Disclaimer: Chapter 1 holds the secret. (I no, I'm lazy and don't change
this part).
A/N: Okay kiddies, in case you haven't figured it out, what I do when
starting to type a new chapter is take the previous one, change the chapter
number and name, and delete everything but the author's notes and
disclaimer. Just telling you so you don't think I'm a complete idiot when
you see how much I repeat myself in these two sections. Thank you all again
for your replies!! E-mail with ideas and any other comments at
jupitergurl02@hotmail.com are STILL appreciated! (I haven't had anyone
respond to this yet. sobs)
MUAHAHAHA!! Chapter 8, the first fight scene. Just to let you guys know, I suck at writing these. If anyone has any suggestions, it would be GREATLY appreciated. (there probably wouldn't even BE a fight scene had Mikey, Lisa, and Fay not suggested it and given me ideas). okay, so I've almost typed up everything I have written out. Soon I can write the story and type it up at the same time. I've got a few ideas, including a day in the life of the brotherhood with Fay. I will possibly add Wanda and Mystique, but I don't really know how their characters act. Again, this is an AU, but I try to at least stay KINDA on track (any pointers in that area would help, too). Well, I'll keep it short just this once *cheers* let's go team!
Chapter 8, Confrontation
"So, what should our mutant names be?" asked Mikey. He, Lisa, Angela, and Kurt were walking down the corridor of the X Mansion on one of their very few breaks from training.
"How about Sailor Jupiter!?" Angela suggested excitedly. Everyone sweatdropped.
"Vell, she's certainly intimidating enough," said Kurt.
"How about just Jupiter?" said Lisa.
"Yeah! And you can be Mercury!" Angela giggled.
"Um, no." said Lisa flatly. Angela pouted.
"Can we call you Fluffy, Kurt?" Angela asked.
"Vhat? No! I'm Nightcrawler, remember?"
"Oh... How about Logan, then?"
"No!" they all shouted. Angela pouted more.
"Beast?" she suggested meekly.
"Maybe," said Lisa, smiling. "You'll have to ask him. Okay, what about you, Mikey?"
"Hmm, I dunno..." he said, thinking.
"How about Magician?" suggested Kurt.
"Yeah!" agreed Mikey happily. "Your turn, Lisa."
"What about Aqua?" she said.
"Yeah! That's pretty," said Angela happily.
"Yeah, I like it," said Kurt. Lisa blushed slightly. Wolverine ran down the hall toward the stairs.
"Hey!" Angela yelped, falling. He stopped and turned to her, determination in his features.
"C'mon kids," he ordered, "Mutants, head this way."
"Iz it ze brozerhood?" asked Kurt.
"Yeah," confirmed Wolverine, "and they've got a new recruit."
"Yay!" exclaimed Angela as she stood up.
"What do you mean 'yay'?" asked Lisa, baffled.
"It'll be fun to use our powers together!" Angela said happily. "And we get cool uniforms!"
"Sorry guys," said Scott, running by them, "no time to change. [1] Just get out front and prepare to fight. We don't know what we're up against here."
"Oh!" pouted Angela. Lisa pushed her friend forward.
"Come on, Angela. Maybe we should call you Sailor Moon instead," said Mikey.
"Don't encourage her!" Lisa berated. They made their way through the crowded hall of mutants to the front door. Angela bumped into Multiple who split into five, causing even more crowding.
"Cool!" she exclaimed, being pushed against Mikey who was in turn forced into the wall.
"Ow!" yelled Kurt, grabbing Lisa, Mikey, and Angela. He bamfed them outside the mansion, watching everyone else pile out the front door. Angela ran up to Jamey.
"Wow! You're so great! Will you be my friends?" she asked happily. Everyone sweatdropped.
"So where are dese guys?" asked Remy impatiently. The ground began to rumble as a giant demon formed entirely of water approached alongside an overly crowded Jeep.
"Looks like they've arrived," said Cyclops, holding a hand to his visor.
"Ah... ah... AHCHOO!" Angela sneezed.
"Look out!" Lisa yelled as a bolt of lightning flashed down, exploding the water demon into vapor.
"Hey, watch it, yo!" yelled Toad.
"Sorry," Angela said, blushing a little. She suddenly began to float. "Cut it out Jean!" she yelped.
"It's not me!" Jean protested. Angela blinked, looking at all the metal she had on and noticed it seemed to be holding her up.
"Zat is vhy ve haff uniforms," said Kurt.
"Put her down, Erik. Gently," said Xavier.
"Why, hello Charles. So this is one of the new recruits, eh?" Angela spun around, whimpering.
"Guys? I don't like heights!" she complained. "Eep! Cut it out!" she began to wail and everyone held their ears. Angela fell as Magneto lost control. She landed on Remy and blinked down at him.
"Gah! Ge' offa me, chere! Yer too heavy!" the Cajun groaned, pushing her off.
"Hey, be nice!" said Mikey.
"Allow me to introduce our now recruit," said Magneto, indicating Fay.
"Oh Angela!" Fay yelled form the Jeep.
"Fay?" asked Lisa in disbelief.
"Angela, you bitch! You had to sneeze and kill my water demon, didn't you?!" Fay griped.
"Sowwie Fay-Fay," said Angela.
"You know each other?" asked Lance.
"Yup, Fay's our friend," confirmed Mikey.
"Ah'm so sick o' this!" this from Rogue.
"Yeah, let's go!" said Roberto, charging up.
"Yay!" said Angela happily.
"Where's m' cards, chere?" Remy inquired of her.
"I dunno," she said innocently. "Eep!"
"Here dey are," he said, his hand in Angela's pocket. He smiled.
"Hentai!" she yelled, lightning striking near the Jeep.
"Hey!" yelled Lance, jumping out. Everyone else followed suit.
"Yo, Magneto, doncha think we're a bit outnumbered here?" said Toad uneasily.
"Nonsense, Todd! You can take them!" said Magneto, smiling at him.
"I take it that means you're not gonna help?" said Fay. Magneto sweatdropped.
"Let's see what you can do, new girl," said Toad, leaping at Mikey threateningly.
"Hey!" Mikey yelled in surprise. "Baseball bat!"
"Huh?" said Toad, looking confused. He didn't see what hit him until after he staggered to his feet. "No fair, yo! He can make anything he asks for?"
"Very interesting," said Magneto. Toad glared, snatching the bat away with his tongue.
"Nice shot, Magician!" said Scott.
"Ewe..." said Mikey, wiping his slimy hands on his shirt.
"Zat's Toad for you," said Kurt in disgust.
"Fire demon!" Fay yelled, summoning the large red creature.
"Sugoi..." said Angela. The demon loomed over them, twenty feet tall and made of bright, hot flames.
"My turn," said Lisa, water shooting at the demon. It was knocked off its feet and the water continued to pour over it, extinguishing it.
"Lisa!" Fay yelled angrily.
"Sorry!" said Lisa.
"Fine! ICE DEMON!" the shiny creature stepped forward, causing the ground beneath them to tremble.
"Magma, this one's yours," said Beast. She nodded.
"Here goes," she said uneasily. She turned to a lava-like form and shot a hot beam at the demon, melting it to a puddle which seeped into the ground.
"Oh!" Fay yelled in frustration. "I give up!"
"Don't worry, I'll fix 'em!" said Pietro valiantly. He rushed forward. Evan shot spikes at him, but missed because of his speed. Lisa smiled, the water from the demon coming back out of the ground and forming a sphere in Quicksilver's path. He didn't see it in time and ran right into it, trapping himself.
"Hey!" he yelled.
"Be happy she left you a bubble to breath in," said Wolverine. He rushed forward, claws extended. "Where's Sabertooth? I smell him!"
"Ha ha! You mean the 'kitty'?" said Lance, pointing.
"What are you talking about?" asked Wolverine, looking toward the disgruntled mutant. "Oh my... Did she do this? I like her..." he said, smiling.
"Puppy!" exclaimed Fay upon seeing Wolverine. "But I like my kitty better."
"I'm not a puppy!" Logan snarled, his opinion of her suddenly changing.
"Bad puppy! Go to your kennel! Tell, him Captain Pacard!" [2] said Fay.
"What...?" asked Scott in confusion.
"Hey, he does look like Pacard!" said Angela happily, turning to the Professor. He sweatdropped.
"My turn," said Lance, clenching his hands into fists and concentrating. The ground beneath them began to violently shake.
"I don' tink so, mon ami," said Remy, flipping a golden card at Lance's feet.
"Huh? Ace of spades? I don't get it," he said, reaching to puck it up. It blew up and he flew back. Everyone gaped as this was the first time they had ever seen Remy's power. He smiled.
"Call me Gambit. An' dat was jus' a small one."
"Enough!" growled Magneto, enraged.
"Now now, Erik, no need to be cross," said Xavier.
"We'll be back... Come on Necromancer," said Magneto, walking away.
"Neko-mancer?" asked Angela. Lisa sweatdropped along with Mikey. Fay walked over to them.
"Hey, cool!" she said, pulling Kurt's tail with her free hand. The other was clenched around the opposite end of Sabertooth's leash.
"Cut it out! Vhat are you doing? You're ze enemy! Go on!" he shooed her away angrily, holding his tail and smoothing the fur.
"Geez. Touchy," said Fay, pulling Pietro out of the water by his spiky bangs.
"Ow! Hey!" he yelled.
"Well, bye guys," said Fay, dragging Pietro away by his hair. "I think Gandalf's going to go find the one ring to unite them all... and I wanna steal it! By psycho, bye Lisa, by my evil buddy, bye Captain Pacard, bye inu!" [3] she bid them all farewell and then left.
"Vell zat vas interesting," said Kurt.
"Do I want to know what inu is?" asked Logan.
"It means puppy!" said Angela happily.
"Heh, it fits y'," said Remy. Logan glared.
"Yay!" said Angela triumphantly. She had Remy's cards again and ran back to the mansion with them.
"I'm going to my room," said Kurt.
"Don't forget, lab tomorrow," said Lisa.
"Ya, I'll do ze prelab," said Kurt.
"Give dose back!" yelled Remy from inside the mansion. There was a loud crash.
"That sounds promising," said Lisa, heading for the mansion with the rest of the group.
[1] Lisa and I have this running joke about the show how they're just suddenly in uniform always. No matter what. They even changed in Scott's car once. While it was moving. I had Lisa read this part before it was typed up and she goes, "what do you MEAN there's no time to change? There's ALWAYS time to change! Even in the car!" [2] The same actor played Captain Pacard from Star Trek as did Professor Xavier in the X-Men movies. I read a book that was an X-Men/Star Trek crossover and they even commented on the likeness of the two. [3] Angela's nickname from Fay is psycho, Mikey's is 'my evil buddy,' and inu means dog (she was referring to Wolverine
A/N: Yes, there's MORE! I know, it was kinda short and my first try at writing an action scene. What do you think? Hope you enjoyed it! That's it for what I have written out! Chapter nine will be fresh and funzies!
MUAHAHAHA!! Chapter 8, the first fight scene. Just to let you guys know, I suck at writing these. If anyone has any suggestions, it would be GREATLY appreciated. (there probably wouldn't even BE a fight scene had Mikey, Lisa, and Fay not suggested it and given me ideas). okay, so I've almost typed up everything I have written out. Soon I can write the story and type it up at the same time. I've got a few ideas, including a day in the life of the brotherhood with Fay. I will possibly add Wanda and Mystique, but I don't really know how their characters act. Again, this is an AU, but I try to at least stay KINDA on track (any pointers in that area would help, too). Well, I'll keep it short just this once *cheers* let's go team!
Chapter 8, Confrontation
"So, what should our mutant names be?" asked Mikey. He, Lisa, Angela, and Kurt were walking down the corridor of the X Mansion on one of their very few breaks from training.
"How about Sailor Jupiter!?" Angela suggested excitedly. Everyone sweatdropped.
"Vell, she's certainly intimidating enough," said Kurt.
"How about just Jupiter?" said Lisa.
"Yeah! And you can be Mercury!" Angela giggled.
"Um, no." said Lisa flatly. Angela pouted.
"Can we call you Fluffy, Kurt?" Angela asked.
"Vhat? No! I'm Nightcrawler, remember?"
"Oh... How about Logan, then?"
"No!" they all shouted. Angela pouted more.
"Beast?" she suggested meekly.
"Maybe," said Lisa, smiling. "You'll have to ask him. Okay, what about you, Mikey?"
"Hmm, I dunno..." he said, thinking.
"How about Magician?" suggested Kurt.
"Yeah!" agreed Mikey happily. "Your turn, Lisa."
"What about Aqua?" she said.
"Yeah! That's pretty," said Angela happily.
"Yeah, I like it," said Kurt. Lisa blushed slightly. Wolverine ran down the hall toward the stairs.
"Hey!" Angela yelped, falling. He stopped and turned to her, determination in his features.
"C'mon kids," he ordered, "Mutants, head this way."
"Iz it ze brozerhood?" asked Kurt.
"Yeah," confirmed Wolverine, "and they've got a new recruit."
"Yay!" exclaimed Angela as she stood up.
"What do you mean 'yay'?" asked Lisa, baffled.
"It'll be fun to use our powers together!" Angela said happily. "And we get cool uniforms!"
"Sorry guys," said Scott, running by them, "no time to change. [1] Just get out front and prepare to fight. We don't know what we're up against here."
"Oh!" pouted Angela. Lisa pushed her friend forward.
"Come on, Angela. Maybe we should call you Sailor Moon instead," said Mikey.
"Don't encourage her!" Lisa berated. They made their way through the crowded hall of mutants to the front door. Angela bumped into Multiple who split into five, causing even more crowding.
"Cool!" she exclaimed, being pushed against Mikey who was in turn forced into the wall.
"Ow!" yelled Kurt, grabbing Lisa, Mikey, and Angela. He bamfed them outside the mansion, watching everyone else pile out the front door. Angela ran up to Jamey.
"Wow! You're so great! Will you be my friends?" she asked happily. Everyone sweatdropped.
"So where are dese guys?" asked Remy impatiently. The ground began to rumble as a giant demon formed entirely of water approached alongside an overly crowded Jeep.
"Looks like they've arrived," said Cyclops, holding a hand to his visor.
"Ah... ah... AHCHOO!" Angela sneezed.
"Look out!" Lisa yelled as a bolt of lightning flashed down, exploding the water demon into vapor.
"Hey, watch it, yo!" yelled Toad.
"Sorry," Angela said, blushing a little. She suddenly began to float. "Cut it out Jean!" she yelped.
"It's not me!" Jean protested. Angela blinked, looking at all the metal she had on and noticed it seemed to be holding her up.
"Zat is vhy ve haff uniforms," said Kurt.
"Put her down, Erik. Gently," said Xavier.
"Why, hello Charles. So this is one of the new recruits, eh?" Angela spun around, whimpering.
"Guys? I don't like heights!" she complained. "Eep! Cut it out!" she began to wail and everyone held their ears. Angela fell as Magneto lost control. She landed on Remy and blinked down at him.
"Gah! Ge' offa me, chere! Yer too heavy!" the Cajun groaned, pushing her off.
"Hey, be nice!" said Mikey.
"Allow me to introduce our now recruit," said Magneto, indicating Fay.
"Oh Angela!" Fay yelled form the Jeep.
"Fay?" asked Lisa in disbelief.
"Angela, you bitch! You had to sneeze and kill my water demon, didn't you?!" Fay griped.
"Sowwie Fay-Fay," said Angela.
"You know each other?" asked Lance.
"Yup, Fay's our friend," confirmed Mikey.
"Ah'm so sick o' this!" this from Rogue.
"Yeah, let's go!" said Roberto, charging up.
"Yay!" said Angela happily.
"Where's m' cards, chere?" Remy inquired of her.
"I dunno," she said innocently. "Eep!"
"Here dey are," he said, his hand in Angela's pocket. He smiled.
"Hentai!" she yelled, lightning striking near the Jeep.
"Hey!" yelled Lance, jumping out. Everyone else followed suit.
"Yo, Magneto, doncha think we're a bit outnumbered here?" said Toad uneasily.
"Nonsense, Todd! You can take them!" said Magneto, smiling at him.
"I take it that means you're not gonna help?" said Fay. Magneto sweatdropped.
"Let's see what you can do, new girl," said Toad, leaping at Mikey threateningly.
"Hey!" Mikey yelled in surprise. "Baseball bat!"
"Huh?" said Toad, looking confused. He didn't see what hit him until after he staggered to his feet. "No fair, yo! He can make anything he asks for?"
"Very interesting," said Magneto. Toad glared, snatching the bat away with his tongue.
"Nice shot, Magician!" said Scott.
"Ewe..." said Mikey, wiping his slimy hands on his shirt.
"Zat's Toad for you," said Kurt in disgust.
"Fire demon!" Fay yelled, summoning the large red creature.
"Sugoi..." said Angela. The demon loomed over them, twenty feet tall and made of bright, hot flames.
"My turn," said Lisa, water shooting at the demon. It was knocked off its feet and the water continued to pour over it, extinguishing it.
"Lisa!" Fay yelled angrily.
"Sorry!" said Lisa.
"Fine! ICE DEMON!" the shiny creature stepped forward, causing the ground beneath them to tremble.
"Magma, this one's yours," said Beast. She nodded.
"Here goes," she said uneasily. She turned to a lava-like form and shot a hot beam at the demon, melting it to a puddle which seeped into the ground.
"Oh!" Fay yelled in frustration. "I give up!"
"Don't worry, I'll fix 'em!" said Pietro valiantly. He rushed forward. Evan shot spikes at him, but missed because of his speed. Lisa smiled, the water from the demon coming back out of the ground and forming a sphere in Quicksilver's path. He didn't see it in time and ran right into it, trapping himself.
"Hey!" he yelled.
"Be happy she left you a bubble to breath in," said Wolverine. He rushed forward, claws extended. "Where's Sabertooth? I smell him!"
"Ha ha! You mean the 'kitty'?" said Lance, pointing.
"What are you talking about?" asked Wolverine, looking toward the disgruntled mutant. "Oh my... Did she do this? I like her..." he said, smiling.
"Puppy!" exclaimed Fay upon seeing Wolverine. "But I like my kitty better."
"I'm not a puppy!" Logan snarled, his opinion of her suddenly changing.
"Bad puppy! Go to your kennel! Tell, him Captain Pacard!" [2] said Fay.
"What...?" asked Scott in confusion.
"Hey, he does look like Pacard!" said Angela happily, turning to the Professor. He sweatdropped.
"My turn," said Lance, clenching his hands into fists and concentrating. The ground beneath them began to violently shake.
"I don' tink so, mon ami," said Remy, flipping a golden card at Lance's feet.
"Huh? Ace of spades? I don't get it," he said, reaching to puck it up. It blew up and he flew back. Everyone gaped as this was the first time they had ever seen Remy's power. He smiled.
"Call me Gambit. An' dat was jus' a small one."
"Enough!" growled Magneto, enraged.
"Now now, Erik, no need to be cross," said Xavier.
"We'll be back... Come on Necromancer," said Magneto, walking away.
"Neko-mancer?" asked Angela. Lisa sweatdropped along with Mikey. Fay walked over to them.
"Hey, cool!" she said, pulling Kurt's tail with her free hand. The other was clenched around the opposite end of Sabertooth's leash.
"Cut it out! Vhat are you doing? You're ze enemy! Go on!" he shooed her away angrily, holding his tail and smoothing the fur.
"Geez. Touchy," said Fay, pulling Pietro out of the water by his spiky bangs.
"Ow! Hey!" he yelled.
"Well, bye guys," said Fay, dragging Pietro away by his hair. "I think Gandalf's going to go find the one ring to unite them all... and I wanna steal it! By psycho, bye Lisa, by my evil buddy, bye Captain Pacard, bye inu!" [3] she bid them all farewell and then left.
"Vell zat vas interesting," said Kurt.
"Do I want to know what inu is?" asked Logan.
"It means puppy!" said Angela happily.
"Heh, it fits y'," said Remy. Logan glared.
"Yay!" said Angela triumphantly. She had Remy's cards again and ran back to the mansion with them.
"I'm going to my room," said Kurt.
"Don't forget, lab tomorrow," said Lisa.
"Ya, I'll do ze prelab," said Kurt.
"Give dose back!" yelled Remy from inside the mansion. There was a loud crash.
"That sounds promising," said Lisa, heading for the mansion with the rest of the group.
[1] Lisa and I have this running joke about the show how they're just suddenly in uniform always. No matter what. They even changed in Scott's car once. While it was moving. I had Lisa read this part before it was typed up and she goes, "what do you MEAN there's no time to change? There's ALWAYS time to change! Even in the car!" [2] The same actor played Captain Pacard from Star Trek as did Professor Xavier in the X-Men movies. I read a book that was an X-Men/Star Trek crossover and they even commented on the likeness of the two. [3] Angela's nickname from Fay is psycho, Mikey's is 'my evil buddy,' and inu means dog (she was referring to Wolverine
A/N: Yes, there's MORE! I know, it was kinda short and my first try at writing an action scene. What do you think? Hope you enjoyed it! That's it for what I have written out! Chapter nine will be fresh and funzies!