Thank you reviewers:
AJ Taylir: Glad you find it intresting! :) Please keep reading and reviewing!
gerjomarty: I'll be explaining the characters as much as I can, I am glad you like them alhough I can only take credit for Keirei because she is my character and I created her. The others were made by members of ff.net who participated in a interactive fic that I am currently holding on my website.If you want ot check it out please go to http://www.freewebs.com/pinkiceprincess or http://groups.msn.com/pinkicelair Keep reading and reviewing.
Red Outburst. I know! Im sorry, that does bug me too, don't worry not all the characters are going to be as acceptant of the digimon. Let me explian though, Keirei has been in the digiworld for a long time. As I said she is like a female version of Ryo. I am glad you like it though! Please keep reading and reviewing.
Link02: Thanks for reading, who is your character? Keep reading and reviewing.
IceQueen279: Thanks! Glad you like it and the characters depth will be added more as the story goes on, please keep reading and reviewing!
Sincere Serenity: Thanks! Glad you like it! I try not to make the characters Mary Sues, and as the people picked them didn't make them Mary-Sues, it was a lot easier for me! Well please keep reviewing!
You gotta say thanks! Well now...
Disclaimer: I don't own digimon, but I own this plot!
Resulting In This
Chapter Two.
Alana walked around the lake. It was now night time. Riley was already fast asleep next to her kitten like digimon. Alana looked up to the stars and sighed. It was different here. She wanted to be with her friends, at the camping trip. No doubt they were probably worried sick. But no-one would find her.
She sat down next to the rock and placed her bag beside her. Aquamon was busy playing nearby in the water. She looked out at her new friend. Aquamon didn't seem to want to hurt her. She just wanted a friend. Alana sighed.
"Aquamon?" she asked, just above a whisper.
"Yeah Alana?" The digimon said, almost instantly appearing next to her.
"Do you know this place well?"
"Yep."
"Keirei spoke of others. We should go find them." Alana said looking back towards the lake.
"Not without me." a voice said from behind them. Alana turned only to see Riley, awake and full of energy, Nuvemon right by her heels.
"Okay." Alana said. She picked up her bag and looked at Aquamon. "Lead the way, tell us if you like smell something."
"Okie Dokie." Aquamon lead north through the dark forest that was surrounding the trees.
After a little while of walking the saw a light up a head. Then they heard some sort of shriek. Before long a figure could be made out. It was a middle heighted person. As he got closer the others regognised him as a male. Alana stood and smirked, trying to hold back her laughter as she saw what he was running from. A small fire ball seemed to be chasing me.
"Hey!" The guy shouted. "Run, this thing wants to set me on fire!" He was a lot closer now. The firre ball bouncing away.
"I just want to play!" It shouted. The orange glow it was giving out illuminationg the trees.
"Don't just stand there!" The boy said running past. The orange ball stopped next to Riley.
"He wont play with me."
"Have you told him who you are?" Riley asked giggling a little bit.
"No. I'm Flamemon, how are you?"the ball of fire asked happily.
"I'm Riley and this is Nuvemon. That's Alana and Aquamon." Alana smiled.
"Hello." Alana walked over to the boy who was hiding behind a tree.
"Has he gone yet?" The boy asked. His hair was spiked and blonde, almost hidden by a red bandana, that was covering most of his forehead. He had bright green eyes with a mischevious glint in them. He had good body shape, toned muscles and was just over Alana's height.
"Whats your name?" she asked looking into his eyes.
"Mark, who are you? and has that thing gone yet? I want to get home."
"I'm Alana. And 'that thing' is your digimon." Mark laughed.
"Okay, okay! Pull the other one!" he laughed again and shook his head. "Digimon ain't real hun, so get a reality check! Please!" He turned to leave but Alana stuck out her hand and pulled him back round.
"Listen to me! That little fireball is your digimon, now I know what you think they aren't real and all that, but even if this is a dream start living it because it's your ticket to the train home!" Alana's eyes were bright and flaming angry.
"Fiesty are we? Well I am sorry but I am not believing this."
"Well you have too. Some girl told us that we had to get the 'others' and meet her somewhere. You and that little fireball are the only two people we've found all day. I think Keirei's going to tell us where home is so if thats were you're heading come with us."
"Whose Keirei?"
"We don't really know her that well."
"Then err hello? How is she going to get you home?" Mark said looking at the blonde with disbelief. "I've learned to deal with things my own way and I'll do that."
"But we need your help." Alana shreiked.
"Fine! Fine I'll help you!" Alana stomped off back towards Riley, Mark folowing close behind.
"Hey there." Riley said. "Now before you freak out this is Flamemon your digimon. He wants to help you and he wants to be your friend." Riley said smiling. Mark smiled back.
"Hey Alana why couldn't you have been like that?" Mark asked. Alana rolled her eyes and glared at him.
"We should keep moving. Keirei didn't say how many others there were."
"You're right Alana. There could be like, four others!" Riley replied. The three pressed on foward in search of any more people. Flamemon was lighting the way with his orange glow.
The sky was now very dark. Purple mist swayed about above them. Lots of stars were dotting the sky madly, but in constalations they knew. After a little while longer they came to a clearing deep inside the thick green forest.
"We should rest up for a while now. I'm tired." Alana said.
"Somebody will need to stand watch." Mark pointed out.
"I will, I'm sure Nuvemon will be happy to keep me company!" Riley said.
"Are you sure?" Alana asked.
"Yeah, I had some sleep back then. If I need some more, I'll wake Mark up!" She smiled.
"Thanks alot Riley!" Mark replied. Soon enough Alana and Mark were fast asleep. Riley sat gazing at the stars with Nuvemon by her side purring contently. They sat like that until the sun pulled it self up to light the morning sky.
So, what did you think? Is this any good for a second chapter? Please let me know! Review!
AJ Taylir: Glad you find it intresting! :) Please keep reading and reviewing!
gerjomarty: I'll be explaining the characters as much as I can, I am glad you like them alhough I can only take credit for Keirei because she is my character and I created her. The others were made by members of ff.net who participated in a interactive fic that I am currently holding on my website.If you want ot check it out please go to http://www.freewebs.com/pinkiceprincess or http://groups.msn.com/pinkicelair Keep reading and reviewing.
Red Outburst. I know! Im sorry, that does bug me too, don't worry not all the characters are going to be as acceptant of the digimon. Let me explian though, Keirei has been in the digiworld for a long time. As I said she is like a female version of Ryo. I am glad you like it though! Please keep reading and reviewing.
Link02: Thanks for reading, who is your character? Keep reading and reviewing.
IceQueen279: Thanks! Glad you like it and the characters depth will be added more as the story goes on, please keep reading and reviewing!
Sincere Serenity: Thanks! Glad you like it! I try not to make the characters Mary Sues, and as the people picked them didn't make them Mary-Sues, it was a lot easier for me! Well please keep reviewing!
You gotta say thanks! Well now...
Disclaimer: I don't own digimon, but I own this plot!
Resulting In This
Chapter Two.
Alana walked around the lake. It was now night time. Riley was already fast asleep next to her kitten like digimon. Alana looked up to the stars and sighed. It was different here. She wanted to be with her friends, at the camping trip. No doubt they were probably worried sick. But no-one would find her.
She sat down next to the rock and placed her bag beside her. Aquamon was busy playing nearby in the water. She looked out at her new friend. Aquamon didn't seem to want to hurt her. She just wanted a friend. Alana sighed.
"Aquamon?" she asked, just above a whisper.
"Yeah Alana?" The digimon said, almost instantly appearing next to her.
"Do you know this place well?"
"Yep."
"Keirei spoke of others. We should go find them." Alana said looking back towards the lake.
"Not without me." a voice said from behind them. Alana turned only to see Riley, awake and full of energy, Nuvemon right by her heels.
"Okay." Alana said. She picked up her bag and looked at Aquamon. "Lead the way, tell us if you like smell something."
"Okie Dokie." Aquamon lead north through the dark forest that was surrounding the trees.
After a little while of walking the saw a light up a head. Then they heard some sort of shriek. Before long a figure could be made out. It was a middle heighted person. As he got closer the others regognised him as a male. Alana stood and smirked, trying to hold back her laughter as she saw what he was running from. A small fire ball seemed to be chasing me.
"Hey!" The guy shouted. "Run, this thing wants to set me on fire!" He was a lot closer now. The firre ball bouncing away.
"I just want to play!" It shouted. The orange glow it was giving out illuminationg the trees.
"Don't just stand there!" The boy said running past. The orange ball stopped next to Riley.
"He wont play with me."
"Have you told him who you are?" Riley asked giggling a little bit.
"No. I'm Flamemon, how are you?"the ball of fire asked happily.
"I'm Riley and this is Nuvemon. That's Alana and Aquamon." Alana smiled.
"Hello." Alana walked over to the boy who was hiding behind a tree.
"Has he gone yet?" The boy asked. His hair was spiked and blonde, almost hidden by a red bandana, that was covering most of his forehead. He had bright green eyes with a mischevious glint in them. He had good body shape, toned muscles and was just over Alana's height.
"Whats your name?" she asked looking into his eyes.
"Mark, who are you? and has that thing gone yet? I want to get home."
"I'm Alana. And 'that thing' is your digimon." Mark laughed.
"Okay, okay! Pull the other one!" he laughed again and shook his head. "Digimon ain't real hun, so get a reality check! Please!" He turned to leave but Alana stuck out her hand and pulled him back round.
"Listen to me! That little fireball is your digimon, now I know what you think they aren't real and all that, but even if this is a dream start living it because it's your ticket to the train home!" Alana's eyes were bright and flaming angry.
"Fiesty are we? Well I am sorry but I am not believing this."
"Well you have too. Some girl told us that we had to get the 'others' and meet her somewhere. You and that little fireball are the only two people we've found all day. I think Keirei's going to tell us where home is so if thats were you're heading come with us."
"Whose Keirei?"
"We don't really know her that well."
"Then err hello? How is she going to get you home?" Mark said looking at the blonde with disbelief. "I've learned to deal with things my own way and I'll do that."
"But we need your help." Alana shreiked.
"Fine! Fine I'll help you!" Alana stomped off back towards Riley, Mark folowing close behind.
"Hey there." Riley said. "Now before you freak out this is Flamemon your digimon. He wants to help you and he wants to be your friend." Riley said smiling. Mark smiled back.
"Hey Alana why couldn't you have been like that?" Mark asked. Alana rolled her eyes and glared at him.
"We should keep moving. Keirei didn't say how many others there were."
"You're right Alana. There could be like, four others!" Riley replied. The three pressed on foward in search of any more people. Flamemon was lighting the way with his orange glow.
The sky was now very dark. Purple mist swayed about above them. Lots of stars were dotting the sky madly, but in constalations they knew. After a little while longer they came to a clearing deep inside the thick green forest.
"We should rest up for a while now. I'm tired." Alana said.
"Somebody will need to stand watch." Mark pointed out.
"I will, I'm sure Nuvemon will be happy to keep me company!" Riley said.
"Are you sure?" Alana asked.
"Yeah, I had some sleep back then. If I need some more, I'll wake Mark up!" She smiled.
"Thanks alot Riley!" Mark replied. Soon enough Alana and Mark were fast asleep. Riley sat gazing at the stars with Nuvemon by her side purring contently. They sat like that until the sun pulled it self up to light the morning sky.
So, what did you think? Is this any good for a second chapter? Please let me know! Review!