Wow! I have 11 reviews! I am proud…^_^ -v
Oh and I'm sorry about last chapters layout. I've tried everything, it just won't look right. Grrrrr…I'm afraid I'm not good enough with Microsoft Word to fix it yet. *blush* Oh, and if you wouldn't mind, dear readers, I also write on FictionPress.com, under 'Kiera Caleigh'. I have one story, and 5 or so poems, so please read and review!
Ok. I have decided that I really want to focus on Yaten/Mina, so this chapter is only including them. I really really really want to write a Yaten/Mina romance, and this is sorta the precursor to it. I promise, if you guys don't like it, I won't do it ever again. ^_^
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"So."
"Yeah."
"You wanna….?"
"OK."
Minako blushed. If she didn't know what they were talking about, she would think it was dirty! She and Yaten were the only ones who showed up at the beach today, and frankly, she wasn't sure if she was entirely happy with it. Yaten was very grouchy, for no apparent reason.
Yaten was NOT happy. He had come all the way down here, only to find that nobody else had even bothered to show up. Plus, it was getting cold. Wait…..cold?
"Mina, is it just me, or is it really cold all of the sudden?"
Mina looked around. Yaten was right. It WAS cold. And dark.
"It's getting dark, too." She commented.
Then, the worse possible thing that could happen, happened.
It began to rain.
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"Well, it could be worse, right?"
"Pray tell, how?"
"We could be dead."
"………….."
"That's worse, right?"
"Mina, that is the most depressing thing you could of said."
Mina sighed. This was getting ridiculous. Yaten had, if possible, gotten even grouchier. It didn't help that they were both cold, and huddled up in a tiny cave, out of the wind and rain.
"If we're lucky, it'll just be a short summer storm." Yaten said. He had just noticed that Mina was looking nervous, maybe even scared. Then she shivered.
'Aw, crap.' He thought. 'Now she's really cold.'
Cautiously, he leaned against her, hoping maybe the contact would make her a little warmer.
"EEEEEEEKKKKKKKK!!!!!!" Minako screeched.
"AHHHH! GOMENGOMENGOMEN!!!" Yaten yelped.
"Ewww….cold water is coming in. Now I'm hungry, cold AND wet."
"…….You screamed because you got wet?"
"Yeah. Why'd you think I did?"
Yaten sweatdropped.
"Never mind."
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"…..so that's how I discovered cheese never comes out of spandex."
"zzzzzzzzz"
"Yaten? Yaten-kun?"
"zzzzzzzzzz"
Mina looked down. Yaten was snoring lightly. Then, suddenly, he tipped slightly and rested his head on her shoulder. 'He's sooo cute.' She thought fondly.
Yaten was dreaming. They were beanbags flying around his head, hitting him, and bouncing off his face. He reached up, and swatted at them. Then he felt one whap on the side of his face. He snatched at it, and caught the large, squishy beanbag. It was funny shaped, and it had a bump on it….
"AHHHHH! HENTAI!!!"
Mina slapped Yaten as hard as could. He slammed against the cave wall, turned around and yelled.
"WHAT WAS THAT FOR?!?!?!"
Mina glared at him. She was furious, and blushing like crazy.
"YOU GROPED ME, YOU PERVERT!"
Yaten stopped. A confused look crossed his face, and he said spoke softly.
"I….I did?"
Mina bit her lip. He looked soooooo adorable. Maybe she could forgive him just this once…NO! He violated her pure body! He was a monster, no matter how cute!
"Yes, you did. I'll never trust you again, you jerk."
Yaten's face fell. His heart sank. 'Never trust me again?' he thought. 'I don't want that.'
"Minako….I….I'm so sorry…I..I was dreaming and-"
"Oh, so you have dirty DREAMS too!"
"No! I just…." His voice dropped to a near whisper. "I didn't mean to. I'm really, really sorry. I really want you to trust me again."
Minako stared. Yaten….wanted her to trust him? He was apologizing? What was going on?
"I tell you what. I'll trust you again, if you….."
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'I can't believe I'm doing this. Why am I doing this?! This is insane!!!'
Yaten closed his eyes. He puckered up, braced himself, and leaned in.
*SMOOCH*
He sat back, and spit several times.
"That was SO gross."
Mina set down the fish. He'd done it. He had actually kissed a dead fish in order to get her to trust him again. And he looked a little queasy…
"I am never eating seafood again."
"Aw, c'mon, it couldn't have been THAT bad."
"No? Why YOU do it."
"That's OK, I trust you."
She smiled at him. He looked at her for a moment, then smiled a little back. Maybe today hadn't been THAT bad…
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A/N Well, what'd ya think? I worked really hard on it. It wasn't very funny, but I still liked it. Lemme know what you guys thought, OK?
Oh and I'm sorry about last chapters layout. I've tried everything, it just won't look right. Grrrrr…I'm afraid I'm not good enough with Microsoft Word to fix it yet. *blush* Oh, and if you wouldn't mind, dear readers, I also write on FictionPress.com, under 'Kiera Caleigh'. I have one story, and 5 or so poems, so please read and review!
Ok. I have decided that I really want to focus on Yaten/Mina, so this chapter is only including them. I really really really want to write a Yaten/Mina romance, and this is sorta the precursor to it. I promise, if you guys don't like it, I won't do it ever again. ^_^
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"So."
"Yeah."
"You wanna….?"
"OK."
Minako blushed. If she didn't know what they were talking about, she would think it was dirty! She and Yaten were the only ones who showed up at the beach today, and frankly, she wasn't sure if she was entirely happy with it. Yaten was very grouchy, for no apparent reason.
Yaten was NOT happy. He had come all the way down here, only to find that nobody else had even bothered to show up. Plus, it was getting cold. Wait…..cold?
"Mina, is it just me, or is it really cold all of the sudden?"
Mina looked around. Yaten was right. It WAS cold. And dark.
"It's getting dark, too." She commented.
Then, the worse possible thing that could happen, happened.
It began to rain.
************************************************************************
"Well, it could be worse, right?"
"Pray tell, how?"
"We could be dead."
"………….."
"That's worse, right?"
"Mina, that is the most depressing thing you could of said."
Mina sighed. This was getting ridiculous. Yaten had, if possible, gotten even grouchier. It didn't help that they were both cold, and huddled up in a tiny cave, out of the wind and rain.
"If we're lucky, it'll just be a short summer storm." Yaten said. He had just noticed that Mina was looking nervous, maybe even scared. Then she shivered.
'Aw, crap.' He thought. 'Now she's really cold.'
Cautiously, he leaned against her, hoping maybe the contact would make her a little warmer.
"EEEEEEEKKKKKKKK!!!!!!" Minako screeched.
"AHHHH! GOMENGOMENGOMEN!!!" Yaten yelped.
"Ewww….cold water is coming in. Now I'm hungry, cold AND wet."
"…….You screamed because you got wet?"
"Yeah. Why'd you think I did?"
Yaten sweatdropped.
"Never mind."
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"…..so that's how I discovered cheese never comes out of spandex."
"zzzzzzzzz"
"Yaten? Yaten-kun?"
"zzzzzzzzzz"
Mina looked down. Yaten was snoring lightly. Then, suddenly, he tipped slightly and rested his head on her shoulder. 'He's sooo cute.' She thought fondly.
Yaten was dreaming. They were beanbags flying around his head, hitting him, and bouncing off his face. He reached up, and swatted at them. Then he felt one whap on the side of his face. He snatched at it, and caught the large, squishy beanbag. It was funny shaped, and it had a bump on it….
"AHHHHH! HENTAI!!!"
Mina slapped Yaten as hard as could. He slammed against the cave wall, turned around and yelled.
"WHAT WAS THAT FOR?!?!?!"
Mina glared at him. She was furious, and blushing like crazy.
"YOU GROPED ME, YOU PERVERT!"
Yaten stopped. A confused look crossed his face, and he said spoke softly.
"I….I did?"
Mina bit her lip. He looked soooooo adorable. Maybe she could forgive him just this once…NO! He violated her pure body! He was a monster, no matter how cute!
"Yes, you did. I'll never trust you again, you jerk."
Yaten's face fell. His heart sank. 'Never trust me again?' he thought. 'I don't want that.'
"Minako….I….I'm so sorry…I..I was dreaming and-"
"Oh, so you have dirty DREAMS too!"
"No! I just…." His voice dropped to a near whisper. "I didn't mean to. I'm really, really sorry. I really want you to trust me again."
Minako stared. Yaten….wanted her to trust him? He was apologizing? What was going on?
"I tell you what. I'll trust you again, if you….."
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'I can't believe I'm doing this. Why am I doing this?! This is insane!!!'
Yaten closed his eyes. He puckered up, braced himself, and leaned in.
*SMOOCH*
He sat back, and spit several times.
"That was SO gross."
Mina set down the fish. He'd done it. He had actually kissed a dead fish in order to get her to trust him again. And he looked a little queasy…
"I am never eating seafood again."
"Aw, c'mon, it couldn't have been THAT bad."
"No? Why YOU do it."
"That's OK, I trust you."
She smiled at him. He looked at her for a moment, then smiled a little back. Maybe today hadn't been THAT bad…
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A/N Well, what'd ya think? I worked really hard on it. It wasn't very funny, but I still liked it. Lemme know what you guys thought, OK?