The Sonic Blew Up His School
by NeoDan
Disclaimer: I don't own any of the characters except Maxy (given to me by Angel Becky) and someone else
A/N: Hey! It's NeoDan here, coming at ya with my first fic, not told from Maxy's POV! I think it's a good idea and I'd like some feedback people! Please!!!
Chapter 1: Spy on Sonic
One day in Green Hill Primary Sonic was playing in the playground with his stuff, unknowingly watched by Maxy. Well, he was, until principal Robotnik came over, and gave him detention for not having egg sandwiches for lunch! Crying (well, he was a dweeb then) he left the playground and ran to his locker, which he locked himself inside. When he got out of his locker he went sadly to detention. His detention was to think up a...
Angel Becky: Oops... Giltrap just wiped this off his computer... I'll pass a message onto Maxy to finish this fast... somebody talk to me!!!
Angel Becky: I'll finish it for him because I don't think he wants any more flames. ^_^ Maxcell, who the hell do you think you are? He's a blonde! What do you expect? I'm not, thank god, but I do have a blonde state of mind!
His detention was to think up a.
OK, I dunno, I'm making this up and ruining his plan.
His detention was to think up a science project for the school science fair, but he needed a partner.
Maxy sat there doodling randomly on his paper until he heard a voice.
Angel: OK, this is a script fic now!
Weird Teacher Bloke: You're late, Sonic!
Sonic: *shrugs* whatever.
Maxy: * looks up, gasps and looks down again *
Angel: OK, maybe not.
Sonic sat down at the desk in front of Maxy and took out a CD Player and a game boy (damn Nintendo)
Maxy looked up again and tapped Sonic timidly on the shoulder. Sonic ignored him so Tails tapped him a little harder. Sonic ignored him again and Maxy hit him really hard (it runs in his family, god it hurts when you're hit by his sister, I know, I get it every day! He ain't too bad either!)
Sonic jumped up, "What the hell do you want, kid?"
"Oh, I was just wondering if you could help me?" said Maxy, starting to cry. Sonic had a short temper but a kind heart so he turned the chair around and read what was on the paper.
"Right, What do you want to do?" asked Sonic, "My friend is good with bombs! Maybe he could help. he looks just like you, you know."
"YAY!!! What time is it?" asked Maxy.
"Erm. 4pm, maybe you should go home now?"
"Yeah, OK! But what about this science thing?"
"Well, I'll find you tomorrow. What's your name?"
"Maxy, Maxy Prower!"
"Geez!" said Sonic, falling off his chair, "I'll definitely find you tomorrow!"
A/N: So, what do you think? It isn't too bad, except that he has no idea about the way this story is going. if you got any questions, I'm Angel Becky, but I think I'll go block Maxcell from giving me signed reviews as well. yes. don't ever flame my friend Fox Boy!!!
by NeoDan
Disclaimer: I don't own any of the characters except Maxy (given to me by Angel Becky) and someone else
A/N: Hey! It's NeoDan here, coming at ya with my first fic, not told from Maxy's POV! I think it's a good idea and I'd like some feedback people! Please!!!
Chapter 1: Spy on Sonic
One day in Green Hill Primary Sonic was playing in the playground with his stuff, unknowingly watched by Maxy. Well, he was, until principal Robotnik came over, and gave him detention for not having egg sandwiches for lunch! Crying (well, he was a dweeb then) he left the playground and ran to his locker, which he locked himself inside. When he got out of his locker he went sadly to detention. His detention was to think up a...
Angel Becky: Oops... Giltrap just wiped this off his computer... I'll pass a message onto Maxy to finish this fast... somebody talk to me!!!
Angel Becky: I'll finish it for him because I don't think he wants any more flames. ^_^ Maxcell, who the hell do you think you are? He's a blonde! What do you expect? I'm not, thank god, but I do have a blonde state of mind!
His detention was to think up a.
OK, I dunno, I'm making this up and ruining his plan.
His detention was to think up a science project for the school science fair, but he needed a partner.
Maxy sat there doodling randomly on his paper until he heard a voice.
Angel: OK, this is a script fic now!
Weird Teacher Bloke: You're late, Sonic!
Sonic: *shrugs* whatever.
Maxy: * looks up, gasps and looks down again *
Angel: OK, maybe not.
Sonic sat down at the desk in front of Maxy and took out a CD Player and a game boy (damn Nintendo)
Maxy looked up again and tapped Sonic timidly on the shoulder. Sonic ignored him so Tails tapped him a little harder. Sonic ignored him again and Maxy hit him really hard (it runs in his family, god it hurts when you're hit by his sister, I know, I get it every day! He ain't too bad either!)
Sonic jumped up, "What the hell do you want, kid?"
"Oh, I was just wondering if you could help me?" said Maxy, starting to cry. Sonic had a short temper but a kind heart so he turned the chair around and read what was on the paper.
"Right, What do you want to do?" asked Sonic, "My friend is good with bombs! Maybe he could help. he looks just like you, you know."
"YAY!!! What time is it?" asked Maxy.
"Erm. 4pm, maybe you should go home now?"
"Yeah, OK! But what about this science thing?"
"Well, I'll find you tomorrow. What's your name?"
"Maxy, Maxy Prower!"
"Geez!" said Sonic, falling off his chair, "I'll definitely find you tomorrow!"
A/N: So, what do you think? It isn't too bad, except that he has no idea about the way this story is going. if you got any questions, I'm Angel Becky, but I think I'll go block Maxcell from giving me signed reviews as well. yes. don't ever flame my friend Fox Boy!!!