A History Retold
By: Van1
Chapter 1: The way I lived!
Hello, my name is Kunte. I come from the Planet called Zi. I was 12 years old when this happened and I am about to tell you how I became the greatest zoid pilot known on the planet. This chapter tells you how I lived and when I first got my zoid so pay attention you might actually learn something! We begin now. When I was 12 years old me and my family lived somewhere in a town in the middle of the dessert. Our house was made of straw and mud. We slept on beds and had anything a normal house would have. In my family there lived me my mom and dad. I had two pain in the neck sisters one was off having a fun life as a zoid pilot... the other still at home loved to tick me off! I had an adult friend (my only friend) his name was Jack and he was a darned good zoid pilot. One day (which is where my story begins) my mom and dad had both died of the house burning down. I was off to live with Jack and my sister was off to live with my other sister. (Thank god for that!) It was sad at the funeral but I was a strong boy and didn't cry. After the funeral every day after was fine and dandy just me and Jack.
Two years after the death of my parents. (I was 14 now.) Jack decided he was going to show me how to pilot a zoid and he even said if I did well he would get me a zoid of my own! So we went off to a large field of his where his Liger Zero was. The cockpit had opened and he got in. I just stood there and looked at it. He looked at me and said, "aren't you cumin'?" I said, "of course I am." And I got in as the cockpit was closing. I started thinking of my older sister and how she was a very talented zoid pilot. Jack had then looked at me and said, "Now put your hands on these here controls." I did as he said. "Now steer." I didn't know how good I was but I got the hang of it right off the bat. I felt good in that zoid. Now Jack had a grin on his face. "What you smiling at?" I asked. He said, "You're a good pilot, but can you use the weapons?" I responded, "I don't know show me the controls I could probably do it." Jack showed him what he needed to do to fire the under belly gun and how to aim it. A target had come out of no where. Jack said, "Break the following targets as you see on your screen. Do it. NOW!" I aimed the gun and started firing. I didn't miss a shot! I knew then at that point that I could do anything. Jack looked down at me again and said, "Wow your better then me! Let's see if you can master this here Liger's ultimate weapon." "Alright," I responded, "Show me how and I'll do it!" So Jack showed him how to use the Strike Laser Claw attack. "Now," Jack said, "Chop down the following trees on your screen that you see. If you don't miss a single one I'll get you a zoid of your choice this very day!" "Alright!" I said, "Let's do this." "STRIKE LASER CLAW!!!" The Liger jumped up his right claw glowing yellow and swished down. All the trees were down in a single blow. "You passed," Jack said, "Let's go get you a zoid!" The liger's cockpit opened. We got out and the cockpit closed. We walked to the truck and drove to town.
The trucked pulled up to a zoid shop and we went in. Jack ringed the bell at the front desk and a clerk came to the desk. "May a help you?" The clerk asked. Jack said, "Yes Sir Mr. Dungo we came to get Kunte here a zoid. I tested him with mine and he is perfect!" The clerk looked at me and said, "So young Master Kunte here for a zoid eh?" "Yes sir," I responded. The clerked asked "and who will be paying?" Jack responded, "Me, and he is to choose any zoid he wants no matter the cost." "Alright, Master Kunte please follow me. Jack, come if you wish," said the clerk. They both followed the clerk into the back room where there were millions of zoids. Kunte walked around looking at all the zoids. He finally saw the one he wanted. It looked like his sisters zoid but was better. It was called a Raynos and it was equipped already with all the weapons it should have and could carry. He said, "Jack, this is the one I want. I want this Raynos right here." "Ok," Jack said. "How much does it cost Mr. Dungo?" The clerk said, "Twenty million and ten cents plus tax." "Alright," Jack said. "We'll take it." Mr. Dungo handed Kunte and electronic registration form and said, "Fill this out. It registers you as a zoid battle and makes you able to use this zoid in zoid battles and in out. You are not allowed to use it as a weapon to harm anything you want understand?" Kunte said, "Yes." He filled out the form completely. Mr. Dungo took the form looked it over and walked towards the Raynos. He opened its cockpit and slipped the form in the key slot where it could never be removed. The zoid awoke and Mr. Dungo came back to Jack and Kunte. Mr. Dungo said, "Hop and in and take it to the front. Don't hit any cars and wait for Jack outside." He opened the back door wide enough so the Raynos could leave. Raynos moved its head to Kunte. Kunte got in the cockpit as it closed. He grabbed the controls and had Raynos walk to the front. Jack and Mr. Dungo came out front. The cockpit opened. Jack paid Mr. Dungo and turned to Kunte and said, "Fly it home and get inside to take a shore you'll need one to get ready to train." Kunte said, "Alright, See you when you get there." The cockpit closed. Kunte again grabbed the controls and Raynos spread its wings, jumped from the ground, and took flight.
By: Van1
Chapter 1: The way I lived!
Hello, my name is Kunte. I come from the Planet called Zi. I was 12 years old when this happened and I am about to tell you how I became the greatest zoid pilot known on the planet. This chapter tells you how I lived and when I first got my zoid so pay attention you might actually learn something! We begin now. When I was 12 years old me and my family lived somewhere in a town in the middle of the dessert. Our house was made of straw and mud. We slept on beds and had anything a normal house would have. In my family there lived me my mom and dad. I had two pain in the neck sisters one was off having a fun life as a zoid pilot... the other still at home loved to tick me off! I had an adult friend (my only friend) his name was Jack and he was a darned good zoid pilot. One day (which is where my story begins) my mom and dad had both died of the house burning down. I was off to live with Jack and my sister was off to live with my other sister. (Thank god for that!) It was sad at the funeral but I was a strong boy and didn't cry. After the funeral every day after was fine and dandy just me and Jack.
Two years after the death of my parents. (I was 14 now.) Jack decided he was going to show me how to pilot a zoid and he even said if I did well he would get me a zoid of my own! So we went off to a large field of his where his Liger Zero was. The cockpit had opened and he got in. I just stood there and looked at it. He looked at me and said, "aren't you cumin'?" I said, "of course I am." And I got in as the cockpit was closing. I started thinking of my older sister and how she was a very talented zoid pilot. Jack had then looked at me and said, "Now put your hands on these here controls." I did as he said. "Now steer." I didn't know how good I was but I got the hang of it right off the bat. I felt good in that zoid. Now Jack had a grin on his face. "What you smiling at?" I asked. He said, "You're a good pilot, but can you use the weapons?" I responded, "I don't know show me the controls I could probably do it." Jack showed him what he needed to do to fire the under belly gun and how to aim it. A target had come out of no where. Jack said, "Break the following targets as you see on your screen. Do it. NOW!" I aimed the gun and started firing. I didn't miss a shot! I knew then at that point that I could do anything. Jack looked down at me again and said, "Wow your better then me! Let's see if you can master this here Liger's ultimate weapon." "Alright," I responded, "Show me how and I'll do it!" So Jack showed him how to use the Strike Laser Claw attack. "Now," Jack said, "Chop down the following trees on your screen that you see. If you don't miss a single one I'll get you a zoid of your choice this very day!" "Alright!" I said, "Let's do this." "STRIKE LASER CLAW!!!" The Liger jumped up his right claw glowing yellow and swished down. All the trees were down in a single blow. "You passed," Jack said, "Let's go get you a zoid!" The liger's cockpit opened. We got out and the cockpit closed. We walked to the truck and drove to town.
The trucked pulled up to a zoid shop and we went in. Jack ringed the bell at the front desk and a clerk came to the desk. "May a help you?" The clerk asked. Jack said, "Yes Sir Mr. Dungo we came to get Kunte here a zoid. I tested him with mine and he is perfect!" The clerk looked at me and said, "So young Master Kunte here for a zoid eh?" "Yes sir," I responded. The clerked asked "and who will be paying?" Jack responded, "Me, and he is to choose any zoid he wants no matter the cost." "Alright, Master Kunte please follow me. Jack, come if you wish," said the clerk. They both followed the clerk into the back room where there were millions of zoids. Kunte walked around looking at all the zoids. He finally saw the one he wanted. It looked like his sisters zoid but was better. It was called a Raynos and it was equipped already with all the weapons it should have and could carry. He said, "Jack, this is the one I want. I want this Raynos right here." "Ok," Jack said. "How much does it cost Mr. Dungo?" The clerk said, "Twenty million and ten cents plus tax." "Alright," Jack said. "We'll take it." Mr. Dungo handed Kunte and electronic registration form and said, "Fill this out. It registers you as a zoid battle and makes you able to use this zoid in zoid battles and in out. You are not allowed to use it as a weapon to harm anything you want understand?" Kunte said, "Yes." He filled out the form completely. Mr. Dungo took the form looked it over and walked towards the Raynos. He opened its cockpit and slipped the form in the key slot where it could never be removed. The zoid awoke and Mr. Dungo came back to Jack and Kunte. Mr. Dungo said, "Hop and in and take it to the front. Don't hit any cars and wait for Jack outside." He opened the back door wide enough so the Raynos could leave. Raynos moved its head to Kunte. Kunte got in the cockpit as it closed. He grabbed the controls and had Raynos walk to the front. Jack and Mr. Dungo came out front. The cockpit opened. Jack paid Mr. Dungo and turned to Kunte and said, "Fly it home and get inside to take a shore you'll need one to get ready to train." Kunte said, "Alright, See you when you get there." The cockpit closed. Kunte again grabbed the controls and Raynos spread its wings, jumped from the ground, and took flight.