This chapter is a bit confusing. If you can give some advice on how to make
less confusing I would really appreciate it. AGAIN CAPS ARE YELLING!
This chapter intrudes the character I created, she's a lot like me.
Disclaimer: I don't own the Teen Titans
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SECRETS
Setting: Calm morning in the lush Tamaranian courtyard. the yard sat the queen posing for a portrait. A soft noise , like crystals rubbing together, erupts in the center of the yard The queen, having a portrait done on a balcony above in a gown in different shades of pink that drapes down on her.
Tamaranian Queen, discussed, shouts down to her guards : WHAT IS THAT INFERNAL RACET!?!
Tamaranian guards rush to the source of the sound. Then start to back off as a portal begins to appear.
A whisper could be heard, if you strain your ears enough ,murmuring the deadly words : Change them to stone ,my powers, change them to stone.
Everyone, but the queen, is transformed in to stone statues as soon as the fatal words roll off of the whisper's pierced tongue. The whisper ,a thin, 15 year-old teen girl with short black hair in black and silver top , matching capris and combat boots with a black silver crystal choker, arm bands and a silver ID tattoo, shows herself to the petrified Tamaranian Queen as the queen lights up with pink starbolts (the same color as Blackfire's).
The teen, hands still glowing deep purple from realizing the power inside of her crystal, in a smug way: Hello Queen of Tamaran, I am Mia, Empress of Zerin. Like your new sculptor garden?
Queen gasping: What have you done to my people?
Mia in a bored tone: Call it a preview of what my powers can do. This power can be to your advantage, you know, if you play your cards right.
Queen quizzical: What are saying?
Mia ,in same rather-not-be-hear-tone: I can be your best friend, Moonfire, or your worst enemy it is your cho.....
The queen stares not at Mia but to her people. Mia looks to see where her stare has wandered off to. Mia realize what she has done to the heart of this royal and to herself.
Mia (in shock) murmurs: What have done!?!(she looks back to queen with eye brining with tears and guiltiness of what mistake she has just made) I am sorry but the power I unleashed will make them stay like that until I have your alliance... So do we have a deal?
Queen blankly replied: Do we have a choice? When I took my throne I swore to always take the welfare of my people before anything else. What type of alliance are we talking about, Mia? (she looks in to the sad eyes of the empress) You are forgive for not know what you did whould do.
Mia ,bursting with tears of joy that what she did was not fatal: Thank you your high-ness, thank you! I'd be happy to explain how this deal works! You will be in charge of most everything , you will just run a few things you do threw me. Does that work for you?
Queen : Yes, that's fine just what things must I run by you?
Mia: Say the matter of your heir. She will stay on earth, with her friends. I can teach the ways of ruling there, then, that way, she probably will hate it less. I will have the time for, in (looks at her bands, its also tells time,) an hour, I loose my throne.
Queen puzzled: What do you mean?
Mia in a bemused voice: My family is immortal so, to keep things fare, we take turns having the throne. My homes cultures, like yours, are vast. To explain them to you would take time I do not poses. Now we must shake hands then your home will return to normal. It probably would be best for this to remain under raps. OK?
The two royals shake hands. The courtyard begins to stir with activate, while the victims begin to wake. Mia disappears into her portal as quickly as she arrived.
~*~ This ,as I said, is confusing, Please review. -Mia out
This chapter intrudes the character I created, she's a lot like me.
Disclaimer: I don't own the Teen Titans
~*~
SECRETS
Setting: Calm morning in the lush Tamaranian courtyard. the yard sat the queen posing for a portrait. A soft noise , like crystals rubbing together, erupts in the center of the yard The queen, having a portrait done on a balcony above in a gown in different shades of pink that drapes down on her.
Tamaranian Queen, discussed, shouts down to her guards : WHAT IS THAT INFERNAL RACET!?!
Tamaranian guards rush to the source of the sound. Then start to back off as a portal begins to appear.
A whisper could be heard, if you strain your ears enough ,murmuring the deadly words : Change them to stone ,my powers, change them to stone.
Everyone, but the queen, is transformed in to stone statues as soon as the fatal words roll off of the whisper's pierced tongue. The whisper ,a thin, 15 year-old teen girl with short black hair in black and silver top , matching capris and combat boots with a black silver crystal choker, arm bands and a silver ID tattoo, shows herself to the petrified Tamaranian Queen as the queen lights up with pink starbolts (the same color as Blackfire's).
The teen, hands still glowing deep purple from realizing the power inside of her crystal, in a smug way: Hello Queen of Tamaran, I am Mia, Empress of Zerin. Like your new sculptor garden?
Queen gasping: What have you done to my people?
Mia in a bored tone: Call it a preview of what my powers can do. This power can be to your advantage, you know, if you play your cards right.
Queen quizzical: What are saying?
Mia ,in same rather-not-be-hear-tone: I can be your best friend, Moonfire, or your worst enemy it is your cho.....
The queen stares not at Mia but to her people. Mia looks to see where her stare has wandered off to. Mia realize what she has done to the heart of this royal and to herself.
Mia (in shock) murmurs: What have done!?!(she looks back to queen with eye brining with tears and guiltiness of what mistake she has just made) I am sorry but the power I unleashed will make them stay like that until I have your alliance... So do we have a deal?
Queen blankly replied: Do we have a choice? When I took my throne I swore to always take the welfare of my people before anything else. What type of alliance are we talking about, Mia? (she looks in to the sad eyes of the empress) You are forgive for not know what you did whould do.
Mia ,bursting with tears of joy that what she did was not fatal: Thank you your high-ness, thank you! I'd be happy to explain how this deal works! You will be in charge of most everything , you will just run a few things you do threw me. Does that work for you?
Queen : Yes, that's fine just what things must I run by you?
Mia: Say the matter of your heir. She will stay on earth, with her friends. I can teach the ways of ruling there, then, that way, she probably will hate it less. I will have the time for, in (looks at her bands, its also tells time,) an hour, I loose my throne.
Queen puzzled: What do you mean?
Mia in a bemused voice: My family is immortal so, to keep things fare, we take turns having the throne. My homes cultures, like yours, are vast. To explain them to you would take time I do not poses. Now we must shake hands then your home will return to normal. It probably would be best for this to remain under raps. OK?
The two royals shake hands. The courtyard begins to stir with activate, while the victims begin to wake. Mia disappears into her portal as quickly as she arrived.
~*~ This ,as I said, is confusing, Please review. -Mia out