Disclaimer: I still don't own Yu Yu Hakusho, no matter how much I try to
bribe Yoshihiro Togashi into changing the copyright over to me but
anyway...(I'm just kidding, don't sue me for that.) As I said before, I
don't own Yu Yu Hakusho and I never will. They belong to Yoshihiro Togashi
and Studio Pierrot and all those other wonderful people who brought Yu Yu
Hakusho into this world and letting us fanfic writers play with them.
Notes: Hiei's a bit meaner. I tried ^^() and I warn you now. I'm really, really, really, really, really, really, really. *ten minutes later* . really, really, really, really, really. *ten minutes after that* .really, really, really bad at battle scenes. I tend to mess them up really, really, really, really. you get the point. badly so. don't put the battle scenes as a reference to the whole story's rating please. Yaoi! Don't like it, don't read this. Arigato for the "2" reviews I got for the 1st chapter. I hope to get more by the time I get this published.
Chapter 3: Capricorn, the Goat
Shinzoku had one of his S-plus class demons leave a letter for Hiei at Kurama's desk, hoping that he would come and try to visit Kurama's house to find him. It didn't work.
"Why doesn't that stupid fire demon come out of his stupid hiding place?" Shinzoku pondered. He was still looking for Hiei, four days after he had kidnapped Kurama. He was thinking that Hiei would get worried about Kurama but obviously Kurama had gotten to Hiei's head and convinced him not to come, no matter how long it was. He decided to research more into Hiei's life and found out that he worked for the little brat, Koenma, as a Spirit Detective. "Perfect. I'll just send a nice demon for them to chase after. Hiei cannot deny his responsibility as a Spirit Detective."
"Capricorn, go play with them. Bring the fire koorime back to me. alive."
A demon with deep blue skin and white hair climbed out of the darkness. It had horns like a goat and a long white beard.
"As you wish, master." Capricorn disappeared and started wreaking havoc in the Makai. He was getting close to a barrier and felt a weird sense in that area.
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Koenma was watching all of this destruction from his T.V in the Reikai. The fact that the demon could actually sense the barrier wall frightened Koenma. If that demon found a way to the Ningenkai, it would be a disaster. He activated the Communication Mirror and summoned all of the people from the Urameshi team.
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Beep! Beep! Beep!
Hiei was startled by the loud beeping sound coming from his pocket. He dug out the Communication Mirror he had in his pocket and opened it. Koenma's face was in the small screen and Hiei spoke into it.
"What do you want?" he growled.
"Hiei, a demon from the Makai is extremely close to a barrier. Come to the Reikai as fast as you can."
"Why?" he protested. "A stupid demon can't sense a barrier wall, much less break through it."
"That's the problem. This demon seems to be able to sense the barrier and is trying to destroy it to get to the Ningenkai. It seems to be very powerful."
Hiei gasped. He closed the Communication Mirror and flitted away to the Reikai. "Kurama, you better be okay."
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Hiei was the first one there and he looked at the picture Koenma had on the screen. The demon was really close to a barrier wall and seemed to know it. He kept standing there as if something was there but he couldn't see anything. He started to slice the air with his spear and was getting extremely close to the center of the barrier wall. If he was able to break down at least a part of it, the Ningenkai would be in deep trouble. Hiei decided that he would go first and hold off the demon until the rest of the team got there. Just as Hiei was going to go through the barrier wall, Yusuke and Kuwabara came rushing through the doors.
"Sorry. we're." Yusuke started.
".Late." Kuwabara finished for him.
"Hn. You're always late you oaf."
"What?! I'm gonna get you for that!" Kuwabara yelled and lunged for Hiei. But Hiei stepped aside and Kuwabara fell through the barrier wall.
"Hey, Koenma, what did you want us here for anyway?" Yusuke asked.
"There's a demon really close to one of the barrier walls and he seems to be able to sense that it's there. Your job is to get rid of him before he breaks through the wall's force field."
"Yeah, without getting killed in the process," Yusuke said ignorantly.
"Exactly. But if you do get killed I'll plan your funeral. Just save the Ningenkai!"
"Right ."
All of a sudden Kuwabara's head popped out from the barrier wall. "Are you guys coming or what?" he asked annoyed.
"All right, all right. We're coming." Yusuke ran for the barrier wall and disappeared through it.
"Great, now I'm stuck with the two idiots without Kurama to knock some sense into their tiny ningen heads. This is going to be a long mission," Hiei thought as he walked through the barrier wall.
They landed about a mile away from where the demon was. Hiei used his Jagan and found the demon. Then he flitted through the trees leaving Yusuke and Kuwabara in the small clearing of the forest they had landed in.
"Hey shorty! Wait for us!" Kuwabara yelled, running after Hiei like a maniac.
"Hiei! Slow down! We won't know where the demon is unless you slow down." Yuusuke called after him
Hiei didn't listen to them. He just kept flitting through the trees and Yusuke and Kuwabara had to run beyond their limits to catch up to him.
When the finally did catch up to him, Hiei had stopped in a small clearing of the forest a couple yards away from the blue demon slicing at the air. He flitted away into a tree so that the demon couldn't see him.
"Hey! Shrimp! Where are you?"
The demon turned around to face Kuwabara and Yusuke, who were running into the clearing, breathing hard. Kuwabara stopped short when he saw the blue demon and brought out his Spirit Sword.
"Who are you?" he asked the demon. ".And who sent you?"
The demon laughed at the pathetic human standing in front of him.
"Stupid ningen." He looked at Kuwabara and then at his Spirit sword. "So what if you can make your weak Spirit energy into a sword? It won't be enough to defeat me. I am the mighty Capricorn. I will blow you away with my own breath."
"Yeah right. You talk just like Byakko, but right now he's dead, thanks to me, Kazuma Kuwabara!"
"Don't give yourself credit," Hiei said jumping from the tree. "You didn't even defeat Byakko, Seiriyu finished him off for you. And even then. I beat Seiriyu. So you really did nothing."
"Why you little."
"Kuwabara!" Yusuke interrupted. "Save it for the demon okay?" (Sorry I may be a little off track. Like I said in my first chapter. I make my friend "tape" every episode on T.V. Short translation: I don't have cable. And it's not from the manga. ()
"HAHAHAHA!!! You humans are so stupid. You'll never be able to defeat me. Breath of Snow!"
Capricorn opened his mouth and blew. A blizzard came out of his mouth and spread out freezing everything in its path. Hiei jumped out of the way, and Yusuke pushed the startled Kuwabara out of the blizzard's path.
"That was close" Yusuke said.
"Yeah, thanks Urameshi. You saved me back there." Kuwabara got up from the ground, which was now covered with snow.
"Baka. He saves you in every single case." Hiei flickered down from the tree he was standing on. "Let me handle this one."
"Hey! Shrimp! Come back here. You want a piece of me?"
Hiei ignored him and walked out in front of Capricorn, staring into his cold blue eyes with his fiery red ones.
"Perfect. You just made my job a whole lot easier."
"Hn. Don't count on it."
"Breath of Snow!"
Hiei jumped out of the way just in time, and the ground he was standing on turned into ice.
"Ice Chain!"
A chain of ice flew from the demons hand and flew towards Hiei. It was going straight at him and he jumped away from the chain. However the chain looped around and started to follow Hiei wherever he went. The chain managed to grab a hold of his leg and pulled him towards Capricorn.
"Ha! You're not so tough now. Breath of Snow!"
He blew his deadly ice breath on Hiei and he started to run away. But he couldn't because his leg was still chained up in the demon's ice chain. Then it hit him. Ice! Hiei transferred his Youki to his leg and started to melt the chain. It was strong, made out of over seventy layers of firm ice, frozen for many, many years. The demon's ice breath reached Hiei and started to freeze him from the feet and up.
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"Hiei!" Kurama screamed. He woke up. He had a terrible dream. He dreamed that Hiei was being frozen to death by a blue demon, a pawn of Shinzoku's.
"Shinzoku!" he yelled. "Shinzoku! Get in here!"
Shinzoku walked in and asked, "Have you decided to tell me where the Medallion is?"
"What have you done to Hiei?" Kurama demanded, not bothering to answer Shinzoku's question.
"I haven't done anything. My pawn has. Capricorn is freezing your little Hiei to death while he squirms and screams in agony."
Kurama started to laugh under his breath, but Shinzoku heard it.
"Why do you always find pain so funny? Your little Hiei's in pain and you laugh?"
"Shinzoku, even with all the 'research' you failed to remember that Hiei is a 'fire' demon. Ice will not be the substance to contain him."
This time it was Shinzoku who laughed. Kurama looked at him strangely, wondering what he was doing to Hiei.
Shinzoku started to speak. "Hiei may be a fire demon, and I know that thank you very much. However, it should take him a while to get out of the strong ice my solider Capricorn has. His chains are made out of Makai water from a secret lake. When they freeze and are extra strong. When they are not used, they continue to expand slowly and they gain more and more layers, making them very difficult to melt. Capricorn isn't stupid. He'll use his 'breath of snow' while Hiei is stuck in his chains and freeze your fire demon from the legs up to the head. However, he's still a fire demon so he will be able to melt the ice from the inside. But it should take him long enough for Capricorn to bring him here and then. well, only I know the rest of that sentence."
Kurama glared at Shinzoku and hated him with all his might. He turned around and started to sit back onto his cell floor when Shinzoku started to speak again.
"By the way. To make this even more painful for you, I got this small screen installed just for you; only 20 Makai gems. They weren't big gems either." Shinzoku laughed. "Now you're able to see every little bit of pain your 'friend' goes through."
A small screen popped up on the back wall of Kurama's cell. It was blurry and then it came into focus. Kurama could see that what Shinzoku had said was coming true. He saw Hiei's foot caught in a chain, and Hiei's body already halfway frozen. He saw Hiei's look of determination, trying to get the ice to melt, and not succeeding.
"Enjoy!" Shinzoku laughed as he started to leave the room.
Kurama turned around to face him, but he was already gone. When he turned back to the screen he saw that the ice was almost up to Hiei's face. It went past his neck, up his chin, over his mouth, over his nose. he now couldn't breathe.
"HIEI!!!!" Kurama yelled as tears started to stream down his face. He looked up to the screen once more to see Hiei, the ice sculpture and Hiei's gleaming red eyes, start to flicker and loose their brightness. Kurama collapsed on the cell floor, overcome with grief, and crying until his eyes hurt and were red and puffy. He lay there, not ever looking back up to the screen to see what was happening.
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HAHAHAHAHA!! This is one of my worst cliffhanger endings yet. None of you people are giving me reviews ( Mean people. Am I that bad a writer? If I am tell me and I'll stop and no one will ever find out what happens. I'm just kidding. I'll write more as soon as I get more reviews. More than two this time please. I feel bad. Now I'm hurting Hiei-chan, and Kurama- chan at the same time. I'm such a bad person sniff
Hiei: You got that right. What's the big idea, defeating me with ice?
Me: You don't know the rest of the story, so don't go jumping to conclusions.
Kurama: Why are you making my koibito suffer?
Me: It helps the story.
Kurama: Oh...then why are you making me suffer?
Me: It makes it better *if* I put you two back together.
Kurama: *If* you put us back together? What's that supposed to mean?
Me: You'll find out.
Hiei: She's probably going to make me get defeated by ice. How humiliating.
Me: ^^ look for my next chapter! (
Notes: Hiei's a bit meaner. I tried ^^() and I warn you now. I'm really, really, really, really, really, really, really. *ten minutes later* . really, really, really, really, really. *ten minutes after that* .really, really, really bad at battle scenes. I tend to mess them up really, really, really, really. you get the point. badly so. don't put the battle scenes as a reference to the whole story's rating please. Yaoi! Don't like it, don't read this. Arigato for the "2" reviews I got for the 1st chapter. I hope to get more by the time I get this published.
Chapter 3: Capricorn, the Goat
Shinzoku had one of his S-plus class demons leave a letter for Hiei at Kurama's desk, hoping that he would come and try to visit Kurama's house to find him. It didn't work.
"Why doesn't that stupid fire demon come out of his stupid hiding place?" Shinzoku pondered. He was still looking for Hiei, four days after he had kidnapped Kurama. He was thinking that Hiei would get worried about Kurama but obviously Kurama had gotten to Hiei's head and convinced him not to come, no matter how long it was. He decided to research more into Hiei's life and found out that he worked for the little brat, Koenma, as a Spirit Detective. "Perfect. I'll just send a nice demon for them to chase after. Hiei cannot deny his responsibility as a Spirit Detective."
"Capricorn, go play with them. Bring the fire koorime back to me. alive."
A demon with deep blue skin and white hair climbed out of the darkness. It had horns like a goat and a long white beard.
"As you wish, master." Capricorn disappeared and started wreaking havoc in the Makai. He was getting close to a barrier and felt a weird sense in that area.
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Koenma was watching all of this destruction from his T.V in the Reikai. The fact that the demon could actually sense the barrier wall frightened Koenma. If that demon found a way to the Ningenkai, it would be a disaster. He activated the Communication Mirror and summoned all of the people from the Urameshi team.
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Beep! Beep! Beep!
Hiei was startled by the loud beeping sound coming from his pocket. He dug out the Communication Mirror he had in his pocket and opened it. Koenma's face was in the small screen and Hiei spoke into it.
"What do you want?" he growled.
"Hiei, a demon from the Makai is extremely close to a barrier. Come to the Reikai as fast as you can."
"Why?" he protested. "A stupid demon can't sense a barrier wall, much less break through it."
"That's the problem. This demon seems to be able to sense the barrier and is trying to destroy it to get to the Ningenkai. It seems to be very powerful."
Hiei gasped. He closed the Communication Mirror and flitted away to the Reikai. "Kurama, you better be okay."
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Hiei was the first one there and he looked at the picture Koenma had on the screen. The demon was really close to a barrier wall and seemed to know it. He kept standing there as if something was there but he couldn't see anything. He started to slice the air with his spear and was getting extremely close to the center of the barrier wall. If he was able to break down at least a part of it, the Ningenkai would be in deep trouble. Hiei decided that he would go first and hold off the demon until the rest of the team got there. Just as Hiei was going to go through the barrier wall, Yusuke and Kuwabara came rushing through the doors.
"Sorry. we're." Yusuke started.
".Late." Kuwabara finished for him.
"Hn. You're always late you oaf."
"What?! I'm gonna get you for that!" Kuwabara yelled and lunged for Hiei. But Hiei stepped aside and Kuwabara fell through the barrier wall.
"Hey, Koenma, what did you want us here for anyway?" Yusuke asked.
"There's a demon really close to one of the barrier walls and he seems to be able to sense that it's there. Your job is to get rid of him before he breaks through the wall's force field."
"Yeah, without getting killed in the process," Yusuke said ignorantly.
"Exactly. But if you do get killed I'll plan your funeral. Just save the Ningenkai!"
"Right ."
All of a sudden Kuwabara's head popped out from the barrier wall. "Are you guys coming or what?" he asked annoyed.
"All right, all right. We're coming." Yusuke ran for the barrier wall and disappeared through it.
"Great, now I'm stuck with the two idiots without Kurama to knock some sense into their tiny ningen heads. This is going to be a long mission," Hiei thought as he walked through the barrier wall.
They landed about a mile away from where the demon was. Hiei used his Jagan and found the demon. Then he flitted through the trees leaving Yusuke and Kuwabara in the small clearing of the forest they had landed in.
"Hey shorty! Wait for us!" Kuwabara yelled, running after Hiei like a maniac.
"Hiei! Slow down! We won't know where the demon is unless you slow down." Yuusuke called after him
Hiei didn't listen to them. He just kept flitting through the trees and Yusuke and Kuwabara had to run beyond their limits to catch up to him.
When the finally did catch up to him, Hiei had stopped in a small clearing of the forest a couple yards away from the blue demon slicing at the air. He flitted away into a tree so that the demon couldn't see him.
"Hey! Shrimp! Where are you?"
The demon turned around to face Kuwabara and Yusuke, who were running into the clearing, breathing hard. Kuwabara stopped short when he saw the blue demon and brought out his Spirit Sword.
"Who are you?" he asked the demon. ".And who sent you?"
The demon laughed at the pathetic human standing in front of him.
"Stupid ningen." He looked at Kuwabara and then at his Spirit sword. "So what if you can make your weak Spirit energy into a sword? It won't be enough to defeat me. I am the mighty Capricorn. I will blow you away with my own breath."
"Yeah right. You talk just like Byakko, but right now he's dead, thanks to me, Kazuma Kuwabara!"
"Don't give yourself credit," Hiei said jumping from the tree. "You didn't even defeat Byakko, Seiriyu finished him off for you. And even then. I beat Seiriyu. So you really did nothing."
"Why you little."
"Kuwabara!" Yusuke interrupted. "Save it for the demon okay?" (Sorry I may be a little off track. Like I said in my first chapter. I make my friend "tape" every episode on T.V. Short translation: I don't have cable. And it's not from the manga. ()
"HAHAHAHA!!! You humans are so stupid. You'll never be able to defeat me. Breath of Snow!"
Capricorn opened his mouth and blew. A blizzard came out of his mouth and spread out freezing everything in its path. Hiei jumped out of the way, and Yusuke pushed the startled Kuwabara out of the blizzard's path.
"That was close" Yusuke said.
"Yeah, thanks Urameshi. You saved me back there." Kuwabara got up from the ground, which was now covered with snow.
"Baka. He saves you in every single case." Hiei flickered down from the tree he was standing on. "Let me handle this one."
"Hey! Shrimp! Come back here. You want a piece of me?"
Hiei ignored him and walked out in front of Capricorn, staring into his cold blue eyes with his fiery red ones.
"Perfect. You just made my job a whole lot easier."
"Hn. Don't count on it."
"Breath of Snow!"
Hiei jumped out of the way just in time, and the ground he was standing on turned into ice.
"Ice Chain!"
A chain of ice flew from the demons hand and flew towards Hiei. It was going straight at him and he jumped away from the chain. However the chain looped around and started to follow Hiei wherever he went. The chain managed to grab a hold of his leg and pulled him towards Capricorn.
"Ha! You're not so tough now. Breath of Snow!"
He blew his deadly ice breath on Hiei and he started to run away. But he couldn't because his leg was still chained up in the demon's ice chain. Then it hit him. Ice! Hiei transferred his Youki to his leg and started to melt the chain. It was strong, made out of over seventy layers of firm ice, frozen for many, many years. The demon's ice breath reached Hiei and started to freeze him from the feet and up.
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"Hiei!" Kurama screamed. He woke up. He had a terrible dream. He dreamed that Hiei was being frozen to death by a blue demon, a pawn of Shinzoku's.
"Shinzoku!" he yelled. "Shinzoku! Get in here!"
Shinzoku walked in and asked, "Have you decided to tell me where the Medallion is?"
"What have you done to Hiei?" Kurama demanded, not bothering to answer Shinzoku's question.
"I haven't done anything. My pawn has. Capricorn is freezing your little Hiei to death while he squirms and screams in agony."
Kurama started to laugh under his breath, but Shinzoku heard it.
"Why do you always find pain so funny? Your little Hiei's in pain and you laugh?"
"Shinzoku, even with all the 'research' you failed to remember that Hiei is a 'fire' demon. Ice will not be the substance to contain him."
This time it was Shinzoku who laughed. Kurama looked at him strangely, wondering what he was doing to Hiei.
Shinzoku started to speak. "Hiei may be a fire demon, and I know that thank you very much. However, it should take him a while to get out of the strong ice my solider Capricorn has. His chains are made out of Makai water from a secret lake. When they freeze and are extra strong. When they are not used, they continue to expand slowly and they gain more and more layers, making them very difficult to melt. Capricorn isn't stupid. He'll use his 'breath of snow' while Hiei is stuck in his chains and freeze your fire demon from the legs up to the head. However, he's still a fire demon so he will be able to melt the ice from the inside. But it should take him long enough for Capricorn to bring him here and then. well, only I know the rest of that sentence."
Kurama glared at Shinzoku and hated him with all his might. He turned around and started to sit back onto his cell floor when Shinzoku started to speak again.
"By the way. To make this even more painful for you, I got this small screen installed just for you; only 20 Makai gems. They weren't big gems either." Shinzoku laughed. "Now you're able to see every little bit of pain your 'friend' goes through."
A small screen popped up on the back wall of Kurama's cell. It was blurry and then it came into focus. Kurama could see that what Shinzoku had said was coming true. He saw Hiei's foot caught in a chain, and Hiei's body already halfway frozen. He saw Hiei's look of determination, trying to get the ice to melt, and not succeeding.
"Enjoy!" Shinzoku laughed as he started to leave the room.
Kurama turned around to face him, but he was already gone. When he turned back to the screen he saw that the ice was almost up to Hiei's face. It went past his neck, up his chin, over his mouth, over his nose. he now couldn't breathe.
"HIEI!!!!" Kurama yelled as tears started to stream down his face. He looked up to the screen once more to see Hiei, the ice sculpture and Hiei's gleaming red eyes, start to flicker and loose their brightness. Kurama collapsed on the cell floor, overcome with grief, and crying until his eyes hurt and were red and puffy. He lay there, not ever looking back up to the screen to see what was happening.
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HAHAHAHAHA!! This is one of my worst cliffhanger endings yet. None of you people are giving me reviews ( Mean people. Am I that bad a writer? If I am tell me and I'll stop and no one will ever find out what happens. I'm just kidding. I'll write more as soon as I get more reviews. More than two this time please. I feel bad. Now I'm hurting Hiei-chan, and Kurama- chan at the same time. I'm such a bad person sniff
Hiei: You got that right. What's the big idea, defeating me with ice?
Me: You don't know the rest of the story, so don't go jumping to conclusions.
Kurama: Why are you making my koibito suffer?
Me: It helps the story.
Kurama: Oh...then why are you making me suffer?
Me: It makes it better *if* I put you two back together.
Kurama: *If* you put us back together? What's that supposed to mean?
Me: You'll find out.
Hiei: She's probably going to make me get defeated by ice. How humiliating.
Me: ^^ look for my next chapter! (