Disclaimer: I'm just me, i don't own dbz. If I did I would have had the
series show 17 and 18's youth.
A/N: None
Kuririn's Onna: Thank you, I'm trying to be as original as possible.
CrazyJen: Thanks, I hope you like this chapter aswell
xXEvil-OneXx: *blushes* thankies. I'm glad you like it.
Deadly Beauty: Boy, I'm really glad you like it so much already. Thanks I hope you enjoy this to.
Children of an angel
Chapter 2: A white feather.
Jewel was downstairs in the kitchen cooking breakfast. Suddenly she heard a lot of noise coming from the stairs, it sounded like someone unleashed a herd of elefants at the stairs.
"Hai mommy" Crystal said when she walked inside.
"Hey sweety, could you please try to get down a little more silent" Jewel said.
"Yes mommy." After she said that even more noise was coming, and Ricardo walked inside.
"Hey" He said
"Hai Ricci" Crystal welcomed her brother.
"Could someone of you please cover the table?" Jewel asked her kids.
"Ricci will do it" Crystal said quickly.
"Why me, you're the girl" Ricardo said angry
"But I'm the oldest" Crystal awnserd.
"Ricardo, do the table, Crystal wake you're father" Jewel said simply, she didn't feel like having her children fighting early in the morning.
"Yay" Crystal yelled and she ran upstairs to wake her father.
When Crystal walked in her parents bedroom everything was still, which was strange, normally her father would be half awake already. "Daddy" Crystal said "waky waky, time for breakfast" Crystal walked further in the room when her father didn't moved. "Daddy?" She tried again, silence. Crystal climbed upon the bed and started shaking her father. "Daddy wake up please". Nothing.
Crystal turned her father around to see his face, his eyes where closed and he didn't move. "Dad" Crystal said in a soft, tiny voice. "Daddy".
But her father didn't move, he didn't say anything, he didn't breath. He just lied still, and he would never move again......
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The ambulancelights where flashing before the house. Crystal and Ricardo where sitting in front of the door. They haven't said a word. A doctor walked towards them.
"Kids, there is something you two have to know..." He started.
"Daddy died didn't he?" Crystal asked.
"And he's not coming back huh?" Ricardo added.
"You kids are smart" the doctor said "you two are right, you're father died of an heart attack, I'm sorry".
Crystal and Ricardo looked downstairs. It was so difficult for them, how could their daddy be gone, he has been with them for 5 years. How can he just leave....
"How can he leave?" Ricardo asked "didn't he loved us anymore?"
"He loved us, but there must be a reason that he left" Crystal awnserd.
Jewel walked up to her children, her face was stained with tears. When she heard her daughter scream that daddy wouldn't move she thought it had all been a joke. But when she felt her husbands cold body, when she felt his silent neck, without a heartbeat, the truth hit her. It felt like her heart was being ripped out, she once again felt the pain she felt before she met Jonathan, but now she couldn't end her life, she had to be there for her children.
"Mommy?" Crystals soft voice came "Daddy's gone forever now isn't he?"
Jewel nodded "He is in this world sweety, maybe he moved somewhere else, but I can't awnser that"
"Crystal said that there was a reason that he left" Ricardo said.
"Nobody knows why people die Ric." Jewel said.
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The funeral was held with a small group, mostly because Jonathan had now friends and familly. Jewel's parents where there, a few close friends, and ofcousre Jewel, Ricardo and Crystal.
Jonathan's coffin was put in a hole. Everybody did something on it. Something special. Crystal put a feather in her father's grave. She didn't know hy, but it felt right. It was a pure white feather, a pidgeon lost it the night before the funeral. She dropped it in the grave and walked away.
"What did you put in daddy's grave?" Ricardo asked his sister.
"A feather" Crystal awnserd.
"Why?"
"Don't know"
"Alright"
Crystal looked up at the sky, "why did you leave daddy?". After everybody dropped something in the grave, the grave was closed. It was terrible to see, as if someone dead could just be coverd with mud and than be forgotten.
"Mom?" Ricardo said "I want to go home now".
Jewel looked at her son with teary eyes.
"Me too mommy" Crystal said.
"Alright" Jewel said "Let's go home". And the three walked off, towards their new lives, without their father and husband.
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Somewhere in a place far away, far from the normal world, even far from king yemma's place where all the deads came in, stood Jonathan. He knew that this could happen. He feared it. But his love for Jewel was so strong that he forgot the laws of the angels.
Now he had to pay the price. His hands where locked in chains, he felt like a common criminal that was about to be sent to hell. He looked up. Around him was the feared angel court. They where harsh, they always sticked to the laws and any angel that broked the laws should be punished according to the court.
No angel liked the court, but they where strong and powerfull, and resisting them would be futile.
"Jonathan" the powerfull voice of the leader came "you broke one of the most important laws in a terrible sort of way, what do you have to say for yourself?"
Jonathan sighted "I am aware of what I've done, but I want you to know that I did it out of love".
"Love" a member of the court said "love between a human and an angel is forbidden, you where supposed to keep the human from commiting suicide and return afterwards. You didn't do that. You never returned, and you even got married with her, no tell me, does she knows that you are an angel?"
"No" Jonathan said "I never broke that law, Jewel had no idea that I'm an angel".
"Very well" the leader spoke again "Jonathan, you know the sentance for breaking the law, now because you have no defence, I'm forced to..."
"Wait" someone shouted.
A mysterious light was appaering on the desk of the leader. He looked at it as if it was a disgusting bug. When the light vanished something small and white lied on the leaders desk.
"A white feather.." he whisperd softly as if that feather was the most special thing ever.
"Someone sended a white feather to us" a memeber of the court said "it is the sign that Jonathan is still good, and still respects the Angel laws".
"Yes I know what it is" the leader shouted angry "but who send it?"
"That is not important" a new weird voice came "the fact is that because of that feather Jonathan's punishment is to be reduced".
"Seer" the leader said.
"Yes, missed me?" the seer spoke.
"Very well" the leader said again "Jonathan, because of the white feather you're punishment will indeed be reduced. It would be, eternity in hell. Now it is brought back for 250 years. Take him away".
Jonathan was aproached by two guards, they both looked like they where very sorry for him.
"Seer" Jonathan spoke "do you know who send the feather?"
"Yes" she awnserd "the court cannot hear this, so I'll tell you on you're journey to hell".
When the seer and jonathan where on the carriege that was supposed to bring jonathan to hell, the seer spoke again.
"Do not tell this to anyone, it is very important that this remains a secret" she said.
"Ok, but who send it?" Jonathan asked.
"You're daughter" the seer awnserd.
"WHAT!!!!" Jonathan yelled "Crystal? But how?"
"I know that it is supposed to be impossible" the seer said "but I think that Crystal inheriteged you're powers, as you will understand, the court can not know this, they will kill her if they do".
"But, I thought that angelic powers can only be given to a person by a special rituel, they can't be inheriteged". Jonathan said.
"But they have" the seer said "and this has never happend before,....ever"
"How big will her powers be?" Jonathan asked.
"Very big, if she learns to control them, they will surpass the powers of any angel" the seer awnserd.
"And Ricardo, did he?" Jonathan asked.
"I felt no powers in him, only you're daughter recieved you're powers".
"Jonathan" the seer continued "You must realize, that crystal does not control her powers now, she doesn't even realizes them. But the moment she will, she could very much be the most powerful creature in this universe."
Jonathan tried to say something but the seer cut him off "I also saw something dark coming to you're childrens way, I couldn't see what it was, but I think that Ricardo and Crystal will have to deal with alot of troubles".
The carriege stopped, they arrived at hell.
"I wish you good luck Jonathan" the seer said "and I shall try to watch you're son and daughter".
Jonathan nodded, he stapped out of the carriege, and walked into hell. He felt terrible, if Crystal had inheriteged his powers, she would be amazingly strong, for a normal human girl that was a lot to deal with. And what about this darkness the seer spoke of? Jonathan sighted he guessed a lot would happen on earth while he was here.
A/N: That was the 2'nd chapter. The next will skip a couple of years, and will probably start when crystal and ricardo will be around 16.
But what do you guys think sofar, do I go too far, or is this still good, flames, reviews, good advice, anything, tell me.
A/N: None
Kuririn's Onna: Thank you, I'm trying to be as original as possible.
CrazyJen: Thanks, I hope you like this chapter aswell
xXEvil-OneXx: *blushes* thankies. I'm glad you like it.
Deadly Beauty: Boy, I'm really glad you like it so much already. Thanks I hope you enjoy this to.
Children of an angel
Chapter 2: A white feather.
Jewel was downstairs in the kitchen cooking breakfast. Suddenly she heard a lot of noise coming from the stairs, it sounded like someone unleashed a herd of elefants at the stairs.
"Hai mommy" Crystal said when she walked inside.
"Hey sweety, could you please try to get down a little more silent" Jewel said.
"Yes mommy." After she said that even more noise was coming, and Ricardo walked inside.
"Hey" He said
"Hai Ricci" Crystal welcomed her brother.
"Could someone of you please cover the table?" Jewel asked her kids.
"Ricci will do it" Crystal said quickly.
"Why me, you're the girl" Ricardo said angry
"But I'm the oldest" Crystal awnserd.
"Ricardo, do the table, Crystal wake you're father" Jewel said simply, she didn't feel like having her children fighting early in the morning.
"Yay" Crystal yelled and she ran upstairs to wake her father.
When Crystal walked in her parents bedroom everything was still, which was strange, normally her father would be half awake already. "Daddy" Crystal said "waky waky, time for breakfast" Crystal walked further in the room when her father didn't moved. "Daddy?" She tried again, silence. Crystal climbed upon the bed and started shaking her father. "Daddy wake up please". Nothing.
Crystal turned her father around to see his face, his eyes where closed and he didn't move. "Dad" Crystal said in a soft, tiny voice. "Daddy".
But her father didn't move, he didn't say anything, he didn't breath. He just lied still, and he would never move again......
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The ambulancelights where flashing before the house. Crystal and Ricardo where sitting in front of the door. They haven't said a word. A doctor walked towards them.
"Kids, there is something you two have to know..." He started.
"Daddy died didn't he?" Crystal asked.
"And he's not coming back huh?" Ricardo added.
"You kids are smart" the doctor said "you two are right, you're father died of an heart attack, I'm sorry".
Crystal and Ricardo looked downstairs. It was so difficult for them, how could their daddy be gone, he has been with them for 5 years. How can he just leave....
"How can he leave?" Ricardo asked "didn't he loved us anymore?"
"He loved us, but there must be a reason that he left" Crystal awnserd.
Jewel walked up to her children, her face was stained with tears. When she heard her daughter scream that daddy wouldn't move she thought it had all been a joke. But when she felt her husbands cold body, when she felt his silent neck, without a heartbeat, the truth hit her. It felt like her heart was being ripped out, she once again felt the pain she felt before she met Jonathan, but now she couldn't end her life, she had to be there for her children.
"Mommy?" Crystals soft voice came "Daddy's gone forever now isn't he?"
Jewel nodded "He is in this world sweety, maybe he moved somewhere else, but I can't awnser that"
"Crystal said that there was a reason that he left" Ricardo said.
"Nobody knows why people die Ric." Jewel said.
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The funeral was held with a small group, mostly because Jonathan had now friends and familly. Jewel's parents where there, a few close friends, and ofcousre Jewel, Ricardo and Crystal.
Jonathan's coffin was put in a hole. Everybody did something on it. Something special. Crystal put a feather in her father's grave. She didn't know hy, but it felt right. It was a pure white feather, a pidgeon lost it the night before the funeral. She dropped it in the grave and walked away.
"What did you put in daddy's grave?" Ricardo asked his sister.
"A feather" Crystal awnserd.
"Why?"
"Don't know"
"Alright"
Crystal looked up at the sky, "why did you leave daddy?". After everybody dropped something in the grave, the grave was closed. It was terrible to see, as if someone dead could just be coverd with mud and than be forgotten.
"Mom?" Ricardo said "I want to go home now".
Jewel looked at her son with teary eyes.
"Me too mommy" Crystal said.
"Alright" Jewel said "Let's go home". And the three walked off, towards their new lives, without their father and husband.
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Somewhere in a place far away, far from the normal world, even far from king yemma's place where all the deads came in, stood Jonathan. He knew that this could happen. He feared it. But his love for Jewel was so strong that he forgot the laws of the angels.
Now he had to pay the price. His hands where locked in chains, he felt like a common criminal that was about to be sent to hell. He looked up. Around him was the feared angel court. They where harsh, they always sticked to the laws and any angel that broked the laws should be punished according to the court.
No angel liked the court, but they where strong and powerfull, and resisting them would be futile.
"Jonathan" the powerfull voice of the leader came "you broke one of the most important laws in a terrible sort of way, what do you have to say for yourself?"
Jonathan sighted "I am aware of what I've done, but I want you to know that I did it out of love".
"Love" a member of the court said "love between a human and an angel is forbidden, you where supposed to keep the human from commiting suicide and return afterwards. You didn't do that. You never returned, and you even got married with her, no tell me, does she knows that you are an angel?"
"No" Jonathan said "I never broke that law, Jewel had no idea that I'm an angel".
"Very well" the leader spoke again "Jonathan, you know the sentance for breaking the law, now because you have no defence, I'm forced to..."
"Wait" someone shouted.
A mysterious light was appaering on the desk of the leader. He looked at it as if it was a disgusting bug. When the light vanished something small and white lied on the leaders desk.
"A white feather.." he whisperd softly as if that feather was the most special thing ever.
"Someone sended a white feather to us" a memeber of the court said "it is the sign that Jonathan is still good, and still respects the Angel laws".
"Yes I know what it is" the leader shouted angry "but who send it?"
"That is not important" a new weird voice came "the fact is that because of that feather Jonathan's punishment is to be reduced".
"Seer" the leader said.
"Yes, missed me?" the seer spoke.
"Very well" the leader said again "Jonathan, because of the white feather you're punishment will indeed be reduced. It would be, eternity in hell. Now it is brought back for 250 years. Take him away".
Jonathan was aproached by two guards, they both looked like they where very sorry for him.
"Seer" Jonathan spoke "do you know who send the feather?"
"Yes" she awnserd "the court cannot hear this, so I'll tell you on you're journey to hell".
When the seer and jonathan where on the carriege that was supposed to bring jonathan to hell, the seer spoke again.
"Do not tell this to anyone, it is very important that this remains a secret" she said.
"Ok, but who send it?" Jonathan asked.
"You're daughter" the seer awnserd.
"WHAT!!!!" Jonathan yelled "Crystal? But how?"
"I know that it is supposed to be impossible" the seer said "but I think that Crystal inheriteged you're powers, as you will understand, the court can not know this, they will kill her if they do".
"But, I thought that angelic powers can only be given to a person by a special rituel, they can't be inheriteged". Jonathan said.
"But they have" the seer said "and this has never happend before,....ever"
"How big will her powers be?" Jonathan asked.
"Very big, if she learns to control them, they will surpass the powers of any angel" the seer awnserd.
"And Ricardo, did he?" Jonathan asked.
"I felt no powers in him, only you're daughter recieved you're powers".
"Jonathan" the seer continued "You must realize, that crystal does not control her powers now, she doesn't even realizes them. But the moment she will, she could very much be the most powerful creature in this universe."
Jonathan tried to say something but the seer cut him off "I also saw something dark coming to you're childrens way, I couldn't see what it was, but I think that Ricardo and Crystal will have to deal with alot of troubles".
The carriege stopped, they arrived at hell.
"I wish you good luck Jonathan" the seer said "and I shall try to watch you're son and daughter".
Jonathan nodded, he stapped out of the carriege, and walked into hell. He felt terrible, if Crystal had inheriteged his powers, she would be amazingly strong, for a normal human girl that was a lot to deal with. And what about this darkness the seer spoke of? Jonathan sighted he guessed a lot would happen on earth while he was here.
A/N: That was the 2'nd chapter. The next will skip a couple of years, and will probably start when crystal and ricardo will be around 16.
But what do you guys think sofar, do I go too far, or is this still good, flames, reviews, good advice, anything, tell me.