Fic Info:
Title: Riptide
Summary: This is an HP fic- but, the catch is, they don't have powers, and dont live in the UK. They are surfers that live in Hawaii...*Draco fic*
Disclaimer: I own nothing but: Darana, Tia(narrator) Lanell, and whoever else isnt an HP character. Oh, and I own the plot. :)
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The water rushed across my body- it's icy coolness sending chills through me. The sun was just beginning to rise, casting long bright lines of shimmering light across the surface of the water. The waves crashed loudly on the shore behind me, and I turned around, watching it. I looked forwards again, sitting up on my board. I turned around, waiting for the right moment to go. I kept glancing behind me, waiting for a wave. When I saw one, I started paddling as hard as I could, my arm muscles burning. The wave grew behind me and soon it was on me, and I stood up on the board, gliding along the water. It arched over me, it's deep blue color shimmering in the dawning sunlight. I rode the wave until it crashed, sending me out of it and up onto shore. I picked up my board with one hand, pushing my wet hair out of my face with the other.
I noticed you sitting there, on the sand, looking at me. Your tan skin looked radiant in the rising sunlight, your brilliant blonde hair falling around your face. You shot me a small smile, and I smiled shyly back, not knowing how to react to you. I thought I was there alone. I stuck my board in the sand and secured my bikini top, flipping my wet brown hair over my shoulder. I was tyring to look cool- trying to make an impression on you- this person I hadn't even met before- this person I didn't even know existed until only two seconds before. Why did you matter?
I looked back over at you. You were looking out at the water, standing up now. I noticed a board stuck in the sand beside you. I hadn't noticed it before. Your amazing blue eyes reflected the rays of warm light as they wandered the surface of the water. You picked up your board, strapping the line to your wrist. You walked out to the water, not even hesitating at it's shrill icy touch. You laid across your board, paddling past the breaking waves, emerging behind them, whipping your blonde hair out of your face. I watched as you danced across the waves, water splashing from behind you. The wave broke behind you as she floated to the shore, picking up your board and wiping the water from your face. The sun glistened off the droplets of water that slid across your perfect skin. You caught my stare- and I drowned in your deep blue eyes.
((I fell in love.))
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Darana flipped her long brown behind her shoulder. "How was the surf this morning?"
I shrugged. "Fine."
"Did you wipe out any?"
"I only had one wave."
"Then why the hell were you up there so long?"
I could feel my cheeks burn. Because of you. "Um...burning time."
Darana rolled her piercing green eyes at me. My sister looked somewhat like me- medium height, brown hair, deep colored eyes. Although mine were a pale blue color and hers a shimmering shade of green, they both made you look twice. My sisters and I lived alone in a house by the beach- surfing was our life. It was me, being the middle age of 17, Darana, the oldest at 19, and Lanell, the youngest at 14. Our parents had both run off, my dad first. They split, and he ran off with the first avaliable girl he found. He sent us a check every month to get by with. My mother- she ran off to New York in hopes of getting famous, leaving us to fend for ourselves. It wasn't like we cared much, getting all this time to ourselves with no rules and no routines. Except for school, that is. Other then that, it was eat, sleep, surf for us.
"I was in town yesterday, and I saw this guy. I heard him talking to this other guy- he just moved here from California." Darana said, taking a bite of her cereal.
My cheeks ere burning again. Was this new comer you? I remained silent.
"You okay?"
I nodded. "I'm fine."
((I've really got to stop lying.))
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I saw you, your sunglasses covering up your brilliant blue eyes. You were leaning against your car, talking to a group of guys all wearing wifebeater tank tops, Billabong shorts and Adidas sandals. Typical surfer boys. Your magnificent tanned muscular arms were crossed over your chest, a Billabong visor on your head. Your hair was perfect, it's bright blonde color shining in the afternoon sun. You looked so perfect.
I watched from afar, too afraid to move in fear you might notice me. But you did anyway. You excused yourself from the conversation and walked over to me where I stood across the parking lot, pretending to be deep in concentration with the keys to my car.
"Hey."
I looked up, pretending I hadn't noticed your presence. "Um..hi."
"I saw you this morning. You're pretty good."
"Er..thanks."
"My, uh, buddies and I were wondering if you wanted to come chill with us tonight down at Pier Six."
"Why, is there some kind of party?"
You nodded. I felt so stupid for saying that. Of course there was a party. It was Pier Six. I gave you a small smile. "Okay."
"We'll see you there at seven then?"
I nodded, my frozen smile remaining on my face. You smiled at me again before walking back across the parking lot and saying goodbye to your friends, gettign into your car and speeding off, the bass from your music blasting through your open windows.
((You noticed me.))
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Did you like the first chapter? I hope it's obvious that that "you" she is referring to is Draco. I know, this is now the muggle world, and Draco isnt a very common name, but niether are Darana and Lanell. I like unique names.
I'll add more soon, once i get some feed back from you guys. I dont know where this idea came from- it just came to me.
more soon.
sara
Title: Riptide
Summary: This is an HP fic- but, the catch is, they don't have powers, and dont live in the UK. They are surfers that live in Hawaii...*Draco fic*
Disclaimer: I own nothing but: Darana, Tia(narrator) Lanell, and whoever else isnt an HP character. Oh, and I own the plot. :)
*****************************************************************************
The water rushed across my body- it's icy coolness sending chills through me. The sun was just beginning to rise, casting long bright lines of shimmering light across the surface of the water. The waves crashed loudly on the shore behind me, and I turned around, watching it. I looked forwards again, sitting up on my board. I turned around, waiting for the right moment to go. I kept glancing behind me, waiting for a wave. When I saw one, I started paddling as hard as I could, my arm muscles burning. The wave grew behind me and soon it was on me, and I stood up on the board, gliding along the water. It arched over me, it's deep blue color shimmering in the dawning sunlight. I rode the wave until it crashed, sending me out of it and up onto shore. I picked up my board with one hand, pushing my wet hair out of my face with the other.
I noticed you sitting there, on the sand, looking at me. Your tan skin looked radiant in the rising sunlight, your brilliant blonde hair falling around your face. You shot me a small smile, and I smiled shyly back, not knowing how to react to you. I thought I was there alone. I stuck my board in the sand and secured my bikini top, flipping my wet brown hair over my shoulder. I was tyring to look cool- trying to make an impression on you- this person I hadn't even met before- this person I didn't even know existed until only two seconds before. Why did you matter?
I looked back over at you. You were looking out at the water, standing up now. I noticed a board stuck in the sand beside you. I hadn't noticed it before. Your amazing blue eyes reflected the rays of warm light as they wandered the surface of the water. You picked up your board, strapping the line to your wrist. You walked out to the water, not even hesitating at it's shrill icy touch. You laid across your board, paddling past the breaking waves, emerging behind them, whipping your blonde hair out of your face. I watched as you danced across the waves, water splashing from behind you. The wave broke behind you as she floated to the shore, picking up your board and wiping the water from your face. The sun glistened off the droplets of water that slid across your perfect skin. You caught my stare- and I drowned in your deep blue eyes.
((I fell in love.))
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Darana flipped her long brown behind her shoulder. "How was the surf this morning?"
I shrugged. "Fine."
"Did you wipe out any?"
"I only had one wave."
"Then why the hell were you up there so long?"
I could feel my cheeks burn. Because of you. "Um...burning time."
Darana rolled her piercing green eyes at me. My sister looked somewhat like me- medium height, brown hair, deep colored eyes. Although mine were a pale blue color and hers a shimmering shade of green, they both made you look twice. My sisters and I lived alone in a house by the beach- surfing was our life. It was me, being the middle age of 17, Darana, the oldest at 19, and Lanell, the youngest at 14. Our parents had both run off, my dad first. They split, and he ran off with the first avaliable girl he found. He sent us a check every month to get by with. My mother- she ran off to New York in hopes of getting famous, leaving us to fend for ourselves. It wasn't like we cared much, getting all this time to ourselves with no rules and no routines. Except for school, that is. Other then that, it was eat, sleep, surf for us.
"I was in town yesterday, and I saw this guy. I heard him talking to this other guy- he just moved here from California." Darana said, taking a bite of her cereal.
My cheeks ere burning again. Was this new comer you? I remained silent.
"You okay?"
I nodded. "I'm fine."
((I've really got to stop lying.))
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I saw you, your sunglasses covering up your brilliant blue eyes. You were leaning against your car, talking to a group of guys all wearing wifebeater tank tops, Billabong shorts and Adidas sandals. Typical surfer boys. Your magnificent tanned muscular arms were crossed over your chest, a Billabong visor on your head. Your hair was perfect, it's bright blonde color shining in the afternoon sun. You looked so perfect.
I watched from afar, too afraid to move in fear you might notice me. But you did anyway. You excused yourself from the conversation and walked over to me where I stood across the parking lot, pretending to be deep in concentration with the keys to my car.
"Hey."
I looked up, pretending I hadn't noticed your presence. "Um..hi."
"I saw you this morning. You're pretty good."
"Er..thanks."
"My, uh, buddies and I were wondering if you wanted to come chill with us tonight down at Pier Six."
"Why, is there some kind of party?"
You nodded. I felt so stupid for saying that. Of course there was a party. It was Pier Six. I gave you a small smile. "Okay."
"We'll see you there at seven then?"
I nodded, my frozen smile remaining on my face. You smiled at me again before walking back across the parking lot and saying goodbye to your friends, gettign into your car and speeding off, the bass from your music blasting through your open windows.
((You noticed me.))
~*~*~*~*~
Did you like the first chapter? I hope it's obvious that that "you" she is referring to is Draco. I know, this is now the muggle world, and Draco isnt a very common name, but niether are Darana and Lanell. I like unique names.
I'll add more soon, once i get some feed back from you guys. I dont know where this idea came from- it just came to me.
more soon.
sara