JELOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (What wants to mean Hello,
pronounced in Spanish)
I can't believe this is the last chapter of this fic.
I've actually loved writing it. My first English fanfic is ended!
I only hope you've liked reading it.
And. sorry (again) for all those mistakes you've read, but as I've said so many times, I'm from Spain, and I've been learning English for years, and I'm still doing. I swear I've done it as well as I can.
Recess and all its characters aren't mine. Hope you like this chapter (the last one)
IT'S TOO LATE
Chapter 9: Our second experiment
A week after the incident, TJ and Vince were again at the tallest one's house. They had been together all that time, sometimes with Gus and Mikey, who also knew what had happened, and what was going on. But neither TJ or Vince had been any moment with Spinelli or Gretchen. A hard week.
"TJ... I know you used to have good plans, but this one is a bit." Vince was sat at his bed, looking how TJ walked all round his friend's room.
"A bit what, Vince?"
"Impossible"
"Why? I've got all the telephones here, and the ones who lives the furthest won't have any problem coming." He looked totally secure of himself, and none could make him doubt.
"And what if they have? Besides, you don't need all people"
"Of course I do"
"You can't remember where they all were situated"
"I remember every person and their place"
"You've never had so good memory"
"I've got memory for what I want to"
"......"
"What? Vince, If you don't want to help me, don't do it. Nobody's forcing you"
"It's.It's only I don't think this 'thing' is going to work. I had never seen Spinelli so angry with anyone in my entire life. And I've known her for many years"
"The same years as me. And?"
"She doesn't like romantic scenes"
"This isn't a romantic scene. It's only a memory"
"You know I'm going to help you, but I can't guarantee you all's going to finish well"
"Thanks Vince"
The pair of boys had never had many serious conversations. But in this last week you hadn't been able to listen a joke being with them.
**********
"What are you talking about?" Spinelli thought Mikey and Gus were greats boys, but sometimes they had strange ideas.
"We only want to walk a bit with you" answered Mikey, who was, as Gus, at the entrance of Spinelli's house.
"What's wrong with that? We're pals, aren't we?" Gus tried to look offended.
"Now?" She was in a bad humor, and she usually got bored with their conversations. They two were her friends, but a bit mad too.
"Yes" it was only a voice, because they said it at the same time.
"Ohuuuu.Okey, let's go, but only half an hour"
When they were starting to walk, they could hear some voice. Gretchen was running and shouting.
"What the hell.???" said Spinelli. But Gus and Mikey didn't looked surprised, but worried. They looked at each other, and Mikey got the girl's hand, and started walking very fast.
"Heyyy!!!!!! Gretchen's coming"
"She'll come with us in a minute, but I think Gus has to tell her something in private"
"But." Spinelli would have liked to tell something more, but when she realized it, she was far from the scene.
*** "Why all from your kind are so jerk?" When Gretchen arrived Gus was the only one waiting for her.
"What kind?" asked the blond boy.
"Boys. Someone had told me what you're doing. and it's the most stupid thing I've ever heard"
"It's not" said Gus smiling "I know you like the plan, you're romantic, why do you say it's stupid?"
"I. I. Gus, Spinelli will hate TJ. I don't know if she'll like it, but it's too risky"
"You like it"
"Yes, I do. But what is important here is if she'll like it, not me"
"She'll do. Look the hour! It's starting in some minutes"
"It's not a circus performance" said Gretchen offended.
"I know, but I prefer watching it better than any other performance"
"I agree"
And both of them started running. Gretchen wasn't sure it was a good idea. Her mind believed it was idiot, but her heart said her it was going to work.
*******
Spinelli and Mikey, after walking for about fifteen minutes, with any conversation apart from some love poems the boy had been telling her, they arrived at their old school.
"Mikey, why are we here?"
"I like this place. Don't' you? I spent my childhood here."
"I know you did, I was with you"
"Why don't we get into?"
"Why don't I go to my home?" answered Spinelli, but Mikey started pushing her into the school, and the girl accepted enter for some minutes.
When they arrived the playground, Mikey smiled. People hadn't disappointed him.
But Spinelli couldn't smile. She only opened her mouth.
"What the hell.?" Spinelli wouldn't have been able to speak, although she had tried to. Her brain was fast, but none of us could have assimilate that in few seconds.
All the playground was full of people. But no any kind of people. All kids who had gone to school with her were there, of any age, though now they were older than before.
"TJ?" was the only word Spinelli could ask, looking at his friend.
"You don't remember? Here, I kissed you many years ago. Our very first kiss. My best one.
Spinelli looked around. And she started remembering.
That experiment, and how she had to kiss TJ. That kiss had been her best one too, the only one she had given with her heart.
"You.? Have you called all people who were here that day?" asked Spinelli, in a very low voice.
"All. And everyone is were they're supposed to be. Like that day"
It was true. Every very person was where he or she had to be. Of course Vince and Gretchen were there too, together as that day. He was looking at her, who preferred not look at him.
"Maybe one day we'll be in the same place as them" said the tall boy. Gretchen looked at him, and smiled.
"Maybe, but today it's their day"
But the beauty scene hadn't stopped yet.
"Why?" asked Spinelli.
"Because I do love you. I've been blind for so much, and I hate myself. But, if you could forgive me." TJ touched Spinelli's hands, and she jumped a bit. But she didn't get away of him.
Lawson was there. He was broken, but he was still smiling. He loved Spinelli, and if she was happy, he also was.
"If. if you love me, why have you said all those damned things? Why do you think I'm going to forgive you?" She was next to tears, but she wouldn't cry again.
"I don't know why I've been so stupid. And I'll understand you won't speak me again" TJ had burst into tears "but If you only could be my friend again. I won't be able to stand life without your smiles, your voice. without you"
Spinelli looked him. She didn't know if she was wrong, but sometimes we should be instinctive.
She hugged him, still with no tears in her eyes.
All people was quiet, less Ashleys, who were crying.
"Kiss her man!" shouted Bob, an old king, now a young boy.
And he did. As their first kiss, that was amazing. Like all that would come later.
THE END
***********
........ What do you think??????
Oh!!!!!!!! I'm sad, The end has arrived. well, this has been a very long chapter, and maybe a bit too much romantic, but this is a TJ Spinelli's fic, I think all of us wanted a happy end.
I'd be very grateful If you wrote me a review, more than ever before because now you can tell me what you think of the entire fic. So, if you have a bit of time, please write me one. But thanks for only reading my fanfic.
It has been a pleasure
As I said before, my country's language isn't English, son don't bother me writing reviews with all this fic's mistakes (it'd be endless reading them all, thanks)
Kisses Kaly Pax
I can't believe this is the last chapter of this fic.
I've actually loved writing it. My first English fanfic is ended!
I only hope you've liked reading it.
And. sorry (again) for all those mistakes you've read, but as I've said so many times, I'm from Spain, and I've been learning English for years, and I'm still doing. I swear I've done it as well as I can.
Recess and all its characters aren't mine. Hope you like this chapter (the last one)
IT'S TOO LATE
Chapter 9: Our second experiment
A week after the incident, TJ and Vince were again at the tallest one's house. They had been together all that time, sometimes with Gus and Mikey, who also knew what had happened, and what was going on. But neither TJ or Vince had been any moment with Spinelli or Gretchen. A hard week.
"TJ... I know you used to have good plans, but this one is a bit." Vince was sat at his bed, looking how TJ walked all round his friend's room.
"A bit what, Vince?"
"Impossible"
"Why? I've got all the telephones here, and the ones who lives the furthest won't have any problem coming." He looked totally secure of himself, and none could make him doubt.
"And what if they have? Besides, you don't need all people"
"Of course I do"
"You can't remember where they all were situated"
"I remember every person and their place"
"You've never had so good memory"
"I've got memory for what I want to"
"......"
"What? Vince, If you don't want to help me, don't do it. Nobody's forcing you"
"It's.It's only I don't think this 'thing' is going to work. I had never seen Spinelli so angry with anyone in my entire life. And I've known her for many years"
"The same years as me. And?"
"She doesn't like romantic scenes"
"This isn't a romantic scene. It's only a memory"
"You know I'm going to help you, but I can't guarantee you all's going to finish well"
"Thanks Vince"
The pair of boys had never had many serious conversations. But in this last week you hadn't been able to listen a joke being with them.
**********
"What are you talking about?" Spinelli thought Mikey and Gus were greats boys, but sometimes they had strange ideas.
"We only want to walk a bit with you" answered Mikey, who was, as Gus, at the entrance of Spinelli's house.
"What's wrong with that? We're pals, aren't we?" Gus tried to look offended.
"Now?" She was in a bad humor, and she usually got bored with their conversations. They two were her friends, but a bit mad too.
"Yes" it was only a voice, because they said it at the same time.
"Ohuuuu.Okey, let's go, but only half an hour"
When they were starting to walk, they could hear some voice. Gretchen was running and shouting.
"What the hell.???" said Spinelli. But Gus and Mikey didn't looked surprised, but worried. They looked at each other, and Mikey got the girl's hand, and started walking very fast.
"Heyyy!!!!!! Gretchen's coming"
"She'll come with us in a minute, but I think Gus has to tell her something in private"
"But." Spinelli would have liked to tell something more, but when she realized it, she was far from the scene.
*** "Why all from your kind are so jerk?" When Gretchen arrived Gus was the only one waiting for her.
"What kind?" asked the blond boy.
"Boys. Someone had told me what you're doing. and it's the most stupid thing I've ever heard"
"It's not" said Gus smiling "I know you like the plan, you're romantic, why do you say it's stupid?"
"I. I. Gus, Spinelli will hate TJ. I don't know if she'll like it, but it's too risky"
"You like it"
"Yes, I do. But what is important here is if she'll like it, not me"
"She'll do. Look the hour! It's starting in some minutes"
"It's not a circus performance" said Gretchen offended.
"I know, but I prefer watching it better than any other performance"
"I agree"
And both of them started running. Gretchen wasn't sure it was a good idea. Her mind believed it was idiot, but her heart said her it was going to work.
*******
Spinelli and Mikey, after walking for about fifteen minutes, with any conversation apart from some love poems the boy had been telling her, they arrived at their old school.
"Mikey, why are we here?"
"I like this place. Don't' you? I spent my childhood here."
"I know you did, I was with you"
"Why don't we get into?"
"Why don't I go to my home?" answered Spinelli, but Mikey started pushing her into the school, and the girl accepted enter for some minutes.
When they arrived the playground, Mikey smiled. People hadn't disappointed him.
But Spinelli couldn't smile. She only opened her mouth.
"What the hell.?" Spinelli wouldn't have been able to speak, although she had tried to. Her brain was fast, but none of us could have assimilate that in few seconds.
All the playground was full of people. But no any kind of people. All kids who had gone to school with her were there, of any age, though now they were older than before.
"TJ?" was the only word Spinelli could ask, looking at his friend.
"You don't remember? Here, I kissed you many years ago. Our very first kiss. My best one.
Spinelli looked around. And she started remembering.
That experiment, and how she had to kiss TJ. That kiss had been her best one too, the only one she had given with her heart.
"You.? Have you called all people who were here that day?" asked Spinelli, in a very low voice.
"All. And everyone is were they're supposed to be. Like that day"
It was true. Every very person was where he or she had to be. Of course Vince and Gretchen were there too, together as that day. He was looking at her, who preferred not look at him.
"Maybe one day we'll be in the same place as them" said the tall boy. Gretchen looked at him, and smiled.
"Maybe, but today it's their day"
But the beauty scene hadn't stopped yet.
"Why?" asked Spinelli.
"Because I do love you. I've been blind for so much, and I hate myself. But, if you could forgive me." TJ touched Spinelli's hands, and she jumped a bit. But she didn't get away of him.
Lawson was there. He was broken, but he was still smiling. He loved Spinelli, and if she was happy, he also was.
"If. if you love me, why have you said all those damned things? Why do you think I'm going to forgive you?" She was next to tears, but she wouldn't cry again.
"I don't know why I've been so stupid. And I'll understand you won't speak me again" TJ had burst into tears "but If you only could be my friend again. I won't be able to stand life without your smiles, your voice. without you"
Spinelli looked him. She didn't know if she was wrong, but sometimes we should be instinctive.
She hugged him, still with no tears in her eyes.
All people was quiet, less Ashleys, who were crying.
"Kiss her man!" shouted Bob, an old king, now a young boy.
And he did. As their first kiss, that was amazing. Like all that would come later.
THE END
***********
........ What do you think??????
Oh!!!!!!!! I'm sad, The end has arrived. well, this has been a very long chapter, and maybe a bit too much romantic, but this is a TJ Spinelli's fic, I think all of us wanted a happy end.
I'd be very grateful If you wrote me a review, more than ever before because now you can tell me what you think of the entire fic. So, if you have a bit of time, please write me one. But thanks for only reading my fanfic.
It has been a pleasure
As I said before, my country's language isn't English, son don't bother me writing reviews with all this fic's mistakes (it'd be endless reading them all, thanks)
Kisses Kaly Pax