Hey guys! I'm really sorry about not updating in such a long time. Writers
block is a bitch and I guess you just have to write it off or something.
Well any way...I'm still sorry. I hate it when I read a fanfic. and the
author doesn't update until like half the year or something and here I am
doing it myself. ;p So apologies to all who care. And thank you for caring.
Okay enough gushing!
Its time I continued my writing. Oh and I think I'll be getting rid of my little friends cause they just ten to waist my time!
Yahiko: You can't do that to us!
Sano: Yea we made you!
Lisiegurl: *sweet drop* uhh....right....
Sano: besides without us you'd be NOTHING!
Lisiegurl: Okay now don't push your luck! *growling*
Kenshin: Now, now you guys... lets all just calm down and listen to reason.
Kaoru: Wahhhhhhhhhhh! You don't love us any more! *crying*
Lisiegurl: SHUT UP!
*All is quiet*
Lisiegurl: Thank you... now I'm doing this cause it takes up too much of my chapters. I don't want to write as much because I'm wasting my time here.
You guys will always be around, just not to where people can hear you... or get me in any more dept for you clumsiness.
*crickets*
Lisiegurl: Sheesh! You guys don't have to be like that! Okay fine, act like my little brother.
*still is quiet*
*hears loud slurping*
Sano: What?! I was thirsty!
Lisiegurl: Is that the last of my ICE TEA?!
Sano: *hides can behind back* ummm... no?
Lisiegurl: I'm gonna KILL YOU SANO! *chases Sanosuke around room*
Sano: AHHHHHHHH! SAVE ME! SAVE ME! *is knocked unconscious*
Lisiegurl: *dusts hands off* much better. Now as a going away present I'll let all of you do the disclaimer. Okay ready now? 1...2....3!
Disclaimer: Lisiegurl doesn't own Ruroni Kenshin, or Samurai X. (lisiegurl:*mutters* thank god...*) So please don't sue. She has nothing of interest. No one would want any of her junk... nope. Absolutely nothing....
Lisiegurl: that was beautiful you guys. *tears up* Group hug!
Recently on Chiem Soul...
"You don't think I've already tried that?! That person is the only one that can do it. The only other way would to find someone else with a reverse blade sword and have them break it off," she finished.
Everyone looked at each other and then to Kenshin.
"I have a reverse blade sword," he said simply.
Chiem Soul
chapter 4
"Okay so what do I have to do?"
"You have to cut directly through these two lines," Chiem pointed out carefully to two seam looking lines about 2mm apart, "but you can't hit anything else, otherwise it'll self destruct. And it has to be with a force great enough to split the very ground in half."
The group paused, taking in what information they just received. Everything was simple, before Chiem came along. Well as normal as they could get. But this was just....a little too much.
"So what you're saying is that Kenshin has to hit that very spot, no bigger that half my pinky, with a tremendous amount of force, otherwise your head will explode?" Kaoru asked dumfounded.
"Pretty much," answered Chiem as if it was as simple as a daily chore.
"Oh....okay," was her response.
"Now you see why I can't just do it myself."
"Yes that would explain a lot," Sanosuke added.
"Do you think you can do it Kenshin?" Yahiko asked.
Kenshin stood there unmoving. 'This will be quite the challenge. If she came all this way to have me do this, she must have a strong trust in me.' He sighed. "I'll see what I can do."
"Sir Ken, are you sure this is wise?" Megumi asked quietly, "I mean....we don't even know her, and if we did, can you still do that? It's nearly impossible! I mean, you'd have to hit that precise spot just by the tip of the reverse blade sword."
"It is up to her. If she is willing to take the risk then so am I," Kenshin said sending a questioning look to Chiem.
"Yes, I'm sure of it. I've waited far to long for this," she said meeting his gaze.
"I don't care what the cost. Anything's better than this. Even if it's my own life."
"Alright then."
And with that, the decision was made. As Chiem lied down on her back, giving Kenshin a direct target for the seams, she sucked in her breath, for even the smallest of movement can cause failure.
"Everybody move back," Kenshin said, as everybody moved away from the two.
'Here goes nothing,' Kenshin thought. 'I can't understand why I'm so willing to do this. I could loose my life as well.' He looked at her. 'That's a chance I'm willing to take.' And with that last thought Kenshin jumped up into the air. Coming down with incredible speed and pointing directly at the seams, never loosing focus on that one spot.
**********************
"Sir we've lost all contact together."
"What?! What was that you said?!"
"The transmitter has been destroyed, sir. The girls location is lost."
"No. That's impossible!"
"I'm sorry sir."
"So little Chiems' found a way to free herself, hum? We we'll see what she does now that were coming for her. Go inform the elders of this. Tell them that were going to get her. All of us. Understand?!"
"Sir, isn't that a bit rash?"
"You dare question MY authority?! Be gone with you before I kill you, you worthless excuse for a human! You're not even worthy of me killing you! Now GO!"
"Ye...yeee....yes, si...sir!"
And with that said, the man ran off to fulfill his commands.
"Hmmmm... my dear sweet Chiem. You are a clever one aren't you? You always were. Strong and willing. Yes... you were always willing weren't you?"
Laughing echoes throughout the room, as the man strokes a picture of Chiem.
"Yes... we will see what you will do when all of us come... hmmmm? Especially when I come. Your reaction will be one unforgettable, that I am sure of. To find out who truly is the one who causes all of your pain. Then we will see, who truly is the puppet and who the puppeteer."
With a final laugh, the man rips the picture until no more...
End.
Sorry about having a shorter chapter than usual you guys. I just thought it seemed right to end it here. Well I hope you enjoyed reading this as much as I enjoyed writing it. Ok...with that said I'd like to say...REVIEW! I NEED reviews. I live off them. I don't care if its negative as long as it helps me improve my writing. Like I said before, if its negative and flamy, I'm using it to make my enchiladas! Yum! Yum! ^_^
Okay so I guess you guys now have some more info. on the elders and that freaky dude who's like obsessed with Chiem and her pain. Damn sadist! Lol.
Well there does have to be a villain otherwise there's no plot. Reaching happiness isn't easy ya know... well in stories that is. :p
Oh and one more thing... because I don't have microsoft word processor or a spell check and I'm too lazy to look every word up in the dictionary, I would be eternally grateful if anyone who is willing could preread/ correct my work. So ya just send me a review or something that you wouldn't mind doing that for me and I'll be just peachy! Thanks sooooooo much to all my reviewers too! Love ya guys... without ya, I wouldn't have a story. Thanks.
If you have AIM and you want to talk to me about the story or fanfics in general or something... just IM me to nebumurph or email me if you have any questions to lisiegurl@hotmail.com or nebumurph@aol.com. Whatever floats your boat. Oh and state your subject with emailing cause if I don't know you I'm most likely to delete your email. Thanks. 0.o
Laters....piece out...austalavista....adios...ora vuwa....(okay don't know french/ don't kill me over it)...ja ne...
. LiSIe gURl
Its time I continued my writing. Oh and I think I'll be getting rid of my little friends cause they just ten to waist my time!
Yahiko: You can't do that to us!
Sano: Yea we made you!
Lisiegurl: *sweet drop* uhh....right....
Sano: besides without us you'd be NOTHING!
Lisiegurl: Okay now don't push your luck! *growling*
Kenshin: Now, now you guys... lets all just calm down and listen to reason.
Kaoru: Wahhhhhhhhhhh! You don't love us any more! *crying*
Lisiegurl: SHUT UP!
*All is quiet*
Lisiegurl: Thank you... now I'm doing this cause it takes up too much of my chapters. I don't want to write as much because I'm wasting my time here.
You guys will always be around, just not to where people can hear you... or get me in any more dept for you clumsiness.
*crickets*
Lisiegurl: Sheesh! You guys don't have to be like that! Okay fine, act like my little brother.
*still is quiet*
*hears loud slurping*
Sano: What?! I was thirsty!
Lisiegurl: Is that the last of my ICE TEA?!
Sano: *hides can behind back* ummm... no?
Lisiegurl: I'm gonna KILL YOU SANO! *chases Sanosuke around room*
Sano: AHHHHHHHH! SAVE ME! SAVE ME! *is knocked unconscious*
Lisiegurl: *dusts hands off* much better. Now as a going away present I'll let all of you do the disclaimer. Okay ready now? 1...2....3!
Disclaimer: Lisiegurl doesn't own Ruroni Kenshin, or Samurai X. (lisiegurl:*mutters* thank god...*) So please don't sue. She has nothing of interest. No one would want any of her junk... nope. Absolutely nothing....
Lisiegurl: that was beautiful you guys. *tears up* Group hug!
Recently on Chiem Soul...
"You don't think I've already tried that?! That person is the only one that can do it. The only other way would to find someone else with a reverse blade sword and have them break it off," she finished.
Everyone looked at each other and then to Kenshin.
"I have a reverse blade sword," he said simply.
Chiem Soul
chapter 4
"Okay so what do I have to do?"
"You have to cut directly through these two lines," Chiem pointed out carefully to two seam looking lines about 2mm apart, "but you can't hit anything else, otherwise it'll self destruct. And it has to be with a force great enough to split the very ground in half."
The group paused, taking in what information they just received. Everything was simple, before Chiem came along. Well as normal as they could get. But this was just....a little too much.
"So what you're saying is that Kenshin has to hit that very spot, no bigger that half my pinky, with a tremendous amount of force, otherwise your head will explode?" Kaoru asked dumfounded.
"Pretty much," answered Chiem as if it was as simple as a daily chore.
"Oh....okay," was her response.
"Now you see why I can't just do it myself."
"Yes that would explain a lot," Sanosuke added.
"Do you think you can do it Kenshin?" Yahiko asked.
Kenshin stood there unmoving. 'This will be quite the challenge. If she came all this way to have me do this, she must have a strong trust in me.' He sighed. "I'll see what I can do."
"Sir Ken, are you sure this is wise?" Megumi asked quietly, "I mean....we don't even know her, and if we did, can you still do that? It's nearly impossible! I mean, you'd have to hit that precise spot just by the tip of the reverse blade sword."
"It is up to her. If she is willing to take the risk then so am I," Kenshin said sending a questioning look to Chiem.
"Yes, I'm sure of it. I've waited far to long for this," she said meeting his gaze.
"I don't care what the cost. Anything's better than this. Even if it's my own life."
"Alright then."
And with that, the decision was made. As Chiem lied down on her back, giving Kenshin a direct target for the seams, she sucked in her breath, for even the smallest of movement can cause failure.
"Everybody move back," Kenshin said, as everybody moved away from the two.
'Here goes nothing,' Kenshin thought. 'I can't understand why I'm so willing to do this. I could loose my life as well.' He looked at her. 'That's a chance I'm willing to take.' And with that last thought Kenshin jumped up into the air. Coming down with incredible speed and pointing directly at the seams, never loosing focus on that one spot.
**********************
"Sir we've lost all contact together."
"What?! What was that you said?!"
"The transmitter has been destroyed, sir. The girls location is lost."
"No. That's impossible!"
"I'm sorry sir."
"So little Chiems' found a way to free herself, hum? We we'll see what she does now that were coming for her. Go inform the elders of this. Tell them that were going to get her. All of us. Understand?!"
"Sir, isn't that a bit rash?"
"You dare question MY authority?! Be gone with you before I kill you, you worthless excuse for a human! You're not even worthy of me killing you! Now GO!"
"Ye...yeee....yes, si...sir!"
And with that said, the man ran off to fulfill his commands.
"Hmmmm... my dear sweet Chiem. You are a clever one aren't you? You always were. Strong and willing. Yes... you were always willing weren't you?"
Laughing echoes throughout the room, as the man strokes a picture of Chiem.
"Yes... we will see what you will do when all of us come... hmmmm? Especially when I come. Your reaction will be one unforgettable, that I am sure of. To find out who truly is the one who causes all of your pain. Then we will see, who truly is the puppet and who the puppeteer."
With a final laugh, the man rips the picture until no more...
End.
Sorry about having a shorter chapter than usual you guys. I just thought it seemed right to end it here. Well I hope you enjoyed reading this as much as I enjoyed writing it. Ok...with that said I'd like to say...REVIEW! I NEED reviews. I live off them. I don't care if its negative as long as it helps me improve my writing. Like I said before, if its negative and flamy, I'm using it to make my enchiladas! Yum! Yum! ^_^
Okay so I guess you guys now have some more info. on the elders and that freaky dude who's like obsessed with Chiem and her pain. Damn sadist! Lol.
Well there does have to be a villain otherwise there's no plot. Reaching happiness isn't easy ya know... well in stories that is. :p
Oh and one more thing... because I don't have microsoft word processor or a spell check and I'm too lazy to look every word up in the dictionary, I would be eternally grateful if anyone who is willing could preread/ correct my work. So ya just send me a review or something that you wouldn't mind doing that for me and I'll be just peachy! Thanks sooooooo much to all my reviewers too! Love ya guys... without ya, I wouldn't have a story. Thanks.
If you have AIM and you want to talk to me about the story or fanfics in general or something... just IM me to nebumurph or email me if you have any questions to lisiegurl@hotmail.com or nebumurph@aol.com. Whatever floats your boat. Oh and state your subject with emailing cause if I don't know you I'm most likely to delete your email. Thanks. 0.o
Laters....piece out...austalavista....adios...ora vuwa....(okay don't know french/ don't kill me over it)...ja ne...
. LiSIe gURl