Mistaken
"Adar, I beg of you! Do not go to Lothlorien!" Legolas begged. "Why ever not, we were invited as were your relatives." Thranduil replied. "If we go there, Laidúlin will be there. You know that her and I do not get along." "Legolas, you mightn't even see her. Who knows maybe they declined the invitation." "Amin uuma malia (I don't care) You know as well as I, that they won't have declined it. I'm going for a walk." Legolas walked out of his fathers study down to the gardens. He went to a tree, far from the others that he had gone to years before. "How I hate her! She's nothing but an annoying pest. Every year, always the same, "Hey Legolas did you do something to your hair? It looks different, oh wait, it's just dirty" or "Ah! Legolas your ears they're gone really big!" "Legolas, Dolle naa lost (You're an idiot)" "Why on earth do we have to go there."
"Mother! When are we going to Lothlorien?" asked Laidúlin. "We leave tomorrow, it will take a few weeks. Have you packed your things?" "No, but I will." Laidúlin walked out of the hall and went to her room. She looked in her mirror, her long blond hair was nearly covering her face, and her sparkling green eyes had an extra shine today. She packed her belongings and went to the stables. Her horse Dûrarda nuzzled her gently on the cheek. "Hello my friend, ready for the journey tomorrow? Of course you are." She mused. She patted him on the head and walked down the stables. "Cousin Arwen! Vedui' (greetings)" "Hello Laidúlin, all ready for tomorrow?" she asked. "Yes. I love going to Lothlorien! The music, the dancing its so much fun!" she replied. "Did you bring a new dress?" "Yes, but you'll have to wait and see it!" "Laidúlin, may I have a word with you?" called Ainadaeiel, Laidúlins Mother. "Yes, I'm coming, bye Arwen, see you tomorrow." "Now my child, I just thought I'd tell you that you and me, and some of the others are in the first group to leave tomorrow. Though, your father is in the second group, which does not leave for another two days. Is that okay?" "Yes mother, but I wish Father was coming with us."
The next day, they set off to Lothlorien. Two days after Laidúlins Father left with his group. Thranduil and Legolas and others left on the day after that. After a few weeks they reached Lorien and settled down. Soon after, the first group from Rivendell arrived. "Wow" gasped Laidúlin, the beauty of Lothlorien always took her breath away, even though she had been there several times before. Galadriel came to greet them. Laidúlin bowed but then hugged her. "Hello Laidúlin, it's lovely to see all of you again. Others have arrived too. I believe there is one more group yet to come?" "Yes, they departed two days after us" one of the older elves replied. "Then I suggest you all settle down. Laidúlin walked onwards until she found her bed, next to a beautiful tree. Nearby Legolas was well settled in, he had seen Laidúlin arrive moments before and went back to his room.
Well? How was it? Was it ok? Believe me it's my first try at anything serious. R&R please and thank you. New chapter up soon.
"Adar, I beg of you! Do not go to Lothlorien!" Legolas begged. "Why ever not, we were invited as were your relatives." Thranduil replied. "If we go there, Laidúlin will be there. You know that her and I do not get along." "Legolas, you mightn't even see her. Who knows maybe they declined the invitation." "Amin uuma malia (I don't care) You know as well as I, that they won't have declined it. I'm going for a walk." Legolas walked out of his fathers study down to the gardens. He went to a tree, far from the others that he had gone to years before. "How I hate her! She's nothing but an annoying pest. Every year, always the same, "Hey Legolas did you do something to your hair? It looks different, oh wait, it's just dirty" or "Ah! Legolas your ears they're gone really big!" "Legolas, Dolle naa lost (You're an idiot)" "Why on earth do we have to go there."
"Mother! When are we going to Lothlorien?" asked Laidúlin. "We leave tomorrow, it will take a few weeks. Have you packed your things?" "No, but I will." Laidúlin walked out of the hall and went to her room. She looked in her mirror, her long blond hair was nearly covering her face, and her sparkling green eyes had an extra shine today. She packed her belongings and went to the stables. Her horse Dûrarda nuzzled her gently on the cheek. "Hello my friend, ready for the journey tomorrow? Of course you are." She mused. She patted him on the head and walked down the stables. "Cousin Arwen! Vedui' (greetings)" "Hello Laidúlin, all ready for tomorrow?" she asked. "Yes. I love going to Lothlorien! The music, the dancing its so much fun!" she replied. "Did you bring a new dress?" "Yes, but you'll have to wait and see it!" "Laidúlin, may I have a word with you?" called Ainadaeiel, Laidúlins Mother. "Yes, I'm coming, bye Arwen, see you tomorrow." "Now my child, I just thought I'd tell you that you and me, and some of the others are in the first group to leave tomorrow. Though, your father is in the second group, which does not leave for another two days. Is that okay?" "Yes mother, but I wish Father was coming with us."
The next day, they set off to Lothlorien. Two days after Laidúlins Father left with his group. Thranduil and Legolas and others left on the day after that. After a few weeks they reached Lorien and settled down. Soon after, the first group from Rivendell arrived. "Wow" gasped Laidúlin, the beauty of Lothlorien always took her breath away, even though she had been there several times before. Galadriel came to greet them. Laidúlin bowed but then hugged her. "Hello Laidúlin, it's lovely to see all of you again. Others have arrived too. I believe there is one more group yet to come?" "Yes, they departed two days after us" one of the older elves replied. "Then I suggest you all settle down. Laidúlin walked onwards until she found her bed, next to a beautiful tree. Nearby Legolas was well settled in, he had seen Laidúlin arrive moments before and went back to his room.
Well? How was it? Was it ok? Believe me it's my first try at anything serious. R&R please and thank you. New chapter up soon.