no way man, I just noticed your new clothes, I thought we were broke or get'n close to there broke?" Darien observed
Andrew had on a gray shirt with a light brown vest, that almost looked like a dark orange. His pants were the same color as his vest, except darker in color. Andrew's hair was a dirty blonde, he had blue eyes but looked more like turquoise color to most people. He had on very dark brown cowboy boots that matched his outfit. The belt around his waist held his one hand gun and the other a little bag that was tied on to his belt.
All in all he looked like he had money.
"What's in the bag tied around your belt?" Asked Darien
"Oh that, I came across a town that was empty like this, but there were dead people all over the place, it was a nasty sight! It looked like the work of the group called the Engravers (AN: this would be the Negaverse group, you know with Beryl and the 4 followers?), so I took the liberty of taking some money out of the bank, and got some new clothes from the place next to the Saloon!" Declared Andrew
"Man, we're Bounty Hunters, not the Bounty's, you could be thrown in jail like everyone else!" Explained a very pissed off Darien
"Yeah I know, I know, but, no one was there, and besides someone was gonna take it anyway! The Engravers never take the money they only kill! So it was a good opportunity to take money and new clothes so I did what my instincts told me to do!" Andrew remarked
'He'll never learn, but hey at least we have some money now!' Darien said to himself
Darien walked over to Andrew and they both left the bank. Andrew followed Darien around town slightly confused.
'Where are we going' Andrew thought
"Darien, where ar--" Andrew said but then stopped in mid sentence only to see his beloved dark brown Stallion.
"PANNOOWAU!!" (AN: I think you pronounce it - PAW-NEW-WAY - I'm not gonna give the meaning, cause they'll explain it!) Andrew cried
"Pannoowau, you gave your horse the strangest name anyone could possibly give their horse! What's it mean anyway? Oh and one more thing, how come when ever I tell you something, when we're riding you always call out your horse's name?" Darien ordered!
Andrew ran over towards his horse and started hugging it, he looked up at Darien and said, "Pannoowau means 'He Lies'!" Explained Andrew
"Ohhhh…that's even worse, why not just call him 'He Lies' instead of that ridicules name?" said Darien
"Because when you talk *giggles*, instead of saying Pannoowau I would say 'He Lies'!!" stated Andrew
"Ohh yeah, that would sou-- HEY, WHAT THE HELL IS THAT SUPPOSE TO MEAN, YOU KNOW NOT EVEYTHING I SAY IS A LIE!!!" Screamed Darien!
Darien then walked over to his black Stallion, jumped up on his horse and then thought to himself, 'Chaos, your name's not strange! I happen to like it a lot, and I don't always lie…do I?'
Andrew got up on his horse and started to ride off with Darien aside of him.
"So did you catch up with Serena and The Gang?" asked Andrew
"Yep, that's how I was tied up, and they finally have a group name. They are called The Radical Dreamers! They know about me and how I'm a bounty hunter and the fact that I'm known as The Devil's Dealer, and who is of course after them! But they don't know anything about you!" Said Darien
"Really…so what exactly happened?" asked Andrew
Darien told Andrew the whole story of what happened between him and Serena, Rubeus and Lita.
"Ohhh *laughs* so that's where you got that big ass bruise on your face from! *laughs some more*!! She sounds like a handful if you ask me!" Laughed Andrew
"Yeah…but a handful that I'd like to take into my own hands one day." Darien said in so low as a whisper Andrew actually heard him.
"What did you just say--" He was cut off by Darien
"WHAT NO, AHHH NO *starts to blush* I didn't say that I said, yeah a handful that we're gonna take in and get reward money for!" Darien firmly stated while blushing to the color of a cherry!
'I really gotta watch what I say, and beside I don't like Serena, she's a brat, stuck up, hits whenever she feels like it, seductively beautiful, AHHHH…..no she's not, she's, she 's not my type' Darien contemplated
'Humph, yeah sure Darien what ever you say!' Andrew thought to himself
"So where to now?" Darien and Andrew both said in unison
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Well that's all for now, did ya like it? Is it more thought based, or something like that? Well I hope ya liked it, and please REVIEW ! I WANT REVIEWS, and more tips, and ideas!!
Thx,
Tummy_fire
Chapter 4: Partner To The Rescue
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AT THE BANK W/ DARIEN
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Darien's POV
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
'Oh man, how the hell am I gonna get outta this one?, my hands are tied to a post and the rope I swear is getting tighter by the moment!' Darien pondered
He looked outside the window straight across from him to see that the sun was shining bright , he figured it was almost noon.
'Who just abandons their town like this? I mean I've been here for at least a day and a half, I thirsty I wanna use the bathroom, I haven't showered, and….hey is that some guy outside?'
Darien tried to lift his head up some more to see out the window and to his luck he saw a blonde haired blue eyed man walking around, it's seemed obvious to Darien that the guy was looking for everyone or was thinking where'd everyone go.
Blonde Haired Blue Eyed Character's POV
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'hmm…where'd everyone go? I've been walking for days since I lost my horse, and now that I finally---' He was cut off by a sound of someone screaming help
"HEEEEELLLLLLLPPPPPPPPP……..I'M IN HERRRRREEEEE!!" Darien screamed from the tip of his lungs
'I thought everyone was gone' contemplated the mysterious man
"WHERE ARRRREEEEEE YOOUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!" the man shouted
"IN THEEE BANNNKKKKKKKK……YOU IDIOTTTT!" Darien roared.
The mysterious man walked towards the bank, he stepped inside and when he did his face expression changed from happy to angry.
Normal POV
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'DARIEN….what's he doing here? Oh I am so pissed off at him!' the man deliberated.
'ANDREW….what's he doing here? Oh he is so pissed off at me!' Darien worried
"Andrew…hey man how ya do'n? Nice to see you, hey can you untie me!" Darien begged.
"Darien, we were partners, right? You and me, and when you heard word of Serena and her little gang, you decide to leave without me and…AND…my favorite horse *sniffle* is gone because of you!" Andrew uttered
"Andrew, I'm really sorry about that, it's just that you needed some rest and I know you would find me, umm, no h-hard feelings?"
Andrew took out his hand gun, and pointed it towards Darien's head
'What is he doing?, he can't shoot me!" Darien thought
"ANDREW, YOU CAN'T SHOOT M--" Darien was cut off by the sound of the gun firing.
'I can't stay mad at him forever, I'm just not like that, there's no point!' Andrew explained to himself
"Get up Darien, your alive and, your free! But let me tell you this now buddy, you owe me big time!" Stated Andrew
Darien stood up, looked at his best-friend and partner, and noticed that he had on different clothed since the last time he saw him.
'Hey he's got different clothes, where'd he get the money to get some new clothes!' Darien pondered
Andrew say Darien looking him up and down.
'I see he's noticed my new clothes' Andrew smiled to himself
"Hey man are you checking me out?" Said Andrew
"huh? …. WHAT no way man, I just noticed your new clothes, I thought we were broke or get'n close to there broke?" Darien observed
Andrew had on a gray shirt with a light brown vest, that almost looked like a dark orange. His pants were the same color as his vest, except darker in color. Andrew's hair was a dirty blonde, he had blue eyes but looked more like turquoise color to most people. He had on very dark brown cowboy boots that matched his outfit. The belt around his waist held his one hand gun and the other a little bag that was tied on to his belt.
All in all he looked like he had money.
"What's in the bag tied around your belt?" Asked Darien
"Oh that, I came across a town that was empty like this, but there were dead people all over the place, it was a nasty sight! It looked like the work of the group called the Engravers (AN: this would be the Negaverse group, you know with Beryl and the 4 followers?), so I took the liberty of taking some money out of the bank, and got some new clothes from the place next to the Saloon!" Declared Andrew
"Man, we're Bounty Hunters, not the Bounty's, you could be thrown in jail like everyone else!" Explained a very pissed off Darien
"Yeah I know, I know, but, no one was there, and besides someone was gonna take it anyway! The Engravers never take the money they only kill! So it was a good opportunity to take money and new clothes so I did what my instincts told me to do!" Andrew remarked
'He'll never learn, but hey at least we have some money now!' Darien said to himself
Darien walked over to Andrew and they both left the bank. Andrew followed Darien around town slightly confused.
'Where are we going' Andrew thought
"Darien, where ar--" Andrew said but then stopped in mid sentence only to see his beloved dark brown Stallion.
"PANNOOWAU!!" (AN: I think you pronounce it - PAW-NEW-WAY - I'm not gonna give the meaning, cause they'll explain it!) Andrew cried
"Pannoowau, you gave your horse the strangest name anyone could possibly give their horse! What's it mean anyway? Oh and one more thing, how come when ever I tell you something, when we're riding you always call out your horse's name?" Darien ordered!
Andrew ran over towards his horse and started hugging it, he looked up at Darien and said, "Pannoowau means 'He Lies'!" Explained Andrew
"Ohhhh…that's even worse, why not just call him 'He Lies' instead of that ridicules name?" said Darien
"Because when you talk *giggles*, instead of saying Pannoowau I would say 'He Lies'!!" stated Andrew
"Ohh yeah, that would sou-- HEY, WHAT THE HELL IS THAT SUPPOSE TO MEAN, YOU KNOW NOT EVEYTHING I SAY IS A LIE!!!" Screamed Darien!
Darien then walked over to his black Stallion, jumped up on his horse and then thought to himself, 'Chaos, your name's not strange! I happen to like it a lot, and I don't always lie…do I?'
Andrew got up on his horse and started to ride off with Darien aside of him.
"So did you catch up with Serena and The Gang?" asked Andrew
"Yep, that's how I was tied up, and they finally have a group name. They are called The Radical Dreamers! They know about me and how I'm a bounty hunter and the fact that I'm known as The Devil's Dealer, and who is of course after them! But they don't know anything about you!" Said Darien
"Really…so what exactly happened?" asked Andrew
Darien told Andrew the whole story of what happened between him and Serena, Rubeus and Lita.
"Ohhh *laughs* so that's where you got that big ass bruise on your face from! *laughs some more*!! She sounds like a handful if you ask me!" Laughed Andrew
"Yeah…but a handful that I'd like to take into my own hands one day." Darien said in so low as a whisper Andrew actually heard him.
"What did you just say--" He was cut off by Darien
"WHAT NO, AHHH NO *starts to blush* I didn't say that I said, yeah a handful that we're gonna take in and get reward money for!" Darien firmly stated while blushing to the color of a cherry!
'I really gotta watch what I say, and beside I don't like Serena, she's a brat, stuck up, hits whenever she feels like it, seductively beautiful, AHHHH…..no she's not, she's, she 's not my type' Darien contemplated
'Humph, yeah sure Darien what ever you say!' Andrew thought to himself
"So where to now?" Darien and Andrew both said in unison
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Well that's all for now, did ya like it? Is it more thought based, or something like that? Well I hope ya liked it, and please REVIEW ! I WANT REVIEWS, and more tips, and ideas!!
Thx,
Tummy_fire