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Unpredictable Fate
Chapter One
The sum was setting and the wind blew roughly deep into the forest as a young women walked slowly as if she were confused about turning back to wherever she came from or keep going straight.
Her sparkling orange eyes looked worried as if she were making the worst decision of her life. This girls name was Kasumi a kuniochi(female ninja) from a nearby shinobi clan.
Kasumi opened her mouth and began to talk to herself,"Am I making the right decision on becomming a runaway shinobi? Or will I regret this? But I want to go, I hate this life, all they care about is rivalry and there fame. They do so many astrocities and have no pity for the people they killed. Im sick of this life. From now on a will be a threat to the clan".
The only reason she was a threat because the clan was worrying about runaway shinobis would tell people the clans secrets, special techniques, and future plans. But she is a trustworthy girl so Kasumi wasn't worried about telling anything to anyone. Now the clan is going to try to assassinate her constantly so she won't get a chance to say anything, also it was like a payback for her leaving.
Kasumi was the original leader of the clan, but now thats she has left her brother Hayate would take her place. Kasumi suddenly stopped and gripped her sword which was tied to her belt because she had heard something move in the trees.
She quietly and slowly said,"You idiots. Do acually think I can't hear you. Come out and play, Im not scared". When she finished about twenty ninjas jumped out of the trees and threw themselves towards Kasumi.
The kuniochi ran faster than sh had ever ran in her life observing everything so she wouldn't get stuck in any traps. "You trader,"Yelled a ninja that was running behind her. She looked back and found all of them were about two feet away from her.
Ten of them threw multiple ninja stars and the others swung there swords around trying to cut Kasumi. Kasummi turned and took out her sword and dodged all the stars by using her sword as a bat.
Trying to maintain the battle she cut a tree in one blow and it crushed ten men. The others all surrounded her now taunting,"Trader". Kasumi looked at all of them, fighting back her tears she said,"I have to move on forgive me". Cherry blossums twirled around her and she disappeared. Even though she thought they were self-centered people they were still her family and she had to respect that.
She reappeared in an abandoned temple outside of a near city. The temple was small and some what looked like an apartment with the smell of incense. It had a sleeping mat on the floor with a lit candle hanging from the ceiling.
It was painted completly red with a statue of a buddha next to the closed door. Kasumi took off her blue ninja suit folded it, and neatly put it at a corner. Then she layed on the mat staring at the candle.It was night and she was terribly tierd. Her body ached and she didn't notice that she had been cut by someone while she was dueling half of the clan. " God bless me,"and with those last words she fell asleep.
The next day she was awaken by a knock at the door, quickly she put on her clothes, had her sword in her hand just in case, and opened the rusty door. There standing at the door was her brother Hayate who had a big smile on his has and he gave her a big hug. He was a hansome young man who was built and hade hair the color of copper.
"I brought food and clothes for you. Is everything fine,"Hayate kindly said still with a grin on his face. "How did you find me,"Kasumi rudely said without thanking him. Hayate entered the temple and kneeled on the floor placing the things he had brought next to him and said,"Im your brother I know these things now eat or you'll starve to death.
Without saying anything back, Kasumi genorously said as she ate and stared at Hayate wondering why he hadn't tried to kill her. "Listen I have to go there are things I've got to get and do so bye,"Hayate said as he walked out of the temple and flew into the sky(not literally). An hour later Kasumi teleportted herself to get to a hotspring that was a few miles away from the temple.
Her orange hair was loose and it was dried up from a lack of shampoo and conditioner. Kasumi eneterd the steaming hotspring and took off the towel that was around her body. She rubbed her face and combed her hair with her fingers making it smoother. The water suddenly got a bit red and she noticed that she was bleeding and said,"When did this happen".
She looked back and saw that it wsa Ryu Hayabusa the man that she hated but couldn't help loving. He goes up to her and wrapshis arms around her waist and oushed her towards his chest. Kasumi blushed and said"Ryu" with passion thinking they were going to kiss for the first time. Even though all he did was wrap a bandage around her waist so she would stop bleeding.
"There,"Ryu said as his intense green eyes looked at her eyes and he neared her lips. Kasumi blushed again and her heart beated faster and faster each second but once again he fooled her and took out a rice ball from no where and then bite it,"hmmmmmmm delicious want a piece". Ryu asked trying not to laugh. Kasumi turned red with anger and slapped him for no reason.
"Ow............hey I heard you became a runaway shinobi,"Ryu said. Kasumi smacked him again and said,"Yes I guess what you heard is true. But why'd you bring it up you moron. Everything was fine but you had to blow it". Ryu ignored her childish remark. Kasumi streaded back to the temple and when she arrives there is a note attached to the door that was written in blood and it said: YOUR HEAD WILL BE MINE. Kasumi was insulted and she ripped the note off of the door and something grabbed ger forcely by the neck.
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Okay I'm rewritting the first few chappys because they arent in paragraph form. So i'll be working on the first gew chappys so you readers can read comfortably. Hopefully i'll get more reviews because of this. Oh and please give my story a chance. It gets really good so dont read the first two chappys and say well this sucks so im not reading it. Well i need comments, questions, ideas, anything!!!!!!!! so review me.
Unpredictable Fate
Chapter One
The sum was setting and the wind blew roughly deep into the forest as a young women walked slowly as if she were confused about turning back to wherever she came from or keep going straight.
Her sparkling orange eyes looked worried as if she were making the worst decision of her life. This girls name was Kasumi a kuniochi(female ninja) from a nearby shinobi clan.
Kasumi opened her mouth and began to talk to herself,"Am I making the right decision on becomming a runaway shinobi? Or will I regret this? But I want to go, I hate this life, all they care about is rivalry and there fame. They do so many astrocities and have no pity for the people they killed. Im sick of this life. From now on a will be a threat to the clan".
The only reason she was a threat because the clan was worrying about runaway shinobis would tell people the clans secrets, special techniques, and future plans. But she is a trustworthy girl so Kasumi wasn't worried about telling anything to anyone. Now the clan is going to try to assassinate her constantly so she won't get a chance to say anything, also it was like a payback for her leaving.
Kasumi was the original leader of the clan, but now thats she has left her brother Hayate would take her place. Kasumi suddenly stopped and gripped her sword which was tied to her belt because she had heard something move in the trees.
She quietly and slowly said,"You idiots. Do acually think I can't hear you. Come out and play, Im not scared". When she finished about twenty ninjas jumped out of the trees and threw themselves towards Kasumi.
The kuniochi ran faster than sh had ever ran in her life observing everything so she wouldn't get stuck in any traps. "You trader,"Yelled a ninja that was running behind her. She looked back and found all of them were about two feet away from her.
Ten of them threw multiple ninja stars and the others swung there swords around trying to cut Kasumi. Kasummi turned and took out her sword and dodged all the stars by using her sword as a bat.
Trying to maintain the battle she cut a tree in one blow and it crushed ten men. The others all surrounded her now taunting,"Trader". Kasumi looked at all of them, fighting back her tears she said,"I have to move on forgive me". Cherry blossums twirled around her and she disappeared. Even though she thought they were self-centered people they were still her family and she had to respect that.
She reappeared in an abandoned temple outside of a near city. The temple was small and some what looked like an apartment with the smell of incense. It had a sleeping mat on the floor with a lit candle hanging from the ceiling.
It was painted completly red with a statue of a buddha next to the closed door. Kasumi took off her blue ninja suit folded it, and neatly put it at a corner. Then she layed on the mat staring at the candle.It was night and she was terribly tierd. Her body ached and she didn't notice that she had been cut by someone while she was dueling half of the clan. " God bless me,"and with those last words she fell asleep.
The next day she was awaken by a knock at the door, quickly she put on her clothes, had her sword in her hand just in case, and opened the rusty door. There standing at the door was her brother Hayate who had a big smile on his has and he gave her a big hug. He was a hansome young man who was built and hade hair the color of copper.
"I brought food and clothes for you. Is everything fine,"Hayate kindly said still with a grin on his face. "How did you find me,"Kasumi rudely said without thanking him. Hayate entered the temple and kneeled on the floor placing the things he had brought next to him and said,"Im your brother I know these things now eat or you'll starve to death.
Without saying anything back, Kasumi genorously said as she ate and stared at Hayate wondering why he hadn't tried to kill her. "Listen I have to go there are things I've got to get and do so bye,"Hayate said as he walked out of the temple and flew into the sky(not literally). An hour later Kasumi teleportted herself to get to a hotspring that was a few miles away from the temple.
Her orange hair was loose and it was dried up from a lack of shampoo and conditioner. Kasumi eneterd the steaming hotspring and took off the towel that was around her body. She rubbed her face and combed her hair with her fingers making it smoother. The water suddenly got a bit red and she noticed that she was bleeding and said,"When did this happen".
She looked back and saw that it wsa Ryu Hayabusa the man that she hated but couldn't help loving. He goes up to her and wrapshis arms around her waist and oushed her towards his chest. Kasumi blushed and said"Ryu" with passion thinking they were going to kiss for the first time. Even though all he did was wrap a bandage around her waist so she would stop bleeding.
"There,"Ryu said as his intense green eyes looked at her eyes and he neared her lips. Kasumi blushed again and her heart beated faster and faster each second but once again he fooled her and took out a rice ball from no where and then bite it,"hmmmmmmm delicious want a piece". Ryu asked trying not to laugh. Kasumi turned red with anger and slapped him for no reason.
"Ow............hey I heard you became a runaway shinobi,"Ryu said. Kasumi smacked him again and said,"Yes I guess what you heard is true. But why'd you bring it up you moron. Everything was fine but you had to blow it". Ryu ignored her childish remark. Kasumi streaded back to the temple and when she arrives there is a note attached to the door that was written in blood and it said: YOUR HEAD WILL BE MINE. Kasumi was insulted and she ripped the note off of the door and something grabbed ger forcely by the neck.
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Okay I'm rewritting the first few chappys because they arent in paragraph form. So i'll be working on the first gew chappys so you readers can read comfortably. Hopefully i'll get more reviews because of this. Oh and please give my story a chance. It gets really good so dont read the first two chappys and say well this sucks so im not reading it. Well i need comments, questions, ideas, anything!!!!!!!! so review me.