Hey I'm back and I'm bad.... alright you may think I take speed or
something, but to tell you the truth... I've never even smoked! Not even a
siggeret. *Does happy dance* So you guys just have ta live with my
wierdness ah.... I mean eccentricity. Ne way I just noticed something. I
tend to space out alot. lol. okay so I hope you guys aren't too confused
about Chiem Soul. And if you are, well... it'll make sence later so don't
fret your little heads off. muahahahah. No but seriously, if you guys have
any questions and/ or comments, don't be shy. Just email me and put the
subject of your email 'cause I get a lot of junk mail which I just delete
without a care in the world if its someone that I don't know. Also it may
be hard for me to update my Chiem Soul constantly because my sucky compaq
presario sucks and always freezes up and never works. So just a warning to
those who are getting a new computer NEVER get a COPAQ!!!!!!!!!!! They're
EVIL! EVIL I tell you! If you're getting a new computer and you have money
to spare then try going for an alian software. They're fast as hell and so
cool to look at. I would get one, but I just don't have an extra $5,000 I
could easily spend. *cough cough* okay sry 'bout that. As I was saying...oh
ya and I won't be able to update constantly mainly because fanfiction.net
doesn't let me log in with my computer, or so I think. Oh also I fixed
some of the prologue and added a few more comments at the end of the
chapter, if you look back you can skip all the way to the last paragraph.
Hope that makes your lives easier. Okay now I'm babbling...
lisiegurl: okay you guys you know the rules...
everyone: we know, we know...
lisiegurl: GREAT! Now remember ALFABETICAL
yahiko: alright already sheesh! *grumble grumble* great now I'm last...
sano: well since kenshin already went I guess that means that I'm next.
kaoru: no wait a minute sano, I was suppost to be before kenshin so that means I go next!!!
yahiko: oh no not again...
*rock paper scissors*
sano: YES! Scissors beats paper little missy.
kaoru: no thats not fair!
kenshin: now now miss kaoru, sano won so you should be fare and let him say it, that you should.
kaoru: humf!
yahiko: *here's my chance* Okay. The disclamer: lisiegurl does not own the characters of Ruroni Kenshin or Samuri X. Please do not sue on account that we have no money. Kenshin has a little but that won't even get him a gumball from a candy machine. *Kenshin falls in the backround* well I think thats it....oh and were not getting payed for this so you still can't sue us. *sticks out toung* Haha.
lisiegurl: Yahiko you're gonna get me into trouble if you don't stop, so STOP!
sano: come here you little runt, you're gonna PAY!
yahiko: *looks all innocent* what did I do?
*sano chases yahiko in back*
lisiegurl: *sigh* and just when I got them to settle down again. *grumble grumble*...I'll have to pay for that too...It's not fare... they broke it so why do I have to buy it?
kenshin: look on the bright side lisie-chan, at least were alive and well.
*pots being banged in the backround*
yahiko: haha thats what you get... ahhh! *runs again*
sano: I sware when I get my hands on you... *chases*
kaoru: well, at least some of us...
lisiegurl: oh, I almost forgot. Okay some of you might be wondering what was with the prologue, well my friend Yulia was... Okay I said that I was setting up the story and that if you didn't read that then it wouldn't make any sence, so I'm just reminding you this IS a Kenshin fic and this WILL be more understanding as the story progresses. Just wanted to clear that up, 'cause it just really bugs me when no one listens. Okay on with the story... go fido go.... and all that other JAZZ.
Chiem Soul
chapter 1
"No I said let GO!" shouted a person from the Akebeko. It was a beautiful day, if only everyone ignored all the commotion coming from the friendly resturant. "Awww... but we want to play. Besides, my friends and I have been wondering what you look like under there," an obece looking man said with a cupple of guys behind him. "Listen. I will only say this once. Leave me alone or I'll make you," the person growled underneath the heavy coat.
The person was covered from head to toe. In fact, you couldn't even see either of those body parts, their coat simply covered everything. It was like the man was talking to a shadow. "It's nearly 30 degrees C. outside and you're wearing a foreign kimono that covers you head to toe. Don't you think that would draw some attention to yourself and make some people wonder what you look like under that?" the man taunted, while still holding a firm grip on the persons arm; laughing along with the other men, which were beginning to look quiet anxious at to what the foreigner was hiding.
By now, the group had the attention of every customer inside, and some out, of the resturant. "Thats IT!" the person shouted. Pulling back an arm and launching it forward, the cloked person hit the large man, causing him to go flying backwards into the one of the empty booths. As a resault of this everyone inside the resturant was deadly quiet. But someones eyes were not on the fallen man, but on the person. A gasp was heard out of the croud and then a shout of terror. "Look at their arm! Its covered in blood!" Suddenly all eyes were on the person. And as was said, the sleve where the person was holding was ripped off, revealing a bloody forearm.
The shadowed person then hid its arm as quickly as possible and walked up to one of the waitresses saying, "I'm sorry for the trouble that was caused here. Please except my dearest apologies. Thank you." The waitress, too stunned to do anything, just nodded with wide eyes. Suddenly the large man got up and yelled to his comrades, "Get 'em! If I want something, I get it!" The man and his friends then got up and ran tward the foreign person. The person not wanting to fight ran out the door. 'I'm not going to fight if I have a choice.'
Now exiting the Akebeko, the person found out that they were circled. It turns out the rest of the gang went out the back way making the person surrounded. Because of all the attention they were getting, there was a croud surrounding the ring created just outside the resturant. Trapped, the person did the only thing they could do. Wait.
***********************
"Hummm.... I wonder what's going on," Sanosuke said sounding all of the groups thoughts, as they watched everyone run tward the Akebeko. "Yes there seems to be some sort of event going on," Kenshin agreed.
As a kid ran by Sanosuke grabbed at his collar. "Hey let go!" the kid yelled. "First tell us what's going on," Sanosuke damanded.
"There's suppose to be a fight going on with a foreigner and one of the local gang leaders."
"You mean the Omikami? Awww man who'd go and do a stupid thing like that. I mean, they're no match for me and Kenshin here, but for anyone else, I'd say they just want to get beat up."
"But thats the thing. The foreigner seemes to be really good. But that's not all. They say that you can't even see what the person looks like. The only thing you can see is their arm and its said to be covered in blood!" the boy said in excitement.
"Now can you let me down. I'm gonna miss the fight."
"Yea, yea sure thing kid. Oh and where did you say it was again?"
"Right outside the Akebeko."
Sanosuke then dropped the kid and turned to the group. "Looks like were gonna have dinner and a show!" Sanosuke proclaimed happily.
"Well then we shouldn't be waisting time. Someone could get hurt!" Yahiko exclaimed.
"Right... then let's go!" Kaoru finished as everyone made their way to the Akebeko as fast as they could.
***********************
There was nothing that the person could do. They were stuck and knew it. 'I don't want to us my powers otherwise the elders will find me with the transmitter.' So they waited for the leader to come and fight. There was nothing else that it could do. Slowly the leader made his way out of the resturant. Expecting it to be the one that was struck earlier, the person snorted with impatience. 'Will this guy hurry up. If I don't go soon I'm gonna be in big trouble.' Instead of the large man that was coming out to fight, there was a tall, lean, and obviously skilled man coming out.
"Who are you?" the shadowed person asked getting agitated with how much time was being waisted and the chants of FIGHT! FIGHT! FIGHT! going on around it.
"I am the leader of the Omikami and am here to find out why you are causing us so much trouble to my group and what you've got to hide," he comented snidely.
"Well I don't have any time for this so if you'll please excuse me, I have places to go," it responded.
"Aww... I see. Too afraid to fight. Well you aren't going anywhere until I see what's under that garment you call clothing!"
"I will not fight you. I have no reason to humiliate you. So if you don't mind, I'm leaving now," the person calmly stated, yet annoyed beyond belief.
***********************
Kenshin and the group finally arived to hear the words spoken between the leader of the Omikami and the stranger with the hidden identity. The croud was unbelievably big, even though the circle was a good couple meters wide. It seemed to be the most entertaining thing to happen in the streets since the circus came.
"Whats going on?" Kaoru asked looking over people.
"I don't know, but lets find out," answered Sanosuke.
"I am the leader of the Omikami and am here to find out why you are causing us so much trouble and what you've got to hide."
"Well I don't have any time for this so if you'll please excuse me, I have places to go."
"Kenshin, who is that person in the wierd clothing?" Yahiko asked looking through the legs of people.
"I don't know Yahiko, but from the looks of it, they don't want to fight."
"Aww... I see. Too afraid to fight. Well you aren't going anywhere until I see what's under that garment you call clothing!"
"MAN! I can't see anything lets get closer," Sanosuke exclaimed.
"RIGHT!" the group responded pushing their way to the front of the circle.
"I will not fight you. I have no reason to humiliate you. So if you don't mind, I'm leaving now," as the person turned away and started walking.
"Why you...!" With anger taking over the leader, he unsheath his sword and slashed out wildly as the group gasp at the action. The person stopped walking as soon as the sword hit them. They just stood there as stiff as a board not moving as silence rung throughout the croud.
The leader smirked at his work thinking that the person would drop dead any minute. 'Right any minute now...' he thought.
Then suddenly there was another gasp, but this one was of true horror. Everyone's attention was taken from the leader, to the mystery person. It seems that the mistery is only but now unraveling...
End.
**** ~ Author Notes~
Hi again I'd just like to thank all of you that reviewed, which totals up to...*drum roll* 2. lol... well that was more than I thought I'd get any way. And both reviews made me feel so happy so here's a special thanks to bobo and shadowfox2. Thanks you guys, you made my day... okay continuing...Yes! Another beautiful chapter done by yours truely. So sorries to leave all my fans waiting there on a cliffy. But just to tell you, I know exactily what's gonna happen. So why didn't I write it you ask? Well cause I gots a billion ideas to put in and I still gots to organize it. Ok... on with the blood sucking vampires... that was random sry. Any way I hope you toon into the next chapter of chiem soul and r&r to me. (for those who don't know what that means... read and review hehe) Did you like it? Love it? Hate it? I don't care just TELL ME! And toon into the next chapter of... wow de ja vou and all that good stuff. hehe. byes... spider man, spider man, friendly neiborhood spider man, spins a web any size, catches thieves just like flies, hey man! there goes the spider men... bye.
Ja ne*_~
lisiegurl: okay you guys you know the rules...
everyone: we know, we know...
lisiegurl: GREAT! Now remember ALFABETICAL
yahiko: alright already sheesh! *grumble grumble* great now I'm last...
sano: well since kenshin already went I guess that means that I'm next.
kaoru: no wait a minute sano, I was suppost to be before kenshin so that means I go next!!!
yahiko: oh no not again...
*rock paper scissors*
sano: YES! Scissors beats paper little missy.
kaoru: no thats not fair!
kenshin: now now miss kaoru, sano won so you should be fare and let him say it, that you should.
kaoru: humf!
yahiko: *here's my chance* Okay. The disclamer: lisiegurl does not own the characters of Ruroni Kenshin or Samuri X. Please do not sue on account that we have no money. Kenshin has a little but that won't even get him a gumball from a candy machine. *Kenshin falls in the backround* well I think thats it....oh and were not getting payed for this so you still can't sue us. *sticks out toung* Haha.
lisiegurl: Yahiko you're gonna get me into trouble if you don't stop, so STOP!
sano: come here you little runt, you're gonna PAY!
yahiko: *looks all innocent* what did I do?
*sano chases yahiko in back*
lisiegurl: *sigh* and just when I got them to settle down again. *grumble grumble*...I'll have to pay for that too...It's not fare... they broke it so why do I have to buy it?
kenshin: look on the bright side lisie-chan, at least were alive and well.
*pots being banged in the backround*
yahiko: haha thats what you get... ahhh! *runs again*
sano: I sware when I get my hands on you... *chases*
kaoru: well, at least some of us...
lisiegurl: oh, I almost forgot. Okay some of you might be wondering what was with the prologue, well my friend Yulia was... Okay I said that I was setting up the story and that if you didn't read that then it wouldn't make any sence, so I'm just reminding you this IS a Kenshin fic and this WILL be more understanding as the story progresses. Just wanted to clear that up, 'cause it just really bugs me when no one listens. Okay on with the story... go fido go.... and all that other JAZZ.
Chiem Soul
chapter 1
"No I said let GO!" shouted a person from the Akebeko. It was a beautiful day, if only everyone ignored all the commotion coming from the friendly resturant. "Awww... but we want to play. Besides, my friends and I have been wondering what you look like under there," an obece looking man said with a cupple of guys behind him. "Listen. I will only say this once. Leave me alone or I'll make you," the person growled underneath the heavy coat.
The person was covered from head to toe. In fact, you couldn't even see either of those body parts, their coat simply covered everything. It was like the man was talking to a shadow. "It's nearly 30 degrees C. outside and you're wearing a foreign kimono that covers you head to toe. Don't you think that would draw some attention to yourself and make some people wonder what you look like under that?" the man taunted, while still holding a firm grip on the persons arm; laughing along with the other men, which were beginning to look quiet anxious at to what the foreigner was hiding.
By now, the group had the attention of every customer inside, and some out, of the resturant. "Thats IT!" the person shouted. Pulling back an arm and launching it forward, the cloked person hit the large man, causing him to go flying backwards into the one of the empty booths. As a resault of this everyone inside the resturant was deadly quiet. But someones eyes were not on the fallen man, but on the person. A gasp was heard out of the croud and then a shout of terror. "Look at their arm! Its covered in blood!" Suddenly all eyes were on the person. And as was said, the sleve where the person was holding was ripped off, revealing a bloody forearm.
The shadowed person then hid its arm as quickly as possible and walked up to one of the waitresses saying, "I'm sorry for the trouble that was caused here. Please except my dearest apologies. Thank you." The waitress, too stunned to do anything, just nodded with wide eyes. Suddenly the large man got up and yelled to his comrades, "Get 'em! If I want something, I get it!" The man and his friends then got up and ran tward the foreign person. The person not wanting to fight ran out the door. 'I'm not going to fight if I have a choice.'
Now exiting the Akebeko, the person found out that they were circled. It turns out the rest of the gang went out the back way making the person surrounded. Because of all the attention they were getting, there was a croud surrounding the ring created just outside the resturant. Trapped, the person did the only thing they could do. Wait.
***********************
"Hummm.... I wonder what's going on," Sanosuke said sounding all of the groups thoughts, as they watched everyone run tward the Akebeko. "Yes there seems to be some sort of event going on," Kenshin agreed.
As a kid ran by Sanosuke grabbed at his collar. "Hey let go!" the kid yelled. "First tell us what's going on," Sanosuke damanded.
"There's suppose to be a fight going on with a foreigner and one of the local gang leaders."
"You mean the Omikami? Awww man who'd go and do a stupid thing like that. I mean, they're no match for me and Kenshin here, but for anyone else, I'd say they just want to get beat up."
"But thats the thing. The foreigner seemes to be really good. But that's not all. They say that you can't even see what the person looks like. The only thing you can see is their arm and its said to be covered in blood!" the boy said in excitement.
"Now can you let me down. I'm gonna miss the fight."
"Yea, yea sure thing kid. Oh and where did you say it was again?"
"Right outside the Akebeko."
Sanosuke then dropped the kid and turned to the group. "Looks like were gonna have dinner and a show!" Sanosuke proclaimed happily.
"Well then we shouldn't be waisting time. Someone could get hurt!" Yahiko exclaimed.
"Right... then let's go!" Kaoru finished as everyone made their way to the Akebeko as fast as they could.
***********************
There was nothing that the person could do. They were stuck and knew it. 'I don't want to us my powers otherwise the elders will find me with the transmitter.' So they waited for the leader to come and fight. There was nothing else that it could do. Slowly the leader made his way out of the resturant. Expecting it to be the one that was struck earlier, the person snorted with impatience. 'Will this guy hurry up. If I don't go soon I'm gonna be in big trouble.' Instead of the large man that was coming out to fight, there was a tall, lean, and obviously skilled man coming out.
"Who are you?" the shadowed person asked getting agitated with how much time was being waisted and the chants of FIGHT! FIGHT! FIGHT! going on around it.
"I am the leader of the Omikami and am here to find out why you are causing us so much trouble to my group and what you've got to hide," he comented snidely.
"Well I don't have any time for this so if you'll please excuse me, I have places to go," it responded.
"Aww... I see. Too afraid to fight. Well you aren't going anywhere until I see what's under that garment you call clothing!"
"I will not fight you. I have no reason to humiliate you. So if you don't mind, I'm leaving now," the person calmly stated, yet annoyed beyond belief.
***********************
Kenshin and the group finally arived to hear the words spoken between the leader of the Omikami and the stranger with the hidden identity. The croud was unbelievably big, even though the circle was a good couple meters wide. It seemed to be the most entertaining thing to happen in the streets since the circus came.
"Whats going on?" Kaoru asked looking over people.
"I don't know, but lets find out," answered Sanosuke.
"I am the leader of the Omikami and am here to find out why you are causing us so much trouble and what you've got to hide."
"Well I don't have any time for this so if you'll please excuse me, I have places to go."
"Kenshin, who is that person in the wierd clothing?" Yahiko asked looking through the legs of people.
"I don't know Yahiko, but from the looks of it, they don't want to fight."
"Aww... I see. Too afraid to fight. Well you aren't going anywhere until I see what's under that garment you call clothing!"
"MAN! I can't see anything lets get closer," Sanosuke exclaimed.
"RIGHT!" the group responded pushing their way to the front of the circle.
"I will not fight you. I have no reason to humiliate you. So if you don't mind, I'm leaving now," as the person turned away and started walking.
"Why you...!" With anger taking over the leader, he unsheath his sword and slashed out wildly as the group gasp at the action. The person stopped walking as soon as the sword hit them. They just stood there as stiff as a board not moving as silence rung throughout the croud.
The leader smirked at his work thinking that the person would drop dead any minute. 'Right any minute now...' he thought.
Then suddenly there was another gasp, but this one was of true horror. Everyone's attention was taken from the leader, to the mystery person. It seems that the mistery is only but now unraveling...
End.
**** ~ Author Notes~
Hi again I'd just like to thank all of you that reviewed, which totals up to...*drum roll* 2. lol... well that was more than I thought I'd get any way. And both reviews made me feel so happy so here's a special thanks to bobo and shadowfox2. Thanks you guys, you made my day... okay continuing...Yes! Another beautiful chapter done by yours truely. So sorries to leave all my fans waiting there on a cliffy. But just to tell you, I know exactily what's gonna happen. So why didn't I write it you ask? Well cause I gots a billion ideas to put in and I still gots to organize it. Ok... on with the blood sucking vampires... that was random sry. Any way I hope you toon into the next chapter of chiem soul and r&r to me. (for those who don't know what that means... read and review hehe) Did you like it? Love it? Hate it? I don't care just TELL ME! And toon into the next chapter of... wow de ja vou and all that good stuff. hehe. byes... spider man, spider man, friendly neiborhood spider man, spins a web any size, catches thieves just like flies, hey man! there goes the spider men... bye.
Ja ne*_~