Disclaimer: The only thing I own in this story is a few characters,
everything and everyone belongs to other people.
To Ophelia: I did not completely get your review. Can you e-mail me telling how my story does not flow? I would appreciate it
To Yukina: I doubt that you will be reading this but oh well. The girl, Hermione Granger, you flamed was completely brand new at this, she had never written any fanfics before that one and it was not that badly written. It's okay if you don't like the plot, but the way she showed it and the way she explained it was proof that she does have the potential to be a very good writer. Your story, on the other hand, had a good plot but was badly written.
Dimple: Happy belated Birthday.
A/N: YOU NEED TO REREAD CH.17 BEFORE READING THIS CHAPTER, IT IS IMPORTANT. IF YOU DO NOT THIS CHAPTER WILL NOT MAKE SENSE.
Okay, now that I have wasted several minutes of your guy's lives we shall get on with the story....
Chapter 18
"Is revenge really this important to you Brian?" Holly asked as Brian clicked the keys of his laptop.
"Who ever said that I was getting revenge?" Brian did not even bother looking at her. "I am a criminal and I am simply committing a crime."
"A crime that's going to hurt tons of people, not to mention your family!"
Brian smiled. "You don't even know what Brice and I have planned."
Holly gritted her teeth. "No, but I do know that Brice is evil straight to his core. You do not need to be like him! You can walk away right now, you can end this!"
Brian turned to the guards. "Would you be so kind as to gag her?"
"Hey!" Cried Trouble. "Don't you dare hurt her!"
"Him too," Brian nodded his head toward Trouble.
Holly bit down hard as the man tried to shove the rope into her mouth. The man howled in pain as he pulled his hand away.
"Shut up you fool!" Cried Brian, this time he did look up from his laptop. "You don't want our guests to arrive to early do you."
The man immediately closed his mouth, glaring intently at Holly.
"Thank you," Brian's voice dripped of venom. "Now please, gag them."
~*~
"Commander!" cried Foaly. "We're getting a signal from Holly and Trouble's iris cam!"
Root immediately ran over to Foaly's computer.
"I thought you said that the cams went dead."
"They did," Foaly said as he clicked the buttons on his keyboard. "But for some reason they're back online."
"That doesn't make any sense."
"I know," Foaly leaned back and rubbed his forehead. "It's probably a trap, but it's all that we've got."
Root sighed then turned to Becca. "Send a squad."
She nodded. "Yes commander."
She did not like this, not at all. It had to be a trap, from what she's heard about the Fowl's there's no way there stupid enough to leave the iris cams alone without having a plan. She could not argue with the commander though. All she can do is pray.
~*~
The retrieval squad walked uneasily into the dark rooms, their guns ready. Any problem and they were ready to shoot whatever moved that did not have pointy ears and an LEP badge.
Grub gulped. He had to be tough; he had to save his brother. Then he would tell his mommy what a hero he was, and Trouble would back him up. That's how it would be, he would walk out of here just fine-
"Nice of you to join us," came a calm, cool voice.
The officers immediately circled around, tying to figure out who was talking.
"Oh don't bother, you won't find me. See I'm not actually in there."
Grub paled. He hadn't been on many missions, but he knew what was about to happen. He immediately turned to face the door, only to see it swing shut and lock.
"I assume by now," continued the voice. "That you know what's going on. See when Henry was telling me about the people, he told me a fascinating story about how my father kidnapped a female named Holly Short, who I now have. What irony, but anyway, I noticed a specific part, a part where my father lured Commander Root to a ship, then blew it up. A little messy but I didn't see why it wouldn't work."
At this point, the retrieval squad was trying there hardest to open the door, but it would not budge.
"Au revoir," A huge explosion of fire erupted throughout the room.
~*~
A/N: I love this chappie. Please review.
To Ophelia: I did not completely get your review. Can you e-mail me telling how my story does not flow? I would appreciate it
To Yukina: I doubt that you will be reading this but oh well. The girl, Hermione Granger, you flamed was completely brand new at this, she had never written any fanfics before that one and it was not that badly written. It's okay if you don't like the plot, but the way she showed it and the way she explained it was proof that she does have the potential to be a very good writer. Your story, on the other hand, had a good plot but was badly written.
Dimple: Happy belated Birthday.
A/N: YOU NEED TO REREAD CH.17 BEFORE READING THIS CHAPTER, IT IS IMPORTANT. IF YOU DO NOT THIS CHAPTER WILL NOT MAKE SENSE.
Okay, now that I have wasted several minutes of your guy's lives we shall get on with the story....
Chapter 18
"Is revenge really this important to you Brian?" Holly asked as Brian clicked the keys of his laptop.
"Who ever said that I was getting revenge?" Brian did not even bother looking at her. "I am a criminal and I am simply committing a crime."
"A crime that's going to hurt tons of people, not to mention your family!"
Brian smiled. "You don't even know what Brice and I have planned."
Holly gritted her teeth. "No, but I do know that Brice is evil straight to his core. You do not need to be like him! You can walk away right now, you can end this!"
Brian turned to the guards. "Would you be so kind as to gag her?"
"Hey!" Cried Trouble. "Don't you dare hurt her!"
"Him too," Brian nodded his head toward Trouble.
Holly bit down hard as the man tried to shove the rope into her mouth. The man howled in pain as he pulled his hand away.
"Shut up you fool!" Cried Brian, this time he did look up from his laptop. "You don't want our guests to arrive to early do you."
The man immediately closed his mouth, glaring intently at Holly.
"Thank you," Brian's voice dripped of venom. "Now please, gag them."
~*~
"Commander!" cried Foaly. "We're getting a signal from Holly and Trouble's iris cam!"
Root immediately ran over to Foaly's computer.
"I thought you said that the cams went dead."
"They did," Foaly said as he clicked the buttons on his keyboard. "But for some reason they're back online."
"That doesn't make any sense."
"I know," Foaly leaned back and rubbed his forehead. "It's probably a trap, but it's all that we've got."
Root sighed then turned to Becca. "Send a squad."
She nodded. "Yes commander."
She did not like this, not at all. It had to be a trap, from what she's heard about the Fowl's there's no way there stupid enough to leave the iris cams alone without having a plan. She could not argue with the commander though. All she can do is pray.
~*~
The retrieval squad walked uneasily into the dark rooms, their guns ready. Any problem and they were ready to shoot whatever moved that did not have pointy ears and an LEP badge.
Grub gulped. He had to be tough; he had to save his brother. Then he would tell his mommy what a hero he was, and Trouble would back him up. That's how it would be, he would walk out of here just fine-
"Nice of you to join us," came a calm, cool voice.
The officers immediately circled around, tying to figure out who was talking.
"Oh don't bother, you won't find me. See I'm not actually in there."
Grub paled. He hadn't been on many missions, but he knew what was about to happen. He immediately turned to face the door, only to see it swing shut and lock.
"I assume by now," continued the voice. "That you know what's going on. See when Henry was telling me about the people, he told me a fascinating story about how my father kidnapped a female named Holly Short, who I now have. What irony, but anyway, I noticed a specific part, a part where my father lured Commander Root to a ship, then blew it up. A little messy but I didn't see why it wouldn't work."
At this point, the retrieval squad was trying there hardest to open the door, but it would not budge.
"Au revoir," A huge explosion of fire erupted throughout the room.
~*~
A/N: I love this chappie. Please review.