A/N: I keep writing depressing poems… I think there's something wrong with me. *shrugs * Oh well, heh, you all seem to enjoy them, so, no harm no foul, right? Enjoy this one, it took TWO rainy nights to make it, mostly due to time issues. As I said in my summary, this is Yukina, talking to/about Hiei, who's been killed.
Saline EyesA chilling pain's come over me
Cold has come,
Though not a comfort
It will not set me free
To live in ice could not prepare
My heart for this
True blast that came
Even a glacier'd break at this frigid air.
At once everything gained had I
Though soon enough
I'd lost it all
When I looked into those eyes
A chill had run up my spine
When you shed a
Tear that fell hard;
A gem you gave, so much like mine
You told me then, told it all
Who you were
And are to me
As my tears continued to fall.
Brother, then, I'd gained and lost
Spoken to me
With dying breath
Revealed with a fatal cost
Had I not been there, brother
What would you have done,
Would I have
Heard your words through the voice of another?
Now I know, and my search is done
But so quickly found
And lost were you
I feel I never really knew my oniisan.
I couldn't save you, though I tried
No matter what
I did or said
You still lay there cold as I cried.
And now there's nothing left to say
There came the price
You had to give
Death; a debt my saline eyes could not repay.
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A/N: Depressing, ne? …Please? Ok, it is? Good! Geez, I tried and all… I hope somebody cries… Gah! They've turned me evil, honest! I've got to stop writing things with James around. Did you know it's difficult to write legibly when sitting in someone's lap? o.O You did? Curious…
Anyways, REVIEW, PLEASE?! I love reviews, so please send me one along, telling me how much you love my poem! Oh, and if you didn't like it, send THAT review too, please… Ja ne!
-Draith
