Pirates of the Caribbean: Lost Love Found Again
=) chapter 1 is officially up!!
Starts where it ended @ prologue.
Special thanks to those who reviewed!
To Celtic Dawn Star- wow really? You think so? Thanks! =) that just inspired me want to write some more!!
CRYKAT- WTF is a mary-sue??? Anyway Jen is the character that I MADE UP.
Cute-Kitty- yeah I know. Legolas' eyes are blue sometimes. If you look carefully, you see that some scenes they're blue and some scenes they're brown. I guess Orlando Bloom forgot his contacts haha. Btw, thanks! =D I'm a big legolas-lover too! Soo hot!
Vema- okay. Misunderstanding obviously. Jen is NOT ME. Jen is the Character that I made up. You guys get it now?
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Jack put his arm around his friend and helped her to their secret cave.
Upon entering it, Jen started to cry once more.
"What's wrong, Poppet?" Jack asked worriedly.
"I miss James!!" Jen cried, "I mean, James was my only older brother...well..he's my only brother!"
Jack looked at her with sorrow, "So do I, love, remember, James was me best friend."
Jack said with a half smile, "Now lets get us some daggers, knives, and swords and practice 5 hours a day so we can stop thinking about James and then when we get good, we'll go and save him if he's still alive!"
Jack wiped off Jen's tears from her face with his thumb and pushed her hair away from her face.
Jen grinned at Jack, hugged him, grabbed her sword and proceeded to face Jack.
"Bring it on, Jack Sparrow!"
**************************************************************** five hours later... ****************************************************************
"That's..pretty..good.Jack!" Jen gasped, collapsing to the floor, "Great work out!"
"Not bad yourself, love!" Jack smiled, "We should probably head back to town. Your parents are probably worried. We've been gone for a bit. Besides, I think that they may want you home."
"Right."
So they headed back toward Tortuga.
******************************************************** one year later, Jen is 14 ½ , Jack is 16. ********************************************************
One day, while Jack and Jen were walking around Tortuga during their spare time, two girls, ages 15 and 16, sauntered up to Jack.
"Hello Scarlett, Giselle. How're ye two fine gals today?"
"Perfectly fine Jack. What're ye DOING hanging out with the likes of HER when ye could be having fun with us?" Scarlett said snottily, staring at Jen.
Jen looked a bit perturbed at Jack. No one had ever been so rude to her before..with the exception of the crew members of The Black Rose.
(an: the Black Rose is kind of the equivalent of the Black Pearl except the Black Rose isn't cursed. They go around battling other pirates and taking the women and children and killing the men. Jen's ship had run into the once but had started to defeat the Black Rose when it ran away from battle.)
Jack saw her troubled look and bit his lip.
"She's a friend of mine. Of course I'm going to "HANG" with her! She's a great person to fight with as well as a great companion SCARLETT! I'm sure ye'd like to get to know her." Jack told them off.well.more like he told Scarlett off.
Jen looked gratefully at Jack.
"So, what is she? Ye're new GIRLFRIEND or something? I've never seen ye so protective of anyone except James. I've never even seen ye hang with her before." Giselle responded.
"That is because she hung out with James more than me but who says we never hung out?! Were you with me at all times? I don't think so! She's James' little sister. Of course I'm going to bloody hang out with her!" Jack snarled.
"Jack.stop. It's ok, really. Let's just go okay?" Jen took hold of Jack's arm in a gesture as if to hold him back from whatever he had planned.
"No. They're being rude."
Jen stared at him. He had never acted this way before.
"JACK!" she said, tugging on his arm, insisting to leave, "Don't fight! Please!"
Jack narrowed his eyes, glaring at Jen, "No, I'm a pirate, it's my duty to fight and it is yours as well.... besides, I have unfinished business with those two from before. Why are you so damn much like James?! Last time he got me away before those two got what they deserved."
The girls started to snicker at Jen and talked loudly about how she didn't deserve to be called a pirate. Jack was already making her angry, but listening to these girls taunt her and mock her? No way was she going to accept it.
"Fine then! You want it the hard way?!" Jen shouted, "I challenge you BOTH to a duel. Then we'll see who's the REAL pirate here."
The two girls gasped, "Jack, she just implied that we weren't real pirates!!"
But Jack wasn't paying attention to them, surprised at her sudden change of attitude, he was looking at Jen, her hair was blowing in the wind, eyes narrowed and glaring, a scowl on her face. She had her hand on her sword, prepared for battle. He smirked and thought *wow. She's really beautiful when she's angry*
Scarlett and Giselle had terrified looks on their faces, but they took out their swords that were strapped to their dresses anyway.
By this time, the whole street was looking at Jen and Scarlett and Giselle. Many snickered about how Scarlett and Giselle deserved to get their butts slashed. The many pirates crowded around Jack, Jen, Scarlett and Giselle started cheering "Fight! Fight!" and spilled beer was everywhere. Jack was about to draw his sword when Jen shoved him into the crowd and said
"You stay out of this. This is between me and them."
He responded, "You can't take on two! It' wouldn't be fair. Besides, I have unfinished business remember?!?!"
"No."
"Yes! You can't stop me."
"Are you on my side or not? Damn Jack!" Jen scowled at him, "If you draw, I'll go one on three."
Jack pursed his lips, "No. I'm on your side. I'm fighting WITH you not against you!"
"No, you're not, remember what your father said, 'no sword fighting with girls other then Jen understand boy?' or did you forget?"
Jack sighed and threw up his hands defeated, "Fine then. Go on!"
Jen faced the two and snarled, "Today will be the day that you'll always remember as the day Jen Smith proved you two unworthy of being called a pirate."
(an: my theory on how Jack got his 'this will be the day you'll always remember as.')
She yelled and started to fight with them. She had a better chance because 1) they were in dresses 2) they hardly practiced.
But they also had a chance of beating Jen because she had already fought with jack for 5 hours previously, which is why Jack was worried and wanted to fight with her.
The crowd cheered "Jen! Jen!"
Jen slashed at the girls and decided to draw out her 2nd sword. So now she had two swords and was about to overthrow the girls.
They ruined market stands and almost cut some of the observers. Jen jumped up onto a fruit stand and over behind the girls. She finally had them. Baffled, the girls turned around only to see each of Jen's two swords pointed at their faces.
"Surrender now, or die."
"Never!" They shouted and ducked, and the fight started again once more.
One hour later, Jen was really getting the best of them, their dresses in tatters. Giselle's sword had been so old and unused and maintained so unwell, that it had actually chipped and the tip had snapped off. Scarlett on the other had, had half a sword, for Jen had cut it in half with her sword.
"Surrender! We give up!" Scarlett and Giselle cried though they couldn't bear with the fact that they had lost to Jen.
They both had scratches and cuts and bruises and Giselle couldn't deal with the fact that Jen had not one mark on her and neither could she deal with the fact that they had been defeated by a 14 year old girl.
However, as Jen lowered her sword, Giselle, being a bad sportsman, slashed Jen in the stomach quite deeply though the fight had supposedly been over.
Jen gasped, and clutched her abdomen as blood seeped through her clothing and Jack rushed to her side. The crowd began to talk, and pointed, shocked that Giselle had actually cut Jen; Jen was favored among the pirates though she was only 14.
She leaned into Jack as he supported her by wrapping his right arm around her. Using the left arm, he took her swords and said spitefully "If she dies from blood loss, I'll have your heads!"
Jen smiled weakly at Jack, "Jack, it's not that bad."
Standing up on her own, she pointed at the two girls, "You are fortunate that the cut is deep, otherwise, you would both be dead right now."
The crowd was silent, for they knew she had held back and could have easily defeated the two within 10 minutes. Most of the crowd had seen her grow up and had seen her "practice" with Jack and James. They didn't just practice, they really fought.
Scarlett and Giselle exchanged smirks as if they didn't believe Jen would be ever be caught off guard. Suddenly, Anamaria stepped out from the crowd.
"That was a dirty trick ye did!" She yelled at the two girls.
Anamaria was 17.
She slashed both Scarlett and Giselle because she knew they had planned this from the beginning, they had done the same thing to her many years before, when she was 15.
Shocked, the two girls looked at their cuts and limped into a nearby store.
The crowd cheered and jeered at Scarlett and Giselle and someone said "They got what they deserved!"
Anamaria ran to Jen and Jack.
"we must get the wound closed soon! My house is nearby. We can take her there!" Anamaria said.
So each with an arm around jen, they took her to Anamaria's house and laid her on the table.
Jen had tears falling down her face from the pain.
Anamaria put a cold cloth on Jen's forehead as she began to clean the wound. "Will it get infected?" Jack asked, worried, gripping Jen's hand quite hard.
"If I get it cleaned at stitched fast enough.it really shouldn't."
"Jack.my hand.you're holding it too..tight.." Jen told him in a barely audible voice.
"Oh! Sorry love, I didn't mean to! Really!" Jack loosened his grip a little.
Jen's eyes started to close and she felt faint.
"Jen! Don't fall asleep!!" Anamaria shouted at Jen as Jack shook her gently to wake her from falling to the hands of death.
Jen's eyes opened and she said, "I can't stay awake."
By this time, Anamaria had started on the stitches. She made them as small as possible so that the scar wouldn't be so visible.
Jack covered Jens hand his own and wrapped his fingers around her hand.again.
Jen mustered up all of her energy to try to prop herself up to look at her stomach but Jack pushed her back and refused to let her see it.
"Jen. Don't move." Jack said to her.
".how is it?" Jen asked
"It's almost done, love."
"I'm so tired!" Jen told him.
"I know. Ye've lost a lot of blood. Just don't fall asleep" Jack said urgently.
He had already lost Will, he didn't want to lose Jen too.
About 5 minutes later, Anamaria finished stitching the wound and it looked really nice and neat (it wasn't like...big stitches. It was small stitches that probably wouldn't give Jen that visible of a scar).
"Done!" Anamaria announced.
Jen smiled a little smile.
"Want some stew?" he asked cheerfully, winking at her.
"Hahah.I don't know.Can I eat it or did the blade cut my stomach open?" She laughed.
"No. ye're good. Ye probably should drink something or eat something in a bit. Right now ye just need to lay down and rest but don't sleep. Ye're not past the danger zone yet. Ye've lost a lot of blood." Anamaria told her.
"okay." Jen whispered, not in the mood to argue. She was hungry from the fight but she had to listen to Anamaria because Anamaria had more experience, was a doctor's apprentice for 2 years and was older.
Jack lifted Jen up and laid her down in Anamaria's spare bed. He touched her stitches gently.
"It's going to be ok Jen. I won't let anything like this happen to you again."
Suddenly, Jen's parents came in.
"Hello there Jack. Where's Jen?? I've just heard. We came immediately." Eric said.
Jack pointed to the bed.
Eric and Anna knelt down and looked at their only daughter and now only child. James was killed exactly one year ago today.
Anna touched Jen's forehead and said,
"Well.ye have a memory of your first battle with someone other than Jack or Jamesl. Not the most pleasant first battle but ye made it."
Jen smiled when her mum said her childhood nickname.
Eric grinned and said "Man! Ye got those girls good! I'm very proud of ye! Next time, don't hold back, give them everything ye've got because ye never know if they have a dirty trick up their sleeves."
Jack stood by the fire with Anamaria and looked at the pirate family.
"I think that one day, you'll join their family." Anamaria said to Jack.
"Huh? What are you talking about?" Jack asked baffled.
"I see it. You care about Jen more than anyone else in the Caribbean. With James gone, you're all see has left other than her parents." Anamaria told him, analyzing him with her dark, ebony eyes.
Jack just smiled to himself. It was true. Over the past year, Jen and him had grown close and he did care for her very much.
"Well, she's all I have left." Jack replied.
Eric walked over to Anamaria and Jack and thanked them.
"I'm very grateful that you two saved my little girl. She's all Anna and I have left.with James gone and all."
Eric put a hand on Jack's shoulder.
"I thank you Jack, for being such a great friend to me Jenni."
(an: MY GOD THE CHEESYNESS!! WHY AM I WRITING THIS STUFF?!?)
"Eric! I think we should leave Jen here for tonight. Remember to feed her in approximately 30 minutes. I remember when I was sort of in this situation. Hurt like hell." Anna said.
"We love you Jen!" Anna whispered into Jen's ear.
"Love you too mum." Jen whispered back.
As Eric walked by Jack, he handed Jack a note.
"Hmm.." Jack though out loud.
When Anna and Eric went back to their ship, jack opened the note that Eric gave him.
It said :
Jack, ye like my little girl don't ye?? Well..all I can say is.I'll kill ye if ye hurt her!
Reading this, Jack choked on his water. Did the whole world know he like Jen??
*DAMN! What's with parents and killing?!*
"Jack! Are you ok?!" Jen asked, alarmed, sitting up.
She had heard him choking.
"Jack.you're blushing! Oh ow.ahaha" Jen laughed and laid back down.
"nothing.nothing.." Jack grumbled, embarrassed.
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what's going to happen next?!?! Dun dun dun! LOL. Will Jen make it through the night?? Is she gonna die and then come back?? What's happening to Jack?? Haha. Your answers will be answered soon! Chapter 2 should be up by August 12, 2003. Maybe earlier!
REVIEW PLEASE! Tell me what you think and what I should change. Suggestions! Suggestions! And if I got some things wrong, you gotta tell me too!
REVIEW PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I I I I \ / '
=) chapter 1 is officially up!!
Starts where it ended @ prologue.
Special thanks to those who reviewed!
To Celtic Dawn Star- wow really? You think so? Thanks! =) that just inspired me want to write some more!!
CRYKAT- WTF is a mary-sue??? Anyway Jen is the character that I MADE UP.
Cute-Kitty- yeah I know. Legolas' eyes are blue sometimes. If you look carefully, you see that some scenes they're blue and some scenes they're brown. I guess Orlando Bloom forgot his contacts haha. Btw, thanks! =D I'm a big legolas-lover too! Soo hot!
Vema- okay. Misunderstanding obviously. Jen is NOT ME. Jen is the Character that I made up. You guys get it now?
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Jack put his arm around his friend and helped her to their secret cave.
Upon entering it, Jen started to cry once more.
"What's wrong, Poppet?" Jack asked worriedly.
"I miss James!!" Jen cried, "I mean, James was my only older brother...well..he's my only brother!"
Jack looked at her with sorrow, "So do I, love, remember, James was me best friend."
Jack said with a half smile, "Now lets get us some daggers, knives, and swords and practice 5 hours a day so we can stop thinking about James and then when we get good, we'll go and save him if he's still alive!"
Jack wiped off Jen's tears from her face with his thumb and pushed her hair away from her face.
Jen grinned at Jack, hugged him, grabbed her sword and proceeded to face Jack.
"Bring it on, Jack Sparrow!"
**************************************************************** five hours later... ****************************************************************
"That's..pretty..good.Jack!" Jen gasped, collapsing to the floor, "Great work out!"
"Not bad yourself, love!" Jack smiled, "We should probably head back to town. Your parents are probably worried. We've been gone for a bit. Besides, I think that they may want you home."
"Right."
So they headed back toward Tortuga.
******************************************************** one year later, Jen is 14 ½ , Jack is 16. ********************************************************
One day, while Jack and Jen were walking around Tortuga during their spare time, two girls, ages 15 and 16, sauntered up to Jack.
"Hello Scarlett, Giselle. How're ye two fine gals today?"
"Perfectly fine Jack. What're ye DOING hanging out with the likes of HER when ye could be having fun with us?" Scarlett said snottily, staring at Jen.
Jen looked a bit perturbed at Jack. No one had ever been so rude to her before..with the exception of the crew members of The Black Rose.
(an: the Black Rose is kind of the equivalent of the Black Pearl except the Black Rose isn't cursed. They go around battling other pirates and taking the women and children and killing the men. Jen's ship had run into the once but had started to defeat the Black Rose when it ran away from battle.)
Jack saw her troubled look and bit his lip.
"She's a friend of mine. Of course I'm going to "HANG" with her! She's a great person to fight with as well as a great companion SCARLETT! I'm sure ye'd like to get to know her." Jack told them off.well.more like he told Scarlett off.
Jen looked gratefully at Jack.
"So, what is she? Ye're new GIRLFRIEND or something? I've never seen ye so protective of anyone except James. I've never even seen ye hang with her before." Giselle responded.
"That is because she hung out with James more than me but who says we never hung out?! Were you with me at all times? I don't think so! She's James' little sister. Of course I'm going to bloody hang out with her!" Jack snarled.
"Jack.stop. It's ok, really. Let's just go okay?" Jen took hold of Jack's arm in a gesture as if to hold him back from whatever he had planned.
"No. They're being rude."
Jen stared at him. He had never acted this way before.
"JACK!" she said, tugging on his arm, insisting to leave, "Don't fight! Please!"
Jack narrowed his eyes, glaring at Jen, "No, I'm a pirate, it's my duty to fight and it is yours as well.... besides, I have unfinished business with those two from before. Why are you so damn much like James?! Last time he got me away before those two got what they deserved."
The girls started to snicker at Jen and talked loudly about how she didn't deserve to be called a pirate. Jack was already making her angry, but listening to these girls taunt her and mock her? No way was she going to accept it.
"Fine then! You want it the hard way?!" Jen shouted, "I challenge you BOTH to a duel. Then we'll see who's the REAL pirate here."
The two girls gasped, "Jack, she just implied that we weren't real pirates!!"
But Jack wasn't paying attention to them, surprised at her sudden change of attitude, he was looking at Jen, her hair was blowing in the wind, eyes narrowed and glaring, a scowl on her face. She had her hand on her sword, prepared for battle. He smirked and thought *wow. She's really beautiful when she's angry*
Scarlett and Giselle had terrified looks on their faces, but they took out their swords that were strapped to their dresses anyway.
By this time, the whole street was looking at Jen and Scarlett and Giselle. Many snickered about how Scarlett and Giselle deserved to get their butts slashed. The many pirates crowded around Jack, Jen, Scarlett and Giselle started cheering "Fight! Fight!" and spilled beer was everywhere. Jack was about to draw his sword when Jen shoved him into the crowd and said
"You stay out of this. This is between me and them."
He responded, "You can't take on two! It' wouldn't be fair. Besides, I have unfinished business remember?!?!"
"No."
"Yes! You can't stop me."
"Are you on my side or not? Damn Jack!" Jen scowled at him, "If you draw, I'll go one on three."
Jack pursed his lips, "No. I'm on your side. I'm fighting WITH you not against you!"
"No, you're not, remember what your father said, 'no sword fighting with girls other then Jen understand boy?' or did you forget?"
Jack sighed and threw up his hands defeated, "Fine then. Go on!"
Jen faced the two and snarled, "Today will be the day that you'll always remember as the day Jen Smith proved you two unworthy of being called a pirate."
(an: my theory on how Jack got his 'this will be the day you'll always remember as.')
She yelled and started to fight with them. She had a better chance because 1) they were in dresses 2) they hardly practiced.
But they also had a chance of beating Jen because she had already fought with jack for 5 hours previously, which is why Jack was worried and wanted to fight with her.
The crowd cheered "Jen! Jen!"
Jen slashed at the girls and decided to draw out her 2nd sword. So now she had two swords and was about to overthrow the girls.
They ruined market stands and almost cut some of the observers. Jen jumped up onto a fruit stand and over behind the girls. She finally had them. Baffled, the girls turned around only to see each of Jen's two swords pointed at their faces.
"Surrender now, or die."
"Never!" They shouted and ducked, and the fight started again once more.
One hour later, Jen was really getting the best of them, their dresses in tatters. Giselle's sword had been so old and unused and maintained so unwell, that it had actually chipped and the tip had snapped off. Scarlett on the other had, had half a sword, for Jen had cut it in half with her sword.
"Surrender! We give up!" Scarlett and Giselle cried though they couldn't bear with the fact that they had lost to Jen.
They both had scratches and cuts and bruises and Giselle couldn't deal with the fact that Jen had not one mark on her and neither could she deal with the fact that they had been defeated by a 14 year old girl.
However, as Jen lowered her sword, Giselle, being a bad sportsman, slashed Jen in the stomach quite deeply though the fight had supposedly been over.
Jen gasped, and clutched her abdomen as blood seeped through her clothing and Jack rushed to her side. The crowd began to talk, and pointed, shocked that Giselle had actually cut Jen; Jen was favored among the pirates though she was only 14.
She leaned into Jack as he supported her by wrapping his right arm around her. Using the left arm, he took her swords and said spitefully "If she dies from blood loss, I'll have your heads!"
Jen smiled weakly at Jack, "Jack, it's not that bad."
Standing up on her own, she pointed at the two girls, "You are fortunate that the cut is deep, otherwise, you would both be dead right now."
The crowd was silent, for they knew she had held back and could have easily defeated the two within 10 minutes. Most of the crowd had seen her grow up and had seen her "practice" with Jack and James. They didn't just practice, they really fought.
Scarlett and Giselle exchanged smirks as if they didn't believe Jen would be ever be caught off guard. Suddenly, Anamaria stepped out from the crowd.
"That was a dirty trick ye did!" She yelled at the two girls.
Anamaria was 17.
She slashed both Scarlett and Giselle because she knew they had planned this from the beginning, they had done the same thing to her many years before, when she was 15.
Shocked, the two girls looked at their cuts and limped into a nearby store.
The crowd cheered and jeered at Scarlett and Giselle and someone said "They got what they deserved!"
Anamaria ran to Jen and Jack.
"we must get the wound closed soon! My house is nearby. We can take her there!" Anamaria said.
So each with an arm around jen, they took her to Anamaria's house and laid her on the table.
Jen had tears falling down her face from the pain.
Anamaria put a cold cloth on Jen's forehead as she began to clean the wound. "Will it get infected?" Jack asked, worried, gripping Jen's hand quite hard.
"If I get it cleaned at stitched fast enough.it really shouldn't."
"Jack.my hand.you're holding it too..tight.." Jen told him in a barely audible voice.
"Oh! Sorry love, I didn't mean to! Really!" Jack loosened his grip a little.
Jen's eyes started to close and she felt faint.
"Jen! Don't fall asleep!!" Anamaria shouted at Jen as Jack shook her gently to wake her from falling to the hands of death.
Jen's eyes opened and she said, "I can't stay awake."
By this time, Anamaria had started on the stitches. She made them as small as possible so that the scar wouldn't be so visible.
Jack covered Jens hand his own and wrapped his fingers around her hand.again.
Jen mustered up all of her energy to try to prop herself up to look at her stomach but Jack pushed her back and refused to let her see it.
"Jen. Don't move." Jack said to her.
".how is it?" Jen asked
"It's almost done, love."
"I'm so tired!" Jen told him.
"I know. Ye've lost a lot of blood. Just don't fall asleep" Jack said urgently.
He had already lost Will, he didn't want to lose Jen too.
About 5 minutes later, Anamaria finished stitching the wound and it looked really nice and neat (it wasn't like...big stitches. It was small stitches that probably wouldn't give Jen that visible of a scar).
"Done!" Anamaria announced.
Jen smiled a little smile.
"Want some stew?" he asked cheerfully, winking at her.
"Hahah.I don't know.Can I eat it or did the blade cut my stomach open?" She laughed.
"No. ye're good. Ye probably should drink something or eat something in a bit. Right now ye just need to lay down and rest but don't sleep. Ye're not past the danger zone yet. Ye've lost a lot of blood." Anamaria told her.
"okay." Jen whispered, not in the mood to argue. She was hungry from the fight but she had to listen to Anamaria because Anamaria had more experience, was a doctor's apprentice for 2 years and was older.
Jack lifted Jen up and laid her down in Anamaria's spare bed. He touched her stitches gently.
"It's going to be ok Jen. I won't let anything like this happen to you again."
Suddenly, Jen's parents came in.
"Hello there Jack. Where's Jen?? I've just heard. We came immediately." Eric said.
Jack pointed to the bed.
Eric and Anna knelt down and looked at their only daughter and now only child. James was killed exactly one year ago today.
Anna touched Jen's forehead and said,
"Well.ye have a memory of your first battle with someone other than Jack or Jamesl. Not the most pleasant first battle but ye made it."
Jen smiled when her mum said her childhood nickname.
Eric grinned and said "Man! Ye got those girls good! I'm very proud of ye! Next time, don't hold back, give them everything ye've got because ye never know if they have a dirty trick up their sleeves."
Jack stood by the fire with Anamaria and looked at the pirate family.
"I think that one day, you'll join their family." Anamaria said to Jack.
"Huh? What are you talking about?" Jack asked baffled.
"I see it. You care about Jen more than anyone else in the Caribbean. With James gone, you're all see has left other than her parents." Anamaria told him, analyzing him with her dark, ebony eyes.
Jack just smiled to himself. It was true. Over the past year, Jen and him had grown close and he did care for her very much.
"Well, she's all I have left." Jack replied.
Eric walked over to Anamaria and Jack and thanked them.
"I'm very grateful that you two saved my little girl. She's all Anna and I have left.with James gone and all."
Eric put a hand on Jack's shoulder.
"I thank you Jack, for being such a great friend to me Jenni."
(an: MY GOD THE CHEESYNESS!! WHY AM I WRITING THIS STUFF?!?)
"Eric! I think we should leave Jen here for tonight. Remember to feed her in approximately 30 minutes. I remember when I was sort of in this situation. Hurt like hell." Anna said.
"We love you Jen!" Anna whispered into Jen's ear.
"Love you too mum." Jen whispered back.
As Eric walked by Jack, he handed Jack a note.
"Hmm.." Jack though out loud.
When Anna and Eric went back to their ship, jack opened the note that Eric gave him.
It said :
Jack, ye like my little girl don't ye?? Well..all I can say is.I'll kill ye if ye hurt her!
Reading this, Jack choked on his water. Did the whole world know he like Jen??
*DAMN! What's with parents and killing?!*
"Jack! Are you ok?!" Jen asked, alarmed, sitting up.
She had heard him choking.
"Jack.you're blushing! Oh ow.ahaha" Jen laughed and laid back down.
"nothing.nothing.." Jack grumbled, embarrassed.
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what's going to happen next?!?! Dun dun dun! LOL. Will Jen make it through the night?? Is she gonna die and then come back?? What's happening to Jack?? Haha. Your answers will be answered soon! Chapter 2 should be up by August 12, 2003. Maybe earlier!
REVIEW PLEASE! Tell me what you think and what I should change. Suggestions! Suggestions! And if I got some things wrong, you gotta tell me too!
REVIEW PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I I I I \ / '