Chapter 5
By k6e6p6
~_~_~_~_~_~In The Common Room At 6 O'clock~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~
James is sitting on the floor of the common room, with no one around him because everyone was out enjoying the weather. He was using the self- writing quill to re-write the note to Lily.
I hope Lily gets that it's me. I hope she feels the same way. James thought.
Suddenly, someone came bursting into the common room, it was a sobbing, Lily. Rushing over to her, James said to Lily "Lily, I know this is a stupid question, but, are you ok?"
Lily just sobbed a "no."
"Ok, well come over here with me, and tell me what's wrong." James said.
Lily obeyed. She sat next to him. James hugged her; he was trying to comfort her.
"Come on, Lily. Please stop crying and tell me what happened to you."
Lily just sobbed some more, but she looked up at James and she saw the honest, sincere look on his face. She began to cry more, only into James's shoulder.
"Lily, honey, ('DAMN IT!' James thought) please try to tell me what's wrong!"
"Well." cried a very upset Lily, "Do you remember that love letter I got? Well (sobs) Olivia and Michelle said it was all a joke that Lucius was playing on me! And that I was the ugliest thing on Earth and no one could love me" Lily bursted out into fresh, new tears. She cried into James's shoulder.
"Oh Lily! That's not true! Not true at all! I know who wrote the first letter and he wrote another one, he asked me to put it on your bed, or someplace you could find it. He also said he would tell you to your face when the time is right." James said as he handed Lily the note that was lying on the floor.
"Oh no! It's 6:44PM I have to get changed for detention! I'll be right back, don't leave yet!"
"I won't" Lily said through her tear-streaked face as James walked up the stairs to the boy's dormitory. She saw a piece of parchment on the floor. She went over to see what it said. It read:
Lily, You look so cute when you blush. You're everything I want; you're perfect for me. Every time I hear your name, I smile. You're not like any of the other girls. You're just so special. This hint is that I am in Gryffindor.
Love,
Your Secret Admirer
It was in James's handwriting! She took out the note he just gave her and it said the exact same thing. She heard James coming down the stairs and she ran to the couch and sat on it with the parchment on her lap, (A.N this was the note he wrote with the self-writing quill.) She looked at him and smiled.
No wonder why he's been like this since forever, he loves me! But I can't let him know that I know! He's so sweet! He actually pays attention to me! Why didn't I see this before? Lily thought.
"Ready to go to - DUN DUN DUN - detention?" James said trying to get Lily to smile again.
"Yes." Lily smiled and laughed.
"Ok, hold on, I just need to get my papers over here." James said as he grabbed his stuff off of the floor.
"James, thank you for making me feel better." Lily said and she went over and hugged him tightly.
"Yes, you're welcome, if you ever need me, I'm here for you." James said to her.
"Same here." Lily said to him.
"Oh no! It's 6:55PM! ! We'd better run!" James and Lily took off through the portrait hole and how they managed it, they'll never know, but they were both on time for their detentions.
As Lily stepped into Professor McFly's room, she saw Peter, Remus, and Sirius sitting at a table waiting for McFly to come in the classroom.
"So, where's McFly?" Lily asked in a mock-tone voice.
"He's getting something for us to do." Sirius said while sticking out his tongue.
"Oh how lovely!" Lily said sarcastically.
"Indeed it is, Miss Evans." a voice rang out from the doorway. It was Professor McFly coming to join us. "You will clean out the cabinet over there," he motioned toward the cabinet in the corner of the room; it was filled up with all of these mysterious potions. "NOW GET TO WORK!" McFly yelled at them.
They all went to work immediately. McFly left the room.
Sirius was looking in the cabinet. "OH MY GOD! There's 'Anti-Wart Remover, 'Remove warts for hours at a time.'" Sirius said in an announcer's voice.
"That's gross! But you can tell he didn't use any today!" Lily said as she laughed.
"Yeah! Did you see that thing when he was yelling at us?! It was about ready to burst! That would've been really nasty! We'd have to clean that up!" Sirius said as he cringed.
"Yeah, he's probably cleaning up the puss from it as we speak!" Lily commented.
"OH MY LORD!" Sirius said with his mouth hanging open. "I found some 'Instant Viagra!' Looks like he loves someone! Ooooo" Sirius said in a high- pitched voice.
"He probably wants to shag Professor Plum!" Peter said in awe.
~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~Meanwhile, with James~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~
"Alright, Mr. Potter," Professor Prentiss said, "You are to scrub off all of these desks, without magic. And NO FUNNY BUSINESS!"
James looked at him innocently, "Don't worry! I won't."
Professor Prentiss left the room.
James looked around and he got up from the desk he was sitting in, he decided to play "Desk Wars". James takes out his wand and mutters something. Two desks are up in the air and they smashed into one another with a loud BAM!
Quite suddenly, Professor Prentiss comes into the room and he spills his coffee all over himself. In shock, James lets the desks fall to the floor. He just stared at him in shock.
"JAMES POTTER! WHAT DO YOU THINK YOU'RE DOING? COME WITH ME!" Professor Prentiss bellowed.
James followed him out the door and into the hallway. Along the way, they met up with McFly.
"Excuse me, Professor McFly, but, do you have anyone in detention?" Professor Prentiss asked.
"Yes I do and why are you asking?" McFly said looking cruelly at James.
"Could you please take this one," Prentiss said to McFly gesturing at James, "I have to clean the mess he made in my classroom."
"Just as well, the more people I have, the more I get cleaned."
James just started because he was still shocked he got caught.
"Follow me then, Potter" McFly said leading James to his class.
"Ehem," McFly said a few minutes later as he stood outside of his classroom door. Sirius. Remus, Peter, and Lily turned around and saw James, Lily tried not to smile.
"James, you are to work with them, after you are done with that, you all have to start on the cauldrons." he said to all of them. He walked out of the room.
"Hey guys." James said .
Detention was the usual way, nothing interesting happened, except if you call Lily talking to James more than she usually would, interesting.
He's so great! I really like him! Lily thought.
END OF CHAPPY 5 Please r/r! Thank you to everyone who reviewed my story! More to come! So stay tooned! ;-)
~_~_~_~_~_~In The Common Room At 6 O'clock~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~
James is sitting on the floor of the common room, with no one around him because everyone was out enjoying the weather. He was using the self- writing quill to re-write the note to Lily.
I hope Lily gets that it's me. I hope she feels the same way. James thought.
Suddenly, someone came bursting into the common room, it was a sobbing, Lily. Rushing over to her, James said to Lily "Lily, I know this is a stupid question, but, are you ok?"
Lily just sobbed a "no."
"Ok, well come over here with me, and tell me what's wrong." James said.
Lily obeyed. She sat next to him. James hugged her; he was trying to comfort her.
"Come on, Lily. Please stop crying and tell me what happened to you."
Lily just sobbed some more, but she looked up at James and she saw the honest, sincere look on his face. She began to cry more, only into James's shoulder.
"Lily, honey, ('DAMN IT!' James thought) please try to tell me what's wrong!"
"Well." cried a very upset Lily, "Do you remember that love letter I got? Well (sobs) Olivia and Michelle said it was all a joke that Lucius was playing on me! And that I was the ugliest thing on Earth and no one could love me" Lily bursted out into fresh, new tears. She cried into James's shoulder.
"Oh Lily! That's not true! Not true at all! I know who wrote the first letter and he wrote another one, he asked me to put it on your bed, or someplace you could find it. He also said he would tell you to your face when the time is right." James said as he handed Lily the note that was lying on the floor.
"Oh no! It's 6:44PM I have to get changed for detention! I'll be right back, don't leave yet!"
"I won't" Lily said through her tear-streaked face as James walked up the stairs to the boy's dormitory. She saw a piece of parchment on the floor. She went over to see what it said. It read:
Lily, You look so cute when you blush. You're everything I want; you're perfect for me. Every time I hear your name, I smile. You're not like any of the other girls. You're just so special. This hint is that I am in Gryffindor.
Love,
Your Secret Admirer
It was in James's handwriting! She took out the note he just gave her and it said the exact same thing. She heard James coming down the stairs and she ran to the couch and sat on it with the parchment on her lap, (A.N this was the note he wrote with the self-writing quill.) She looked at him and smiled.
No wonder why he's been like this since forever, he loves me! But I can't let him know that I know! He's so sweet! He actually pays attention to me! Why didn't I see this before? Lily thought.
"Ready to go to - DUN DUN DUN - detention?" James said trying to get Lily to smile again.
"Yes." Lily smiled and laughed.
"Ok, hold on, I just need to get my papers over here." James said as he grabbed his stuff off of the floor.
"James, thank you for making me feel better." Lily said and she went over and hugged him tightly.
"Yes, you're welcome, if you ever need me, I'm here for you." James said to her.
"Same here." Lily said to him.
"Oh no! It's 6:55PM! ! We'd better run!" James and Lily took off through the portrait hole and how they managed it, they'll never know, but they were both on time for their detentions.
As Lily stepped into Professor McFly's room, she saw Peter, Remus, and Sirius sitting at a table waiting for McFly to come in the classroom.
"So, where's McFly?" Lily asked in a mock-tone voice.
"He's getting something for us to do." Sirius said while sticking out his tongue.
"Oh how lovely!" Lily said sarcastically.
"Indeed it is, Miss Evans." a voice rang out from the doorway. It was Professor McFly coming to join us. "You will clean out the cabinet over there," he motioned toward the cabinet in the corner of the room; it was filled up with all of these mysterious potions. "NOW GET TO WORK!" McFly yelled at them.
They all went to work immediately. McFly left the room.
Sirius was looking in the cabinet. "OH MY GOD! There's 'Anti-Wart Remover, 'Remove warts for hours at a time.'" Sirius said in an announcer's voice.
"That's gross! But you can tell he didn't use any today!" Lily said as she laughed.
"Yeah! Did you see that thing when he was yelling at us?! It was about ready to burst! That would've been really nasty! We'd have to clean that up!" Sirius said as he cringed.
"Yeah, he's probably cleaning up the puss from it as we speak!" Lily commented.
"OH MY LORD!" Sirius said with his mouth hanging open. "I found some 'Instant Viagra!' Looks like he loves someone! Ooooo" Sirius said in a high- pitched voice.
"He probably wants to shag Professor Plum!" Peter said in awe.
~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~Meanwhile, with James~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~
"Alright, Mr. Potter," Professor Prentiss said, "You are to scrub off all of these desks, without magic. And NO FUNNY BUSINESS!"
James looked at him innocently, "Don't worry! I won't."
Professor Prentiss left the room.
James looked around and he got up from the desk he was sitting in, he decided to play "Desk Wars". James takes out his wand and mutters something. Two desks are up in the air and they smashed into one another with a loud BAM!
Quite suddenly, Professor Prentiss comes into the room and he spills his coffee all over himself. In shock, James lets the desks fall to the floor. He just stared at him in shock.
"JAMES POTTER! WHAT DO YOU THINK YOU'RE DOING? COME WITH ME!" Professor Prentiss bellowed.
James followed him out the door and into the hallway. Along the way, they met up with McFly.
"Excuse me, Professor McFly, but, do you have anyone in detention?" Professor Prentiss asked.
"Yes I do and why are you asking?" McFly said looking cruelly at James.
"Could you please take this one," Prentiss said to McFly gesturing at James, "I have to clean the mess he made in my classroom."
"Just as well, the more people I have, the more I get cleaned."
James just started because he was still shocked he got caught.
"Follow me then, Potter" McFly said leading James to his class.
"Ehem," McFly said a few minutes later as he stood outside of his classroom door. Sirius. Remus, Peter, and Lily turned around and saw James, Lily tried not to smile.
"James, you are to work with them, after you are done with that, you all have to start on the cauldrons." he said to all of them. He walked out of the room.
"Hey guys." James said .
Detention was the usual way, nothing interesting happened, except if you call Lily talking to James more than she usually would, interesting.
He's so great! I really like him! Lily thought.
END OF CHAPPY 5 Please r/r! Thank you to everyone who reviewed my story! More to come! So stay tooned! ;-)