Hello again readers! Now as I recall, our four friends are lost on a
different planet, the girl's name is Lora Stanfun, Jim and Lora had an
argument, made up, and now Jim and his friends have agreed to help Lora
with her problem.
Now it's time for some fun! ^___^
Disclaimer: I do not own Treasure Planet or the original characters from the movie. I only own Lora Stanfun, Captain Skull and his crew, the planet that Lora, Jim, Morph, and B.E.N. are trapped own along with the creatures on it, and the "Temple of Water" (which will soon be explained).
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The Sphere of Parmile Chapter Five: A Walk in the Forest
"Lor, do you even know where we're going?" Jim questioned the audacious girl leading them.
"No, why would I? I don't even know what planet we're on," Lora replied.
The four of them had been roaming deeper and deeper into the thick forest for hours, unaware what beast and monsters they may just come across. The forest was full of trees of many shapes and sizes and some had a few weird markings on them. Could they possibly mean something?
"Lor, where are taking us?" Jim asked.
"I'm not sure really," Lora answered, "but we need to find a town or something so we can find a way off this planet, I mean, this planet has got to have some kind of life form on it, right?"
Lora turned around to see him Jim would reply. Jim shrugged his shoulders not sure if he truly agreed with her. While Lora walked on and Jim followed with Morph sleeping peacefully on his shoulder, they didn't notice B.E.N. was distracted by something behind the bushes.
B.E.N. peaked his head over the bushes and discovered a nest of eggs. He lifted one leg over the bushes, then the other, and walked quietly towards the eggs and examined them. There were five large white eggs with light blue spots on them huddled together in the nest.
"Hey Jim, come and see what I found!" B.E.N. shouted to his friends.
Jim and Lora rushed over to find B.E.N. hovering over a nest of eggs. His hands clapped together and his eyes wide open as he gazed at the eggs.
"Aw, aren't they just the cutest thing you've ever seen?" B.E.N. asked happily.
"B.E.N., they're eggs..." Jim gave B.E.N. a confused look. He didn't understand how an egg could be cute.
"I think I gonna take one," B.E.N. reached down to grab an egg.
"No, wait! Don't..." Lora jumped over the bushes trying to stop B.E.N. from picking the egg up. Jim and Morph (now awake) followed her.
However, it was too late, B.E.N. now had one of the large eggs in his arms and was cuddling it.
"When it hatches I'm gonna take good care of it. We'll play lots of games and watch Jim solar surf and we'll be best buddies forever!"
Suddenly, B.E.N.'s happy little moment was interrupted by the sound of loud footsteps drawing near them. The trees started to rustle and creatures that the four friends did not see while walking ran off in a panic. The four of them stood together unaware what was coming for them.
The trees were pushed aside in all directions as a large group of creatures revealed themselves to the intruders. They were over forty feet tall, their entire bodies covered with light brown and yellow fur, their eyes completely black with a small dot of blue. They had two horns twice the size of Jim sticking out of the top of their heads and fangs dripping with drool hanging out of their mouths.
"You just had to touch the egg, didn't you?" Lora gave B.E.N. a crude look.
B.E.N. every carefully put the egg back down in the nest and in return the creature gave out a loud, furious, roar. The three of them scattered into different directions; Morph followed Jim.
Lora headed into the direction of other one of the creatures and quickly stopped when she realized the creature was before her. It too gave out a furious roar and raised it's giant paw to crush Lora with. Lora quickly grabbed the sphere from her neck and hit a small button, vanishing her into small drops of water as the giant paw slammed down to stomp her.
Lora appeared high in a tree where she could see the creatures chasing her friends. The first she seen was Jim and Morph being hunted down by a fairly larger creature than the others (possibly a male) were. She quickly used the sphere to teleport her to the area where Jim and Morph were.
Meanwhile, Jim leaped over logs and huge rocks trying to outrun the creature, unfortunately he was unable too. Lora teleported herself onto a tree branch farther up of Jim's trail. She wrapped her legs around the tree branch and hung upside down with her arms hanging down ready to grab Jim when he came by.
"Jim!" Lora called as Jim and Morph made their way towards her.
Jim looked up and seen Lora hanging from the tree branch, then he realized that she was too high for him to reach. He looked ahead and seen a long log, he would have to use the log to give him an extra bust to jump and grab Lora's hand.
As Jim approached the log he used one foot to step on it and the other to help him leap into the air. He grabbed one of Lora's hands and the other hung beside him. Morph laid on Jim's shoulder as Lora pushed another button on the sphere teleporting them before the creature could take a big chop at them.
When they reappeared, they were higher in the tree. Jim easily spotted B.E.N because of his screaming. Lora looked over to find B.E.N was being chased by the mother of the egg that B.E.N had been holding (the one that roared at them).
"Stay here! I'll get B.E.N," before Jim could even say something Lora disappeared.
The creature by now had B.E.N cornered while more of the creatures slowly circled him snarling. B.E.N started to whimper and shake as the words "I'm doomed" rang in his head.
"Hey ugly!" A voice rose among the creatures' snarling and to B.E.N's surprise it was Lora coming to his rescue.
Lora swung down towards a creature's head on a vine and flung onto it's head. Another creature lunched at Lora but she managed to move out of the way in time making the creature accidentally bite the other creature's head. As the two creatures began to fight Lora made her way down the one's back but ended up falling off and hurting her arm.
As she rose to stand another creature leaped at her. Lora tucked herself into a ball and rolled underneath of the creature as it hit the ground. She quickly picked herself up and ran over to B.E.N while holding her bruised arm.
"Come on B.E.N, we're getting out of here before it gets worse!" Lora grabbed onto B.E.N while she pressed another button on the sphere teleporting as all the creatures began to fight over the loss of what would have been their supper.
Jim and Morph sat on a tree branch wondering if Lora and B.E.N made it out. Just then, Lora and B.E.N appeared from behind them. Jim turned and seen the two standing there, hardly able to keep their balance on the branch.
"You're alive!" Jim shouted with happiness, before he noticed Lora holding her arm, "Lor, you're hurt,"
"Oh, don't worry," She grinned, "It's just a burse, I'll be fine."
"You should have seen her Jim!" B.E.N shouted excitedly, "She fought off those big fluff balls like it was nothing!"
"Its actually a lot harder than it looks," Lora explained before B.E.N could make her sound like a showoff.
"Which makes me wonder," B.E.N rubbed his chin, "Why didn't you just teleport into the circle and save me, wouldn't that have been easier?"
"Yes, I could have done that," Lora explained, "but we can't take the chance of those things tracking us down for supper or at least revenge for going near their nesting grounds, so I figured I'd do something to keep them busy for a short period while we get as far away from as this place as fast as we can,"
"Seems like you've been in this situation before," Jim grinned.
"Let's just say when you've been traveling for as long I have you sometimes get yourself in those kind of situations," Lora grinned back at Jim, "and after awhile you learn from your mistakes,"
Lora started to climb down the branches, "Come on, we'd better get out of here before those beasts figure out where we are,"
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And so ends Chapter Five! ^_^
Well, I had a lovely Thanksgiving dinner, how about you, readers? I'm also very happy with the progress of this Fan Ficiton. If I manage to finish a chapter a day like I am now, I may just finish this story a lot faster than I thought!
By the way, did any one else notice how many times I used the words "large" and "creatures"? I really need to improve my vocabulary. 0.o
Now, since I'm in such a nice mood (though I am tired, because its 12:48 PM where I'm at) I'm going to give you readers a review of what to expect in Chapter Six, and maybe I'll do that from now on too. IF YOU DON'T WANT ANY SPOILERS, DO NOT READ ON!!!
Chapter Six: A Temple of Water -
The four friends discover the "temple of water" where Lora's grandfather found the sphere and they find out a bit more information about the sphere and not to mention the magic of the water on that planet.
Now it's time for some fun! ^___^
Disclaimer: I do not own Treasure Planet or the original characters from the movie. I only own Lora Stanfun, Captain Skull and his crew, the planet that Lora, Jim, Morph, and B.E.N. are trapped own along with the creatures on it, and the "Temple of Water" (which will soon be explained).
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The Sphere of Parmile Chapter Five: A Walk in the Forest
"Lor, do you even know where we're going?" Jim questioned the audacious girl leading them.
"No, why would I? I don't even know what planet we're on," Lora replied.
The four of them had been roaming deeper and deeper into the thick forest for hours, unaware what beast and monsters they may just come across. The forest was full of trees of many shapes and sizes and some had a few weird markings on them. Could they possibly mean something?
"Lor, where are taking us?" Jim asked.
"I'm not sure really," Lora answered, "but we need to find a town or something so we can find a way off this planet, I mean, this planet has got to have some kind of life form on it, right?"
Lora turned around to see him Jim would reply. Jim shrugged his shoulders not sure if he truly agreed with her. While Lora walked on and Jim followed with Morph sleeping peacefully on his shoulder, they didn't notice B.E.N. was distracted by something behind the bushes.
B.E.N. peaked his head over the bushes and discovered a nest of eggs. He lifted one leg over the bushes, then the other, and walked quietly towards the eggs and examined them. There were five large white eggs with light blue spots on them huddled together in the nest.
"Hey Jim, come and see what I found!" B.E.N. shouted to his friends.
Jim and Lora rushed over to find B.E.N. hovering over a nest of eggs. His hands clapped together and his eyes wide open as he gazed at the eggs.
"Aw, aren't they just the cutest thing you've ever seen?" B.E.N. asked happily.
"B.E.N., they're eggs..." Jim gave B.E.N. a confused look. He didn't understand how an egg could be cute.
"I think I gonna take one," B.E.N. reached down to grab an egg.
"No, wait! Don't..." Lora jumped over the bushes trying to stop B.E.N. from picking the egg up. Jim and Morph (now awake) followed her.
However, it was too late, B.E.N. now had one of the large eggs in his arms and was cuddling it.
"When it hatches I'm gonna take good care of it. We'll play lots of games and watch Jim solar surf and we'll be best buddies forever!"
Suddenly, B.E.N.'s happy little moment was interrupted by the sound of loud footsteps drawing near them. The trees started to rustle and creatures that the four friends did not see while walking ran off in a panic. The four of them stood together unaware what was coming for them.
The trees were pushed aside in all directions as a large group of creatures revealed themselves to the intruders. They were over forty feet tall, their entire bodies covered with light brown and yellow fur, their eyes completely black with a small dot of blue. They had two horns twice the size of Jim sticking out of the top of their heads and fangs dripping with drool hanging out of their mouths.
"You just had to touch the egg, didn't you?" Lora gave B.E.N. a crude look.
B.E.N. every carefully put the egg back down in the nest and in return the creature gave out a loud, furious, roar. The three of them scattered into different directions; Morph followed Jim.
Lora headed into the direction of other one of the creatures and quickly stopped when she realized the creature was before her. It too gave out a furious roar and raised it's giant paw to crush Lora with. Lora quickly grabbed the sphere from her neck and hit a small button, vanishing her into small drops of water as the giant paw slammed down to stomp her.
Lora appeared high in a tree where she could see the creatures chasing her friends. The first she seen was Jim and Morph being hunted down by a fairly larger creature than the others (possibly a male) were. She quickly used the sphere to teleport her to the area where Jim and Morph were.
Meanwhile, Jim leaped over logs and huge rocks trying to outrun the creature, unfortunately he was unable too. Lora teleported herself onto a tree branch farther up of Jim's trail. She wrapped her legs around the tree branch and hung upside down with her arms hanging down ready to grab Jim when he came by.
"Jim!" Lora called as Jim and Morph made their way towards her.
Jim looked up and seen Lora hanging from the tree branch, then he realized that she was too high for him to reach. He looked ahead and seen a long log, he would have to use the log to give him an extra bust to jump and grab Lora's hand.
As Jim approached the log he used one foot to step on it and the other to help him leap into the air. He grabbed one of Lora's hands and the other hung beside him. Morph laid on Jim's shoulder as Lora pushed another button on the sphere teleporting them before the creature could take a big chop at them.
When they reappeared, they were higher in the tree. Jim easily spotted B.E.N because of his screaming. Lora looked over to find B.E.N was being chased by the mother of the egg that B.E.N had been holding (the one that roared at them).
"Stay here! I'll get B.E.N," before Jim could even say something Lora disappeared.
The creature by now had B.E.N cornered while more of the creatures slowly circled him snarling. B.E.N started to whimper and shake as the words "I'm doomed" rang in his head.
"Hey ugly!" A voice rose among the creatures' snarling and to B.E.N's surprise it was Lora coming to his rescue.
Lora swung down towards a creature's head on a vine and flung onto it's head. Another creature lunched at Lora but she managed to move out of the way in time making the creature accidentally bite the other creature's head. As the two creatures began to fight Lora made her way down the one's back but ended up falling off and hurting her arm.
As she rose to stand another creature leaped at her. Lora tucked herself into a ball and rolled underneath of the creature as it hit the ground. She quickly picked herself up and ran over to B.E.N while holding her bruised arm.
"Come on B.E.N, we're getting out of here before it gets worse!" Lora grabbed onto B.E.N while she pressed another button on the sphere teleporting as all the creatures began to fight over the loss of what would have been their supper.
Jim and Morph sat on a tree branch wondering if Lora and B.E.N made it out. Just then, Lora and B.E.N appeared from behind them. Jim turned and seen the two standing there, hardly able to keep their balance on the branch.
"You're alive!" Jim shouted with happiness, before he noticed Lora holding her arm, "Lor, you're hurt,"
"Oh, don't worry," She grinned, "It's just a burse, I'll be fine."
"You should have seen her Jim!" B.E.N shouted excitedly, "She fought off those big fluff balls like it was nothing!"
"Its actually a lot harder than it looks," Lora explained before B.E.N could make her sound like a showoff.
"Which makes me wonder," B.E.N rubbed his chin, "Why didn't you just teleport into the circle and save me, wouldn't that have been easier?"
"Yes, I could have done that," Lora explained, "but we can't take the chance of those things tracking us down for supper or at least revenge for going near their nesting grounds, so I figured I'd do something to keep them busy for a short period while we get as far away from as this place as fast as we can,"
"Seems like you've been in this situation before," Jim grinned.
"Let's just say when you've been traveling for as long I have you sometimes get yourself in those kind of situations," Lora grinned back at Jim, "and after awhile you learn from your mistakes,"
Lora started to climb down the branches, "Come on, we'd better get out of here before those beasts figure out where we are,"
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And so ends Chapter Five! ^_^
Well, I had a lovely Thanksgiving dinner, how about you, readers? I'm also very happy with the progress of this Fan Ficiton. If I manage to finish a chapter a day like I am now, I may just finish this story a lot faster than I thought!
By the way, did any one else notice how many times I used the words "large" and "creatures"? I really need to improve my vocabulary. 0.o
Now, since I'm in such a nice mood (though I am tired, because its 12:48 PM where I'm at) I'm going to give you readers a review of what to expect in Chapter Six, and maybe I'll do that from now on too. IF YOU DON'T WANT ANY SPOILERS, DO NOT READ ON!!!
Chapter Six: A Temple of Water -
The four friends discover the "temple of water" where Lora's grandfather found the sphere and they find out a bit more information about the sphere and not to mention the magic of the water on that planet.