Author's Note: Ya gotta take thr good reviews with the bad, I guess. It's
only a little bit of fun, you people! Don't absolutely kill me! If you
can't take a joke, then don't waste your energy typing out the alphabets in
a review that's just going to hurt me, ok?
C h a p t e r III - Fallen
Ranma stared at the handsome, unknown boy. When you're standing on top of a 5000-foot high cliff, and are about to fall down, you have a lot of time to think as you fall. This is precisely what happened to Ranma as he fell in love. Most people don't fall in love, because of the broken bones you get afterwards, but Ranma had no choice.
As he was falling, Ranma was very busy thinking, and cursing Kuno. 'Damn that Kuno! He put some Burra-Gurra Powder in my food! Nooo...I refuse to fall in love..." he was thinking, when he realized how very far he had to fall. "Who is this guy anyway? Poor Akane. The ol' geezer will be so disappointed in me. What kind of martial arts move is falling in love anyway? I'm only just in high school! And what about the Tendo Dojo? ARGH. I feel sleepy."
Ranma stood there, having reached the bottom. He felt slightly sick, and he couldn't do anything about it because he was lovesick.
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Akane skipped happily to her house, wearing the pretty new purple and yellow dress she'd bought. She'd lost her way to Ayumi's house, so she had decided to buy a new dress at the shops. It was something to show Ranma anyway. She had decided to wear it home.
Akane hummed a little tune as she turned the corner.
She stopped dead, when she saw Ranma swaying in the doorway, with the handsome boy whom Akane had never expected to see again standing watching Ranma with a slightly worried expression.
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Ranma felt dizzy. Out of the corner of his eye, he saw Akane. Akane? AKANE! He turned to face Akane miserably, not wanting to tell her how he had failed her. Actually, Ranma was more worried over the fate of the Anything- Goes Martial Arts School, but hell, since Akane had reached the house first... He stopped short.
Akane was wearing a purple and yellow polka dotted dress. It looked horrible. Disgustingly horrible.
Ranma spun round, and ran into the house. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- -------
Akane watched in horror as Ranma stared at her with a look of disgust growing on his face. What was wrong? She stared down at her dress. It was pretty, and there were no food stains on it. No, it couldn't be her dress. She twisted and looked behind her. No, there was nothing there either. So what was it that was disgusting Ranma so much?
Akane, unfortunately, didn't have much more time to think, for Ranma chose that moment to dash into the house. Akane spared a glance for the poor, baffled boy on the doorstep, and ran in after Ranma. "Excuse me! Is this the...Tendo Dojo?" the boy called after her.
"Yeah! It is!" Akane called back, thundering up the stairs after Ranma.
Akane watched as Ranma bounded into the bathroom, and she could soon hear gurgling noises. A few minutes later, Ranma walked out, bright and smiling. Akane walked over to him.
"What's the matter with you?" she exclaimed, staring at him anxiously, with just a hint of her true feelings.
Ranma smiled seraphically back at her. "I got all the food out of my system. Including the Burra-Gurra Powder. Thanks to your dress!"
Akane gazed at him, feeling confused. "My dress? What about it? Isn't it nice?"
Ranma chuckled, and wasting few words, he told her what Kuno had done. Akane gasped. "That's horrible!" she cried, through clenched teeth. "And who the hell wanted to date with that moron anyway?"
Ranma sniggered. "Well, anyway, I was just falling in love with that boy, downstairs, when you came along. Your dress-" Ranma chortled a bit- "was so...DISGUSTINGLY HORRIBLE, that I just had to hurl. I got the Burra-Gurra Powder out of me, so I'm A-OK now! All thanks to you and your dress! Aw, don't worry, I was only kiddin-"
Akane punched Ranma's smiling face, and went downstairs to attend to the boy.
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Author's Note: Um..well...that's it for Chapter 3...d'ya guys still think it's horrible? . Coz I didn't mean it to be so horrible. I just...lost control of my pen..l.*metaphorically speaking*. Please tell me it's not horrible! After reading the comment by "Ranma Should be straight" I did my best to improve it...
Puh-leeze...
C h a p t e r III - Fallen
Ranma stared at the handsome, unknown boy. When you're standing on top of a 5000-foot high cliff, and are about to fall down, you have a lot of time to think as you fall. This is precisely what happened to Ranma as he fell in love. Most people don't fall in love, because of the broken bones you get afterwards, but Ranma had no choice.
As he was falling, Ranma was very busy thinking, and cursing Kuno. 'Damn that Kuno! He put some Burra-Gurra Powder in my food! Nooo...I refuse to fall in love..." he was thinking, when he realized how very far he had to fall. "Who is this guy anyway? Poor Akane. The ol' geezer will be so disappointed in me. What kind of martial arts move is falling in love anyway? I'm only just in high school! And what about the Tendo Dojo? ARGH. I feel sleepy."
Ranma stood there, having reached the bottom. He felt slightly sick, and he couldn't do anything about it because he was lovesick.
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Akane skipped happily to her house, wearing the pretty new purple and yellow dress she'd bought. She'd lost her way to Ayumi's house, so she had decided to buy a new dress at the shops. It was something to show Ranma anyway. She had decided to wear it home.
Akane hummed a little tune as she turned the corner.
She stopped dead, when she saw Ranma swaying in the doorway, with the handsome boy whom Akane had never expected to see again standing watching Ranma with a slightly worried expression.
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Ranma felt dizzy. Out of the corner of his eye, he saw Akane. Akane? AKANE! He turned to face Akane miserably, not wanting to tell her how he had failed her. Actually, Ranma was more worried over the fate of the Anything- Goes Martial Arts School, but hell, since Akane had reached the house first... He stopped short.
Akane was wearing a purple and yellow polka dotted dress. It looked horrible. Disgustingly horrible.
Ranma spun round, and ran into the house. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- -------
Akane watched in horror as Ranma stared at her with a look of disgust growing on his face. What was wrong? She stared down at her dress. It was pretty, and there were no food stains on it. No, it couldn't be her dress. She twisted and looked behind her. No, there was nothing there either. So what was it that was disgusting Ranma so much?
Akane, unfortunately, didn't have much more time to think, for Ranma chose that moment to dash into the house. Akane spared a glance for the poor, baffled boy on the doorstep, and ran in after Ranma. "Excuse me! Is this the...Tendo Dojo?" the boy called after her.
"Yeah! It is!" Akane called back, thundering up the stairs after Ranma.
Akane watched as Ranma bounded into the bathroom, and she could soon hear gurgling noises. A few minutes later, Ranma walked out, bright and smiling. Akane walked over to him.
"What's the matter with you?" she exclaimed, staring at him anxiously, with just a hint of her true feelings.
Ranma smiled seraphically back at her. "I got all the food out of my system. Including the Burra-Gurra Powder. Thanks to your dress!"
Akane gazed at him, feeling confused. "My dress? What about it? Isn't it nice?"
Ranma chuckled, and wasting few words, he told her what Kuno had done. Akane gasped. "That's horrible!" she cried, through clenched teeth. "And who the hell wanted to date with that moron anyway?"
Ranma sniggered. "Well, anyway, I was just falling in love with that boy, downstairs, when you came along. Your dress-" Ranma chortled a bit- "was so...DISGUSTINGLY HORRIBLE, that I just had to hurl. I got the Burra-Gurra Powder out of me, so I'm A-OK now! All thanks to you and your dress! Aw, don't worry, I was only kiddin-"
Akane punched Ranma's smiling face, and went downstairs to attend to the boy.
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Author's Note: Um..well...that's it for Chapter 3...d'ya guys still think it's horrible? . Coz I didn't mean it to be so horrible. I just...lost control of my pen..l.*metaphorically speaking*. Please tell me it's not horrible! After reading the comment by "Ranma Should be straight" I did my best to improve it...
Puh-leeze...