Hey everybody!I really think this chapter of mine is just boring because you see...I let some of my friends read the original one i wrote and they almost fell asleep!!!So tell me what you think.R/R!

STRANDED
Yugioh cast
Joey:*Crunching chips*
Plane*Loud noise*
Everyone:What's going on?!
Speaker:Ladies and gentlemen a plane with a stupid,drunken,crazy pilot just crashed into us..Now i must inform you that we will all be safe if we know how to fly.For the rest of you,put on your whatcamaccall it thing and dive!!!!
Everyone:*quiet*.....AAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Tristan:i can't believe we're gonna die!!
Tea:Just shut up and get ready or sit there like the idiot you are and die.
YYH cast
Yusuke Kuwabara:*hugging each other*AHH!!!
Kieko:What are we gonna do now?
Speaker:Remain calm everybody!!Just get ready to jump!
Mostly everyone:*trying to make Kuwabara jump*
Kuwabara:I'm not jumping!I'm not!I want my mommy!!!*crying*
Everybody:*Pushes Kuwabara down*
Kuwabara:AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Botan:*flies on oar*
Yusuke:*falling,looks at Botan*Hey!Why can she fly on a oar?!
Botan:Because i'm better than you!!*sticks out tounge*
Yusuke:*growls*
Every cast:JUMPS
All lands safely on deser ground on Joey who is hugging his deck.
OW!Loud thump.
Joey:That hurt.
Kuwabara:That was so cool!!!Let's go again!
Everybody:NO!!!!
Joey:would you guys get off me?!!!
Bakura:*Landed safely on his feet(don't ask me how)*Smirks*This would be a perfect time to sacrifice these mortals to my god.Ha ha ha!!'Now,where's my ring?'
Yugi:What happened to everybodyelse?
Ryou:I think we should first take a look at the new arrivals..
Everyone:Hmm..?Who are you?
*Everyone introduces each other*ya di ya
Tristan:Soo........Where are we?
Marik:Dear Ra!We're in the sands of Egypt!!
Everone:What?!
Tea:I guess we were passing Egypt during the crash.
Joey:I'm getting tired of sand,let's go find a town or something....
Everyone:*starts walking*
30 minutes later........
Yusuke:Hold it,hold it!Where are we going?We've been walking for 30 minutes!
Kuwabara:I'm tired.
Hiei:That's because you're so fat..
Kuwabara:Hey!Watch it!
Marik:I know,I'll use my egyptain god card to fly me there!
Hiei:And how are you gonna do that?Using magic?
Marik:Well,of course.*Brings card to life*Seize them!!
Everyone:AHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!
Yusuke:Spirit gun!*has no effect*-_______-
Kuwabara:Spirit sword!* has no effect*-______-
Kurama:Rose whip!* has no effect*-______-
And so on with Hiei -__________-
Yami:STOP!!!
Everyone:*Freezes even the monster does*
Yami:First of all...Marik call back your dragon!!
Marik:*groans*calls back dragon*
Yami:Second,*turns to YYH cast*how did you do that?
Yusuke:Well,you see...*Explains story*(Does it seem like i want to explain the story?It'll take forever!!!)
Kurama:......And it's called spirit enerygy.
Yugi:Ohh..so like the millenium items.
Koenma:The what?
Bakura:Millenium items,you dope.
Kuwabara:Ohhhh................................What do they do?
Yugi:*Explains the whole story while walking*
Mai:Hey look!
Serenity:A city!
Tea:I think it's a town.
Tristan:Who cares.
Joey:Yeah as long as they have food!!
Yukina:I hope they have ice,'cause i think i'm melting....
Shizuru:I hope they have smokes,because i'm running out.
Ryou:Com on mates,let's go!
Bakura:Good,more people to sacrifice and gain more power right,YM?
YM:Whatever........Ask Marik,he has more intention into this,i'll join your club when you can actually do something.
Bakura:Okay....Marik,you in?
Marik:Yeah!'then i'll take over it!ha ha ha ha ha!!!!!'

To be countinued.....

The next chapter is'A New Face' which means somebody else is coming!So i need some of you to come up with someone so i can put him/her in the story,maybe just for one chapter,or whatever......Maybe someone that lives in egypt or that's connected to the millenium items.Well,it's your choice.Whichever one gets the most votes.So please review and tell me!!!!