HELLO MY DEAR READERS!

You know, I like the last chapters of this story a lot, I think I did a great job with those. So I was thinking about a rewrite of the first chapters, 'cause when I read them I totally hate them.

NO REALLY!

I mean, go back, read it, and SEE how much it had deserved flames O_O

I'm really kinda embarrassed with those chapters. Actually, they just suck… GAH!

So I wanted to rewrite the whole bunch. Of course I need to find time for that, and it will probably cause that the fic I'm writing offline won't come out this year. Maybe not even next summer…

So what I was trying to do with this was ask your opinion. I might post the rewrite as a whole new story, so the old chapters will be beheld and, of course, so that I'd get more reviews ^_~

But I need to know if what I'd be doing would distress any reader of the old version… (Yeah sure) so that I wouldn't offend anyone O_o

But every time I receive a review from someone who started reading it when I had already finished, I wonder WHY he or she read those first chapters anyway! I mean, those are total CRAP!

No seriously, I think I now know why I never reach 100 reviews with this. The last chapters are cool, and I'm proud of those, but the first are REALLY bad…

So that's actually my motivation for writing a rewrite. As said before, it'll be posted as a different story that'll probably be called just Final Breakdowns and Still Doubting Rewrite.


Maybe I should title it differently…

But that'd separate the rewrite from its source!

No, guess I'll leave it at the previously stated title. Anyway I talk too much. Just give me your opinion:

Would you like to actually READ the rewrite of those stupid chapters, now that you already now what'll happen?

Would you mind if I changed a lot of descriptional stuff?

Do you think it's worth my time, for I promised my offline written fic to be posted around Christmas (and I haven't even got 3 chapters!)

The problem with the offline fic is (OK I'll be calling it by its name from here, it's called Demonic Wings) that it's based on a book. I have to get the first chapters right before I can post it, 'cause I'll probably be changing things in that over and over again so that it'll fit. So it's a lot of work, and this year is my hardest year of school, so I'm busy with that a lot, so I take very long.

And with that, I'm reading the new Harry Potter ^_^ Cool… Though I still don't know who's gonna die… O_O

DON'T TELL ME!

Lalalalalalalala I can't hear you… :P

So anyway, I want to know what YOU think ^_^

So please leave a review, I need to know what to do next in fictional land…

Sincerely,

San-chan (YES I like to leave the @'s out… FF.net forced me, else I would've been called San-chan1… Anyway, enough of that. Leave me your thoughts on the subject!)