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I'm supposed to be doing homework, so I'm going to start another chapter
and work on it throughout the week when i'm supposed to be doing homework
and if I think it is good i'll post it before Friday.
Here is chapter 4 ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- ------------------- The blizzard was really starting to pick up while they were walking to the castle. At one point with the snow accumulating (spelled wrong but you get the point) and drifting around it was more than Freya had bargained for. Getting hard to see and not being aware that a huge blizzard was going to strike Alexanderia, Freya had to rest. She fell to her knees in the snow. Amarant noticing that Freya wasn't to his left side he turned around. There Freya was fallen in the snow.
"Whats wrong rat?" he asked grufly.
"I wasn't expecting a snowstorm here," she replied while slowly starting to get up. Amarant went up to her and offered her a hand but she refused, "I don't need your help," and got up and brushed herself off. There they continued on.
When they got there they were greeted by the imfamous knights of pluto and Steiner.
"HALT!" commanded Steiner. Amarant, being his usual self just kept walking, but Freya stopped.
"Greeting Steiner," she bowed keeping her hood on.
"Who are you?" he questioned.
"I'm but a simple friend of the queens," Freya replied and went to catch up with Amarant. Both of them went to the "living room" as Zidane called it when he gave the grand tour right after the reunion. Zidane and Garnet were watching television.
"Wheres my room?" was the first words to leave Amarants mouth.
"Hey Amarant, welcome back, ummmm, your room is up the stairs go left than right and three doors down," replied the queen.
"Hey Am who that?" questioned the Zidane.
At the name Am, Amarant raised an eyebrow. (Well, I don't think anyone actually saw it though)
"Why did you call me Am?" Amarant questioned.
"Its a nickname."
"Don't call me that."
"Anyways, whos that?" Zidane went up to the person and starting to look close to see if he could see the person. Freya looked towards Amarant and he nodded as to say 'go on tell them.' With that Freya took off her cloak. Right away Zidane and Garnet were very surprised.
"Hey Freya, long time no see!" Garnet practically yelled.
Freya just looked down and said sarcastically, "Nice weather out there."
Zidane just has to make a comment, "Is it snowing out there or am I going crazy, cause Freya looks Frozen and Amarant, you look like you got a bad hair d--" Zidane didn't finish his sentance as Amarant grabbed him by the collar and was about to...................
"Cut it out, there will be no fighting here!" yelled Dagger. Not wanting to get thrown out into the blizzard, Amarant dropped Zidane and went to sit where he was before.
Freya got up and bowed toward the queen, "If its alright with you I would like to request a room for the night."
"No need to bow Freya," replied Garnet, "Sure your welcome to stay here whenever you want."
Freya then questioned, "Can I please know where my room is now, the blizzard exhausted me and I'm really tired.
"Blizzard!?" Zidane and Garnet said at the same time.
Just then Steiner clanked in and bowed toward the queen, "Sorry for my interuption, but I just want to inform you that there is a strong blizzard on the horizon and-- lady Freya when did you get here?"
"Little while ago," she answered.
Zidane and Garnet went to look out the window and their jaws dropped.
"May I know where my room is now?" Freya questioned.
"Sure, your room is up the stairs, go left then right, and its four doors down."
Freya questioned, "Ok, so its go upstairs, go right then--"
"No, its left, then right," corrected the Queen.
"Your room is next to mine," replied Amarant getting up and walking off.
"I better get going then," Freya went to catch up with Amarant.
As they were walking Freya seemed like she was lost, yet again.
'What is wrong with this rat,' Amarant thought to himself as he lifted up his hand and smacked Freya in the back of the head, accidently knocking her helmet off. Right away Freya got out of thought and glared at Amarant.
"Would you stop bothering me!" she yelled.
"What, did mister forgets everything leave you again?" he taunted really meaning no harm.
Freya looked down.
"Is that why your always on cloud nine," he questioned grufly.
Fighting back tears Freya yelled out, "YES, THATS WHAT HE DID!"
"Couldn't see that coming," Amarant said to himself and then said aloud, "Did he know?"
"Something went missing in Bermecia, and it seems like he was the first to "go off and find it" saying that he believes that I didn't do it, even though he had the poster in his hand." a few tears slid down her cheek but, she thought no one noticed. They were by there rooms so Freya picked up her helmet and ran into her room. Amarant went into his.
In her room Freya went right to sleep with the thought, 'Fratley would never just leave me like that, he would care.............'
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Ok that took long enough but here it is. If you have any ideas or anything tell me in a review or at alexanderite6512@hotmail.com. If you have an idea of the "villian" make a suggestion................... if its better than mine i'll add it to the story. You'll get credit. Inspire me.
-Shorty and the EZ Mouse
Here is chapter 4 ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- ------------------- The blizzard was really starting to pick up while they were walking to the castle. At one point with the snow accumulating (spelled wrong but you get the point) and drifting around it was more than Freya had bargained for. Getting hard to see and not being aware that a huge blizzard was going to strike Alexanderia, Freya had to rest. She fell to her knees in the snow. Amarant noticing that Freya wasn't to his left side he turned around. There Freya was fallen in the snow.
"Whats wrong rat?" he asked grufly.
"I wasn't expecting a snowstorm here," she replied while slowly starting to get up. Amarant went up to her and offered her a hand but she refused, "I don't need your help," and got up and brushed herself off. There they continued on.
When they got there they were greeted by the imfamous knights of pluto and Steiner.
"HALT!" commanded Steiner. Amarant, being his usual self just kept walking, but Freya stopped.
"Greeting Steiner," she bowed keeping her hood on.
"Who are you?" he questioned.
"I'm but a simple friend of the queens," Freya replied and went to catch up with Amarant. Both of them went to the "living room" as Zidane called it when he gave the grand tour right after the reunion. Zidane and Garnet were watching television.
"Wheres my room?" was the first words to leave Amarants mouth.
"Hey Amarant, welcome back, ummmm, your room is up the stairs go left than right and three doors down," replied the queen.
"Hey Am who that?" questioned the Zidane.
At the name Am, Amarant raised an eyebrow. (Well, I don't think anyone actually saw it though)
"Why did you call me Am?" Amarant questioned.
"Its a nickname."
"Don't call me that."
"Anyways, whos that?" Zidane went up to the person and starting to look close to see if he could see the person. Freya looked towards Amarant and he nodded as to say 'go on tell them.' With that Freya took off her cloak. Right away Zidane and Garnet were very surprised.
"Hey Freya, long time no see!" Garnet practically yelled.
Freya just looked down and said sarcastically, "Nice weather out there."
Zidane just has to make a comment, "Is it snowing out there or am I going crazy, cause Freya looks Frozen and Amarant, you look like you got a bad hair d--" Zidane didn't finish his sentance as Amarant grabbed him by the collar and was about to...................
"Cut it out, there will be no fighting here!" yelled Dagger. Not wanting to get thrown out into the blizzard, Amarant dropped Zidane and went to sit where he was before.
Freya got up and bowed toward the queen, "If its alright with you I would like to request a room for the night."
"No need to bow Freya," replied Garnet, "Sure your welcome to stay here whenever you want."
Freya then questioned, "Can I please know where my room is now, the blizzard exhausted me and I'm really tired.
"Blizzard!?" Zidane and Garnet said at the same time.
Just then Steiner clanked in and bowed toward the queen, "Sorry for my interuption, but I just want to inform you that there is a strong blizzard on the horizon and-- lady Freya when did you get here?"
"Little while ago," she answered.
Zidane and Garnet went to look out the window and their jaws dropped.
"May I know where my room is now?" Freya questioned.
"Sure, your room is up the stairs, go left then right, and its four doors down."
Freya questioned, "Ok, so its go upstairs, go right then--"
"No, its left, then right," corrected the Queen.
"Your room is next to mine," replied Amarant getting up and walking off.
"I better get going then," Freya went to catch up with Amarant.
As they were walking Freya seemed like she was lost, yet again.
'What is wrong with this rat,' Amarant thought to himself as he lifted up his hand and smacked Freya in the back of the head, accidently knocking her helmet off. Right away Freya got out of thought and glared at Amarant.
"Would you stop bothering me!" she yelled.
"What, did mister forgets everything leave you again?" he taunted really meaning no harm.
Freya looked down.
"Is that why your always on cloud nine," he questioned grufly.
Fighting back tears Freya yelled out, "YES, THATS WHAT HE DID!"
"Couldn't see that coming," Amarant said to himself and then said aloud, "Did he know?"
"Something went missing in Bermecia, and it seems like he was the first to "go off and find it" saying that he believes that I didn't do it, even though he had the poster in his hand." a few tears slid down her cheek but, she thought no one noticed. They were by there rooms so Freya picked up her helmet and ran into her room. Amarant went into his.
In her room Freya went right to sleep with the thought, 'Fratley would never just leave me like that, he would care.............'
zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Ok that took long enough but here it is. If you have any ideas or anything tell me in a review or at alexanderite6512@hotmail.com. If you have an idea of the "villian" make a suggestion................... if its better than mine i'll add it to the story. You'll get credit. Inspire me.
-Shorty and the EZ Mouse