This is my first fan-fic so please don't bite my head off. I'm rereading, changing it from scripted formant, editing and posting it again so read it's better writing
P.S. CAPS ARE LOUD SPEAKING. OK?
Almost forgot: I don't own the Teen Titan
SECRETS
Setting: Morning in Titans' Tower's living room every one but Stars eating or reading. Star comes in with a stack of mail, its Monday so it's Star's day to get the mail. She just came into the living room; most of the other titans are either drinking or eating their breakfast.
Starfire happily, as she passes out the mail "LOOK WE RECEIVED POST! (none of the titans seemed interested, it was at latest 9:00, so everyone was sleepy after hitting the hay at 4 am after a un-pleasant run in with a other geek attack from a mob of brain-washed computer nerds, all armed with newly-build semi-nuclear weapons and currently firing them at our friends, the Titans.)
"Magazines for everyone" She as she tosses the stack of magazines onto the table, A Cybernetics Generation, Zoology for Idiots, Martial Arts Monthly, The Darkness; Monthly Poetry Publishing. ((Contest to see who can match them up)) Tilting her head in puzzlement and surprisingly finds a small letter sized envelope addressed to her "A letter for me?" She asks her self out loud as she flops onto the couch with her morning glass mustard
She opens it and looks over it, the letter its self remind you of when you first just start randomly typing keys on a computer, it was purely word scribbles, but strangely it was writing, in her native tongue, and although she understood the words, the meaning was completely over her head. "X'Hal why?" she asks as she reads it again, wanting a Katra Ka (Tamaran's April Fools day) to appear, she was stunned, it left after a few minutes, replaced by terror and fear, she ran out of the room, up to the roof and left the letter in the dust.
The Titan's were confused by this, Starfire was sad, nothing made Star sad, so after the boy trained by The World's Greatest Detective, The Batman himself, deducted it had to do with the letter, walked over to her seat and looked over the couch, although the letter meant nothing coherent for him.
"Guys I think we may have a problem solving this thing." He says as he held up the letter. Again, it looked like randomly typed letters, but the girl of mystery was about to solve them
"It's in Starfire's native tongue, it's a courser form of Luxly and Lorax, but clearly decipherable to me." Raven says as she takes the letter
Raven starts to read the letter out loud, slowly from lack of practice with this language mix "Starfire, you're too retuned to Tamaran. Blackfire has had to go away because of her crimes on the Centari Moons. You are next in line to rule, therefore, you must come back to Tamaran to start your training. Do not fight your fate, my daughter, you will be queen. You come quietly or you fight it then you and your "friends" will pay for your disobedience. -Queen."
The Titans where in shock, not sure what they should do, or even what to say next. BB, lovable, clueless BB was the first to talk.
"So Starfire's the princess, and she's leaving to go to Tamaran, so she will gat training to rule the planet. Ok, does anyone else see the problem?" he asked
Raven snaps to and responds "Yeah, Starfire is our friend and we want her here, but she needs to do what is right for her planet, and who are we to judge her culture."
"She needs to talk to someone." Robin says as he starts for the roof but Cyborg stops him by sliding in front of him to form a barrier.
"Man, to think that she has to learn how to maintain an entire planet, then try control it. Damn, she needs some solitary time to think." He says as he moves to block Robin as he tries to duck passed him
Robin giving up to reason and the facts, "Yea. I your right; and here I thought leading a team of five was hard, she has to cop with a whole planet."
I'll write more tomorrow
This is short because each "scene" is a separate chapter
Old Crappy One
SECRETS
Setting: Morning in Titans' Tower's living room every one but Stars eating or reading. Star comes in with a stack of mail.
Starfire happily, as she passes out the mail: LOOK WE RECEIVED POST! Magazines for everyone (tilting her head in puzzlement) and a letter?
Cyborg baffled: For who?
Star reads the to address.
Star puzzled: Me?
Robin confused as well: What? You never get mail!
Star tears it open and a letter falls out. Star reads it , scans it one more time , bursts into tears ,then runs to the roof. The rest of the Titans go to where she left the note. Robin scans it over twice then goes in to shock. Cyborg grab's the letter from Robin dumbstruck hands.
Cy starts to read the letter to everyone: Dear Princess Starfire,
B.B. confused: PRINCESS? Star a pri...
Raven interrupting: CONTINUE!
Cyborg:(continues) You are to retuned to Tamaran. Your sister, Blackfire, has had to abdicate her throne because of her crimes on the Sentry moons. You are next in line to rule, therefore, you must come back to Tamaran to start your training. Do not fight your fate, my dearest daughter, you will be queen. You will come quietly or you fight it then you and your "friends" will pay for your disobedience. Sincerely, your mother, the Queen.
Everyone's in shock, like Robin. Things break because Ravens upset.
Robin, slowly coming out of his shock unsure: Think I should go talk to her?
Robin starts to walk to the roof but Cyborg stops him.
Cy: Man, she needs sometime to think.
Robin: Yea. I guess your right.
See the problems, why would Star's relations write in English, also the writing is better for this.