Ok, this is my first ff. I've written on my own. Please send reviews!!! Let me know if I should change anything! The one thing I must ask is no rude reviews please. One of my good friends recently got a very rude review and I was shocked to see how mean people could be. I don't mind criticism as long as it's helpful. I would actually like some critics to review and help me make my story better.well, what are you waiting for? Start reading!!!