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Chapter One
Party
A fist came flying at Jimena, but she quickly ducked missing the fist by a couple of inches.
"I told, por que if you mess with one of us you mess con todas," Jimena said angrily.
"Callate, bit**," Lety said angrily. Jimena nodded to her homies; Sandra, Rebeca, and Christina.
"Y que te pasa? Trying to take our vatos and coming onto our territory?" Rebeca asked her eyes searching for a beer bottle.
"Sabes que? I'm feeling simpatica right now, we're not fighting cause I know its unfair," Jimena said with a smirk. Lety was alone without her homies; however, Jimena had hers.
"Oh, but we'll be seeing each other muy, muy pronto," Sandra added.
"Asta luego," Rebeca waved teasingly.
Jimena slammed Sandra's car door shut. She leaned back onto the passenger's seat taking in a deep breath. All she wanted to do now was see Veto.
"Hey Chicas, I heard that there's a fiesta over at Roberto's. Queren ir?" Sandra asked starting the ignition to her black, Camaro.
"Claro, pero nomas queres ir por que alli esta Roberto," Christina grinned, as she turned up the volume to the car stereo.
"So I guess that's a si," Sandra said as she pushed her foot down on the gas and sped into the night.
Jimena could here the music from the party from a couple blocks away. A gentle breeze caressed her cheek and blew her long, black hair about. Out of nowhere a premonition hit her and her eyes widened as she gripped onto the handle of the door.
"What did you see?" Sandra aked quickly glancing at her. Jimena remembered. Vato held her in his arms and kissed her, but then her friends came and took her because there was a big battle going on between a lot of gangs.
"There's gonna be a big pelea between a lot of gangs. We'd better be prepared," Jimena answered. Jimena had a strange ability; she received premonitions. However, only her homies knew about that and they kept it a secret. She barely ever really described her premonitions to her homies, but they understood. Sandra nodded in understanding.
"So do you know if nosotros ganamos?" Christina asked interested.
"No se," Jimena answered. "Let's just party and forget about it," Jimena said trying to forget about the premonition, but her premonitions were always right and could never be stopped.
Sandra parked the car a block away because the streets were packed with cars. Jimena slammed the door shut to the car and walked with her homegirls to Roberto's house where the party was.
Jimena walked into the backyard where the loud music was coming from. The vibrations pulsing through her body and the urge to dance was taking over. Jimena glanced out to the backyard where girls wore revealing clothes; as if advertising their bodies to the guys. Flaunting around letting guys use them. Disgusted Jimena turned to look away and looked down at her outfit. She wore a tight, black see-through tank top over a black bra, baggy, black slacks, and Doc Martens.
She pushed through the throng of dancers, guys trying to dance with her, but she pushed through. Her soft, brown eyes scanning the crowd, looking for Veto.
"Jaguar," someone whispered behind her. She turned to face Veto, who was looking incredibly handsome. His black hair spiked, his skin a deep bronze, and his dark brown eyes on her. He wore a tight black muscle T, faded, baggy jeans, heavy black boots, and a little diamond in his right ear. She smiled back at him.
He pulled her up against his body as they danced together. She could feel jealous stared from girls who had hoped Veto had danced with them and maybe did even more with them, but he would never do that.
"Let's get something to drink," he whispered into her ear, his breath tickling the side of her neck. His hand grabbed hers and pulled her out of the throng of dancers.
