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/thinking/
"Speaking"
//bit beast//
Tears of the Phoenix
Her limp and almost lifeless body was lying in an alleyway of Tokyo city. The heartbeat that was thudding was slowing down and soon it would completely stop.
Kai was on his usual walk trying to escape Tyson's continuous eating and ranting. He turned down they alley and noticed that something wasn't right. He could see a slight shadowy figure lying on the ground. Kai got closer and he could make out the figure of a girl his age maybe a little bit younger.
He rolled her over and could see that her shirt was completely drenched in blood. Kai looked at his own hands and they too were covered in her blood. He gasped, his mahogany eyes were wide with shock. He lifted her into his arms and thought /I have to get her to a hospital..now! /
Kai could tell that she had lost a lot of blood and most of it had made her long stick to the side of her face and arms. They reached the hospital where doctors and nurses came rushing up to them they then took her away to treat her wounds.
"I'm at the hospital." Kai told Ray on a public phone. "Are you alright?" ray asked. "yes, I'm fine but I found a girl when I was out walking she was almost dead, the doctor said I got her here just in time otherwise she would of died." Kai stated. "do you know who she is?" Ray asked "NO" Kai snapped back. "Well, ill tell the others and see you later." Ray said and hung up. Kai leaned against the wall, crossed his arms and closed his eyes.
Kai felt a light tap on his shoulder, he opened his eyes and a doctor in a white coat was standing there looking at him. "Yes?" Kai said a small sneer on his face. "Mr. Kai Hiwatari, the girl you brought in is now out of surgery and is resting, unfortunately she is still unconscious, she was shot three times, and lost a lot of blood." The doctor explained "these are her belongings" he then continued "would you like to see her now?" "Yes, Thankyou Doctor." Kai said with no emotion in his eyes.
Her body was just lying hooked up to a machine which was keeping track of her heartbeat.
//Master Kai\\ //Yes Dranzer\\ // She has a bit beast master\\ //Really, so she's a blader\\ // The bit beast is quite like myself also a phoenix except blue\\ //Hmmm.\\ // The phoenix's name is Dranzielle\\ //What is the girls' name? \\ //Her name is Ashleigh Kiowa. Master\\ //She is your age Master\\ // Thankyou Dranzer\\
Kai was looking through Ashleigh's' stuff when he found her beyblade it was blue and black and Dranzer was right it was a blue Phoenix.
"Ugh.Where am I?" a very groggy Ashleigh asked. "You're I n hospital." Kai explained and then continued "I found you in an alleyway bleeding.a lot." "Thankyou but I can take care of myself." Ashleigh spat looking at him with her emerald green eyes. "I doubt it if you can end up being shot three times." Kai snapped back. "I.I.I was shot?" Ashleigh stammered. "Yes, my name is Kai Hiwatari." Kai told her. "I know who you are; my bit beast told me that she had a nice chat with dear Dranzer." A small smirk playing on her lips. "Yes, Very well Ashleigh Kiowa, do you want your blade and other stuff back or not?" Kai snarled. "Give me that!" She exclaimed. She went to snatch it away "AAH" Ashleigh groaned in agony and lay back down. Kai sighed and got up and gave her the things and sat back down again "Idiot" he muttered under his breath.
"Well, you seem to be fine so I guess I'll be going." Kai stated getting up. "Wait, please don't go, I don't have anyone, my family, my friends, my team. all gone." Ashleigh broke down and let go of his hand that she had grabbed when he got up. "What happened?" Kai said unsympathetically. "Some guy.called Voltaire..wanted me to.join his team.but I refused.so he killed everyone I ever cared about." Sobs of unhappiness and fear started. Kai winced at the sound of his grandfathers' name. His blood started to boil because he realised that he was now after Ashleigh.
"You can go, I'm sure your team needs you. I'll be fine." Ashleigh sniffled wiping tears from her eyes with the tip of her fingers. Kai ran his fingers through his longish bluegray hair and finishing in his dark blue hair at the back. "Hmm, ok but I'll be back tomorrow." Ashleigh simply nodded and tried to give a weak smile.
So tell me your thoughts plz no flames this is my first story in beyblades just tips or compliments.
Tears of the Phoenix
Her limp and almost lifeless body was lying in an alleyway of Tokyo city. The heartbeat that was thudding was slowing down and soon it would completely stop.
Kai was on his usual walk trying to escape Tyson's continuous eating and ranting. He turned down they alley and noticed that something wasn't right. He could see a slight shadowy figure lying on the ground. Kai got closer and he could make out the figure of a girl his age maybe a little bit younger.
He rolled her over and could see that her shirt was completely drenched in blood. Kai looked at his own hands and they too were covered in her blood. He gasped, his mahogany eyes were wide with shock. He lifted her into his arms and thought /I have to get her to a hospital..now! /
Kai could tell that she had lost a lot of blood and most of it had made her long stick to the side of her face and arms. They reached the hospital where doctors and nurses came rushing up to them they then took her away to treat her wounds.
"I'm at the hospital." Kai told Ray on a public phone. "Are you alright?" ray asked. "yes, I'm fine but I found a girl when I was out walking she was almost dead, the doctor said I got her here just in time otherwise she would of died." Kai stated. "do you know who she is?" Ray asked "NO" Kai snapped back. "Well, ill tell the others and see you later." Ray said and hung up. Kai leaned against the wall, crossed his arms and closed his eyes.
Kai felt a light tap on his shoulder, he opened his eyes and a doctor in a white coat was standing there looking at him. "Yes?" Kai said a small sneer on his face. "Mr. Kai Hiwatari, the girl you brought in is now out of surgery and is resting, unfortunately she is still unconscious, she was shot three times, and lost a lot of blood." The doctor explained "these are her belongings" he then continued "would you like to see her now?" "Yes, Thankyou Doctor." Kai said with no emotion in his eyes.
Her body was just lying hooked up to a machine which was keeping track of her heartbeat.
//Master Kai\\ //Yes Dranzer\\ // She has a bit beast master\\ //Really, so she's a blader\\ // The bit beast is quite like myself also a phoenix except blue\\ //Hmmm.\\ // The phoenix's name is Dranzielle\\ //What is the girls' name? \\ //Her name is Ashleigh Kiowa. Master\\ //She is your age Master\\ // Thankyou Dranzer\\
Kai was looking through Ashleigh's' stuff when he found her beyblade it was blue and black and Dranzer was right it was a blue Phoenix.
"Ugh.Where am I?" a very groggy Ashleigh asked. "You're I n hospital." Kai explained and then continued "I found you in an alleyway bleeding.a lot." "Thankyou but I can take care of myself." Ashleigh spat looking at him with her emerald green eyes. "I doubt it if you can end up being shot three times." Kai snapped back. "I.I.I was shot?" Ashleigh stammered. "Yes, my name is Kai Hiwatari." Kai told her. "I know who you are; my bit beast told me that she had a nice chat with dear Dranzer." A small smirk playing on her lips. "Yes, Very well Ashleigh Kiowa, do you want your blade and other stuff back or not?" Kai snarled. "Give me that!" She exclaimed. She went to snatch it away "AAH" Ashleigh groaned in agony and lay back down. Kai sighed and got up and gave her the things and sat back down again "Idiot" he muttered under his breath.
"Well, you seem to be fine so I guess I'll be going." Kai stated getting up. "Wait, please don't go, I don't have anyone, my family, my friends, my team. all gone." Ashleigh broke down and let go of his hand that she had grabbed when he got up. "What happened?" Kai said unsympathetically. "Some guy.called Voltaire..wanted me to.join his team.but I refused.so he killed everyone I ever cared about." Sobs of unhappiness and fear started. Kai winced at the sound of his grandfathers' name. His blood started to boil because he realised that he was now after Ashleigh.
"You can go, I'm sure your team needs you. I'll be fine." Ashleigh sniffled wiping tears from her eyes with the tip of her fingers. Kai ran his fingers through his longish bluegray hair and finishing in his dark blue hair at the back. "Hmm, ok but I'll be back tomorrow." Ashleigh simply nodded and tried to give a weak smile.
So tell me your thoughts plz no flames this is my first story in beyblades just tips or compliments.