A/N: Wow!!! look at all my nice little reviews i got *grins* 11 of
them....well actually 10 cause ones a repeat but hey im not complaining any
im not picky
Shouts outs:
Aslyin: yeah of course theres gonna be a new character yours *grins* hopefully i get her personality right and yeah it is a AU and im not so sure if im gonna include any regualar dbz characters but there will be mentions of them and Savanna's info will be a suprise. But if you wanna know you could always ask ill tell you but youll have to keep it hush hush....or ill have to torture you Mwhahahahahaha.....*cough cough weeze* dang that hurts your throat
leslie: thanks yes i know poor valhar but i had to find someway for kael to transform who knows valhar might return *grins evily*
pretty princess bra: as i said above im not sure about the dbz characters at this moment and their school's name will be um ....how about ......uh Northpeak High School sounds good dosnt it? and his uncle is a original character but hes full human..... He is Kael's mothers brother and dont worry kael wont fall in love with any dbz characters.......ill leave it up to the reviewers but it has to be a girl I mention in the story
Michelle: hey whats up thanks for pointing out my spelling mistakes but uh.........im not gonna fix it cause im lazy like that.......youve known me long enough so you know that already....but so are you so :P
Hello: Thanks for the info i fixed it see look at the title
........AND NOW TO THE STORY!!!!! YAY!!!!!!!!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~ CHAPTER 2: RIVALS ARE A PAIN
"Come on Savanna let's go before we're late and we get detention." "Why Kael? Its not
like it's the first time you've gotten detention on the first day of school" Savanna replied with a
smirk. " Hey! That was only one time so drop it alright! Now let's go before you annoy me any
more Savanna." Kael said with a hint of anger in his voice. "Aww come on Kael lighten up you
know you love me." Kael gave a small snort of laughter and walked into the school.
"Kael....Kael....KAEL WAIT UP YOU JERK!!!!!" Savanna yelled as she ran to catch up with
Kael. "You know Kael, you should really lighten up a little. I was only messing with you."
"Whatever you say Savanna. I'll see you later. I need to hurry up and get to class, I'll see you at
break ok?" "Alright see you later" Savanna sighed and then gave Kael a small smile and walked
off.
A couple of minutes later and Kael arived at his next class, Chemistry. *Kael shudders*
"Geez I dont see how I got stuck in this class" "Yeah I know. I didnt know that they let morons in
this class" replied a girl with waist length violet hair and bright green eyes. "You know Alexis, I
didnt ask for your opinion" "Oh so I guess you were just talking to your self again." Alexis
snapped then flicked his ear, then turned around, and sat down in the back of the class. "OW!!!
Damnit Alexis, would you stop that? It hurts" Kael said while nursing his right ear. Then Kael
gave Alexis an evil glare and sat down in the only available desk left.....in front of her.
After the bell rang the teacher begain to ramble on about their first assignment which was
making Kael begin to fall asleep until a small metal object hit him in the back of the
head *clunk* "What the hell" Kael groaned out while scratching the back of his head "stupid
bugs". Then Kael slowly started to drift off back to sleep when all of a sudden *clunk clunk*.
Then Kael turned around and glared at Alexis. "What are you looking at?" Asked Alexis slightly
smirking. Then Kael turned back around and let his head hit his desk and fell asleep yet again.
As soon as Alexis was sure that Kael was asleep she pulled out a box of pink paperclips and took
one out and pointed at it with her index finger. Little silver and gold dust like powder escaped
out of her finger and the paperclip went flying right in the back of Kael's neck.
In an instant Kael jumped up and shouted "ALEXIS WILL YOU QUIT IT? IM TRYING
TO SLEEP!!!!!" Realizing what he just did, he slowly turned around to meet a glaring teacher
pointing to the door "Kael get out before you interupt my lecture again" the teacher said to the
sulking half saiyan. Then Kael walked out of the class but as he did he heard Alexis snickering
behind his back. "Alexis! Dont think your off the hook, I saw you hiting him with those
paperclips. You can join him outside" The teacher said while staring at Alexis. She could tell he
was mad by the way his face was all red and his right eye was twitching violently.
*IN THE HALLWAY*
"I can't believe you Kael. You got me in trouble."
"I got you in trouble?.... What about me? HUH? Your the one who was throwing things not me.
If its anyones fault, its yours, not mine"
"Well you didnt have to scream like a little girl"
"I wasnt screaming like a girl, I was just yelling cause I'm cranky when people wake me
up....especially if things are thrown at me!"
"YOU YOU YOU .......ARRGGGGGGGGGGGG I can't stand you Kael. Why do you always
argue with me? Your never right"
"What are you talking about Alexis? I'm always right. Your the one who is always wrong."
"Shut-up Kael!" Alexis shouted then kicked him in the knee.
"OWWWWWWW!!!!" Kael yelled as he started hopping one one foot
"Hahahaha.......opps..... muscle .........spasm ..........hahahhaha" Alexis said in between breaths.
Unknown to the bickering teens, there was a slimy, green, three foot, ant like creature
staring at them. Observing their reactions, looking for any signs of abnormality. He had sensed a
great deal of power from two people. One before the two teens had come out of that room. And
an even stronger one now. He could sense that the male was radiating the energy out of the two.
It must be because of the girl, she was angering him somehow and he was losing his control. Just
then the One teen's hair flashed a bright gold and died back down and there was a hush from the
girl.
"Whoa Kael. What the hell was that?"
"What?"
"Your hair Kael, it changed colors just now. How did you do that?"
'Oh no' Thought Kael 'I gotta come up with something quick uh ....uh'
"Uh...........it was...it was...uh ....the sun...yeah the sun thats it"
"Dont feed me that crap Kael, I know your lieing. Don't deny it. Your hair changed, now do it
again" (smooth move Kael couldn't you think of something more logical than that) Kael mentally yelled
at himself. *sigh* "It was nothing. I swear" lied Kael.
"Do it now Kael or I'll tell Savannah about that thing you were talking about in your sleep last
semester ...you know the one where you dreamt that you and her were on that beach and you
kissed her."
"That never happened"
"Yes it did, I kept on pinchin you till you told me remember"
"AHH! Ok, geez, fine I'll show you just dont mention that again .....EVER! But you have to show
me how your were flinging those paperclips so hard. when I picked one up it had some kind of
dust on it then it vanished. I know thats not normal." Kael replied
"Fine, I will, now do it. Change your hair or whatever you did" Alexis said while tugging on his
arm from being impatent.
"Ok Alexis follow me, I dont want anything to break when I transform"
"Oh ok.....hey wait a minute what do you mean transform?" Alexis asked with a puzzled look on
her face.
"Heh.. you'll see Alexis now quit asking me so many questions and follow me ....oh and dont tell
anyone what I'm about to show you ....and I mean NO ONE!"
"Uh....ok"
*OUTSIDE*
"Ok Alexis you ready and don't forget you have to show me what the hell that powder stuff is got
it"
"Stop reminding me Kael, I told you I will now transform."
"Ok....step back a little I dont want to hurt you.....well I kinda do but I dont want to clean up the
mess." Kael warned with a smirk
After Alexis backed a way a bit, Kael began to hum softly, clearing his thoughts and
remembering how his father did it always brought back the pain to help him transform. The wind
began to pick up and dark clouds began to form. A pale blue and green pulsing energy begain to
radiate from Kael. Then in an instant it turned to a brillant gold. Then it surrounded his entire
body.
"Kael... KAEL." Alexis began to run to him to see if he was alright.
"ALEXIS I SAID STAY BACK I'M FINE"
Then the light died down a bit and Alexis could see his form change his muscles grew and she
could see his hair change to the blazing gold it was for a brief second before in the hallway.
"I didnt know you could fly Kael! This is so cool" Alexis said to with a face full of shock seeing
him levetate and transform.
"Now Alexis, it's your turn. Show me what that powder stuff is" Kael told her as he landed safely
on the grass still in Super Saiyan form.
"Um... alright first I need a object"
"An object? What kind?"
"It doesn't matter, just anything"
"Um ....ok hows this?" Kael asked as he held up his hand and created a ball of pure blue and gold
energy.
"Whoa cool ....uh...er...yeah that'll do" Alexis replied.
Then she started to wave her fingers in the direction of the energy ball and her mysterious
silver and gold dust started to flow from her fingertips and surounding the energy ball. Then
after a strong look of concentration crossed Alexis's face, the energy ball slowly moved from
Kael's palm and moved in the directions Alexis moved her finger to. After a few minutes of this
Alexis's strength gave out and the energy ball fell and made a small explosion on the ground.
"Kael ...........my strength never gave out that quick.....that must have had a lot of energy in it."
Kael blinked in confusion. "Alexis, that wasnt even enough to destroy a boulder. Maybe you just
cant control energy well enough and it weakens you faster."
While the two were talking about each others abilities the ant like creature came out
from his hiding place ....a trash can, which was kinda like home for him. He slowly crept his way
to the two chatting teens. He knew from there little demonstration that they were the ones that he
seeked.
"P..p..please...I..need your ...help" the creature slurred as it reached out and poked Kael's
shoulder to get his attention.
"AHHHHHH!!!!!!! THE BOOGY MAN!!!!!!!" Screamed Alexis.
"Yuck, nasty it left a snot trail on my shirt." Kael said as he swiped up the slime on his finger
and rubbed it on Alexis's shirt.
"Eww gross Kael, why did you do that this is my favorite shirt you jerk!!!!"
"Please" the creature weezed "Do not be afraid ...I need your help."
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A/N: Well? what do you all think of it I tried really hard to make it good review and tell me what you think. And dont forget you can vote on who you want Kael to end up with so far theres only Savanna and Alexis but there will be more girls to choose from a little later on I promise.
But I need at least 5 reviews to inspire me to write another chapter.
Shouts outs:
Aslyin: yeah of course theres gonna be a new character yours *grins* hopefully i get her personality right and yeah it is a AU and im not so sure if im gonna include any regualar dbz characters but there will be mentions of them and Savanna's info will be a suprise. But if you wanna know you could always ask ill tell you but youll have to keep it hush hush....or ill have to torture you Mwhahahahahaha.....*cough cough weeze* dang that hurts your throat
leslie: thanks yes i know poor valhar but i had to find someway for kael to transform who knows valhar might return *grins evily*
pretty princess bra: as i said above im not sure about the dbz characters at this moment and their school's name will be um ....how about ......uh Northpeak High School sounds good dosnt it? and his uncle is a original character but hes full human..... He is Kael's mothers brother and dont worry kael wont fall in love with any dbz characters.......ill leave it up to the reviewers but it has to be a girl I mention in the story
Michelle: hey whats up thanks for pointing out my spelling mistakes but uh.........im not gonna fix it cause im lazy like that.......youve known me long enough so you know that already....but so are you so :P
Hello: Thanks for the info i fixed it see look at the title
........AND NOW TO THE STORY!!!!! YAY!!!!!!!!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~ CHAPTER 2: RIVALS ARE A PAIN
"Come on Savanna let's go before we're late and we get detention." "Why Kael? Its not
like it's the first time you've gotten detention on the first day of school" Savanna replied with a
smirk. " Hey! That was only one time so drop it alright! Now let's go before you annoy me any
more Savanna." Kael said with a hint of anger in his voice. "Aww come on Kael lighten up you
know you love me." Kael gave a small snort of laughter and walked into the school.
"Kael....Kael....KAEL WAIT UP YOU JERK!!!!!" Savanna yelled as she ran to catch up with
Kael. "You know Kael, you should really lighten up a little. I was only messing with you."
"Whatever you say Savanna. I'll see you later. I need to hurry up and get to class, I'll see you at
break ok?" "Alright see you later" Savanna sighed and then gave Kael a small smile and walked
off.
A couple of minutes later and Kael arived at his next class, Chemistry. *Kael shudders*
"Geez I dont see how I got stuck in this class" "Yeah I know. I didnt know that they let morons in
this class" replied a girl with waist length violet hair and bright green eyes. "You know Alexis, I
didnt ask for your opinion" "Oh so I guess you were just talking to your self again." Alexis
snapped then flicked his ear, then turned around, and sat down in the back of the class. "OW!!!
Damnit Alexis, would you stop that? It hurts" Kael said while nursing his right ear. Then Kael
gave Alexis an evil glare and sat down in the only available desk left.....in front of her.
After the bell rang the teacher begain to ramble on about their first assignment which was
making Kael begin to fall asleep until a small metal object hit him in the back of the
head *clunk* "What the hell" Kael groaned out while scratching the back of his head "stupid
bugs". Then Kael slowly started to drift off back to sleep when all of a sudden *clunk clunk*.
Then Kael turned around and glared at Alexis. "What are you looking at?" Asked Alexis slightly
smirking. Then Kael turned back around and let his head hit his desk and fell asleep yet again.
As soon as Alexis was sure that Kael was asleep she pulled out a box of pink paperclips and took
one out and pointed at it with her index finger. Little silver and gold dust like powder escaped
out of her finger and the paperclip went flying right in the back of Kael's neck.
In an instant Kael jumped up and shouted "ALEXIS WILL YOU QUIT IT? IM TRYING
TO SLEEP!!!!!" Realizing what he just did, he slowly turned around to meet a glaring teacher
pointing to the door "Kael get out before you interupt my lecture again" the teacher said to the
sulking half saiyan. Then Kael walked out of the class but as he did he heard Alexis snickering
behind his back. "Alexis! Dont think your off the hook, I saw you hiting him with those
paperclips. You can join him outside" The teacher said while staring at Alexis. She could tell he
was mad by the way his face was all red and his right eye was twitching violently.
*IN THE HALLWAY*
"I can't believe you Kael. You got me in trouble."
"I got you in trouble?.... What about me? HUH? Your the one who was throwing things not me.
If its anyones fault, its yours, not mine"
"Well you didnt have to scream like a little girl"
"I wasnt screaming like a girl, I was just yelling cause I'm cranky when people wake me
up....especially if things are thrown at me!"
"YOU YOU YOU .......ARRGGGGGGGGGGGG I can't stand you Kael. Why do you always
argue with me? Your never right"
"What are you talking about Alexis? I'm always right. Your the one who is always wrong."
"Shut-up Kael!" Alexis shouted then kicked him in the knee.
"OWWWWWWW!!!!" Kael yelled as he started hopping one one foot
"Hahahaha.......opps..... muscle .........spasm ..........hahahhaha" Alexis said in between breaths.
Unknown to the bickering teens, there was a slimy, green, three foot, ant like creature
staring at them. Observing their reactions, looking for any signs of abnormality. He had sensed a
great deal of power from two people. One before the two teens had come out of that room. And
an even stronger one now. He could sense that the male was radiating the energy out of the two.
It must be because of the girl, she was angering him somehow and he was losing his control. Just
then the One teen's hair flashed a bright gold and died back down and there was a hush from the
girl.
"Whoa Kael. What the hell was that?"
"What?"
"Your hair Kael, it changed colors just now. How did you do that?"
'Oh no' Thought Kael 'I gotta come up with something quick uh ....uh'
"Uh...........it was...it was...uh ....the sun...yeah the sun thats it"
"Dont feed me that crap Kael, I know your lieing. Don't deny it. Your hair changed, now do it
again" (smooth move Kael couldn't you think of something more logical than that) Kael mentally yelled
at himself. *sigh* "It was nothing. I swear" lied Kael.
"Do it now Kael or I'll tell Savannah about that thing you were talking about in your sleep last
semester ...you know the one where you dreamt that you and her were on that beach and you
kissed her."
"That never happened"
"Yes it did, I kept on pinchin you till you told me remember"
"AHH! Ok, geez, fine I'll show you just dont mention that again .....EVER! But you have to show
me how your were flinging those paperclips so hard. when I picked one up it had some kind of
dust on it then it vanished. I know thats not normal." Kael replied
"Fine, I will, now do it. Change your hair or whatever you did" Alexis said while tugging on his
arm from being impatent.
"Ok Alexis follow me, I dont want anything to break when I transform"
"Oh ok.....hey wait a minute what do you mean transform?" Alexis asked with a puzzled look on
her face.
"Heh.. you'll see Alexis now quit asking me so many questions and follow me ....oh and dont tell
anyone what I'm about to show you ....and I mean NO ONE!"
"Uh....ok"
*OUTSIDE*
"Ok Alexis you ready and don't forget you have to show me what the hell that powder stuff is got
it"
"Stop reminding me Kael, I told you I will now transform."
"Ok....step back a little I dont want to hurt you.....well I kinda do but I dont want to clean up the
mess." Kael warned with a smirk
After Alexis backed a way a bit, Kael began to hum softly, clearing his thoughts and
remembering how his father did it always brought back the pain to help him transform. The wind
began to pick up and dark clouds began to form. A pale blue and green pulsing energy begain to
radiate from Kael. Then in an instant it turned to a brillant gold. Then it surrounded his entire
body.
"Kael... KAEL." Alexis began to run to him to see if he was alright.
"ALEXIS I SAID STAY BACK I'M FINE"
Then the light died down a bit and Alexis could see his form change his muscles grew and she
could see his hair change to the blazing gold it was for a brief second before in the hallway.
"I didnt know you could fly Kael! This is so cool" Alexis said to with a face full of shock seeing
him levetate and transform.
"Now Alexis, it's your turn. Show me what that powder stuff is" Kael told her as he landed safely
on the grass still in Super Saiyan form.
"Um... alright first I need a object"
"An object? What kind?"
"It doesn't matter, just anything"
"Um ....ok hows this?" Kael asked as he held up his hand and created a ball of pure blue and gold
energy.
"Whoa cool ....uh...er...yeah that'll do" Alexis replied.
Then she started to wave her fingers in the direction of the energy ball and her mysterious
silver and gold dust started to flow from her fingertips and surounding the energy ball. Then
after a strong look of concentration crossed Alexis's face, the energy ball slowly moved from
Kael's palm and moved in the directions Alexis moved her finger to. After a few minutes of this
Alexis's strength gave out and the energy ball fell and made a small explosion on the ground.
"Kael ...........my strength never gave out that quick.....that must have had a lot of energy in it."
Kael blinked in confusion. "Alexis, that wasnt even enough to destroy a boulder. Maybe you just
cant control energy well enough and it weakens you faster."
While the two were talking about each others abilities the ant like creature came out
from his hiding place ....a trash can, which was kinda like home for him. He slowly crept his way
to the two chatting teens. He knew from there little demonstration that they were the ones that he
seeked.
"P..p..please...I..need your ...help" the creature slurred as it reached out and poked Kael's
shoulder to get his attention.
"AHHHHHH!!!!!!! THE BOOGY MAN!!!!!!!" Screamed Alexis.
"Yuck, nasty it left a snot trail on my shirt." Kael said as he swiped up the slime on his finger
and rubbed it on Alexis's shirt.
"Eww gross Kael, why did you do that this is my favorite shirt you jerk!!!!"
"Please" the creature weezed "Do not be afraid ...I need your help."
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
A/N: Well? what do you all think of it I tried really hard to make it good review and tell me what you think. And dont forget you can vote on who you want Kael to end up with so far theres only Savanna and Alexis but there will be more girls to choose from a little later on I promise.
But I need at least 5 reviews to inspire me to write another chapter.