Hi! this is my first fic i've decided to put up so I hope you all like it! It came to me out of nowhere so I put it on paper and I hope u guys like it! at the end plz r&r! thanx!
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Chapter 1: Who is she?
A young girl walked limply down the street, using her sword for balance. The girl was covered in blood. She was crying. "What.... happened..."
~~flashback~~
"Ah!...Hotara....get out of the way!" yelled a girl with blonde hair.
"huh?"
A blast of energy was heading straight for her.
Suddenly a group of three girls pushed her out of the way. Causing them to get hit by the blast. "No!...huh? they just disappeared."
"Ha! Ha! Ha! All of you are pathetic!" yells a mysterious man in a dark coat, his face can not be seen. He held up a crystal ball with the three girls inside. "Hm.... you seem to be the last one" yelled the mysterious man.
"Give them back you filthy bastard!" the young girl yells.
"Puh! you'll never get them back for talkin to me like that...... cause know their mine, a slave to me inside this crystall ball."
"No! Give them back!"
"Hm, tell you what, since i like your courage I'll let you go, with your life..... but I will return to capture you as my slave."
"Well since you want to 'capture' me I should at least know your name."
"Very well my name is Raiko"
Then with that said the mysterious man opens up a portal underneath the girls feet. It was sending her to another part of the world. The only thing left you could hear was her last scream.
"Takes care of that problem..... Hotara" with those final words, the man disappeared.
~~end flashback~~
The girl then collapsed......
Not too far away, a man with black and white spiked up hair, was sleeping in a nearby tree. "Hm? I smell blood... and its' close by." The man, known as Hiei, jumped down and followed the scent. It led him to the girl.
"What the! She seems hurt, and badly, considering her left arm looks as if its' been burnt and has scratches all up and down her arm."
The young girl had short black hair with red highlights. Baggy black pants, and a black tank top. She had a sword laying next to her black boots, with blood stained on it. Her arm was bandaged up with black bandages and was bleeding.
/ I better take her to Kurama, he'll know what to do/ Hiei thought.
So Hiei grabbed her in his arms bridal style and carried her off to Kuramas.
~~ at Kuramas~~
"Ugh! I'm bored and it's almost nightfall too." Kurama says as he lies in bed awake, and really bored. / Yuske invited me to go to Genkais, but I had to say no thanks...dumb... I should have said yes/ Kurama thought to himself.
Then there was a knock on the window.
"Who's knocking on my window at this time in the evening?"
Kurama then got up from his bed and opened the window. It opened up to reveal Hiei and a girl in his arms. Hiei then jumped off the window sill, and stood to face Kurama.
"Hiei, what the heck happened to this girl!" Kurama asked as he noticed her injuries, especially her arm, which was bleeding even more. Kurama reached to grab a couple of bandages, to wrap up her arm.
"I'm not sure what happened." Hiei said as he watched as Kurama wraped up her arm. "But can you heal her?" Hiei finally said. But for some strange reason. Every know and then Hiei would keep looking at the girl. / she looks like Yukina.... so peaceful/
Kurama noticed what Hiei was doing. He decided to break the silence. "We should take her to Genkais Temple, she'll know what to do."
With that they were both off in a hurry.
end chapter
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SO? How do yall like it? plz tell me in the reviews! this chapter wasn't really that good but i like it! So plz review me! Thanx to all who have read it!
