Okay, in response to present reviews:

To oceanmist: thank you for correcting me... my computer lags and i

start clicking my mouse a thousand times and it often messes things up.

i fixed the error though.

to the unknown reviewer: yea i know that, you didn't need the rudeness

and sarcasm, damn.

to hiddenshadows: yes i do have common sense, thanks for asking. that

was a super rude review.

to sillygoodwriterhehheh- okay go ahead and say my story sucks, at

least try to be more constructive about it would you? why does it suck?

that shows what a good writer you'll turn out to be!