A/N - hikickr9 - This is a very hard chapter to write, I'm trying my
hardest to put some effort into. BTW, NO my brother isn't in the hospital,
yes I have a little brother, no I don't want him dead and this isn't
against anyone, if I use your name, it just came out that way..
To: Roxanne@gomail.com
From: Mia@gomail.com
Time: 12:16 PM
Date: 9/29/03
Yes, I'm worried. But not that much, He'll get through it, I know he will. God's with him.
Okay, Now I sound stupid. The doctor says my brother's doing great, he'll get him on some meds but he'll be in the hospital for a while. There's another guy in the room my brother's in.
He broke his: Left arm and wrist, and his right ankle. Not bad.
He bruised: I can't begin to say. Almost everything, he's covered in bruises from head to toe. All black and blue, some has turned a purple color and there are places of light blue, too.
I might have breast cancer. I can't tell you how I know, it's to gross. Even for me. It's also wrong; I'm not the kind of person who can live knowing that she might have a disease. I'm going to the doctor sometime this week. Sometime. Don't know when. Here I go though, talking away, about nothing, nothing.
My brother is in the hospital, sick. The guy next to him got a car over his legs. Crushed them good. There's still red sparkly, crusty, trash smelling blood over the legs. The doctor's said if they removed it they would have half his blood on the floor so they have to find a good time to operate. This guy is stuck in bed for awhile; they have to give this med through a tube that goes through a needle in his arm, in one of his veins or arteries. The med goes with water, so he doesn't have to drink, but the med is to help the pain this guy has. I asked what would happen if they gave it to my brother and they said he's to young to have and he would die. I hope they don't mix the meds. I wouldn't want to see my brother die that way. Of old age. That's the way I want to see my brother die. I don't want him dying because he had a fiery, burning, run-away car run him over and have it crunch every bone in his body, I don't like the image I'm getting. The smell, garbage can, blood smell. All the blood spilling out like it's a river and it's natural. Of course it isn't.
They're putting my brother's accident in the newspaper, they came by to interview.
This is the way I would write it.
Boy Gets Smashed by Drunk. A 30 year old women driving a Hyundai Sante Fe runs over 10 year old Aaron Michaelson. The boy is now in the hospital and family is worried sick. It was on Highway 44. The women was arrested and put in jail. End of story.
Well, talk to you later.
Your Breast-Cancer No way Person,
Mia
To: Roxanne@gomail.com
From: Mia@gomail.com
Time: 12:16 PM
Date: 9/29/03
Yes, I'm worried. But not that much, He'll get through it, I know he will. God's with him.
Okay, Now I sound stupid. The doctor says my brother's doing great, he'll get him on some meds but he'll be in the hospital for a while. There's another guy in the room my brother's in.
He broke his: Left arm and wrist, and his right ankle. Not bad.
He bruised: I can't begin to say. Almost everything, he's covered in bruises from head to toe. All black and blue, some has turned a purple color and there are places of light blue, too.
I might have breast cancer. I can't tell you how I know, it's to gross. Even for me. It's also wrong; I'm not the kind of person who can live knowing that she might have a disease. I'm going to the doctor sometime this week. Sometime. Don't know when. Here I go though, talking away, about nothing, nothing.
My brother is in the hospital, sick. The guy next to him got a car over his legs. Crushed them good. There's still red sparkly, crusty, trash smelling blood over the legs. The doctor's said if they removed it they would have half his blood on the floor so they have to find a good time to operate. This guy is stuck in bed for awhile; they have to give this med through a tube that goes through a needle in his arm, in one of his veins or arteries. The med goes with water, so he doesn't have to drink, but the med is to help the pain this guy has. I asked what would happen if they gave it to my brother and they said he's to young to have and he would die. I hope they don't mix the meds. I wouldn't want to see my brother die that way. Of old age. That's the way I want to see my brother die. I don't want him dying because he had a fiery, burning, run-away car run him over and have it crunch every bone in his body, I don't like the image I'm getting. The smell, garbage can, blood smell. All the blood spilling out like it's a river and it's natural. Of course it isn't.
They're putting my brother's accident in the newspaper, they came by to interview.
This is the way I would write it.
Boy Gets Smashed by Drunk. A 30 year old women driving a Hyundai Sante Fe runs over 10 year old Aaron Michaelson. The boy is now in the hospital and family is worried sick. It was on Highway 44. The women was arrested and put in jail. End of story.
Well, talk to you later.
Your Breast-Cancer No way Person,
Mia