This is my first poem so I'm expecting lots of reviews mostly constructed criticism. This takes place after Mira no Gohan dies and is in his POV. Hope you like it ^-^ Oh and please check out my other fanfics.

How long has it been?
....13 years
13 years since I saw my friends die
13 years since you died.... and left me alone
13 years of hell

I fought
I fought alone against the two androids
All I kept thinking about was you
Why did you go?
Why did you leave me?
Your supposed to protect me
Somehow I went on
...But I've changed
I'm no longer your innocent little son
The years of death and fighting have made me cold

I no longer have a soul
That died with you
And now I've failed
My blood stains the earth
Its crimson color mixes with the harsh rain beating down on my limp body
After all these years, I died
No,..... I died when you left

I'm at King Yemmas now awaiting my fate
I see you rush in with shock
Our eyes meet
Nothing is said
King Yemma decides for me to be in heaven
Strange it doesn't feel like heaven
More like the empty void in my heart

You rush over giving me a hug
"I've failed." I mutter ashamed
"No Gohan" you reply
"Its not your fault.
You fought longer than imagined anyone could.
I'm proud of you son"
You embrace me in another hug as I stand speechless
A warm feeling fills my heart
A feel like my chi and my soul are returning
How long has it been?